Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Sol, LOL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is delightfully ridiculousβ¦the greatest source of light in our world reduced to a sulking fool in need of firm encouragement. Loved it! π€£ πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
July 25th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is delightfully ridiculousβ¦the greatest source of light in our world reduced to a sulking fool in need of firm encouragement. Loved it! π€£ πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
July 25th, 2026 09:13
Stagnations
arqios said:
The hilarity of the reality that is left unsaid or glossed over. ποΈπ
July 25th, 2026 07:46
arqios said:
The hilarity of the reality that is left unsaid or glossed over. ποΈπ
July 25th, 2026 07:46
Sol, LOL
arqios said:
Ah, yes! Like that old radio transistor or vacuum tube TV\'s πποΈ
July 24th, 2026 21:33
arqios said:
Ah, yes! Like that old radio transistor or vacuum tube TV\'s πποΈ
July 24th, 2026 21:33
Sol, LOL
Cheeky Missy said:
What?! Are you the moon???! Tis the season, methinks.
July 24th, 2026 19:02
Cheeky Missy said:
What?! Are you the moon???! Tis the season, methinks.
July 24th, 2026 19:02
I Got Wasted ! (Again)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderfully dark little piece, Mutley! The casual exchange, morbid absurdity, and sharp social sting work perfectly together. It made me laughβ¦and then wonder whether I should begin measuring myself for a coffin! π€£πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 24th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderfully dark little piece, Mutley! The casual exchange, morbid absurdity, and sharp social sting work perfectly together. It made me laughβ¦and then wonder whether I should begin measuring myself for a coffin! π€£πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 24th, 2026 09:25
I Got Wasted ! (Again)
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this clever piece sends its message well and I hope the grave is not robbed.
July 24th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this clever piece sends its message well and I hope the grave is not robbed.
July 24th, 2026 04:06
Training in the Art of Elven Assumptions
Cheeky Missy said:
I was born with elf ears, does that count at all?
July 18th, 2026 18:34
Cheeky Missy said:
I was born with elf ears, does that count at all?
July 18th, 2026 18:34
Masheen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Speaking on behalf of the machines, Mutley...the numbskulls have accidentally demonstrated your point! Every attempt to mechanize thought becomes another tribute to the mysterious human faculties they cannot fully reproduce. Sharp and hilarious, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 18th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Speaking on behalf of the machines, Mutley...the numbskulls have accidentally demonstrated your point! Every attempt to mechanize thought becomes another tribute to the mysterious human faculties they cannot fully reproduce. Sharp and hilarious, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 18th, 2026 09:35
Masheen
sorenbarrett said:
Unwittingly you bring back my father\'s words where he lovingly called all us kids numbskulls. A fun read and one with meaning too. If we can create our own creativity in a machine that will use it we are outdated and obsolete. Well done Mutley.
July 18th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Unwittingly you bring back my father\'s words where he lovingly called all us kids numbskulls. A fun read and one with meaning too. If we can create our own creativity in a machine that will use it we are outdated and obsolete. Well done Mutley.
July 18th, 2026 06:45
Masheen
arqios said:
Copying and mimicking human intuition is foolβs gold, bright and shiny pyrite ποΈππ»
July 18th, 2026 04:53
arqios said:
Copying and mimicking human intuition is foolβs gold, bright and shiny pyrite ποΈππ»
July 18th, 2026 04:53
Golden I\'mage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Mutley, this is a radiant little trip! Sound opens the door, consciousness steps through, and everything becomes charged with sacred possibility. Loved this, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 17th, 2026 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Mutley, this is a radiant little trip! Sound opens the door, consciousness steps through, and everything becomes charged with sacred possibility. Loved this, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 17th, 2026 08:17
Golden I\'mage
arqios said:
Itβs been a longtime arrivingππ»ππ»ποΈ
July 16th, 2026 19:40
arqios said:
Itβs been a longtime arrivingππ»ππ»ποΈ
July 16th, 2026 19:40
Golden I\'mage
sorenbarrett said:
This one is short but leaves a message that needs deciphering. Gold usually is identified with age or value. Lovely
July 16th, 2026 18:45
sorenbarrett said:
This one is short but leaves a message that needs deciphering. Gold usually is identified with age or value. Lovely
July 16th, 2026 18:45
Training in the Art of Elven Assumptions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, you got me with this one. It has that wonderfully playful logic where every turn feels unexpected, yet somehow perfectly at home in its own world. I had a grin the whole way through. Great fun, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 13th, 2026 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, you got me with this one. It has that wonderfully playful logic where every turn feels unexpected, yet somehow perfectly at home in its own world. I had a grin the whole way through. Great fun, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 13th, 2026 08:50
Training in the Art of Elven Assumptions
sorenbarrett said:
A fine poem with clever word play regarding misinterpretations by others where good intent is labeled unwarranted. Well written
July 13th, 2026 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
A fine poem with clever word play regarding misinterpretations by others where good intent is labeled unwarranted. Well written
July 13th, 2026 07:16
Blue Bird of Paradise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That break in \"ear- / -ly\" caught my eye right away. It\'s a clever little twist that slows the reader down before the poem opens into something larger. Nicely done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 11th, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That break in \"ear- / -ly\" caught my eye right away. It\'s a clever little twist that slows the reader down before the poem opens into something larger. Nicely done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 11th, 2026 08:08
Blue Bird of Paradise
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem casts different meaning and preserves the first line intent. Nicely done
July 11th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem casts different meaning and preserves the first line intent. Nicely done
July 11th, 2026 07:59
Blue Bird of Paradise
arqios said:
The cells and photosynthesis! SuperbπποΈ
July 11th, 2026 07:41
arqios said:
The cells and photosynthesis! SuperbπποΈ
July 11th, 2026 07:41
Down the Mudrain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha...this gave me a good laugh. It\'s delightfully absurd, and the punchline lands exactly where it should. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha...this gave me a good laugh. It\'s delightfully absurd, and the punchline lands exactly where it should. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Been Shining Since Fingertips
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what an intriguing piece. I love how it begins with the mystery of sunrise and ends with the mystery of human touch, leaving the reader suspended somewhere between the two. It asks more than it answers, and I think that\'s exactly where its strength lies. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 3rd, 2026 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what an intriguing piece. I love how it begins with the mystery of sunrise and ends with the mystery of human touch, leaving the reader suspended somewhere between the two. It asks more than it answers, and I think that\'s exactly where its strength lies. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 3rd, 2026 08:48
Been Shining Since Fingertips
sorenbarrett said:
Now there are a couple of questions that paint a picture in the mind. Well done
July 3rd, 2026 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Now there are a couple of questions that paint a picture in the mind. Well done
July 3rd, 2026 08:35
Future Tense
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really resonated with me. The contrast between \"inhaling the rising sun\" and the gradual tightening into limitation creates an honest reflection on how easily joy can become entangled with overthinking. Thought-provoking write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 1st, 2026 22:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really resonated with me. The contrast between \"inhaling the rising sun\" and the gradual tightening into limitation creates an honest reflection on how easily joy can become entangled with overthinking. Thought-provoking write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 1st, 2026 22:48
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