Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Blood Taxi 2
arqios said:
My blood pressure is well maintained by my GP. It’s hard to be excited even when one wants to intentionally. Everything goes at a flowy pace. Not slow but unhurried either🕊️🙏🏻
April 23rd, 2026 05:38
arqios said:
My blood pressure is well maintained by my GP. It’s hard to be excited even when one wants to intentionally. Everything goes at a flowy pace. Not slow but unhurried either🕊️🙏🏻
April 23rd, 2026 05:38
Blood Taxi 2
sorenbarrett said:
Blood pressure normal monitoring for high and low. Nicely penned
April 22nd, 2026 19:10
sorenbarrett said:
Blood pressure normal monitoring for high and low. Nicely penned
April 22nd, 2026 19:10
Cosmic Surgery
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries that mix of playfulness and realization…there’s a grounded strength paired with something almost cosmic and unexpected. It’s light in tone but still lands with meaning. Really enjoyable piece, Mutley. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries that mix of playfulness and realization…there’s a grounded strength paired with something almost cosmic and unexpected. It’s light in tone but still lands with meaning. Really enjoyable piece, Mutley. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:13
Cosmic Surgery
sorenbarrett said:
This evokes vivid images that one may take metaphorically or not. Well done
April 21st, 2026 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
This evokes vivid images that one may take metaphorically or not. Well done
April 21st, 2026 06:59
Sequoia
RSM0812 said:
Everything needs a foundation. A house, a flower, a human being. Short and sweet. Enjoyed the poem.
April 20th, 2026 04:40
RSM0812 said:
Everything needs a foundation. A house, a flower, a human being. Short and sweet. Enjoyed the poem.
April 20th, 2026 04:40
Futureology
Kevin Hulme said:
Lottery numbers would be nice.
A lot of truth in what you say . Good one.
April 19th, 2026 18:41
Kevin Hulme said:
Lottery numbers would be nice.
A lot of truth in what you say . Good one.
April 19th, 2026 18:41
Futureology
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is a neat one…simple, but it pulls you in fast. It plays with something we all assume we control, then quietly shows we don’t. That lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is a neat one…simple, but it pulls you in fast. It plays with something we all assume we control, then quietly shows we don’t. That lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:20
Futureology
sorenbarrett said:
The answer is no I can not. Predicting the future remains out of range in this world yet we try to do it all the time in weather predictions, the stock market and on and on. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
The answer is no I can not. Predicting the future remains out of range in this world yet we try to do it all the time in weather predictions, the stock market and on and on. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 06:15
Sequoia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a quiet clarity here…something that feels like it arrived all at once. You keep it stripped down, and that gives the idea room to breathe and expand. It’s simple, but it lands with real depth. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a quiet clarity here…something that feels like it arrived all at once. You keep it stripped down, and that gives the idea room to breathe and expand. It’s simple, but it lands with real depth. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:18
Sequoia
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and balanced it stretches in both directions. Well done and a fave
April 17th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and balanced it stretches in both directions. Well done and a fave
April 17th, 2026 06:10
Great Green Wave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it knocked me flat for a bit. That idea of something easing through gears…blending the ancient with the mechanical…that’s what really sticks for me. It gives the whole piece a strange, timeless motion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it knocked me flat for a bit. That idea of something easing through gears…blending the ancient with the mechanical…that’s what really sticks for me. It gives the whole piece a strange, timeless motion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:34
Great Green Wave
arqios said:
Lost knowledge regained opens doors left unopened and half-opened🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:57
arqios said:
Lost knowledge regained opens doors left unopened and half-opened🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:57
Great Green Wave
sorenbarrett said:
Short and with good rhyme it flows. Well done
April 15th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Short and with good rhyme it flows. Well done
April 15th, 2026 06:32
Titan
arqios said:
Been to the Himalayas! Return trips are desired but still have to have a proper sitdown with Atlas -guess he’s always busy🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:22
arqios said:
Been to the Himalayas! Return trips are desired but still have to have a proper sitdown with Atlas -guess he’s always busy🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:22
Titan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley… you got me with this one…that contrast between “big me” and “little me” hits quick and carries. One side light, the other holding everything…that shift lands in a real way. Clever, grounded piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley… you got me with this one…that contrast between “big me” and “little me” hits quick and carries. One side light, the other holding everything…that shift lands in a real way. Clever, grounded piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:07
Titan
Abdullah123 said:
Reminds of the Greek myth of the Titan Atlas. I wonder if that was the inspiration for this piece? Great write
April 14th, 2026 05:51
Abdullah123 said:
Reminds of the Greek myth of the Titan Atlas. I wonder if that was the inspiration for this piece? Great write
April 14th, 2026 05:51
Titan
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting blend of the mythical, and the reflective nicely said
April 13th, 2026 22:09
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting blend of the mythical, and the reflective nicely said
April 13th, 2026 22:09
Unknown Treasures
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this may be short, but it doesn’t feel small. That sense of something being held back, building into something louder…you can feel it rising even in just a few lines. It’s tight, focused, and it lands. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this may be short, but it doesn’t feel small. That sense of something being held back, building into something louder…you can feel it rising even in just a few lines. It’s tight, focused, and it lands. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:13
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