Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Green Mamba
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this one amusing. A good write Mutley
February 16th, 2026 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this one amusing. A good write Mutley
February 16th, 2026 05:15
Faith-Challenged
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you here...happens to me too...
February 15th, 2026 00:45
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you here...happens to me too...
February 15th, 2026 00:45
Twin Flames
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:37
Twin Flames
sorenbarrett said:
I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley
February 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley
February 14th, 2026 04:51
Animal Magic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The dismissal of polished rhetoric gives way to a demand for visceral awakening. The solar plexus and righteous claws image makes imagination feel like a force that wounds in order to wake. Fierce and purposeful. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The dismissal of polished rhetoric gives way to a demand for visceral awakening. The solar plexus and righteous claws image makes imagination feel like a force that wounds in order to wake. Fierce and purposeful. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:45
Animal Magic
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination the blood of the virgin on the alter it is the unblemished sacrifice. Lovely write
February 13th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination the blood of the virgin on the alter it is the unblemished sacrifice. Lovely write
February 13th, 2026 06:19
Apex Predator
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and surreal…and then that final two-word punchline lands like a mic drop. Absurd, sharp, and perfectly timed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and surreal…and then that final two-word punchline lands like a mic drop. Absurd, sharp, and perfectly timed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:21
Apex Predator
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes a little sense if you think about it.
February 12th, 2026 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes a little sense if you think about it.
February 12th, 2026 07:11
Faith-Challenged
Vipassana said:
you can\'t try to be. being is not striving. it is surrendering to awareness.
February 12th, 2026 02:27
Vipassana said:
you can\'t try to be. being is not striving. it is surrendering to awareness.
February 12th, 2026 02:27
Will to Power
Vipassana said:
The harder I try
The more anxiety
I reap
you might want to read the Tao Te Ching
February 12th, 2026 02:20
Vipassana said:
The harder I try
The more anxiety
I reap
you might want to read the Tao Te Ching
February 12th, 2026 02:20
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this pulls me into that old metaphysical vertigo…the moment you realize identity might not begin where biology does. It’s brief, but it opens a vast silence to sit with. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 12:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this pulls me into that old metaphysical vertigo…the moment you realize identity might not begin where biology does. It’s brief, but it opens a vast silence to sit with. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 12:57
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arqios said:
I was where you were, I would seem. “Collections” are still a mystery 🕊️🙏🏻
February 10th, 2026 04:40
arqios said:
I was where you were, I would seem. “Collections” are still a mystery 🕊️🙏🏻
February 10th, 2026 04:40
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sorenbarrett said:
Ahy ahy captain a fun read that I enjoyed the wordplay of.
February 10th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Ahy ahy captain a fun read that I enjoyed the wordplay of.
February 10th, 2026 04:17
Gotcha!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is unsettling in a quiet way. The voice of belief as something that dominates and withdraws at will feels disturbingly familiar. It lands with a chill. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is unsettling in a quiet way. The voice of belief as something that dominates and withdraws at will feels disturbingly familiar. It lands with a chill. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:43
Gotcha!
Thomas W Case said:
That’s control speaking in its true voice—quiet, patient, cruel.
Short lines, deep pit; belief as a jailer is a damn sharp turn.
February 8th, 2026 07:31
Thomas W Case said:
That’s control speaking in its true voice—quiet, patient, cruel.
Short lines, deep pit; belief as a jailer is a damn sharp turn.
February 8th, 2026 07:31
Gotcha!
sorenbarrett said:
Even wills need a rest from time to time and even beliefs recognize this. Well written my friend
February 8th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Even wills need a rest from time to time and even beliefs recognize this. Well written my friend
February 8th, 2026 04:59
Acceleration
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A concise, thoughtful piece, Mutley. The river, the acceleration, and that image of something emerging from sand all point to inevitability without spelling it out. Quiet, suggestive, and well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A concise, thoughtful piece, Mutley. The river, the acceleration, and that image of something emerging from sand all point to inevitability without spelling it out. Quiet, suggestive, and well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:16
Acceleration
sorenbarrett said:
This one caught me off guard and got me scratching my head. But yes time keeps moving and it is out of the sands of time that things come to a head.
February 7th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
This one caught me off guard and got me scratching my head. But yes time keeps moving and it is out of the sands of time that things come to a head.
February 7th, 2026 10:06
Numenorian Telepathy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You got me with this, Mutley. The imagery invites fear, then undercuts it with self-awareness in a way that feels playful but pointed. Imagination as threat and refuge at once. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You got me with this, Mutley. The imagery invites fear, then undercuts it with self-awareness in a way that feels playful but pointed. Imagination as threat and refuge at once. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 14:57
Numenorian Telepathy
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of perspective in this poem set in a fanciful thought applies to so many things. Nicely said
February 6th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of perspective in this poem set in a fanciful thought applies to so many things. Nicely said
February 6th, 2026 05:10
Clown Worlds 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Mutley! That phrase “ground-dweller” really caught me. It sets a tone of distance and observation right away, like we’re overhearing something meant to stay just out of reach. Subtle and effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Mutley! That phrase “ground-dweller” really caught me. It sets a tone of distance and observation right away, like we’re overhearing something meant to stay just out of reach. Subtle and effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:27
Will to Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 This is SPOT ON, my friend. 💯 Such profound, paradoxical truth in such brevity. The restraint and the message are powerful. A fave, for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤯 This is SPOT ON, my friend. 💯 Such profound, paradoxical truth in such brevity. The restraint and the message are powerful. A fave, for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:21
Clown Worlds 2
Paul Bell said:
Every man needs a good lady, usually in more ways than one.
February 5th, 2026 08:25
Paul Bell said:
Every man needs a good lady, usually in more ways than one.
February 5th, 2026 08:25
Clown Worlds 2
sorenbarrett said:
Sheltered from the news and social commentary I just know that this holds deeper meaning than what greets me and I have to plead ignorance in this case.
February 5th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Sheltered from the news and social commentary I just know that this holds deeper meaning than what greets me and I have to plead ignorance in this case.
February 5th, 2026 04:47
Will to Power
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed this does give anxiety feeling that one is not in control.
February 4th, 2026 18:27
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed this does give anxiety feeling that one is not in control.
February 4th, 2026 18:27
Temple Sounds 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful write. Your restraint here does the heavy lifting, the poem\'s message comes through in what\'s not said. This is a fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful write. Your restraint here does the heavy lifting, the poem\'s message comes through in what\'s not said. This is a fave for sure! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 3rd, 2026 10:21
Temple Sounds 2
Thomas W Case said:
A whisper of defiance, short but sharp—keeps its teeth even in few words.
Strength isn’t always loud; sometimes it lives in the quiet moments you dare to speak.
February 3rd, 2026 07:58
Thomas W Case said:
A whisper of defiance, short but sharp—keeps its teeth even in few words.
Strength isn’t always loud; sometimes it lives in the quiet moments you dare to speak.
February 3rd, 2026 07:58
Temple Sounds 2
sorenbarrett said:
A saying that is well organized in form, intent, thought and poetic verse. It is stable, logical, and unfortunately used to abuse the weak by unscrupulous leaders. Well written
February 3rd, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A saying that is well organized in form, intent, thought and poetic verse. It is stable, logical, and unfortunately used to abuse the weak by unscrupulous leaders. Well written
February 3rd, 2026 04:23
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