Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Where Would We Be Without.....?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic meditation on existence… “Maybe the universe / Wouldn’t have even bothered / Giving birth / To us?” …and then you snap it back to “Without farts?” The contrast is the whole magic. Silly, existential, and fearless in its humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic meditation on existence… “Maybe the universe / Wouldn’t have even bothered / Giving birth / To us?” …and then you snap it back to “Without farts?” The contrast is the whole magic. Silly, existential, and fearless in its humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:55
Where Would We Be Without.....?
sorenbarrett said:
Methane lighting, is that the answer to the energy crisis? A fun read Mutely
February 21st, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Methane lighting, is that the answer to the energy crisis? A fun read Mutely
February 21st, 2026 05:16
There`s No Other Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic design meeting pure bodily reality. I started dignified. I ended laughing way too hard. The mock-serious tone makes it land even harder. I am already wobbling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic design meeting pure bodily reality. I started dignified. I ended laughing way too hard. The mock-serious tone makes it land even harder. I am already wobbling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:14
There`s No Other Way
sorenbarrett said:
We are all full of hot air, some smell more than others. A light hearted read Mutley
February 20th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
We are all full of hot air, some smell more than others. A light hearted read Mutley
February 20th, 2026 06:20
Rodent Resources
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the speaker amplifies the weight of the message, and the metaphor is immediate and accessible. It’s wry, unsettling, and strangely wise. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the speaker amplifies the weight of the message, and the metaphor is immediate and accessible. It’s wry, unsettling, and strangely wise. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:38
Rodent Resources
sorenbarrett said:
It is the threat that keeps people in line and this is how the law works. Well written
February 19th, 2026 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the threat that keeps people in line and this is how the law works. Well written
February 19th, 2026 06:33
Green Mamba
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
February 16th, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
February 16th, 2026 08:25
Green Mamba
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this one amusing. A good write Mutley
February 16th, 2026 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this one amusing. A good write Mutley
February 16th, 2026 05:15
Faith-Challenged
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you here...happens to me too...
February 15th, 2026 00:45
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you here...happens to me too...
February 15th, 2026 00:45
Twin Flames
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:37
Twin Flames
sorenbarrett said:
I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley
February 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley
February 14th, 2026 04:51
Animal Magic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The dismissal of polished rhetoric gives way to a demand for visceral awakening. The solar plexus and righteous claws image makes imagination feel like a force that wounds in order to wake. Fierce and purposeful. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The dismissal of polished rhetoric gives way to a demand for visceral awakening. The solar plexus and righteous claws image makes imagination feel like a force that wounds in order to wake. Fierce and purposeful. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:45
Animal Magic
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination the blood of the virgin on the alter it is the unblemished sacrifice. Lovely write
February 13th, 2026 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination the blood of the virgin on the alter it is the unblemished sacrifice. Lovely write
February 13th, 2026 06:19
Apex Predator
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and surreal…and then that final two-word punchline lands like a mic drop. Absurd, sharp, and perfectly timed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and surreal…and then that final two-word punchline lands like a mic drop. Absurd, sharp, and perfectly timed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 12th, 2026 17:21
Apex Predator
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes a little sense if you think about it.
February 12th, 2026 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes a little sense if you think about it.
February 12th, 2026 07:11
Faith-Challenged
Vipassana said:
you can\'t try to be. being is not striving. it is surrendering to awareness.
February 12th, 2026 02:27
Vipassana said:
you can\'t try to be. being is not striving. it is surrendering to awareness.
February 12th, 2026 02:27
Will to Power
Vipassana said:
The harder I try
The more anxiety
I reap
you might want to read the Tao Te Ching
February 12th, 2026 02:20
Vipassana said:
The harder I try
The more anxiety
I reap
you might want to read the Tao Te Ching
February 12th, 2026 02:20
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this pulls me into that old metaphysical vertigo…the moment you realize identity might not begin where biology does. It’s brief, but it opens a vast silence to sit with. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 12:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this pulls me into that old metaphysical vertigo…the moment you realize identity might not begin where biology does. It’s brief, but it opens a vast silence to sit with. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 12:57
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arqios said:
I was where you were, I would seem. “Collections” are still a mystery 🕊️🙏🏻
February 10th, 2026 04:40
arqios said:
I was where you were, I would seem. “Collections” are still a mystery 🕊️🙏🏻
February 10th, 2026 04:40
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sorenbarrett said:
Ahy ahy captain a fun read that I enjoyed the wordplay of.
February 10th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
Ahy ahy captain a fun read that I enjoyed the wordplay of.
February 10th, 2026 04:17
Gotcha!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is unsettling in a quiet way. The voice of belief as something that dominates and withdraws at will feels disturbingly familiar. It lands with a chill. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is unsettling in a quiet way. The voice of belief as something that dominates and withdraws at will feels disturbingly familiar. It lands with a chill. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 09:43
Gotcha!
Thomas W Case said:
That’s control speaking in its true voice—quiet, patient, cruel.
Short lines, deep pit; belief as a jailer is a damn sharp turn.
February 8th, 2026 07:31
Thomas W Case said:
That’s control speaking in its true voice—quiet, patient, cruel.
Short lines, deep pit; belief as a jailer is a damn sharp turn.
February 8th, 2026 07:31
Gotcha!
sorenbarrett said:
Even wills need a rest from time to time and even beliefs recognize this. Well written my friend
February 8th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Even wills need a rest from time to time and even beliefs recognize this. Well written my friend
February 8th, 2026 04:59
Acceleration
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A concise, thoughtful piece, Mutley. The river, the acceleration, and that image of something emerging from sand all point to inevitability without spelling it out. Quiet, suggestive, and well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A concise, thoughtful piece, Mutley. The river, the acceleration, and that image of something emerging from sand all point to inevitability without spelling it out. Quiet, suggestive, and well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 7th, 2026 10:16
Acceleration
sorenbarrett said:
This one caught me off guard and got me scratching my head. But yes time keeps moving and it is out of the sands of time that things come to a head.
February 7th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
This one caught me off guard and got me scratching my head. But yes time keeps moving and it is out of the sands of time that things come to a head.
February 7th, 2026 10:06
Numenorian Telepathy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You got me with this, Mutley. The imagery invites fear, then undercuts it with self-awareness in a way that feels playful but pointed. Imagination as threat and refuge at once. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 14:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You got me with this, Mutley. The imagery invites fear, then undercuts it with self-awareness in a way that feels playful but pointed. Imagination as threat and refuge at once. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 14:57
Numenorian Telepathy
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of perspective in this poem set in a fanciful thought applies to so many things. Nicely said
February 6th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A matter of perspective in this poem set in a fanciful thought applies to so many things. Nicely said
February 6th, 2026 05:10
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