Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Magikali
Tristan Robert Lange said:
#Truth! LOL! Well done, my friend. A fave from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
#Truth! LOL! Well done, my friend. A fave from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 2nd, 2025 10:35
Magikali
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. I think about this and ask are we not all whack jobs but just hide it well
December 1st, 2025 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. I think about this and ask are we not all whack jobs but just hide it well
December 1st, 2025 20:52
Who is I am Addicted?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ll answer that question if you tell me where I Am Insane went, he took my pencil to sharpen his computer. 🤣🤷♂️
Now, that silliness aside. This is a profoundly important piece, my friend. It gets to the heart of something vitally important to me...labels and the negative effect they can have. Who is \"I Am Addicted\"? Who is \"I Am Overweight?\" This could be asked of so many different things and...the question becomes, are these labels helpful or harmful? Your poem gets into that and, I think, acknowledges that, indeed, there is something their to the label, and that \"something\" is affecting someone and stealing their light. Indeed. But label itself can go both ways and lock people away from light that was never stolen to begin with. So, not sure if I am close or now spiraling through the Outer Rim in hyperspace...but your poem (all 9 lines of it) got me thinking about all of this. Fantastic write, my friend!
December 1st, 2025 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I\'ll answer that question if you tell me where I Am Insane went, he took my pencil to sharpen his computer. 🤣🤷♂️
Now, that silliness aside. This is a profoundly important piece, my friend. It gets to the heart of something vitally important to me...labels and the negative effect they can have. Who is \"I Am Addicted\"? Who is \"I Am Overweight?\" This could be asked of so many different things and...the question becomes, are these labels helpful or harmful? Your poem gets into that and, I think, acknowledges that, indeed, there is something their to the label, and that \"something\" is affecting someone and stealing their light. Indeed. But label itself can go both ways and lock people away from light that was never stolen to begin with. So, not sure if I am close or now spiraling through the Outer Rim in hyperspace...but your poem (all 9 lines of it) got me thinking about all of this. Fantastic write, my friend!
December 1st, 2025 17:47
Who is I am Addicted?
sorenbarrett said:
A deep philosophical poem that deserves a good deal of pondering. The question remains unanswered. Well written
December 1st, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
A deep philosophical poem that deserves a good deal of pondering. The question remains unanswered. Well written
December 1st, 2025 04:01
Chef-Shocked
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound and though-provoking. And yeah...the Matrix is real friend. You and I both know we took the damn red pill! Well done!
November 19th, 2025 09:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound and though-provoking. And yeah...the Matrix is real friend. You and I both know we took the damn red pill! Well done!
November 19th, 2025 09:50
Chef-Shocked
sorenbarrett said:
One never knows what to believe now days and this poem seems to reinforce that feeling. Well said
November 18th, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
One never knows what to believe now days and this poem seems to reinforce that feeling. Well said
November 18th, 2025 19:41
Phoe-Nix
peto said:
I looked up Phoenix 138
Took me to panini cards and minecraft game
So I\'m as wise as ever
Got us all thinking again mutley
Good to have you home
October 31st, 2025 09:08
peto said:
I looked up Phoenix 138
Took me to panini cards and minecraft game
So I\'m as wise as ever
Got us all thinking again mutley
Good to have you home
October 31st, 2025 09:08
Phoe-Nix
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a short burst of cosmic wonder...cryptic, rhythmic, and deeply alive! You remind us that mystery itself is the motion behind the gears. Very well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a short burst of cosmic wonder...cryptic, rhythmic, and deeply alive! You remind us that mystery itself is the motion behind the gears. Very well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:07
Phoe-Nix
arqios said:
I like how this one feels like a cosmic riddle: Phoenix, Pyramid, and then suddenly the whole galaxy. It’s like the poem starts small and personal (“grabbed me by the ears”) and then zooms out to the biggest question of all: who’s actually turning the gears of existence? Short, sharp, and it leaves you hanging in that wonder. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:59
arqios said:
I like how this one feels like a cosmic riddle: Phoenix, Pyramid, and then suddenly the whole galaxy. It’s like the poem starts small and personal (“grabbed me by the ears”) and then zooms out to the biggest question of all: who’s actually turning the gears of existence? Short, sharp, and it leaves you hanging in that wonder. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:59
Phoe-Nix
sorenbarrett said:
The numbers give meaning to this poem in its rhyme and flow. Well done
October 31st, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
The numbers give meaning to this poem in its rhyme and flow. Well done
October 31st, 2025 03:57
Solar Wrexus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wild brilliance…the dragon as both myth and metaphor for self-destruction. You twist humor and despair together so sharply it sings. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wild brilliance…the dragon as both myth and metaphor for self-destruction. You twist humor and despair together so sharply it sings. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 09:21
Solar Wrexus
sorenbarrett said:
I guess dragons are not that much different than people, too bad for dragons. A fun poem of metaphor and fantasy well done.
