Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Diaphragm Vents
Cheeky Missy said:
I have such a horror of upchucking that I attempt to avoid it at virtually all costs, and you must be so, so... what? And force my indulgence of your clever lines to a sharp halt, eh? Excellently rendered with superb imagery and an unappetizing poignancy haunting it. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 00:34
Cheeky Missy said:
I have such a horror of upchucking that I attempt to avoid it at virtually all costs, and you must be so, so... what? And force my indulgence of your clever lines to a sharp halt, eh? Excellently rendered with superb imagery and an unappetizing poignancy haunting it. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 00:34
Quest-ions
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I missed this veritable gem only because I fell asleep early, yet my, my what a pretty little number this verily is! Exquisitely rendered with a touch of imagery adorning it and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:41
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I missed this veritable gem only because I fell asleep early, yet my, my what a pretty little number this verily is! Exquisitely rendered with a touch of imagery adorning it and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:41
Quest-ions
Poetic Licence said:
That`s a interesting thought, it would mean an awful lot people are in some serious debt, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 03:08
Poetic Licence said:
That`s a interesting thought, it would mean an awful lot people are in some serious debt, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 03:08
Quest-ions
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought. Nicely written and rhymed with great style
February 13th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought. Nicely written and rhymed with great style
February 13th, 2025 20:11
Verne Burps
teardrop said:
Thank you for the smile this morning, a good way to start the day, Love it!
February 13th, 2025 08:59
teardrop said:
Thank you for the smile this morning, a good way to start the day, Love it!
February 13th, 2025 08:59
Verne Burps
arqios said:
I guess that would be so… I can only vouch for the relief that follows a burp🙏🏻🕊
February 13th, 2025 02:39
arqios said:
I guess that would be so… I can only vouch for the relief that follows a burp🙏🏻🕊
February 13th, 2025 02:39
Verne Burps
sorenbarrett said:
A twist of humor always makes the day better. Fun read
February 12th, 2025 19:36
sorenbarrett said:
A twist of humor always makes the day better. Fun read
February 12th, 2025 19:36
In the Desert
arqios said:
Bronze you, then lift you - such a strong image and motion. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:59
arqios said:
Bronze you, then lift you - such a strong image and motion. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 05:59
In the Desert 2
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed if it is all part of a divine plan then Judas was either predestined from the start to be a fall guy or a hidden hero while Satan himself is the greatest savior. With everything on its head who\'s to know what is good and what is bad? Nice write
February 11th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed if it is all part of a divine plan then Judas was either predestined from the start to be a fall guy or a hidden hero while Satan himself is the greatest savior. With everything on its head who\'s to know what is good and what is bad? Nice write
February 11th, 2025 04:34
In the Desert
sorenbarrett said:
I love poems that are filled with double entendre\'s and this one is full of them. Images well set in this frame and metaphor as well. So nicely constructed in so few words it is definately a fave
February 11th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love poems that are filled with double entendre\'s and this one is full of them. Images well set in this frame and metaphor as well. So nicely constructed in so few words it is definately a fave
February 11th, 2025 04:30
In the Desert 2
Cheeky Missy said:
Hisself. If you\'ve been but little acquainted with the book of Ezekiel, I think somewhere around chapter 37 might be enlightening. Either that or else it\'s this:\"...the LORD hath made all things for Himself, even the wicked for the day of evil.\" And we could go on, but I\'ll shut up for now. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 03:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Hisself. If you\'ve been but little acquainted with the book of Ezekiel, I think somewhere around chapter 37 might be enlightening. Either that or else it\'s this:\"...the LORD hath made all things for Himself, even the wicked for the day of evil.\" And we could go on, but I\'ll shut up for now. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 03:05
In the Desert
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Intriguing and frightening. Thank you for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 00:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning, haunting poignancy. Intriguing and frightening. Thank you for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 00:10
Cutting Corners
sorenbarrett said:
Necter of immortality may be thought sweet indeed by some as for me it would be too many years. Nicelly written
February 9th, 2025 21:04
sorenbarrett said:
Necter of immortality may be thought sweet indeed by some as for me it would be too many years. Nicelly written
February 9th, 2025 21:04
Cutting Corners
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay...? Curiosity kin kill me this one time since cats do have 9 lives. Fascinating and curiously rendered with excellent imagery, not too mention a haunting poignancy I can\'t quite define. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 20:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay...? Curiosity kin kill me this one time since cats do have 9 lives. Fascinating and curiously rendered with excellent imagery, not too mention a haunting poignancy I can\'t quite define. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 20:46
Wizardry
Cheeky Missy said:
So sayest thou, eh? Haha. How you remind me of the credit card size \"inspiring\" card I found left in our yard too many years ago, its long little piece of poetry claiming faith, not in or on any particular thing or being, would more than suffice to keep the soul afloat. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, you rascal. Thank you for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 11:14
Cheeky Missy said:
So sayest thou, eh? Haha. How you remind me of the credit card size \"inspiring\" card I found left in our yard too many years ago, its long little piece of poetry claiming faith, not in or on any particular thing or being, would more than suffice to keep the soul afloat. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, you rascal. Thank you for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 11:14
Oh Well
RSM0812 said:
This poem has a very humorous side to it. Thanks, I really enjoyed it.
