Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Clown Worlds 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Mutley! That phrase “ground-dweller” really caught me. It sets a tone of distance and observation right away, like we’re overhearing something meant to stay just out of reach. Subtle and effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Mutley! That phrase “ground-dweller” really caught me. It sets a tone of distance and observation right away, like we’re overhearing something meant to stay just out of reach. Subtle and effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:27
Will to Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 This is SPOT ON, my friend. 💯 Such profound, paradoxical truth in such brevity. The restraint and the message are powerful. A fave, for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 This is SPOT ON, my friend. 💯 Such profound, paradoxical truth in such brevity. The restraint and the message are powerful. A fave, for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:21
Clown Worlds 2
Paul Bell said:
Every man needs a good lady, usually in more ways than one.
February 5th, 2026 08:25
Paul Bell said:
Every man needs a good lady, usually in more ways than one.
February 5th, 2026 08:25
Clown Worlds 2
sorenbarrett said:
Sheltered from the news and social commentary I just know that this holds deeper meaning than what greets me and I have to plead ignorance in this case.
February 5th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Sheltered from the news and social commentary I just know that this holds deeper meaning than what greets me and I have to plead ignorance in this case.
February 5th, 2026 04:47
Will to Power
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed this does give anxiety feeling that one is not in control.
February 4th, 2026 18:27
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed this does give anxiety feeling that one is not in control.
February 4th, 2026 18:27
Temple Sounds 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful write. Your restraint here does the heavy lifting, the poem\'s message comes through in what\'s not said. This is a fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful write. Your restraint here does the heavy lifting, the poem\'s message comes through in what\'s not said. This is a fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:21
Temple Sounds 2
Thomas W Case said:
A whisper of defiance, short but sharp—keeps its teeth even in few words.
Strength isn’t always loud; sometimes it lives in the quiet moments you dare to speak.
February 3rd, 2026 07:58
Thomas W Case said:
A whisper of defiance, short but sharp—keeps its teeth even in few words.
Strength isn’t always loud; sometimes it lives in the quiet moments you dare to speak.
February 3rd, 2026 07:58
Temple Sounds 2
sorenbarrett said:
A saying that is well organized in form, intent, thought and poetic verse. It is stable, logical, and unfortunately used to abuse the weak by unscrupulous leaders. Well written
February 3rd, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A saying that is well organized in form, intent, thought and poetic verse. It is stable, logical, and unfortunately used to abuse the weak by unscrupulous leaders. Well written
February 3rd, 2026 04:23
Homing Pigeon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write with a Tolkien, Middle Earth reference. Love it, my friend!
February 1st, 2026 15:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write with a Tolkien, Middle Earth reference. Love it, my friend!
February 1st, 2026 15:26
Homing Pigeon
sorenbarrett said:
Is Ireland as mythical as the Shire and if so does England represent the real world? A lovely poem and Dublin the edge of the earth
February 1st, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Is Ireland as mythical as the Shire and if so does England represent the real world? A lovely poem and Dublin the edge of the earth
February 1st, 2026 06:14
Orange Juice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Muley, this is minimalism with teeth. Belief becomes currency, attention becomes power, and the speaker thrives on it. The restraint makes the implication unavoidable. Strong, incisive work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 31st, 2026 12:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Muley, this is minimalism with teeth. Belief becomes currency, attention becomes power, and the speaker thrives on it. The restraint makes the implication unavoidable. Strong, incisive work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 31st, 2026 12:42
Orange Juice
sorenbarrett said:
It is so true that the acceptance of one\'s power is the fuel that perpetuates the journey. Orange such an interesting color a blend of yellow and red communistic cowardice comes to mind. A satire in metaphor
January 31st, 2026 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
It is so true that the acceptance of one\'s power is the fuel that perpetuates the journey. Orange such an interesting color a blend of yellow and red communistic cowardice comes to mind. A satire in metaphor
January 31st, 2026 05:29
Big Bird Tweets
sorenbarrett said:
I can see why with both a right and left wing big bird can not fly . A fun read with deep meaning
January 31st, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
I can see why with both a right and left wing big bird can not fly . A fun read with deep meaning
January 31st, 2026 03:52
Big Bird Tweets
Mutley Ravishes said:
Divide and rule works like a treat!
