Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
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arqios said:
The seeds asleep/awakening dynamic is so mystifying and engaging! 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 05:54
arqios said:
The seeds asleep/awakening dynamic is so mystifying and engaging! 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 05:54
Returns
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you\'re having fun. Seriously?! I\'ll beg to differ and leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 22:37
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you\'re having fun. Seriously?! I\'ll beg to differ and leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 22:37
Armored Vehicle
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. We thanks thee for sharing thy enlightened cogitations.
March 11th, 2025 22:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. We thanks thee for sharing thy enlightened cogitations.
March 11th, 2025 22:35
Returns
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only occurs in dreams although dreams can come true if one plans and works hard enough. A good read.
March 11th, 2025 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only occurs in dreams although dreams can come true if one plans and works hard enough. A good read.
March 11th, 2025 19:54
Returns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent. This poem speaks to the human experience, it questions our mastery of anything, our opportunities for growth, and the choices we make in the face of repeated chances for change or awakening. I loved the reference to the Avitchi. Well done on this friend...and yay to being the first to comment! 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 19:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent. This poem speaks to the human experience, it questions our mastery of anything, our opportunities for growth, and the choices we make in the face of repeated chances for change or awakening. I loved the reference to the Avitchi. Well done on this friend...and yay to being the first to comment! 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 19:28
Armored Vehicle
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be about the Covid or black death or about alien invasion or just indoctrination a good thought provoking poem
March 11th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be about the Covid or black death or about alien invasion or just indoctrination a good thought provoking poem
March 11th, 2025 04:31
Armored Vehicle
arqios said:
Hence the search for the soft underbelly, to pry open as a tin opener only can. 🙏🏻🕊
March 11th, 2025 03:17
arqios said:
Hence the search for the soft underbelly, to pry open as a tin opener only can. 🙏🏻🕊
March 11th, 2025 03:17
Armored Vehicle
Poetic Licence said:
I love your short writes, always makes you have a think, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
I love your short writes, always makes you have a think, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 03:04
Assumpchumps
Cheeky Missy said:
Assumptions were defined as: \"making an ass of me.\" You\'re suggesting a foul dinner created them?! Hmm. Dunno. Interesting, you rascal. Thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 19:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Assumptions were defined as: \"making an ass of me.\" You\'re suggesting a foul dinner created them?! Hmm. Dunno. Interesting, you rascal. Thank you for sharing.
March 9th, 2025 19:05
Sun Raid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brief and impactful, this poem really is descriptive and open to interpretation for sure. I love the opening lines, Sunrays / Lets go on / A guerrilla raid\". This makes me think of how light can peer through the tightest crevices in the darkest of spaces. A guerilla raid...indeed. This also makes me think of the Marilyn Manson lyrics, playing on the Bible of course, \"The light shines in the darkness, but the darkness will never understand it.\" The light is invasive...a guerilla raid. Not saying your poem has anything to do with Manson, to be clear...but I am reminded of those lyrics. Then the poem shifts from the light to someone (perhaps?) who is emotionally defended by their intellect, not allowing anything to penetrate...perhaps the light?...and, they are imprisoned as a result. I could be way off. But that is what I get off the first few reads. Well done, my friend. ❤️🙏
March 8th, 2025 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brief and impactful, this poem really is descriptive and open to interpretation for sure. I love the opening lines, Sunrays / Lets go on / A guerrilla raid\". This makes me think of how light can peer through the tightest crevices in the darkest of spaces. A guerilla raid...indeed. This also makes me think of the Marilyn Manson lyrics, playing on the Bible of course, \"The light shines in the darkness, but the darkness will never understand it.\" The light is invasive...a guerilla raid. Not saying your poem has anything to do with Manson, to be clear...but I am reminded of those lyrics. Then the poem shifts from the light to someone (perhaps?) who is emotionally defended by their intellect, not allowing anything to penetrate...perhaps the light?...and, they are imprisoned as a result. I could be way off. But that is what I get off the first few reads. Well done, my friend. ❤️🙏
