Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Yoked to the Choke
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! Indeed the self-imposed chokehold. I get this...and \"skin deep\" need not be about sexual attraction or flesh, per se (though it could mean that)...but it could also mean only ever seeing on the surface...surface surfing if you will. Regardless, a profound poem wide open for interpretive reflection. Well done! 🙏❤️
March 3rd, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound! Indeed the self-imposed chokehold. I get this...and \"skin deep\" need not be about sexual attraction or flesh, per se (though it could mean that)...but it could also mean only ever seeing on the surface...surface surfing if you will. Regardless, a profound poem wide open for interpretive reflection. Well done! 🙏❤️
March 3rd, 2025 09:12
Yoked to the Choke
Poetic Licence said:
Would you really want to go that deep and could we handle what we find, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:52
Poetic Licence said:
Would you really want to go that deep and could we handle what we find, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:52
Yoked to the Choke
sorenbarrett said:
Each year\'s layer making memory mor opaque and in the process burying feelings that were once there. A lovely write of the passage of time
March 3rd, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Each year\'s layer making memory mor opaque and in the process burying feelings that were once there. A lovely write of the passage of time
March 3rd, 2025 05:26
Yoked to the Choke
arqios said:
The depths are bearers of such mysteries we could hardly hope to comprehend…. Or it could swing over to Willy Wonka’s pure imagination 🙏🏻🕊
March 3rd, 2025 02:25
arqios said:
The depths are bearers of such mysteries we could hardly hope to comprehend…. Or it could swing over to Willy Wonka’s pure imagination 🙏🏻🕊
March 3rd, 2025 02:25
Pleasure & Pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, I can. But this poem…not mental at all. Brilliant in its brevity! Well done
March 2nd, 2025 12:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, I can. But this poem…not mental at all. Brilliant in its brevity! Well done
March 2nd, 2025 12:15
Pleasure & Pain
Cheeky Missy said:
So, lemme guess...you\'re hereby relegated to mere spirit essence? You riot you, whatever shall I do with you?!
March 2nd, 2025 12:15
Cheeky Missy said:
So, lemme guess...you\'re hereby relegated to mere spirit essence? You riot you, whatever shall I do with you?!
March 2nd, 2025 12:15
Pleasure & Pain
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely can, its bonkers, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 07:00
Poetic Licence said:
Absolutely can, its bonkers, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 07:00
Pleasure & Pain
arqios said:
I see how mental that is… language can be a very strange mistress… just like its users 🙏🏻🕊
March 2nd, 2025 06:31
arqios said:
I see how mental that is… language can be a very strange mistress… just like its users 🙏🏻🕊
March 2nd, 2025 06:31
Pleasure & Pain
sorenbarrett said:
There is depth in this short piece. Memories are what we want them to be molded by time and desire they shine or stink according to what we think.
March 2nd, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is depth in this short piece. Memories are what we want them to be molded by time and desire they shine or stink according to what we think.
March 2nd, 2025 06:30
Deep Water Harbor
Cheeky Missy said:
You like \'em better if they\'re like the cg movies render those \"windows to the soul,\" lit with an eerie supernatural glow?! Or is it rather the antagonistic look which is being referenced as inspiring? I give up. Thank you very much.
February 28th, 2025 11:55
Cheeky Missy said:
You like \'em better if they\'re like the cg movies render those \"windows to the soul,\" lit with an eerie supernatural glow?! Or is it rather the antagonistic look which is being referenced as inspiring? I give up. Thank you very much.
February 28th, 2025 11:55
Deep Water Harbor
Poetic Licence said:
Some great metaphor in this piece to get the Rusty cogs turning, or should i say its all Greek to me,!!, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:42
Poetic Licence said:
Some great metaphor in this piece to get the Rusty cogs turning, or should i say its all Greek to me,!!, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:42
Deep Water Harbor
arqios said:
Enjoyed this mythologically inspired poem 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:16
arqios said:
Enjoyed this mythologically inspired poem 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:16
Deep Water Harbor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this metaphor-rich poem and the Greek mythological reference! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏🔱
February 28th, 2025 07:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this metaphor-rich poem and the Greek mythological reference! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏🔱
February 28th, 2025 07:15
Deep Water Harbor
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this one falls back on mythology to aid its course and so it does. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this one falls back on mythology to aid its course and so it does. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:23
Cobra Chemistry
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Never did study those deadly vipers...is spitting included in the package? Curious and intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 11:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Never did study those deadly vipers...is spitting included in the package? Curious and intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 11:06
Cobra Chemistry
Poetic Licence said:
It certainly knows when to strike, only when provoked, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 07:48
Poetic Licence said:
It certainly knows when to strike, only when provoked, enjoyed the read
February 27th, 2025 07:48
Cobra Chemistry
arqios said:
Haven’t encountered one up close, save once a very very long time ago. Gives me the shivers! Excellent write🙏🏻🕊
February 27th, 2025 06:44
arqios said:
Haven’t encountered one up close, save once a very very long time ago. Gives me the shivers! Excellent write🙏🏻🕊
February 27th, 2025 06:44
Cobra Chemistry
sorenbarrett said:
I suppose with infrared vision more heat more detectable. A fun read with rhyme.
February 27th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
I suppose with infrared vision more heat more detectable. A fun read with rhyme.
February 27th, 2025 04:40
Red Waves
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of metaphor and well written as well.
February 26th, 2025 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of metaphor and well written as well.
February 26th, 2025 18:20
Flammable
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet. I really like the descriptive words you chose. This is my favorite today.
February 26th, 2025 08:39
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet. I really like the descriptive words you chose. This is my favorite today.
February 26th, 2025 08:39
Red Waves
arqios said:
Majestic. Brought to mind some dervishes twirling as the sacking of Constantinople was in the offing. Random association, I know. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:47
arqios said:
Majestic. Brought to mind some dervishes twirling as the sacking of Constantinople was in the offing. Random association, I know. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:47
Red Waves
Cheeky Missy said:
Good grief! You riot, methinks you\'re having too much fun. All the better for good health, eh?
February 26th, 2025 05:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Good grief! You riot, methinks you\'re having too much fun. All the better for good health, eh?
February 26th, 2025 05:04
Flammable
Poetic Licence said:
Passion taking your feelings to heaven then back to hell, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:34
Poetic Licence said:
Passion taking your feelings to heaven then back to hell, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:34
Flammable
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought provoking read
February 24th, 2025 21:59
sorenbarrett said:
I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought provoking read
February 24th, 2025 21:59
Flammable
Tristan Robert Lange said:
They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.
February 24th, 2025 20:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.
February 24th, 2025 20:25
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