Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Thymus, Forgive Us
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem about internal organs with a good rhyme.
January 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem about internal organs with a good rhyme.
January 24th, 2025 04:23
Dear Fiendess
Cassie58 said:
I started to laugh and then the more caring side of me went to the medicine cupboard to look for anti acid.
January 23rd, 2025 06:56
Cassie58 said:
I started to laugh and then the more caring side of me went to the medicine cupboard to look for anti acid.
January 23rd, 2025 06:56
Dear Fiendess
arqios said:
It’ll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:44
arqios said:
It’ll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:44
Dear Fiendess
Poetic Licence said:
Now i think that`s to the point, enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 22:10
Poetic Licence said:
Now i think that`s to the point, enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 22:10
Dear Fiendess
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.
January 22nd, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.
January 22nd, 2025 20:49
Blue Star
NafisaSB said:
i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:37
NafisaSB said:
i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:37
Medusa Rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. 🤣 Easily faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. 🤣 Easily faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:22
Medusa Rattle
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it
January 21st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it
January 21st, 2025 04:08
Appetite For Identification
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:27
Appetite For Identification
Cheeky Missy said:
Do you like leaving me speechless?
January 19th, 2025 23:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Do you like leaving me speechless?
January 19th, 2025 23:35
Buffering
arqios said:
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
January 19th, 2025 03:05
arqios said:
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
January 19th, 2025 03:05
Buffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 21:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 21:59
Buffering
sorenbarrett said:
Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 20:37
Gland Goes On A Rant
sorenbarrett said:
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 04:34
Gland Goes On A Rant
arqios said:
Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!
January 17th, 2025 20:32
arqios said:
Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!
January 17th, 2025 20:32
Spazzm\'d
arqios said:
Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !
January 17th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !
January 17th, 2025 07:56
Spazzm\'d
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to leave them lingering, searching for the inner meaning it speaks to them within. That, imho, is true art. Multiple interpretations fit this...for me, it spoke of addiction because that is something that has affected me personally. But that need not be what it is about. Again, that is the brilliance of this brief but extremely impactful poem. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 19:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to leave them lingering, searching for the inner meaning it speaks to them within. That, imho, is true art. Multiple interpretations fit this...for me, it spoke of addiction because that is something that has affected me personally. But that need not be what it is about. Again, that is the brilliance of this brief but extremely impactful poem. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 19:11
Hormoans
sorenbarrett said:
Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone whoremones would be closely related but this is too much mental masterbation. A fun read that seduces the reader.
January 16th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone whoremones would be closely related but this is too much mental masterbation. A fun read that seduces the reader.
January 16th, 2025 04:08
Blue Star
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct and
poignant too! 😢
A crying shame they
lost all their dew! 🙏
A great read indeed! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:42
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct and
poignant too! 😢
A crying shame they
lost all their dew! 🙏
A great read indeed! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:42
Blue Star
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in your comments to the Simpsons. While I am familiar with the show I am missing the connection. Still, I find this poem relatable, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in your comments to the Simpsons. While I am familiar with the show I am missing the connection. Still, I find this poem relatable, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 07:58
Blue Star
arqios said:
So good to experience introspection speckled with a dusting of melancholy in a star-blanketed city. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 14th, 2025 04:00
arqios said:
So good to experience introspection speckled with a dusting of melancholy in a star-blanketed city. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 14th, 2025 04:00
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