Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Stroll in the Art
Cheeky Missy said:

I swear, I wasn\'t supposed to laugh in concluding, was I? Dear me! Now I is deemed sacrilegious. Oh well, you made it too much fun.

September 8th, 2024 15:46

Skin Game
sorenbarrett said:

A good message. Many people have difficulty with forgiveness. It is often confused with forgetfulness. I try to forgive for my own sake, but I do not forget.

September 7th, 2024 07:43

The Bow is Drawn
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Mutley.

September 5th, 2024 06:59

The Bow is Drawn
sorenbarrett said:

Most beautifully said. We all ask why. A beautiful choice of wording and images nicely done.

September 5th, 2024 06:36

The Bow is Drawn
Cheeky Missy said:

My la! You\'re, You\'re... just like your pen name! What a compelling argument you make. How prettily rendered. Thank you for sharing.

September 4th, 2024 23:11

Kaa Goes Out On A Limb
Cheeky Missy said:

Oh my! \"...That old serpent called--\" ooh! THIS is too good! Mowgli made it seem like it\'d work, but this reality wouldn\'t be if she hadn\'t been decieved. Awesome!

September 3rd, 2024 19:25

Galactic Squeaks
Tom Dylan said:

This made me smile. Thanks for sharing. :-)

September 3rd, 2024 06:16

Galactic Squeaks
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘ πŸπŸ€
So you sent these mice πŸπŸ€
here from another galaxy?¿ 😱
Way to go bro! 😢πŸ₯Ί
I hear they multiply
constantly! 😈
Thanks for sharing
I enjoyed this immensely!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

September 2nd, 2024 19:54

Prophesee
Cheeky Missy said:

Why are you so hilarious?!

August 30th, 2024 18:54

Meanwhile, In the Third Age....
sorenbarrett said:

A metaphor within a fiction becomes well encased and gives one pause in thought

August 28th, 2024 06:41

How`s Things?
Thad Wilk said:

OMG! 😱
You got that right! πŸ‘
Great read,
thank you for sharing πŸ™
it was dynamite! 🧨
Best regards ✌️ Thad

August 26th, 2024 10:25

How`s Things?
sorenbarrett said:

A nightmare or rather a day mare. Images that provoke thought and bend the mind. Nicely done

August 26th, 2024 08:50

Solar Resistence
sorenbarrett said:

Short and well said. I too am short on reverence it is reserved for nature. Loved the poem

August 25th, 2024 10:39

Einstein Honey
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 24th, 2024 09:23

Einstein Honey
sorenbarrett said:

A bear in the sky was it a cloud? A very enjoyable and fun read.

August 24th, 2024 09:08

Death Derangement Syndrome
sorenbarrett said:

A statement that we all feel until the reaper knocks on the door. Nicely done is such brevity and lightness.

August 23rd, 2024 06:12

Mass Tribal Suicide
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 22nd, 2024 09:23

Mass Tribal Suicide
sorenbarrett said:

Cute, catchy and well thought out

August 22nd, 2024 08:47

I think that.....
sorenbarrett said:

Fight for a draw I say. Nice one

August 21st, 2024 07:37

Skyology
sorenbarrett said:

Most fun and vivid in the imagery.

August 20th, 2024 20:58

TI-12
sorenbarrett said:

Well I could see the imagination in this piece. Nicely done

August 20th, 2024 05:05

The Serpent’s Retainer
sorenbarrett said:

Wise, metaphoric, entertaining and what else could you want.

August 18th, 2024 06:22

Toast
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely metaphor set in such poetic lines. Very creative and well enjoyed as a breakfast snack.

August 17th, 2024 07:16

Water, then Fire
sorenbarrett said:

That sword of wisdom is not seen often these days. Very nicely written I particularly liked the last lines

August 16th, 2024 05:23

Sun Ray
sorenbarrett said:

That is what the pharmaceutical companies have been putting out for years. It keeps their pockets full.

August 15th, 2024 04:48

Vampire Regurgitation Blues
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

August 13th, 2024 08:54

Vampire Regurgitation Blues
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphoric it is a most interesting view that in many ways makes sense. A most evocative work

August 13th, 2024 08:31

Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
Thoughtless said:

It is what it is.

August 13th, 2024 07:54

Atonemental
Tom Dylan said:

A very intriguing read. Really well done.

August 12th, 2024 06:40

Atonemental
sorenbarrett said:

Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely rhymed and with good flow. I felt it without understanding.

August 12th, 2024 05:40

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