March 8th, 2025 11:02
Sun Raid
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely gives the mind something to think about just like entering a maze each turn a corridor or blind alley. Nice
March 8th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely gives the mind something to think about just like entering a maze each turn a corridor or blind alley. Nice
March 8th, 2025 04:59
Sun Raid
arqios said:
So many possibilities of interpreting, so delicious in its appeal 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 02:04
arqios said:
So many possibilities of interpreting, so delicious in its appeal 🙏🏻🕊
March 8th, 2025 02:04
Prezence
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write with strong feelings,that have various interpretations, a write to make you have a think, enjoyed
March 6th, 2025 08:10
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write with strong feelings,that have various interpretations, a write to make you have a think, enjoyed
March 6th, 2025 08:10
Prezence
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem seethes with feeling. Very powerfully done
March 6th, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem seethes with feeling. Very powerfully done
March 6th, 2025 06:33
Assumpchumps
Poetic Licence said:
A very entertaining read that would go well to music, enjoyed
March 5th, 2025 06:48
Poetic Licence said:
A very entertaining read that would go well to music, enjoyed
March 5th, 2025 06:48
Assumpchumps
sorenbarrett said:
Personification of concepts is great from the abstract to the concrete. A great metaphor and well done in a most entertaining manner. Loved it
March 5th, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
Personification of concepts is great from the abstract to the concrete. A great metaphor and well done in a most entertaining manner. Loved it
March 5th, 2025 05:50
Assumpchumps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the word play. This could be sung or rapped or anything in between! Well done! 🌹👏
March 5th, 2025 02:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah the word play. This could be sung or rapped or anything in between! Well done! 🌹👏
March 5th, 2025 02:13
Yoked to the Choke
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'s dabbling in dangerous territory, m\'dear, but didn\'t your own Calpurnia warn you enough already? What memories wouldst thou dredge from where? Bury your nose in the ancient manuscripts and I\'ll catch you on the flip side.
March 3rd, 2025 18:02
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'s dabbling in dangerous territory, m\'dear, but didn\'t your own Calpurnia warn you enough already? What memories wouldst thou dredge from where? Bury your nose in the ancient manuscripts and I\'ll catch you on the flip side.
March 3rd, 2025 18:02
Yoked to the Choke
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! Indeed the self-imposed chokehold. I get this...and \"skin deep\" need not be about sexual attraction or flesh, per se (though it could mean that)...but it could also mean only ever seeing on the surface...surface surfing if you will. Regardless, a profound poem wide open for interpretive reflection. Well done! 🙏❤️
March 3rd, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! Indeed the self-imposed chokehold. I get this...and \"skin deep\" need not be about sexual attraction or flesh, per se (though it could mean that)...but it could also mean only ever seeing on the surface...surface surfing if you will. Regardless, a profound poem wide open for interpretive reflection. Well done! 🙏❤️
March 3rd, 2025 09:12
Yoked to the Choke
Poetic Licence said:
Would you really want to go that deep and could we handle what we find, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
Would you really want to go that deep and could we handle what we find, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:52
Yoked to the Choke
sorenbarrett said:
Each year\'s layer making memory mor opaque and in the process burying feelings that were once there. A lovely write of the passage of time
March 3rd, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Each year\'s layer making memory mor opaque and in the process burying feelings that were once there. A lovely write of the passage of time
March 3rd, 2025 05:26
Yoked to the Choke
arqios said:
The depths are bearers of such mysteries we could hardly hope to comprehend…. Or it could swing over to Willy Wonka’s pure imagination 🙏🏻🕊
March 3rd, 2025 02:25
arqios said:
The depths are bearers of such mysteries we could hardly hope to comprehend…. Or it could swing over to Willy Wonka’s pure imagination 🙏🏻🕊
March 3rd, 2025 02:25
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