Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Exitement
arqios said:

Oh my, Mutley. How much have you been holding back!? A sure Fave here πŸ€©πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

January 16th, 2026 21:26

Exitement
sorenbarrett said:

Now this presents all kinds of possibilities from the holy to the perverse in metaphor. A puzzling read that has me scratching my head which choice is the intended one.

January 16th, 2026 06:19

Top Cat
Paul Bell said:

And we know what you can do with five fishes and two loaves, not forgetting the washing it down with water turned to wine.

January 15th, 2026 15:52

Top Cat
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative faith, and a wink toward abundance all fold together without preaching. The poem trusts the reader…and that trust pays off. Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 15th, 2026 10:13

Top Cat
arqios said:

That can prove to be an interesting state of affairs.πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

January 15th, 2026 07:49

Top Cat
sorenbarrett said:

A puzzle and conundrum in poetic form of metaphor. Reality pays better. Nicely done

January 15th, 2026 04:22

Cedar Tree Odyssey
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Mutley, this lands with a quiet philosophical punch. The question hums long after the last line…simple on the surface, but deeply unsettling in the best way. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 13th, 2026 19:30

Cedar Tree Odyssey
arqios said:

A poem that makes (hu)man you, man πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

January 13th, 2026 09:08

Cedar Tree Odyssey
Thomas W Case said:

Sharp and curiousβ€”your lines tease the mind as much as they probe the self.
I like how each word feels weighted, yet open to infinite interpretation.

January 13th, 2026 08:00

Cedar Tree Odyssey
sorenbarrett said:

The only (Hu) man I know of is a song. Well written

January 12th, 2026 20:11

Cicada Asks a Favor
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Mutley, this reads like a fable for makers. Imagination over will, brevity over excess, and song becoming ritual instead of performance. Witty, economical, and instructive in the best way. Love it, my friend.πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 11th, 2026 17:45

Cicada Asks a Favor
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely the cicada\'s mantra is not that long although their life is. Loved the way you put nature in personified form into a clever verse of song and incorporated time this one is a fave

January 11th, 2026 11:20

Something Wants the Fire in the Water
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Mutley, this reads like a voice questioning its own embodiment. Power, doubt, and presence collide as you ask what’s being separated and why. Abstract, uneasy, and compelling, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 10th, 2026 10:49

Something Wants the Fire in the Water
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting write of a spiritual nature. How does one separate the earthly aspects from the Avatar? Nicely written

January 10th, 2026 04:22

Magi
NafisaSB said:

yes, who would it? and why should it? let the imagination soar

January 9th, 2026 23:51

Journey to the Guts of the Earth
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Mutley, what a sly and unsettling poem, my friend. It feels like a descent you don’t notice until you’re already surrounded. The tone lands sharp and knowing. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬› I like this title, too...better than Jules Verne\'s!

January 9th, 2026 10:50

Journey to the Guts of the Earth
sorenbarrett said:

Coded and cryptic this messages seems pharmacological but well could be metaphorical. Nicely done

January 9th, 2026 06:35

Harakiri
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Mutley, this reads like a quiet internal coup. Authority questioned, center shifted, something new seated without ceremony. It’s concise, philosophical, and confident in its minimalism. Well done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 8th, 2026 09:40

Harakiri
sorenbarrett said:

Honor first. More important than life and disgrace to be repaid with self inflicted death so as not to suffer the shame. A most interesting view point and I believe that with time this view has been overthrown. Nicely written

January 8th, 2026 04:43

Magi
Tristan Robert Lange said:

When you come up with the definitive answer for this...do let me know! 😜 Profound question, my friend...one that everyone should find themselves asking. Bravo! Well done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 5th, 2026 16:09

Magi
Friendship said:

Well worded

January 5th, 2026 10:24

Magi
Paul Bell said:

Yes, imagination is limitless and why I\'m building a house on the moon.
Why does mummy shout at me when I\'m conquering the world? Definitely not coming with me.

January 5th, 2026 07:12

Magi
arqios said:

Why o why, indeedπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

January 5th, 2026 06:52

Magi
sorenbarrett said:

Why indeed? A lovely thought well expressed

January 5th, 2026 05:20

2020Styx
Tristan Robert Lange said:

My friend, this is a poem of internal authority. Mythic vision, bodily awareness, and resistance braid together without apology. By the end, β€œturning up the heat” feels like choosing agency rather than compliance. Provocative, visceral work. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 3rd, 2026 13:37

2020Styx
sorenbarrett said:

Biological, evolutionary, it boggles the mind. Well done

January 3rd, 2026 08:00

Exhaust
arqios said:

Aye! I can relate totally πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

January 3rd, 2026 07:17

Faith-Challenged
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the analogy in this write. Well done

January 2nd, 2026 21:53

Exhaust
Tristan Robert Lange said:

You ain\'t kidding, my friend! A truth I know all too well. Powerful! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 2nd, 2026 08:41

Exhaust
sorenbarrett said:

A reflection on new years resolutions and less than one percent are ever fulfilled. Good write

January 2nd, 2026 03:34

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