Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Sequoia
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and balanced it stretches in both directions. Well done and a fave
April 17th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and balanced it stretches in both directions. Well done and a fave
April 17th, 2026 06:10
Great Green Wave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it knocked me flat for a bit. That idea of something easing through gears…blending the ancient with the mechanical…that’s what really sticks for me. It gives the whole piece a strange, timeless motion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a major composition called The Shaman, another tone poem, and it knocked me flat for a bit. That idea of something easing through gears…blending the ancient with the mechanical…that’s what really sticks for me. It gives the whole piece a strange, timeless motion. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:34
Great Green Wave
arqios said:
Lost knowledge regained opens doors left unopened and half-opened🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:57
arqios said:
Lost knowledge regained opens doors left unopened and half-opened🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:57
Great Green Wave
sorenbarrett said:
Short and with good rhyme it flows. Well done
April 15th, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Short and with good rhyme it flows. Well done
April 15th, 2026 06:32
Titan
arqios said:
Been to the Himalayas! Return trips are desired but still have to have a proper sitdown with Atlas -guess he’s always busy🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:22
arqios said:
Been to the Himalayas! Return trips are desired but still have to have a proper sitdown with Atlas -guess he’s always busy🙏🏻🕊️
April 15th, 2026 06:22
Titan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley… you got me with this one…that contrast between “big me” and “little me” hits quick and carries. One side light, the other holding everything…that shift lands in a real way. Clever, grounded piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley… you got me with this one…that contrast between “big me” and “little me” hits quick and carries. One side light, the other holding everything…that shift lands in a real way. Clever, grounded piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 08:07
Titan
Abdullah123 said:
Reminds of the Greek myth of the Titan Atlas. I wonder if that was the inspiration for this piece? Great write
April 14th, 2026 05:51
Abdullah123 said:
Reminds of the Greek myth of the Titan Atlas. I wonder if that was the inspiration for this piece? Great write
April 14th, 2026 05:51
Titan
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting blend of the mythical, and the reflective nicely said
April 13th, 2026 22:09
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting blend of the mythical, and the reflective nicely said
April 13th, 2026 22:09
Unknown Treasures
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this may be short, but it doesn’t feel small. That sense of something being held back, building into something louder…you can feel it rising even in just a few lines. It’s tight, focused, and it lands. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this may be short, but it doesn’t feel small. That sense of something being held back, building into something louder…you can feel it rising even in just a few lines. It’s tight, focused, and it lands. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:13
Unknown Treasures
sorenbarrett said:
If not a world leader I\'m out on this one having been in the woods for the past year with no news
April 11th, 2026 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
If not a world leader I\'m out on this one having been in the woods for the past year with no news
April 11th, 2026 05:43
Heavy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, you balance humor and subtle edge really well here…you keep it playful, but there’s just enough sharpness to give it depth. The back-and-forth keeps it moving, and the tone never tips too far in either direction. Short, clever, and effective. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, you balance humor and subtle edge really well here…you keep it playful, but there’s just enough sharpness to give it depth. The back-and-forth keeps it moving, and the tone never tips too far in either direction. Short, clever, and effective. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 10th, 2026 09:16
Heavy
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a little cryptic a tete a tete conversation maybe
April 10th, 2026 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a little cryptic a tete a tete conversation maybe
April 10th, 2026 07:29
The Master Hurls Rocks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 12:39
The Master Hurls Rocks
arqios said:
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
April 3rd, 2026 20:10
arqios said:
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
April 3rd, 2026 20:10
The Master Hurls Rocks
sorenbarrett said:
An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 11:16
In a Good Moodra
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a real sense of focus here…fingertips, stillness, control…then that Houdini turn slips in and changes everything. It keeps the power but adds a grin to it. That balance works. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a real sense of focus here…fingertips, stillness, control…then that Houdini turn slips in and changes everything. It keeps the power but adds a grin to it. That balance works. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:49
Every Which Way But Dinosaur
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world imagery and modern phrasing, then that twist of “every which way but dinosaur” tying it together. It’s quirky, light, and confident in its own rhythm. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world imagery and modern phrasing, then that twist of “every which way but dinosaur” tying it together. It’s quirky, light, and confident in its own rhythm. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:23
Muladhara Deliveries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels compressed, like something trying to break through. It’s tight but charged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels compressed, like something trying to break through. It’s tight but charged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:39
Muladhara Deliveries
sorenbarrett said:
Hinduism at its best a chakra where a kick in the ass might set it off. Always loved Ganesh here the worship of Ganapati leads to Brahman. Deep thoughts my friend
March 29th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Hinduism at its best a chakra where a kick in the ass might set it off. Always loved Ganesh here the worship of Ganapati leads to Brahman. Deep thoughts my friend
March 29th, 2026 05:33
Angered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few lines…there’s struggle here, but it’s restrained, almost whispered rather than shouted. That break into “I-magina- / -tive” feels like reaching for something just out of grasp. It lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few lines…there’s struggle here, but it’s restrained, almost whispered rather than shouted. That break into “I-magina- / -tive” feels like reaching for something just out of grasp. It lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:36
Angered
sorenbarrett said:
Buried under my ignorance I can only imagine. Nicely done
March 28th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
Buried under my ignorance I can only imagine. Nicely done
March 28th, 2026 07:54
Angered
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and establish judgement in the gate.
March 28th, 2026 07:27
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and establish judgement in the gate.
March 28th, 2026 07:27
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