October 29th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I guess dragons are not that much different than people, too bad for dragons. A fun poem of metaphor and fantasy well done.
October 29th, 2025 04:10
The Drake Havens 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one crackles with that trademark mischief of yours…heat, humor, and a touch of the surreal. Short, sharp, and perfectly unhinged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one crackles with that trademark mischief of yours…heat, humor, and a touch of the surreal. Short, sharp, and perfectly unhinged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:53
The Drake Havens
arqios said:
Here is a poem that feels like a fragment of pure energy. It\'s broken words and charged imagery make it feel unstable but alive, like it’s pulling the reader into some hidden dimension. Really intriguing use of paradox and tension! Muchly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:31
arqios said:
Here is a poem that feels like a fragment of pure energy. It\'s broken words and charged imagery make it feel unstable but alive, like it’s pulling the reader into some hidden dimension. Really intriguing use of paradox and tension! Muchly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:31
The Drake Havens 2
arqios said:
This poem feels like a pressure cooker! It\'s volcanic imagery and clipped lines really capture that sense of restless buildup. The sudden shift into the stoned voice makes it raw and unsettled, like a fragment of life overheard mid‑eruption. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:17
arqios said:
This poem feels like a pressure cooker! It\'s volcanic imagery and clipped lines really capture that sense of restless buildup. The sudden shift into the stoned voice makes it raw and unsettled, like a fragment of life overheard mid‑eruption. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:17
The Drake Havens 2
sorenbarrett said:
Pumice a lava stone and the only way to satisfy some emotions is to stay stoned.
October 17th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Pumice a lava stone and the only way to satisfy some emotions is to stay stoned.
October 17th, 2025 07:03
The Drake Havens
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise but never thought of finding another dimension through dragons. Most interesting.
October 16th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise but never thought of finding another dimension through dragons. Most interesting.
October 16th, 2025 04:51
New World Slaughter
arqios said:
Steel in my stance
Fire in my eyes
One clean hit
Your crown flies
August 21st, 2025 18:32
arqios said:
Steel in my stance
Fire in my eyes
One clean hit
Your crown flies
August 21st, 2025 18:32
New World Slaughter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really like how you framed the left and right as the winning combo, Mutley. Simple, direct, and it carries all the weight of a KO. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really like how you framed the left and right as the winning combo, Mutley. Simple, direct, and it carries all the weight of a KO. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:04
New World Slaughter
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image of a boxer before a fight in front of the news media making his statement. A fun read
August 21st, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image of a boxer before a fight in front of the news media making his statement. A fun read
August 21st, 2025 04:23
New World Slaughter
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Now, is that only two limbs or four, Sir?
August 20th, 2025 23:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Now, is that only two limbs or four, Sir?
August 20th, 2025 23:54
Alien Visitations
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:24
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:24
Alien Visitations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 15th, 2025 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 15th, 2025 14:08
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