Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Exodus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is a compact parable. A looming nemesis, an absurdly precise threat, and a quiet decision to sail on. Myth and menace blend smoothly, and the ending feels earned rather than escapist. Strong, subtle work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 26th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is a compact parable. A looming nemesis, an absurdly precise threat, and a quiet decision to sail on. Myth and menace blend smoothly, and the ending feels earned rather than escapist. Strong, subtle work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 26th, 2026 09:11
Exodus
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around themes of escape, conflict, and a longing for freedom.
January 26th, 2026 06:25
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around themes of escape, conflict, and a longing for freedom.
January 26th, 2026 06:25
Exodus
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden in these words is a message that is obscure to me. Coded in numbers and letters its message I can not see. Forgive my ignorance my friend with it I do not wish to offend but I will not claim to be wiser than I be.
January 26th, 2026 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Hidden in these words is a message that is obscure to me. Coded in numbers and letters its message I can not see. Forgive my ignorance my friend with it I do not wish to offend but I will not claim to be wiser than I be.
January 26th, 2026 06:14
Gimme Shelters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this resonates. The idea that no amount of advancement or hidden depth can rival something lost but pure…that tension feels deeply human. It’s understated, but it lands with real weight, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 25th, 2026 10:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this resonates. The idea that no amount of advancement or hidden depth can rival something lost but pure…that tension feels deeply human. It’s understated, but it lands with real weight, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 25th, 2026 10:36
Gimme Shelters
sorenbarrett said:
You got me on this one with the reference to 2040 I must have missed it in the depths of the lake. Fun read
January 25th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
You got me on this one with the reference to 2040 I must have missed it in the depths of the lake. Fun read
January 25th, 2026 03:57
Assault and Battery 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this feels like a survival kit distilled to its essence. Each line lands like a quiet instruction…no drama, no excess. There’s a calm confidence here that trusts the reader to understand without being told. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this feels like a survival kit distilled to its essence. Each line lands like a quiet instruction…no drama, no excess. There’s a calm confidence here that trusts the reader to understand without being told. It lingers. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 24th, 2026 10:24
Assault and Battery 2
sorenbarrett said:
Never been desperate enough to brew pine needle tea. Hope I never get that desperate. Good write
January 24th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Never been desperate enough to brew pine needle tea. Hope I never get that desperate. Good write
January 24th, 2026 04:21
Demockracy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wonderfully ridiculous. The rhythm sets expectation, the slip breaks it, and the correction only makes it funnier. Short, sharp, and perfectly timed chaos. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wonderfully ridiculous. The rhythm sets expectation, the slip breaks it, and the correction only makes it funnier. Short, sharp, and perfectly timed chaos. Loved it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 09:37
Assault and Battery
sorenbarrett said:
Clever shaping and wording here. Well done
January 23rd, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Clever shaping and wording here. Well done
January 23rd, 2026 05:10
Biological ID
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels stark and clarifying, Mutley. It lands like a moment of waking up…quiet, but irreversible once it’s seen. The restraint sharpens the insight. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels stark and clarifying, Mutley. It lands like a moment of waking up…quiet, but irreversible once it’s seen. The restraint sharpens the insight. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:59
Biological ID
sorenbarrett said:
This took a couple of reads for my slow mind to get around it. A lovely write with a piece of wisdom included
January 21st, 2026 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
This took a couple of reads for my slow mind to get around it. A lovely write with a piece of wisdom included
January 21st, 2026 19:24
Trust in me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me smile first…then sit with it, Mutley. There’s a sly wisdom here that unfolds softly, letting the humor carry something much sharper underneath. It’s deceptively light, and that’s part of its power. Really love this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This made me smile first…then sit with it, Mutley. There’s a sly wisdom here that unfolds softly, letting the humor carry something much sharper underneath. It’s deceptively light, and that’s part of its power. Really love this one! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:21
Trust in me
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the contrasting perspectives on change and self-improvement, as embodied by the Boa, the monkey, and Manjushri. While the monkey\'s futile attempt to \"change the world\" highlights an absurdity in his efforts, Manjushri\'s approach of changing his own world suggests a more introspective and personal journey toward transformation.
January 20th, 2026 20:50
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the contrasting perspectives on change and self-improvement, as embodied by the Boa, the monkey, and Manjushri. While the monkey\'s futile attempt to \"change the world\" highlights an absurdity in his efforts, Manjushri\'s approach of changing his own world suggests a more introspective and personal journey toward transformation.
January 20th, 2026 20:50
Trust in me
sorenbarrett said:
And the fooler becomes the fooled nicely done
January 20th, 2026 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
And the fooler becomes the fooled nicely done
January 20th, 2026 20:05
Drive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit close for me. I’ve often wondered whether struggle is what gives meaning to movement, or if belief alone could ever be enough. You distilled that tension beautifully. A fave, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit close for me. I’ve often wondered whether struggle is what gives meaning to movement, or if belief alone could ever be enough. You distilled that tension beautifully. A fave, my friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:24
Drive
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording wonderful rhyme and deep thought are three threads woven together to form this poetic fabric a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording wonderful rhyme and deep thought are three threads woven together to form this poetic fabric a fave
January 19th, 2026 04:41
Exitement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is compact and charged. Refinement, sanctity, breakdown, and exile all converge until nourishment becomes impossible. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 23:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is compact and charged. Refinement, sanctity, breakdown, and exile all converge until nourishment becomes impossible. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 16th, 2026 23:17
Exitement
arqios said:
Oh my, Mutley. How much have you been holding back!? A sure Fave here 🤩🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:26
arqios said:
Oh my, Mutley. How much have you been holding back!? A sure Fave here 🤩🕊️🙏
January 16th, 2026 21:26
Exitement
sorenbarrett said:
Now this presents all kinds of possibilities from the holy to the perverse in metaphor. A puzzling read that has me scratching my head which choice is the intended one.
January 16th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Now this presents all kinds of possibilities from the holy to the perverse in metaphor. A puzzling read that has me scratching my head which choice is the intended one.
January 16th, 2026 06:19
Top Cat
Paul Bell said:
And we know what you can do with five fishes and two loaves, not forgetting the washing it down with water turned to wine.
January 15th, 2026 15:52
Paul Bell said:
And we know what you can do with five fishes and two loaves, not forgetting the washing it down with water turned to wine.
January 15th, 2026 15:52
Top Cat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative faith, and a wink toward abundance all fold together without preaching. The poem trusts the reader…and that trust pays off. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative faith, and a wink toward abundance all fold together without preaching. The poem trusts the reader…and that trust pays off. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 15th, 2026 10:13
Top Cat
arqios said:
That can prove to be an interesting state of affairs.🕊️🙏🏻
January 15th, 2026 07:49
arqios said:
That can prove to be an interesting state of affairs.🕊️🙏🏻
January 15th, 2026 07:49
Top Cat
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle and conundrum in poetic form of metaphor. Reality pays better. Nicely done
January 15th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
A puzzle and conundrum in poetic form of metaphor. Reality pays better. Nicely done
January 15th, 2026 04:22
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