Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Futile Rearrangement of the Surface
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

July 29th, 2024 22:40

Futile Rearrangement of the Surface
sorenbarrett said:

Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated

July 29th, 2024 10:05

Futile Rearrangement of the Surface
2781 said:

Or unimaginable fears

July 29th, 2024 08:05

Evidense
sorenbarrett said:

Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out and be more.

July 28th, 2024 05:44

Earth\'s Most Wanted
sorenbarrett said:

I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke in the first person to the reader. A great message.

July 27th, 2024 05:33

Transmigration Blues
Tom Dylan said:

Made me smile, Mutley. I read this several times. :-)

July 24th, 2024 10:17

After 5 Comes 6
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

July 21st, 2024 21:28

Drat Chronicles
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

July 21st, 2024 17:17

Drat Chronicles
2781 said:

Probably!

July 20th, 2024 18:34

Limitation
sorenbarrett said:

This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done

July 19th, 2024 05:23

Midnight Rambler
Thad Wilk said:

A very captivating,
deep and evocative
poem, short and
succinct, great
rhyme scheme
and awesome
presentation!! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad

July 18th, 2024 20:39

Midnight Rambler
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 18th, 2024 09:52

Spiral Woodpecker
orchidee said:

Good write M.
I was The Birdman. I too headbutted a tree, but had no beak, so had a terrible headache after it! lol. It\'s true ya know. heehee.

July 9th, 2024 04:55

Spiral Woodpecker
Tom Dylan said:

A cracking poem. I read this in almost a Bob Dylan kind of tone.

July 9th, 2024 02:43

Angel Support
2781 said:

Not you!

July 9th, 2024 01:34

2043
Mase ♪ said:

Lol, don\'t want that to happen.

July 8th, 2024 13:50

2043
Mase ♪ said:

Mental indeed......I heard Genetically modified rabbit doesn\'t taste as good. Lol good write Mutley, it has a nice flow.


July 7th, 2024 23:01

2043
Thad Wilk said:

Ya gotta
Watch out for
that genetically-
modified rabbit🐰
called Janet! 😱
She\'s pregnant
I heard.. 🐇🐇🐇🐇
Best regards ✌️. Thad

July 6th, 2024 21:43

Viking Gaze
Thad Wilk said:

Great read my friend!
Enjoyed each line
beginning to end!!!
Thanks for sharing,
Great rhyme, flow and blend!! ✌️
Best regards Thad

July 5th, 2024 17:39

Viking Gaze
rengoku said:

my ancestors were actually vikings no joke
like the poem sounds realistic

July 5th, 2024 00:52

Privileged
rengoku said:

its a beautiful saying,mutely

July 3rd, 2024 23:25

Surrender, Dear Pretender
Mase ♪ said:

Good write Mutley! Love the title!

July 3rd, 2024 00:00

Solar Plexus Tear Up
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous flow and rhyme.

July 2nd, 2024 18:18

Solar Plexus Tear Up
Thad Wilk said:

Omg!
Gory good,
a scary great
write! 😱
Thanks for
sharing, I\'ll
have
nightmares
tonight!
Best regards Thad

Tomight

July 2nd, 2024 14:26

Anaconda Meets Florist
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

June 29th, 2024 21:39

Anaconda Meets Florist
Mase ♪ said:

Interesting write, nicely written Mutley!

June 28th, 2024 19:23

Happy Birthday!
Neilton said:

great work !


June 25th, 2024 08:17

Happy Birthday!
2781 said:

I wouldn\'t listen to that..

June 25th, 2024 05:43

Mosquito Mafia
2781 said:

I married an English Rose, I hardly ever get bitten.

June 24th, 2024 07:17

Mosquito Mafia
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes - not an advertising jingle for a proprietary mosquito spray, is it?

June 24th, 2024 06:07

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