Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
2020Styx
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a poem of internal authority. Mythic vision, bodily awareness, and resistance braid together without apology. By the end, “turning up the heat” feels like choosing agency rather than compliance. Provocative, visceral work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 3rd, 2026 13:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a poem of internal authority. Mythic vision, bodily awareness, and resistance braid together without apology. By the end, “turning up the heat” feels like choosing agency rather than compliance. Provocative, visceral work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 3rd, 2026 13:37
2020Styx
sorenbarrett said:
Biological, evolutionary, it boggles the mind. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Biological, evolutionary, it boggles the mind. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 08:00
Faith-Challenged
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the analogy in this write. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 21:53
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the analogy in this write. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 21:53
Exhaust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You ain\'t kidding, my friend! A truth I know all too well. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You ain\'t kidding, my friend! A truth I know all too well. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 08:41
Exhaust
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection on new years resolutions and less than one percent are ever fulfilled. Good write
January 2nd, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A reflection on new years resolutions and less than one percent are ever fulfilled. Good write
January 2nd, 2026 03:34
Exhaust
evenwheniLie said:
…..then in that case the aim is to transform by mastering one’s compulsions. Become still…
January 1st, 2026 23:00
evenwheniLie said:
…..then in that case the aim is to transform by mastering one’s compulsions. Become still…
January 1st, 2026 23:00
Adversary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is reflective and hopeful in an understated way. You acknowledge erosion without surrendering to it, and you close by reclaiming imagination as identity and strength. Simple, thoughtful, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 22:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is reflective and hopeful in an understated way. You acknowledge erosion without surrendering to it, and you close by reclaiming imagination as identity and strength. Simple, thoughtful, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 22:13
Adversary
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and put together it deserves a fave
December 31st, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded and put together it deserves a fave
December 31st, 2025 08:48
Tales of Feline Peristalsis
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s a pity she needed to eat grass to help the unwanted items to escape in unsavory fashion. Thank you for sharing.
December 25th, 2025 23:58
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s a pity she needed to eat grass to help the unwanted items to escape in unsavory fashion. Thank you for sharing.
December 25th, 2025 23:58
Tales of Feline Peristalsis
sorenbarrett said:
That is gratitude for you. A good read. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 19:08
sorenbarrett said:
That is gratitude for you. A good read. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 19:08
The Winter King, Sinterklaus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this blends myth, philosophy, and seasonal ritual without overexplaining any of it. You let the story carry the question, and the question linger after the greeting. A thoughtful, quietly unsettling Christmas offering. Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this blends myth, philosophy, and seasonal ritual without overexplaining any of it. You let the story carry the question, and the question linger after the greeting. A thoughtful, quietly unsettling Christmas offering. Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 24th, 2025 11:09
The Winter King, Sinterklaus
sorenbarrett said:
Well Mutley what coincidence is this that we write about something so similar today. Nicely written and a Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well Mutley what coincidence is this that we write about something so similar today. Nicely written and a Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2025 04:02
Jedi Twins
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and grounded at the same time. The humor lands because it’s anchored in the body, not just the reference. That quiet shudder carries the whole piece, then lets the ending wink without losing its charge. Enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and grounded at the same time. The humor lands because it’s anchored in the body, not just the reference. That quiet shudder carries the whole piece, then lets the ending wink without losing its charge. Enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 23rd, 2025 09:38
Jedi Twins
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a fun read that I hope that I don\'t identify with anytime soon. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a fun read that I hope that I don\'t identify with anytime soon. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 20:57
Orspasm
Thomas W Case said:
Vivid and charged, this piece holds attention from start to finish.
The imagery lingers long after reading.
December 21st, 2025 09:59
Thomas W Case said:
Vivid and charged, this piece holds attention from start to finish.
The imagery lingers long after reading.
December 21st, 2025 09:59
A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects
arqios said:
Thanks for this clever reminder that true mastery isn\'t found in a duel, but in the \"golden light\" of a nervous system finally set free 🕊️🙏🏻
December 20th, 2025 23:48
arqios said:
Thanks for this clever reminder that true mastery isn\'t found in a duel, but in the \"golden light\" of a nervous system finally set free 🕊️🙏🏻
December 20th, 2025 23:48
A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a meditation on transmission across time and culture. Doctrine, resistance, peace, and embodiment all braid together, suggesting that “precious cargo” is wisdom carried through bodies, eras, and unexpected vessels. The footnote widens the lens without breaking the spell. Love it.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a meditation on transmission across time and culture. Doctrine, resistance, peace, and embodiment all braid together, suggesting that “precious cargo” is wisdom carried through bodies, eras, and unexpected vessels. The footnote widens the lens without breaking the spell. Love it.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:23
Orspasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a critique of consumption masquerading as vitality. Power feeds, bodies tire, wisdom warns, and what once felt volcanic ends in erosion. The poem traces that arc with sharp, unsentimental focus. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this reads as a critique of consumption masquerading as vitality. Power feeds, bodies tire, wisdom warns, and what once felt volcanic ends in erosion. The poem traces that arc with sharp, unsentimental focus. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 20th, 2025 09:11
A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects
sorenbarrett said:
The enlightenment of the footnote was most helpful. A poem that\'s meaning unravels and it unfolds. Lovely
December 20th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
The enlightenment of the footnote was most helpful. A poem that\'s meaning unravels and it unfolds. Lovely
December 20th, 2025 06:57
Orspasm
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biological, social, emotional, natural forces well put in metaphor and multilevel. Well done
December 19th, 2025 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of biological, social, emotional, natural forces well put in metaphor and multilevel. Well done
December 19th, 2025 19:52
Ghost House
sorenbarrett said:
The issue of how not to think and dwell on past traumas. Well done
December 18th, 2025 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
The issue of how not to think and dwell on past traumas. Well done
December 18th, 2025 19:38
Temple Sounds
sorenbarrett said:
In many ways this seems true. Its vibrations can be seen in its owner\'s small movements and tone of words. Very nice
December 17th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
In many ways this seems true. Its vibrations can be seen in its owner\'s small movements and tone of words. Very nice
December 17th, 2025 03:57
Seems About a Hundred Years Ago
NafisaSB said:
seems to me you have hit the nail on the head - the prediction seems to be coming true..
December 14th, 2025 00:40
NafisaSB said:
seems to me you have hit the nail on the head - the prediction seems to be coming true..
December 14th, 2025 00:40
Songbird
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
So very true! Wish the wise would wind down that wonderfully and willingly. But too many are focused on what those that know too much are willing to satisfy them with. The crumbs of their over feasting. Talk about hubris in the extreme!
December 13th, 2025 12:52
Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard said:
So very true! Wish the wise would wind down that wonderfully and willingly. But too many are focused on what those that know too much are willing to satisfy them with. The crumbs of their over feasting. Talk about hubris in the extreme!
December 13th, 2025 12:52
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