We`ve come a long way
Since those Roman days....
Haven`t we?
January 31st, 2026 02:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
Divide and rule works like a treat!
We`ve come a long way
Since those Roman days....
Haven`t we?
January 31st, 2026 02:46
Big Bird Tweets
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hits with sharp irony. It’s compact, unsettling, and deliberately uncomfortable…the kind of piece that makes you stop smiling halfway through the chuckle. That bite is effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 31st, 2026 00:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hits with sharp irony. It’s compact, unsettling, and deliberately uncomfortable…the kind of piece that makes you stop smiling halfway through the chuckle. That bite is effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 31st, 2026 00:37
Hope You Find
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES! When does the journey begin! 🚀 Well done, my friend! Totally relatable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES! When does the journey begin! 🚀 Well done, my friend! Totally relatable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 11:00
Clown Worlds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taking your word for it! 🤣 This gave me a good laugh, my friend.
January 29th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taking your word for it! 🤣 This gave me a good laugh, my friend.
January 29th, 2026 10:51
Hope You Find
sorenbarrett said:
This short poem starts out with memory problems then moves on to a question of desire to leave this spot. Nicely done
January 29th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
This short poem starts out with memory problems then moves on to a question of desire to leave this spot. Nicely done
January 29th, 2026 06:17
Collapsed Star
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this lands with a quiet punch. The compression is doing real work here…the image pulls inward fast and doesn’t let go. It feels ominous without being loud. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 28th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this lands with a quiet punch. The compression is doing real work here…the image pulls inward fast and doesn’t let go. It feels ominous without being loud. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 28th, 2026 10:52
Collapsed Star
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that is mind provoking. Well done
January 27th, 2026 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that is mind provoking. Well done
January 27th, 2026 19:34
Exodus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is a compact parable. A looming nemesis, an absurdly precise threat, and a quiet decision to sail on. Myth and menace blend smoothly, and the ending feels earned rather than escapist. Strong, subtle work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 26th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is a compact parable. A looming nemesis, an absurdly precise threat, and a quiet decision to sail on. Myth and menace blend smoothly, and the ending feels earned rather than escapist. Strong, subtle work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 26th, 2026 09:11
Exodus
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around themes of escape, conflict, and a longing for freedom.
January 26th, 2026 06:25
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around themes of escape, conflict, and a longing for freedom.
January 26th, 2026 06:25
Exodus
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden in these words is a message that is obscure to me. Coded in numbers and letters its message I can not see. Forgive my ignorance my friend with it I do not wish to offend but I will not claim to be wiser than I be.
January 26th, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden in these words is a message that is obscure to me. Coded in numbers and letters its message I can not see. Forgive my ignorance my friend with it I do not wish to offend but I will not claim to be wiser than I be.
January 26th, 2026 06:14
Gimme Shelters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this resonates. The idea that no amount of advancement or hidden depth can rival something lost but pure…that tension feels deeply human. It’s understated, but it lands with real weight, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 25th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this resonates. The idea that no amount of advancement or hidden depth can rival something lost but pure…that tension feels deeply human. It’s understated, but it lands with real weight, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 25th, 2026 10:36
Gimme Shelters
sorenbarrett said:
You got me on this one with the reference to 2040 I must have missed it in the depths of the lake. Fun read
January 25th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
You got me on this one with the reference to 2040 I must have missed it in the depths of the lake. Fun read
January 25th, 2026 03:57
Assault and Battery 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this feels like a survival kit distilled to its essence. Each line lands like a quiet instruction…no drama, no excess. There’s a calm confidence here that trusts the reader to understand without being told. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this feels like a survival kit distilled to its essence. Each line lands like a quiet instruction…no drama, no excess. There’s a calm confidence here that trusts the reader to understand without being told. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:24
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