Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects
arqios said:
Thanks for this clever reminder that true mastery isn\'t found in a duel, but in the \"golden light\" of a nervous system finally set free 🕊️🙏🏻
December 20th, 2025 23:48
arqios said:
Thanks for this clever reminder that true mastery isn\'t found in a duel, but in the \"golden light\" of a nervous system finally set free 🕊️🙏🏻
December 20th, 2025 23:48
A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a meditation on transmission across time and culture. Doctrine, resistance, peace, and embodiment all braid together, suggesting that “precious cargo” is wisdom carried through bodies, eras, and unexpected vessels. The footnote widens the lens without breaking the spell. Love it.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a meditation on transmission across time and culture. Doctrine, resistance, peace, and embodiment all braid together, suggesting that “precious cargo” is wisdom carried through bodies, eras, and unexpected vessels. The footnote widens the lens without breaking the spell. Love it.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:23
Orspasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a critique of consumption masquerading as vitality. Power feeds, bodies tire, wisdom warns, and what once felt volcanic ends in erosion. The poem traces that arc with sharp, unsentimental focus. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a critique of consumption masquerading as vitality. Power feeds, bodies tire, wisdom warns, and what once felt volcanic ends in erosion. The poem traces that arc with sharp, unsentimental focus. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:11
A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects
sorenbarrett said:
The enlightenment of the footnote was most helpful. A poem that\'s meaning unravels and it unfolds. Lovely
December 20th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
The enlightenment of the footnote was most helpful. A poem that\'s meaning unravels and it unfolds. Lovely
December 20th, 2025 06:57
Orspasm
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biological, social, emotional, natural forces well put in metaphor and multilevel. Well done
December 19th, 2025 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biological, social, emotional, natural forces well put in metaphor and multilevel. Well done
December 19th, 2025 19:52
Ghost House
sorenbarrett said:
The issue of how not to think and dwell on past traumas. Well done
December 18th, 2025 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
The issue of how not to think and dwell on past traumas. Well done
December 18th, 2025 19:38
Temple Sounds
sorenbarrett said:
In many ways this seems true. Its vibrations can be seen in its owner\'s small movements and tone of words. Very nice
December 17th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
In many ways this seems true. Its vibrations can be seen in its owner\'s small movements and tone of words. Very nice
December 17th, 2025 03:57
Seems About a Hundred Years Ago
NafisaSB said:
seems to me you have hit the nail on the head - the prediction seems to be coming true..
December 14th, 2025 00:40
NafisaSB said:
seems to me you have hit the nail on the head - the prediction seems to be coming true..
December 14th, 2025 00:40
Songbird
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
So very true! Wish the wise would wind down that wonderfully and willingly. But too many are focused on what those that know too much are willing to satisfy them with. The crumbs of their over feasting. Talk about hubris in the extreme!
December 13th, 2025 12:52
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
So very true! Wish the wise would wind down that wonderfully and willingly. But too many are focused on what those that know too much are willing to satisfy them with. The crumbs of their over feasting. Talk about hubris in the extreme!
