Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful read Mutley! This rings so nicely and, I agree with Thad, I instantly thought of the Yellow Brick Road, though we all know not to worry too much about that lion! πŸ˜‚ Or…so we think πŸ€”πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 10th, 2024 06:51

Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
sorenbarrett said:

Like all good poems they may be taken different ways and so is this one. Full of metaphor, references to old books or movie it seems political in some ways but also existential in others. I guess I will have to follow my guts and the yellow brick road to Oz

December 10th, 2024 04:33

Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
TobaniNataiella said:

Cleverly written and enjoyable read, thank you

December 9th, 2024 22:30

Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
arqios said:

A whole trove of meaning and existential intent in a grove of fun verse!

December 9th, 2024 20:26

Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
teardrop said:

Beware of the lion for it may be a last stop....lol, thanks for sharing, Nice read

December 9th, 2024 20:24

Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
Thad Wilk said:

Great fun poem and
information i\'d say !! 😯
Yup, follow the \'yellow brick road\'
might find it that wayΒΏ πŸ€”
Thanks for sharing my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad


December 9th, 2024 20:21

Hong Kong Singalong
Tom Dylan said:

Just brilliant! Nicely done.

December 9th, 2024 09:31

You Can`t Get Me!
teardrop said:

Love this, thanks for the smile.

December 9th, 2024 09:14

Table Manners
Cheeky Missy said:

Oh me! Why, why, WHY?! How do you know what to say to make me laugh out loud?! You\'re too fun. Head or no, you\'re a regular riot. Thank you very much for sharing.

December 8th, 2024 17:03

Hong Kong Singalong
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

December 8th, 2024 16:10

Hong Kong Singalong
Cheeky Missy said:

Must not have been alcohol since fires eat that voraciously...hmm, water. Yes, your mouth would be too parched iffen your flagon was dry. Okay, I give up. Delightfully haunting and excellently rendered with fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.

December 8th, 2024 07:51

Hong Kong Singalong
sorenbarrett said:

OK, as I read this, I wondered what was in the flagon . The most fun read despite its shortness.

December 8th, 2024 05:33

Hong Kong Singalong
TobaniNataiella said:

A little bit of fun to lighten up the day

December 8th, 2024 04:52

Renejaded
evenwheniLie said:

Pertinent point, well written

December 7th, 2024 13:12

King of the Road
Cheeky Missy said:

Dude, your lines cull sufficient chortling without needing to give me side-spliiting, etc laughter from the included entertainment. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.

December 7th, 2024 08:45

King of the Road
sorenbarrett said:

Mojo jest what a most unique manner of saying it. A most fun read.

December 6th, 2024 12:35

Table Manners
sorenbarrett said:

When you lose your head, it’s hard to mind your manners. A fun read they put another smile on my face. Thanks for sharing.

December 6th, 2024 03:54

Table Manners
Cassie58 said:

I remembered my old primary school motto. Manners maketh man. Your wit comes through here nicely.

December 6th, 2024 00:29

Table Manners
teardrop said:

Wow, I\'m speechless.... I reread this several times. I gotta say, I reall y like this!!

December 5th, 2024 21:54

Crow-Spazzing
Tony36 said:

WOW

December 4th, 2024 10:41

Crow-Spazzing
Cassie58 said:

I have always been scared of crows but know them to be intelligent. Maybe they get bad press. Dark thoughts come from this poem Mutley.

December 4th, 2024 03:00

Abdominal Abominable
Thad Wilk said:

Omg! 😱
Sounds like a terrible plight! 😳
I\'d take some
anti acid pills
first thing tonight!! πŸ’Š πŸ’Š
Thanks for the chuckles!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad


December 3rd, 2024 19:51

Crow-Spazzing
sorenbarrett said:

Wow!! What a great poem. This one is surreal and speaks to the unconscious. It is dark and yet floats.

December 3rd, 2024 19:17

Abdominal Abominable
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read. I surrendered years ago. I held up the white flag to food and I’m now a prisoner of war.

December 2nd, 2024 20:26

You Can`t Get Me!
TobaniNataiella said:

Very enjoyable read

December 2nd, 2024 02:24

You Can`t Get Me!
Thad Wilk said:

What a weirdly funny
poem, great brevity! 😳
Glad you went senile
intentionally! 🀣
Thanks for sharing
your senility with me!!πŸ€ͺ
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

December 1st, 2024 22:22

You Can`t Get Me!
sorenbarrett said:

It sounds like you discovered what I did. I thought that my secret was safe, A most fun read

December 1st, 2024 19:57

You Can`t Get Me!
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha.

December 1st, 2024 19:51

A Crow Recollects
sorenbarrett said:

Morbidly, funny darkly, tasteful, pun intended. A great right short to the point loved it either literally or in metaphor.

November 29th, 2024 04:18

Curivelocity
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 28th, 2024 08:22

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