Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Dear Fiendess
sorenbarrett said:

Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.

January 22nd, 2025 20:49

Dear Fiendess
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha!

January 22nd, 2025 19:12

Dear Fiendess
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

January 22nd, 2025 18:52

Medusa Rattle
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 21st, 2025 12:45

Blue Star
NafisaSB said:

i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful

January 21st, 2025 11:37

Medusa Rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. 🀣 Easily faved, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 21st, 2025 08:22

Medusa Rattle
sorenbarrett said:

You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it

January 21st, 2025 04:08

Appetite For Identification
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done

January 20th, 2025 04:27

Appetite For Identification
Cheeky Missy said:

Do you like leaving me speechless?

January 19th, 2025 23:35

Buffering
arqios said:

Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.

January 19th, 2025 03:05

Buffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 18th, 2025 21:59

Buffering
sorenbarrett said:

Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read

January 18th, 2025 20:37

Gland Goes On A Rant
sorenbarrett said:

Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read

January 18th, 2025 04:34

Gland Goes On A Rant
arqios said:

Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!

January 17th, 2025 20:32

Spazzm\'d
arqios said:

Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !

January 17th, 2025 07:56

Spazzm\'d
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. This flows really well.

January 17th, 2025 05:24

Spazzm\'d
sorenbarrett said:

A few lines that pack a punch. Lovely

January 16th, 2025 21:22

Spazzm\'d
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to leave them lingering, searching for the inner meaning it speaks to them within. That, imho, is true art. Multiple interpretations fit this...for me, it spoke of addiction because that is something that has affected me personally. But that need not be what it is about. Again, that is the brilliance of this brief but extremely impactful poem. Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 16th, 2025 19:11

Hormoans
sorenbarrett said:

Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone whoremones would be closely related but this is too much mental masterbation. A fun read that seduces the reader.

January 16th, 2025 04:08

Hormoans
arqios said:

Wild, explosive and full of desire! πŸ‘πŸ»

January 16th, 2025 02:23

Hormoans
Cheeky Missy said:

Haha. Hor-rifying, eh? You\'re too fun.

January 15th, 2025 23:40

Blue Star
Thad Wilk said:

Short and succinct and
poignant too! 😒
A crying shame they
lost all their dew! πŸ™
A great read indeed! πŸ‘
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 14th, 2025 20:42

Blue Star
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful in its brevity.

January 14th, 2025 18:10

Blue Star
Tom Dylan said:

Nice one, Mutley. This one flows so well.

January 14th, 2025 08:21

Blue Star
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in your comments to the Simpsons. While I am familiar with the show I am missing the connection. Still, I find this poem relatable, my friend. Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 14th, 2025 07:58

Blue Star
arqios said:

So good to experience introspection speckled with a dusting of melancholy in a star-blanketed city. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

January 14th, 2025 04:00

Blue Star
Cassie58 said:

A little brevity which leaves many different images and scenarios in my mind. Well penned MR.

January 14th, 2025 02:17

Blue Star
Cheeky Missy said:

Hmm. Yet another tribute to the latest hot propaganda, is it? We congratulates thee on thy success. Excellently rendered with appropriate imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing!

January 13th, 2025 21:29

Blue Star
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 13th, 2025 19:59

Blue Star
sorenbarrett said:

Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can be taken in several ways but I like thinking of it as the milky way as the city of stars, Then again it could be Hollywood

January 13th, 2025 19:39



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