Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
The Master Hurls Rocks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 12:39
The Master Hurls Rocks
arqios said:
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
April 3rd, 2026 20:10
arqios said:
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
April 3rd, 2026 20:10
The Master Hurls Rocks
sorenbarrett said:
An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 11:16
In a Good Moodra
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a real sense of focus here…fingertips, stillness, control…then that Houdini turn slips in and changes everything. It keeps the power but adds a grin to it. That balance works. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a real sense of focus here…fingertips, stillness, control…then that Houdini turn slips in and changes everything. It keeps the power but adds a grin to it. That balance works. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 07:49
Every Which Way But Dinosaur
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world imagery and modern phrasing, then that twist of “every which way but dinosaur” tying it together. It’s quirky, light, and confident in its own rhythm. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries that playful, offbeat energy…the mix of old-world imagery and modern phrasing, then that twist of “every which way but dinosaur” tying it together. It’s quirky, light, and confident in its own rhythm. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:23
Muladhara Deliveries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels compressed, like something trying to break through. It’s tight but charged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a tension in it that feels compressed, like something trying to break through. It’s tight but charged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:39
Muladhara Deliveries
sorenbarrett said:
Hinduism at its best a chakra where a kick in the ass might set it off. Always loved Ganesh here the worship of Ganapati leads to Brahman. Deep thoughts my friend
March 29th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Hinduism at its best a chakra where a kick in the ass might set it off. Always loved Ganesh here the worship of Ganapati leads to Brahman. Deep thoughts my friend
March 29th, 2026 05:33
Angered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few lines…there’s struggle here, but it’s restrained, almost whispered rather than shouted. That break into “I-magina- / -tive” feels like reaching for something just out of grasp. It lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet tension that builds in just a few lines…there’s struggle here, but it’s restrained, almost whispered rather than shouted. That break into “I-magina- / -tive” feels like reaching for something just out of grasp. It lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:36
Angered
sorenbarrett said:
Buried under my ignorance I can only imagine. Nicely done
March 28th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
Buried under my ignorance I can only imagine. Nicely done
March 28th, 2026 07:54
Angered
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and establish judgement in the gate.
March 28th, 2026 07:27
2781 said:
Hate the evil, and love the good, and establish judgement in the gate.
March 28th, 2026 07:27
Sauronic
Demar Desu said:
No! Because I have faith in life, in others but sometimes I doubt myself! Sigh… great poem
March 27th, 2026 10:03
Demar Desu said:
No! Because I have faith in life, in others but sometimes I doubt myself! Sigh… great poem
March 27th, 2026 10:03
Sauronic
sorenbarrett said:
Short and clever it speaks with logic and bitter humor. Well done
March 27th, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Short and clever it speaks with logic and bitter humor. Well done
March 27th, 2026 09:39
Sauronic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this blends confrontation and reflection… the voice, the question, the framing all work together to unsettle and provoke thought. It leaves the choice hanging in a way that lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this blends confrontation and reflection… the voice, the question, the framing all work together to unsettle and provoke thought. It leaves the choice hanging in a way that lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:37
Desertification
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet brutality…a hunger that takes and takes until only emptiness remains. The descent feels inevitable, and the aftermath feels stripped bare. There’s a real weight to that kind of loss. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this carries a quiet brutality…a hunger that takes and takes until only emptiness remains. The descent feels inevitable, and the aftermath feels stripped bare. There’s a real weight to that kind of loss. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:37
Desertification
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image to mind of Dune or even Star Wars but still its meaning lies deeper. Nicely written
March 26th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image to mind of Dune or even Star Wars but still its meaning lies deeper. Nicely written
March 26th, 2026 07:17
Microcosmic Melodies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love when something mythic gets handled this way…not distant, but conversational, almost everyday in tone. It reminds me how those old stories still breathe when you let them speak like this. This really lands for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love when something mythic gets handled this way…not distant, but conversational, almost everyday in tone. It reminds me how those old stories still breathe when you let them speak like this. This really lands for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:35
Microcosmic Melodies
sorenbarrett said:
Gravity operates on all being a major force in the universe. Well written Mutley it could have come from a book and maybe one day you will make it one.
March 18th, 2026 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Gravity operates on all being a major force in the universe. Well written Mutley it could have come from a book and maybe one day you will make it one.
March 18th, 2026 08:26
Microcosmic Miseries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I’ve had moments that feel just as chaotic internally…not quite this mythological, haha, but that sense of everything being out of alignment. The way it all builds to “Help me, Lord!”…that cry feels real beneath the humor. This one stayed with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I’ve had moments that feel just as chaotic internally…not quite this mythological, haha, but that sense of everything being out of alignment. The way it all builds to “Help me, Lord!”…that cry feels real beneath the humor. This one stayed with me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:30
Microcosmic Miseries
sorenbarrett said:
Real emotion in fantasy transposed a lovely write
March 17th, 2026 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Real emotion in fantasy transposed a lovely write
March 17th, 2026 06:59
Lonely Isle Files
RSM0812 said:
An interesting write. Passionate people are more high energy and maybe a bit controlling. Where unpassionate people may sometimes just ride the wave they are on.
March 15th, 2026 15:54
RSM0812 said:
An interesting write. Passionate people are more high energy and maybe a bit controlling. Where unpassionate people may sometimes just ride the wave they are on.
March 15th, 2026 15:54
Lonely Isle Files
sorenbarrett said:
Most fanciful and I would not know the difference. great rhyme and write
March 14th, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Most fanciful and I would not know the difference. great rhyme and write
March 14th, 2026 09:56
Lonely Isle Files
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a scene...almost like it\'s out of some strange midnight parable…a sudden arrival, an odd image with the rope, and then that blunt question dropped into the middle of it all. The moment feels both humorous and philosophical at the same time. It’s brief but it lingers. Nicely crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a scene...almost like it\'s out of some strange midnight parable…a sudden arrival, an odd image with the rope, and then that blunt question dropped into the middle of it all. The moment feels both humorous and philosophical at the same time. It’s brief but it lingers. Nicely crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:48
Mirrorcle
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that reveals something about the reader. I would not want to see my face in a trillion places it is hard enough to look in the mirror. I defiantly would be off my face. A good read my friend.
March 10th, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic question that reveals something about the reader. I would not want to see my face in a trillion places it is hard enough to look in the mirror. I defiantly would be off my face. A good read my friend.
March 10th, 2026 06:53
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