Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
OMG
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this made me smile…so simple and bold. “I’d like to tap / Your genius” feels playful, but also sincere. It’s short, but it carries admiration without overdoing it. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this made me smile…so simple and bold. “I’d like to tap / Your genius” feels playful, but also sincere. It’s short, but it carries admiration without overdoing it. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:32
OMG
sorenbarrett said:
Central concept in Ayurveda and a way of health. Thanks for educating me Mutley. Well done in so few words
March 1st, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Central concept in Ayurveda and a way of health. Thanks for educating me Mutley. Well done in so few words
March 1st, 2026 05:08
iBlock
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is deceptively simple…that fractured “spontaneity” visually becoming the blockage is clever and precise. The lowercase “i” sitting in the way says more than a full stanza could. Minimal, intentional, and effective. Next level right back atcha, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is deceptively simple…that fractured “spontaneity” visually becoming the blockage is clever and precise. The lowercase “i” sitting in the way says more than a full stanza could. Minimal, intentional, and effective. Next level right back atcha, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:33
iBlock
sorenbarrett said:
I like your author\'s comment and the implication. This may be taken several ways with the i being a diminished look at one\'s self and how this impedes spontaneity or the i being the letter itself and how its usage and need in composing, being one of the more popular vowels impedes composing. I would guess the first. Nicely done
February 28th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
I like your author\'s comment and the implication. This may be taken several ways with the i being a diminished look at one\'s self and how this impedes spontaneity or the i being the letter itself and how its usage and need in composing, being one of the more popular vowels impedes composing. I would guess the first. Nicely done
February 28th, 2026 06:12
Opossum Operations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and insightful at the same time. The opossum voice gives you freedom to poke at existential weight without heaviness. “remembrance / Of my impermanence” is clever, and that broken “la- / -zy so and so!” is a great comedic finish. Well done on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and insightful at the same time. The opossum voice gives you freedom to poke at existential weight without heaviness. “remembrance / Of my impermanence” is clever, and that broken “la- / -zy so and so!” is a great comedic finish. Well done on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:48
Opossum Operations
sorenbarrett said:
Quaint and cute it seems a southern tale or maybe tail which ever way you want to look at it. A fun read
February 26th, 2026 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
Quaint and cute it seems a southern tale or maybe tail which ever way you want to look at it. A fun read
February 26th, 2026 19:23
Apocalips Now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is punchy and playful at the same time. The title alone sets the tone, and that closing line lands with a grin and a warning. It’s short, but it carries weight. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is punchy and playful at the same time. The title alone sets the tone, and that closing line lands with a grin and a warning. It’s short, but it carries weight. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:11
Apocalips Now
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done unveil and face the hidden image. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done unveil and face the hidden image. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 19:18
Trickstar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me immediately…that sharp little jab lands hard. “Twistories” is clever, but it’s more than clever…there’s bite in it. Loki feels less like a myth and more like a mirror here. Short, sharp, and pointed. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me immediately…that sharp little jab lands hard. “Twistories” is clever, but it’s more than clever…there’s bite in it. Loki feels less like a myth and more like a mirror here. Short, sharp, and pointed. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:49
Trickstar
sorenbarrett said:
The little boy that called wolf found that not many believed him after a while. A good write about trust.
February 22nd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
The little boy that called wolf found that not many believed him after a while. A good write about trust.
February 22nd, 2026 04:01
Where Would We Be Without.....?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic meditation on existence… “Maybe the universe / Wouldn’t have even bothered / Giving birth / To us?” …and then you snap it back to “Without farts?” The contrast is the whole magic. Silly, existential, and fearless in its humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic meditation on existence… “Maybe the universe / Wouldn’t have even bothered / Giving birth / To us?” …and then you snap it back to “Without farts?” The contrast is the whole magic. Silly, existential, and fearless in its humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:55
Where Would We Be Without.....?
sorenbarrett said:
Methane lighting, is that the answer to the energy crisis? A fun read Mutely
February 21st, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Methane lighting, is that the answer to the energy crisis? A fun read Mutely
February 21st, 2026 05:16
There`s No Other Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic design meeting pure bodily reality. I started dignified. I ended laughing way too hard. The mock-serious tone makes it land even harder. I am already wobbling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic design meeting pure bodily reality. I started dignified. I ended laughing way too hard. The mock-serious tone makes it land even harder. I am already wobbling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:14
There`s No Other Way
sorenbarrett said:
We are all full of hot air, some smell more than others. A light hearted read Mutley
February 20th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
We are all full of hot air, some smell more than others. A light hearted read Mutley
February 20th, 2026 06:20
Rodent Resources
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the speaker amplifies the weight of the message, and the metaphor is immediate and accessible. It’s wry, unsettling, and strangely wise. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the speaker amplifies the weight of the message, and the metaphor is immediate and accessible. It’s wry, unsettling, and strangely wise. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:38
Rodent Resources
sorenbarrett said:
It is the threat that keeps people in line and this is how the law works. Well written
February 19th, 2026 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the threat that keeps people in line and this is how the law works. Well written
February 19th, 2026 06:33
Green Mamba
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
February 16th, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
February 16th, 2026 08:25
Green Mamba
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this one amusing. A good write Mutley
February 16th, 2026 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this one amusing. A good write Mutley
February 16th, 2026 05:15
Faith-Challenged
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you here...happens to me too...
February 15th, 2026 00:45
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you here...happens to me too...
February 15th, 2026 00:45
Twin Flames
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:37
Twin Flames
sorenbarrett said:
I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley
February 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley
February 14th, 2026 04:51
Animal Magic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The dismissal of polished rhetoric gives way to a demand for visceral awakening. The solar plexus and righteous claws image makes imagination feel like a force that wounds in order to wake. Fierce and purposeful. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The dismissal of polished rhetoric gives way to a demand for visceral awakening. The solar plexus and righteous claws image makes imagination feel like a force that wounds in order to wake. Fierce and purposeful. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:45
Animal Magic
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination the blood of the virgin on the alter it is the unblemished sacrifice. Lovely write
February 13th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination the blood of the virgin on the alter it is the unblemished sacrifice. Lovely write
February 13th, 2026 06:19
Apex Predator
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and surreal…and then that final two-word punchline lands like a mic drop. Absurd, sharp, and perfectly timed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and surreal…and then that final two-word punchline lands like a mic drop. Absurd, sharp, and perfectly timed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:21
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