February 8th, 2025 09:36
RSM0812 said:
This poem has a very humorous side to it. Thanks, I really enjoyed it.
February 8th, 2025 09:36
Rejectshun
arqios said:
Loving the mashing together of two terms and their combined connotations. Powerful stuff 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 08:44
arqios said:
Loving the mashing together of two terms and their combined connotations. Powerful stuff 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 08:44
Wizardry
Poetic Licence said:
I always wonder do we deny the truth or are we scared of the truth, interesting and enjoyable read.
February 8th, 2025 07:51
Poetic Licence said:
I always wonder do we deny the truth or are we scared of the truth, interesting and enjoyable read.
February 8th, 2025 07:51
Wizardry
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they do and indeed it does. As a man thinketh so is he. At least that is what they used to say but hey who knows that could have changed and been out moded in todays world. Great write Mutley
February 8th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they do and indeed it does. As a man thinketh so is he. At least that is what they used to say but hey who knows that could have changed and been out moded in todays world. Great write Mutley
February 8th, 2025 04:08
Wizardry
arqios said:
Indeed! Undeniably true… the “bowels” they called it, back in the day; and the “gut” of more recent vintage. 🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 20:19
arqios said:
Indeed! Undeniably true… the “bowels” they called it, back in the day; and the “gut” of more recent vintage. 🙏🏻🕊
February 7th, 2025 20:19
Galactic Quacks
sorenbarrett said:
Tis all true each and every word at least in metaphor. A fun read Mutley put in such playful terms
February 7th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Tis all true each and every word at least in metaphor. A fun read Mutley put in such playful terms
February 7th, 2025 04:17
Galactic Quacks
Cheeky Missy said:
Dismembered, eh? What precisely was left to identify it as Donald? Did his nephews trot dutifully in his rear? Thy days numbered, aye. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, not to mention your characteristically irresistible humor. Thank you for sharing, you rascal.
February 6th, 2025 19:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Dismembered, eh? What precisely was left to identify it as Donald? Did his nephews trot dutifully in his rear? Thy days numbered, aye. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy, not to mention your characteristically irresistible humor. Thank you for sharing, you rascal.
February 6th, 2025 19:15
Happy Birthday!
Cheeky Missy said:
Hipy Papy Bithudith Thudirh, or [as Wol translated for Pooh] a Very Happy Birthday with love from me! Nothing like the rhyme you too cleverly writ, sadly. But there you go....
February 6th, 2025 03:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Hipy Papy Bithudith Thudirh, or [as Wol translated for Pooh] a Very Happy Birthday with love from me! Nothing like the rhyme you too cleverly writ, sadly. But there you go....
February 6th, 2025 03:20
Spidersman
sorenbarrett said:
Tied to the Greek godess Athena who was beat in a weaving contest by Arachne who after her suicide was turned into a spider. a warning against huberis. Very nice
February 5th, 2025 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
Tied to the Greek godess Athena who was beat in a weaving contest by Arachne who after her suicide was turned into a spider. a warning against huberis. Very nice
February 5th, 2025 18:59
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