Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Titan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley… you got me with this one…that contrast between “big me” and “little me” hits quick and carries. One side light, the other holding everything…that shift lands in a real way. Clever, grounded piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley… you got me with this one…that contrast between “big me” and “little me” hits quick and carries. One side light, the other holding everything…that shift lands in a real way. Clever, grounded piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:07
Titan
Abdullah123 said:
Reminds of the Greek myth of the Titan Atlas. I wonder if that was the inspiration for this piece? Great write
April 14th, 2026 05:51
Abdullah123 said:
Reminds of the Greek myth of the Titan Atlas. I wonder if that was the inspiration for this piece? Great write
April 14th, 2026 05:51
Titan
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting blend of the mythical, and the reflective nicely said
April 13th, 2026 22:09
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting blend of the mythical, and the reflective nicely said
April 13th, 2026 22:09
Unknown Treasures
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this may be short, but it doesn’t feel small. That sense of something being held back, building into something louder…you can feel it rising even in just a few lines. It’s tight, focused, and it lands. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this may be short, but it doesn’t feel small. That sense of something being held back, building into something louder…you can feel it rising even in just a few lines. It’s tight, focused, and it lands. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:13
Unknown Treasures
sorenbarrett said:
If not a world leader I\'m out on this one having been in the woods for the past year with no news
April 11th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
If not a world leader I\'m out on this one having been in the woods for the past year with no news
April 11th, 2026 05:43
Heavy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, you balance humor and subtle edge really well here…you keep it playful, but there’s just enough sharpness to give it depth. The back-and-forth keeps it moving, and the tone never tips too far in either direction. Short, clever, and effective. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, you balance humor and subtle edge really well here…you keep it playful, but there’s just enough sharpness to give it depth. The back-and-forth keeps it moving, and the tone never tips too far in either direction. Short, clever, and effective. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:16
Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a little cryptic a tete a tete conversation maybe
April 10th, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a little cryptic a tete a tete conversation maybe
April 10th, 2026 07:29
The Master Hurls Rocks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 12:39
The Master Hurls Rocks
arqios said:
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
April 3rd, 2026 20:10
arqios said:
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
April 3rd, 2026 20:10
The Master Hurls Rocks
sorenbarrett said:
An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 11:16
In a Good Moodra
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a real sense of focus here…fingertips, stillness, control…then that Houdini turn slips in and changes everything. It keeps the power but adds a grin to it. That balance works. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a real sense of focus here…fingertips, stillness, control…then that Houdini turn slips in and changes everything. It keeps the power but adds a grin to it. That balance works. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:49
Every Which Way But Dinosaur
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world imagery and modern phrasing, then that twist of “every which way but dinosaur” tying it together. It’s quirky, light, and confident in its own rhythm. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world imagery and modern phrasing, then that twist of “every which way but dinosaur” tying it together. It’s quirky, light, and confident in its own rhythm. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:23
Muladhara Deliveries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels compressed, like something trying to break through. It’s tight but charged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels compressed, like something trying to break through. It’s tight but charged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:39
Muladhara Deliveries
sorenbarrett said:
Hinduism at its best a chakra where a kick in the ass might set it off. Always loved Ganesh here the worship of Ganapati leads to Brahman. Deep thoughts my friend
March 29th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Hinduism at its best a chakra where a kick in the ass might set it off. Always loved Ganesh here the worship of Ganapati leads to Brahman. Deep thoughts my friend
March 29th, 2026 05:33
Angered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few lines…there’s struggle here, but it’s restrained, almost whispered rather than shouted. That break into “I-magina- / -tive” feels like reaching for something just out of grasp. It lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few lines…there’s struggle here, but it’s restrained, almost whispered rather than shouted. That break into “I-magina- / -tive” feels like reaching for something just out of grasp. It lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:36
Angered
sorenbarrett said:
Buried under my ignorance I can only imagine. Nicely done
March 28th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
Buried under my ignorance I can only imagine. Nicely done
March 28th, 2026 07:54
Angered
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and establish judgement in the gate.
March 28th, 2026 07:27
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and establish judgement in the gate.
March 28th, 2026 07:27
Sauronic
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
No! Because I have faith in life, in others but sometimes I doubt myself! Sigh… great poem
March 27th, 2026 10:03
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
No! Because I have faith in life, in others but sometimes I doubt myself! Sigh… great poem
March 27th, 2026 10:03
Sauronic
sorenbarrett said:
Short and clever it speaks with logic and bitter humor. Well done
March 27th, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Short and clever it speaks with logic and bitter humor. Well done
March 27th, 2026 09:39
Sauronic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this blends confrontation and reflection… the voice, the question, the framing all work together to unsettle and provoke thought. It leaves the choice hanging in a way that lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this blends confrontation and reflection… the voice, the question, the framing all work together to unsettle and provoke thought. It leaves the choice hanging in a way that lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:37
Desertification
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet brutality…a hunger that takes and takes until only emptiness remains. The descent feels inevitable, and the aftermath feels stripped bare. There’s a real weight to that kind of loss. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet brutality…a hunger that takes and takes until only emptiness remains. The descent feels inevitable, and the aftermath feels stripped bare. There’s a real weight to that kind of loss. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:37
Desertification
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image to mind of Dune or even Star Wars but still its meaning lies deeper. Nicely written
March 26th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image to mind of Dune or even Star Wars but still its meaning lies deeper. Nicely written
March 26th, 2026 07:17
Microcosmic Melodies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love when something mythic gets handled this way…not distant, but conversational, almost everyday in tone. It reminds me how those old stories still breathe when you let them speak like this. This really lands for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love when something mythic gets handled this way…not distant, but conversational, almost everyday in tone. It reminds me how those old stories still breathe when you let them speak like this. This really lands for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:35
Microcosmic Melodies
sorenbarrett said:
Gravity operates on all being a major force in the universe. Well written Mutley it could have come from a book and maybe one day you will make it one.
March 18th, 2026 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Gravity operates on all being a major force in the universe. Well written Mutley it could have come from a book and maybe one day you will make it one.
March 18th, 2026 08:26
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