Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Hawaii Five-Flow
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
June 21st, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
June 21st, 2025 04:06
The Shining
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Helios approves of this message! ๐๐คฃ Well done, my friend! ๐๐น
June 17th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Helios approves of this message! ๐๐คฃ Well done, my friend! ๐๐น
June 17th, 2025 08:01
The Shining
Poetic Licence said:
I am a sun worshiper and today is great, loved the read
June 17th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
I am a sun worshiper and today is great, loved the read
June 17th, 2025 05:09
The Shining
sorenbarrett said:
So say all sun worshipers of which I am one. A fun read that has more meaning that at first seen. Nicely done
June 17th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
So say all sun worshipers of which I am one. A fun read that has more meaning that at first seen. Nicely done
June 17th, 2025 04:27
The Shining
arqios said:
Yes, may Apรณllลn watch over our day, shining bright!
June 17th, 2025 02:08
arqios said:
Yes, may Apรณllลn watch over our day, shining bright!
June 17th, 2025 02:08
Addicere
sorenbarrett said:
And a mind bender indeed it is in this poem that takes ones thoughts around and around. Nicely done
June 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
And a mind bender indeed it is in this poem that takes ones thoughts around and around. Nicely done
June 5th, 2025 05:09
Addicere
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes the most difficult thing in the world to admit defeat, enjoyed the read
June 5th, 2025 04:34
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes the most difficult thing in the world to admit defeat, enjoyed the read
June 5th, 2025 04:34
Con-strict
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh how I love this, Mr. Con-strict-or! LOL! Wonderfully layered in its brevity! Perfection, imho! ๐น๐
June 2nd, 2025 07:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh how I love this, Mr. Con-strict-or! LOL! Wonderfully layered in its brevity! Perfection, imho! ๐น๐
June 2nd, 2025 07:21
Con-strict
sorenbarrett said:
Assumptions lead to actions now taken on false presumptions and false steps leaves a person easy prey to any predator. That is my first take but there somehow seems an alternate meaning here that deserves further contemplation. Lovely write
June 2nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Assumptions lead to actions now taken on false presumptions and false steps leaves a person easy prey to any predator. That is my first take but there somehow seems an alternate meaning here that deserves further contemplation. Lovely write
June 2nd, 2025 04:57
Con-strict
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up very nicely how alot of people feel, like pray, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
That sums up very nicely how alot of people feel, like pray, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:33
Con-strict
Soman Ragavan said:
The boa is a constrictor. The python, too, by the look of it. The assumptions were not uttered but were still intercepted. This python can smell from very far off...
June 2nd, 2025 02:16
Soman Ragavan said:
The boa is a constrictor. The python, too, by the look of it. The assumptions were not uttered but were still intercepted. This python can smell from very far off...
June 2nd, 2025 02:16
In My Defense
Poetic Licence said:
That is some defence, probably one that that type of person would believe is valid!!, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:42
Poetic Licence said:
That is some defence, probably one that that type of person would believe is valid!!, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:42
A Dam in the Evening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Signs. Damn it. Actually, no. God bless it! LOL! The signs are everywhere. Your poem is one such sign! I know exactly what this poem means, spiritually (and personally) speaking, and I give it a RESOUNDING AMEN! Well done. my friend. ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 19:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Signs. Damn it. Actually, no. God bless it! LOL! The signs are everywhere. Your poem is one such sign! I know exactly what this poem means, spiritually (and personally) speaking, and I give it a RESOUNDING AMEN! Well done. my friend. ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 19:28
A Dam in the Evening
arqios said:
Quite a prophetic and observant message.๐๐๐ป
May 28th, 2025 06:52
arqios said:
Quite a prophetic and observant message.๐๐๐ป
May 28th, 2025 06:52
A Dam in the Evening
sorenbarrett said:
Division is always a weakening and unity a strengthening. A short but beautiful write
May 28th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Division is always a weakening and unity a strengthening. A short but beautiful write
May 28th, 2025 03:42
Boxology
Poetic Licence said:
My defences were down and i got sucker punched with this one, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:10
Poetic Licence said:
My defences were down and i got sucker punched with this one, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:10
Boxology
Soman Ragavan said:
You can take a lot of blows to the face and still carry on. The most critical part is the LIVER. A blow to it immediately puts you out of action at least for a few seconds. As for the deltoid, the one on the side that the boxer uses more (eg right shoulder) can affect him for some time. But a blow to the liver is more devastating.
โBlunt force to the liver can be excruciatingly painful, but mostly lasts only about 30 seconds to one minute. An especially effective shot will incapacitate a person instantly. Thus, in combat sports, liver shots often result in technical knockouts (TKOs).โ โ Wikipedia.
https://www.google.com/search?client=firefox-b-d&q=effects+of+a+blow+to+the+liver+in+boxing&sei=HRM1aIjsEZKB7M8Pt9PsgQE
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May 26th, 2025 20:21
Soman Ragavan said:
You can take a lot of blows to the face and still carry on. The most critical part is the LIVER. A blow to it immediately puts you out of action at least for a few seconds. As for the deltoid, the one on the side that the boxer uses more (eg right shoulder) can affect him for some time. But a blow to the liver is more devastating.
โBlunt force to the liver can be excruciatingly painful, but mostly lasts only about 30 seconds to one minute. An especially effective shot will incapacitate a person instantly. Thus, in combat sports, liver shots often result in technical knockouts (TKOs).โ โ Wikipedia.
https://www.google.com/search?client=firefox-b-d&q=effects+of+a+blow+to+the+liver+in+boxing&sei=HRM1aIjsEZKB7M8Pt9PsgQE
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May 26th, 2025 20:21
Boxology
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is the first poem on boxing that I have read in some time. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is the first poem on boxing that I have read in some time. Very nice
May 26th, 2025 19:00
Venomics
sorenbarrett said:
Much to think about in this metaphor of metaphors where what appears is not. Backward thoughts and expected phrases give this poem spice and the rattle and snake reminds me of when my youngest son was three and was found playing with a poisons snake that never bit him. And the sucking child shall play on the hole of the asp, and the weaned child shall put his hand on the cockatrice\' den. Isaiah 11:8 A fave
May 22nd, 2025 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Much to think about in this metaphor of metaphors where what appears is not. Backward thoughts and expected phrases give this poem spice and the rattle and snake reminds me of when my youngest son was three and was found playing with a poisons snake that never bit him. And the sucking child shall play on the hole of the asp, and the weaned child shall put his hand on the cockatrice\' den. Isaiah 11:8 A fave
May 22nd, 2025 06:54
Cobra Chemistry 2
NafisaSB said:
i presume that if you had cosmic identity - you would take up the challenge and come out the winner
btw am absolutely scared of snakes and all creepy crawlies
May 21st, 2025 00:22
NafisaSB said:
i presume that if you had cosmic identity - you would take up the challenge and come out the winner
btw am absolutely scared of snakes and all creepy crawlies
May 21st, 2025 00:22
Cobra Chemistry 2
Tom Dylan said:
This one slithered and flowed really well. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:59
Tom Dylan said:
This one slithered and flowed really well. Nicely done.
May 20th, 2025 06:59
Cobra Chemistry 2
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write and mind tingling write, many a snake trying to be charming these days, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:23
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write and mind tingling write, many a snake trying to be charming these days, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:23
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