December 13th, 2025 12:52
Seems About a Hundred Years Ago
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and quietly prophetic…the rush of technology, the severed connection, the sideways glance at where it all leads. It reads light, but it lands heavy. Well played, Mutley. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and quietly prophetic…the rush of technology, the severed connection, the sideways glance at where it all leads. It reads light, but it lands heavy. Well played, Mutley. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 13th, 2025 12:47
Seems About a Hundred Years Ago
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes coincidence is just too much to understand. My poem today seems eerily related to this one. Creepy, not this poem the connection. This poem definitely caught my attention. Very nicely written
December 13th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes coincidence is just too much to understand. My poem today seems eerily related to this one. Creepy, not this poem the connection. This poem definitely caught my attention. Very nicely written
December 13th, 2025 03:56
Songbird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this cracked me up…the punch, the bite, the whole bird metaphor landing like a slap of truth. Sharp and funny, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this cracked me up…the punch, the bite, the whole bird metaphor landing like a slap of truth. Sharp and funny, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:56
Songbird
sorenbarrett said:
Now to me this is an allegory of the right and the left that don\'t consider themselves part of the same nation or world. Well written
December 10th, 2025 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
Now to me this is an allegory of the right and the left that don\'t consider themselves part of the same nation or world. Well written
December 10th, 2025 07:48
Seductions of Identification
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a quiet revelation. The seed becomes a traveler, a survivor, a witness…ending up right where it needs to be. Simple and profound. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this reads like a quiet revelation. The seed becomes a traveler, a survivor, a witness…ending up right where it needs to be. Simple and profound. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:14
Seductions of Identification
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a marketing ploy and technology to some processed food. This may apply as a metaphor for many other things as well. Scary thought
December 8th, 2025 20:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a marketing ploy and technology to some processed food. This may apply as a metaphor for many other things as well. Scary thought
December 8th, 2025 20:33
Double-Edged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean. 💯 wow, man! Flawless all around. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean. 💯 wow, man! Flawless all around. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 13:07
Magikali
Tristan Robert Lange said:
#Truth! LOL! Well done, my friend. A fave from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
#Truth! LOL! Well done, my friend. A fave from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:35
Magikali
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. I think about this and ask are we not all whack jobs but just hide it well
December 1st, 2025 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. I think about this and ask are we not all whack jobs but just hide it well
December 1st, 2025 20:52
Who is I am Addicted?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ll answer that question if you tell me where I Am Insane went, he took my pencil to sharpen his computer. 🤣🤷♂️
Now, that silliness aside. This is a profoundly important piece, my friend. It gets to the heart of something vitally important to me...labels and the negative effect they can have. Who is \"I Am Addicted\"? Who is \"I Am Overweight?\" This could be asked of so many different things and...the question becomes, are these labels helpful or harmful? Your poem gets into that and, I think, acknowledges that, indeed, there is something their to the label, and that \"something\" is affecting someone and stealing their light. Indeed. But label itself can go both ways and lock people away from light that was never stolen to begin with. So, not sure if I am close or now spiraling through the Outer Rim in hyperspace...but your poem (all 9 lines of it) got me thinking about all of this. Fantastic write, my friend!
December 1st, 2025 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ll answer that question if you tell me where I Am Insane went, he took my pencil to sharpen his computer. 🤣🤷♂️
Now, that silliness aside. This is a profoundly important piece, my friend. It gets to the heart of something vitally important to me...labels and the negative effect they can have. Who is \"I Am Addicted\"? Who is \"I Am Overweight?\" This could be asked of so many different things and...the question becomes, are these labels helpful or harmful? Your poem gets into that and, I think, acknowledges that, indeed, there is something their to the label, and that \"something\" is affecting someone and stealing their light. Indeed. But label itself can go both ways and lock people away from light that was never stolen to begin with. So, not sure if I am close or now spiraling through the Outer Rim in hyperspace...but your poem (all 9 lines of it) got me thinking about all of this. Fantastic write, my friend!
December 1st, 2025 17:47
Who is I am Addicted?
sorenbarrett said:
A deep philosophical poem that deserves a good deal of pondering. The question remains unanswered. Well written
December 1st, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A deep philosophical poem that deserves a good deal of pondering. The question remains unanswered. Well written
December 1st, 2025 04:01
Chef-Shocked
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound and though-provoking. And yeah...the Matrix is real friend. You and I both know we took the damn red pill! Well done!
November 19th, 2025 09:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound and though-provoking. And yeah...the Matrix is real friend. You and I both know we took the damn red pill! Well done!
November 19th, 2025 09:50
Chef-Shocked
sorenbarrett said:
One never knows what to believe now days and this poem seems to reinforce that feeling. Well said
November 18th, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
One never knows what to believe now days and this poem seems to reinforce that feeling. Well said
November 18th, 2025 19:41
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