Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
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TobaniNataiella said:
A few words sums up the truth, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 01:20
TobaniNataiella said:
A few words sums up the truth, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 01:20
Engineering Issues
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful poem Mutley! Sadly, I have felt this frustration! Well expressed! 🌹👏❤️
December 13th, 2024 06:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful poem Mutley! Sadly, I have felt this frustration! Well expressed! 🌹👏❤️
December 13th, 2024 06:22
Engineering Issues
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Engineering issues”
Some 40 000 thoughts a day… I suspect poets have even more of that… Even with this staggering number of thoughts we often fail to sway others.
“Your intellect cannot get
You out of this mess...”
Though the intellect is capable of stunning achievements, it often finds itself trapped hopelessly.
“If it could engineer a release
Wouldn\'t you already be free
By now...”
It is indeed ironical that, in spite of our tremendous mental powers, we fail to free ourselves.
“What you believe to be you...”
Our ideas of ourselves are often flawed or exaggerated. This is shown by our number of failures in many spheres, especially in human relations and conquering others. Even at home we fail to sway those we brought up....
Soman Ragavan.
December 13th, 2024 00:17
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Engineering issues”
Some 40 000 thoughts a day… I suspect poets have even more of that… Even with this staggering number of thoughts we often fail to sway others.
“Your intellect cannot get
You out of this mess...”
Though the intellect is capable of stunning achievements, it often finds itself trapped hopelessly.
“If it could engineer a release
Wouldn\'t you already be free
By now...”
It is indeed ironical that, in spite of our tremendous mental powers, we fail to free ourselves.
“What you believe to be you...”
Our ideas of ourselves are often flawed or exaggerated. This is shown by our number of failures in many spheres, especially in human relations and conquering others. Even at home we fail to sway those we brought up....
Soman Ragavan.
December 13th, 2024 00:17
Engineering Issues
TobaniNataiella said:
Aren`t we all enslaved by something, another enjoyable and interesting read, thank you
December 13th, 2024 00:03
TobaniNataiella said:
Aren`t we all enslaved by something, another enjoyable and interesting read, thank you
December 13th, 2024 00:03
Engineering Issues
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message it rings with distress
December 12th, 2024 20:33
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message it rings with distress
December 12th, 2024 20:33
Imaginology
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow! Beautifully expressed. An excellent poem!
December 11th, 2024 22:29
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow! Beautifully expressed. An excellent poem!
December 11th, 2024 22:29
Imaginology
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Instant fave. Yes that little boat of faith is unsinkable if its true! Wonderful, 💯 true write!🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 05:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Instant fave. Yes that little boat of faith is unsinkable if its true! Wonderful, 💯 true write!🌹👏
December 11th, 2024 05:21
Imaginology
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the saying that the best way to defeat fear is to face it. A poem with a message that needs to be heard. Very nicely written in poetic form
December 11th, 2024 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the saying that the best way to defeat fear is to face it. A poem with a message that needs to be heard. Very nicely written in poetic form
December 11th, 2024 04:28
Imaginology
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, really enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 00:44
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, really enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 00:44
Imaginology
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up!!
A wonderful poem
and thoughts penned!!🤔
Wonderfully woven
much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 22:29
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up!!
A wonderful poem
and thoughts penned!!🤔
Wonderfully woven
much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 22:29
Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful read Mutley! This rings so nicely and, I agree with Thad, I instantly thought of the Yellow Brick Road, though we all know not to worry too much about that lion! 😂 Or…so we think 🤔🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 06:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful read Mutley! This rings so nicely and, I agree with Thad, I instantly thought of the Yellow Brick Road, though we all know not to worry too much about that lion! 😂 Or…so we think 🤔🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 06:51
Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
sorenbarrett said:
Like all good poems they may be taken different ways and so is this one. Full of metaphor, references to old books or movie it seems political in some ways but also existential in others. I guess I will have to follow my guts and the yellow brick road to Oz
December 10th, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Like all good poems they may be taken different ways and so is this one. Full of metaphor, references to old books or movie it seems political in some ways but also existential in others. I guess I will have to follow my guts and the yellow brick road to Oz
December 10th, 2024 04:33
Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
TobaniNataiella said:
Cleverly written and enjoyable read, thank you
December 9th, 2024 22:30
TobaniNataiella said:
Cleverly written and enjoyable read, thank you
December 9th, 2024 22:30
Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
arqios said:
A whole trove of meaning and existential intent in a grove of fun verse!
December 9th, 2024 20:26
arqios said:
A whole trove of meaning and existential intent in a grove of fun verse!
December 9th, 2024 20:26
Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
teardrop said:
Beware of the lion for it may be a last stop....lol, thanks for sharing, Nice read
December 9th, 2024 20:24
teardrop said:
Beware of the lion for it may be a last stop....lol, thanks for sharing, Nice read
December 9th, 2024 20:24
Come On, Then! Do You Want Some?
Thad Wilk said:
Great fun poem and
information i\'d say !! 😯
Yup, follow the \'yellow brick road\'
might find it that way¿ 🤔
Thanks for sharing my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:21
Thad Wilk said:
Great fun poem and
information i\'d say !! 😯
Yup, follow the \'yellow brick road\'
might find it that way¿ 🤔
Thanks for sharing my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:21
Table Manners
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh me! Why, why, WHY?! How do you know what to say to make me laugh out loud?! You\'re too fun. Head or no, you\'re a regular riot. Thank you very much for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 17:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh me! Why, why, WHY?! How do you know what to say to make me laugh out loud?! You\'re too fun. Head or no, you\'re a regular riot. Thank you very much for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 17:03
Hong Kong Singalong
Cheeky Missy said:
Must not have been alcohol since fires eat that voraciously...hmm, water. Yes, your mouth would be too parched iffen your flagon was dry. Okay, I give up. Delightfully haunting and excellently rendered with fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 07:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Must not have been alcohol since fires eat that voraciously...hmm, water. Yes, your mouth would be too parched iffen your flagon was dry. Okay, I give up. Delightfully haunting and excellently rendered with fascinating imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 07:51
Hong Kong Singalong
sorenbarrett said:
OK, as I read this, I wondered what was in the flagon . The most fun read despite its shortness.
December 8th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
OK, as I read this, I wondered what was in the flagon . The most fun read despite its shortness.
December 8th, 2024 05:33
Hong Kong Singalong
TobaniNataiella said:
A little bit of fun to lighten up the day
December 8th, 2024 04:52
TobaniNataiella said:
A little bit of fun to lighten up the day
December 8th, 2024 04:52
King of the Road
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude, your lines cull sufficient chortling without needing to give me side-spliiting, etc laughter from the included entertainment. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 7th, 2024 08:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude, your lines cull sufficient chortling without needing to give me side-spliiting, etc laughter from the included entertainment. Charming and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 7th, 2024 08:45
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