Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Training in the Art of Elven Assumptions
sorenbarrett said:
A fine poem with clever word play regarding misinterpretations by others where good intent is labeled unwarranted. Well written
July 13th, 2026 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
A fine poem with clever word play regarding misinterpretations by others where good intent is labeled unwarranted. Well written
July 13th, 2026 07:16
Blue Bird of Paradise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That break in \"ear- / -ly\" caught my eye right away. It\'s a clever little twist that slows the reader down before the poem opens into something larger. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That break in \"ear- / -ly\" caught my eye right away. It\'s a clever little twist that slows the reader down before the poem opens into something larger. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:08
Blue Bird of Paradise
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem casts different meaning and preserves the first line intent. Nicely done
July 11th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem casts different meaning and preserves the first line intent. Nicely done
July 11th, 2026 07:59
Down the Mudrain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha...this gave me a good laugh. It\'s delightfully absurd, and the punchline lands exactly where it should. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha...this gave me a good laugh. It\'s delightfully absurd, and the punchline lands exactly where it should. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Been Shining Since Fingertips
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what an intriguing piece. I love how it begins with the mystery of sunrise and ends with the mystery of human touch, leaving the reader suspended somewhere between the two. It asks more than it answers, and I think that\'s exactly where its strength lies. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what an intriguing piece. I love how it begins with the mystery of sunrise and ends with the mystery of human touch, leaving the reader suspended somewhere between the two. It asks more than it answers, and I think that\'s exactly where its strength lies. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:48
Been Shining Since Fingertips
sorenbarrett said:
Now there are a couple of questions that paint a picture in the mind. Well done
July 3rd, 2026 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Now there are a couple of questions that paint a picture in the mind. Well done
July 3rd, 2026 08:35
Future Tense
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really resonated with me. The contrast between \"inhaling the rising sun\" and the gradual tightening into limitation creates an honest reflection on how easily joy can become entangled with overthinking. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really resonated with me. The contrast between \"inhaling the rising sun\" and the gradual tightening into limitation creates an honest reflection on how easily joy can become entangled with overthinking. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:48
Future Tense
NafisaSB said:
Don’t allow your thoughts to overwhelm and inhibit you from ‘inhaling the sun’ and having fun 🤩
July 1st, 2026 03:44
NafisaSB said:
Don’t allow your thoughts to overwhelm and inhibit you from ‘inhaling the sun’ and having fun 🤩
July 1st, 2026 03:44
Future Tense
sorenbarrett said:
A most uplifting poem of joy interrupted with the down beat of restrictions. Well done
June 30th, 2026 20:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most uplifting poem of joy interrupted with the down beat of restrictions. Well done
June 30th, 2026 20:41
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
NafisaSB said:
barbed humour with a good message - enjoyed..
June 30th, 2026 06:10
NafisaSB said:
barbed humour with a good message - enjoyed..
June 30th, 2026 06:10
Shamanic Technologies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a thought-provoking piece. The contrast between mechanistic living and shamanic freedom is conveyed with remarkable economy, and it leaves plenty of room for the reader to enter the poem with their own experience. Sometimes the shortest poems open the biggest doors. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a thought-provoking piece. The contrast between mechanistic living and shamanic freedom is conveyed with remarkable economy, and it leaves plenty of room for the reader to enter the poem with their own experience. Sometimes the shortest poems open the biggest doors. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:50
Shamanic Technologies
arqios said:
This is what I gleaned from reading your poem: before life turns you into someone who just goes through the motions, reconnect with the playful, free part of yourself that you had as a child. 🕊️🙏
June 27th, 2026 07:39
arqios said:
This is what I gleaned from reading your poem: before life turns you into someone who just goes through the motions, reconnect with the playful, free part of yourself that you had as a child. 🕊️🙏
June 27th, 2026 07:39
Shamanic Technologies
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting combination of learning and age passage leading to conditioning and establishment of culture and expectations. Well done
June 27th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting combination of learning and age passage leading to conditioning and establishment of culture and expectations. Well done
June 27th, 2026 05:10
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha, this one carries some bite! 🤣 The frustration comes through loud and clear, but so does the humor. I found myself chuckling while shaking my head at the situation being described. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha, this one carries some bite! 🤣 The frustration comes through loud and clear, but so does the humor. I found myself chuckling while shaking my head at the situation being described. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:34
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism at work in the USA so deeply ingrained as a sacred shrine that no one dares challenge it. Nicely written
June 23rd, 2026 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism at work in the USA so deeply ingrained as a sacred shrine that no one dares challenge it. Nicely written
June 23rd, 2026 06:36
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
arqios said:
Sometimes we end up scratching our heads at the process of things.🙏🕊️
June 23rd, 2026 05:40
arqios said:
Sometimes we end up scratching our heads at the process of things.🙏🕊️
June 23rd, 2026 05:40
Bold As Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one grabbed me immediately. Few words, huge question. I love when a poem opens a door and then simply stands aside…letting the reader wander through it. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one grabbed me immediately. Few words, huge question. I love when a poem opens a door and then simply stands aside…letting the reader wander through it. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:23
Bold As Love
arqios said:
They speak another language which we’ve only begun to learn🕊️🙏🏻
June 19th, 2026 08:07
arqios said:
They speak another language which we’ve only begun to learn🕊️🙏🏻
June 19th, 2026 08:07
Bold As Love
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, mankinds arrogance sets him apart
June 19th, 2026 07:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, mankinds arrogance sets him apart
June 19th, 2026 07:54
Bold As Love
sorenbarrett said:
A deep and most philosophical write. With all the microorganisms and limitless galaxies both going in different directions we have to ask ourselves where we fit and where does everything else fit in us.
June 19th, 2026 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A deep and most philosophical write. With all the microorganisms and limitless galaxies both going in different directions we have to ask ourselves where we fit and where does everything else fit in us.
June 19th, 2026 07:22
Razed Right
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:08
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