Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Relaxation
sorenbarrett said:
Here(pardon the pun) is a heavy poem. Word play makes for great meaning (down can be directional and emotional) a wonderful write.
May 16th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Here(pardon the pun) is a heavy poem. Word play makes for great meaning (down can be directional and emotional) a wonderful write.
May 16th, 2025 04:51
Relaxation
arqios said:
\"The weight you bear is heavy, Pressed deep into weary bones. Round and round—endless motion, Yet still nowhere to call home.
Let the silence ease your shoulders, Let the wind take what it may. Ascension isn’t always climbing— Some burdens fall and drift away.\"
Your words resonate with quiet power.
May 16th, 2025 04:30
arqios said:
\"The weight you bear is heavy, Pressed deep into weary bones. Round and round—endless motion, Yet still nowhere to call home.
Let the silence ease your shoulders, Let the wind take what it may. Ascension isn’t always climbing— Some burdens fall and drift away.\"
Your words resonate with quiet power.
May 16th, 2025 04:30
Could Be
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hmmm. Yes. Usually through the guise of division. Satan has that divide and conquer tactic that seems to working at the speed of hellfire on this earth. Thought-provoking, my friend!
May 14th, 2025 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hmmm. Yes. Usually through the guise of division. Satan has that divide and conquer tactic that seems to working at the speed of hellfire on this earth. Thought-provoking, my friend!
May 14th, 2025 11:13
Could Be
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poetic thought that provokes the idea the on this earth I am the Satan not bowing to the will of my creator and at times my mother. Loved the poem Mutley I always love poems that make me think in new ways
May 14th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poetic thought that provokes the idea the on this earth I am the Satan not bowing to the will of my creator and at times my mother. Loved the poem Mutley I always love poems that make me think in new ways
May 14th, 2025 04:02
Surrender
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Well, I cannot but love this pretty number. Nor shall I enquire about your other half. But it was only a few hours ago I was reciting to my best friend the warning they\'d given me in my youth, namely, [seeing my father was perpetually under the hood of his car, van, whatever, at junk yards for parts and in my adulthood buying vehicles to refurbish, not to mention tinkering with any device since his childhood, knowing how to repair and etc.] that girls whose daddys fixed cars were bound to marry boys who couldn\'t use a wrench to save their lives. I shivered at that. Okay, enough of cheeky me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Well, I cannot but love this pretty number. Nor shall I enquire about your other half. But it was only a few hours ago I was reciting to my best friend the warning they\'d given me in my youth, namely, [seeing my father was perpetually under the hood of his car, van, whatever, at junk yards for parts and in my adulthood buying vehicles to refurbish, not to mention tinkering with any device since his childhood, knowing how to repair and etc.] that girls whose daddys fixed cars were bound to marry boys who couldn\'t use a wrench to save their lives. I shivered at that. Okay, enough of cheeky me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 18:53
Surrender
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful metaphor. Divinely true. Well done! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful metaphor. Divinely true. Well done! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 12th, 2025 08:39
Surrender
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here. Knowing one\'s limitations is critical in knowing what to turn over to those that are trained. A wonderful write.
May 12th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here. Knowing one\'s limitations is critical in knowing what to turn over to those that are trained. A wonderful write.
May 12th, 2025 04:29
Surrender
Poetic Licence said:
On today\'s cars wouldn\'t know where to begin, cannot tinker like we used to, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 03:56
Poetic Licence said:
On today\'s cars wouldn\'t know where to begin, cannot tinker like we used to, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 03:56
Surrender
arqios said:
oh the blind trust that is thrust upon us these days! Back in the day of carburettors, we could do a lot on our driveway before ever needing to go to the garage. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 12th, 2025 01:44
arqios said:
oh the blind trust that is thrust upon us these days! Back in the day of carburettors, we could do a lot on our driveway before ever needing to go to the garage. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 12th, 2025 01:44
Billionaire Goes Rogue
Poetic Licence said:
Having a simple life would be worth its weight in gold, enjoyable read
May 7th, 2025 08:08
Poetic Licence said:
Having a simple life would be worth its weight in gold, enjoyable read
May 7th, 2025 08:08
My Wave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and brief. A wonderful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful and brief. A wonderful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:23
My Wave
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor and poem based strongly on belief that is somehow logical about the illogical. Nicely said in few words
May 5th, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor and poem based strongly on belief that is somehow logical about the illogical. Nicely said in few words
May 5th, 2025 06:43
Billionaire Goes Rogue
NafisaSB said:
loneliness does have its advantages - but sometimes you do need another person around - that\'s my take here
April 29th, 2025 00:56
NafisaSB said:
loneliness does have its advantages - but sometimes you do need another person around - that\'s my take here
April 29th, 2025 00:56
Confessions of a Bodybuilder
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ain\'t it the truth, though? Like monster trucks, I don\'t quite get it. But perhaps I\'m not meant to.This poem though, I get it! Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ain\'t it the truth, though? Like monster trucks, I don\'t quite get it. But perhaps I\'m not meant to.This poem though, I get it! Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 09:28
Confessions of a Bodybuilder
sorenbarrett said:
Clever it seems the moto of Atlas. Nicely written Mutley
April 28th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Clever it seems the moto of Atlas. Nicely written Mutley
April 28th, 2025 04:41
Billionaire Goes Rogue
arqios said:
Having a look around is a reminder that to be quite happy is a real achievement 🕊🙏🏻
April 25th, 2025 01:12
arqios said:
Having a look around is a reminder that to be quite happy is a real achievement 🕊🙏🏻
April 25th, 2025 01:12
Billionaire Goes Rogue
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that may be more true than not. Lovely
April 24th, 2025 21:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that may be more true than not. Lovely
April 24th, 2025 21:38
Billionaire Goes Rogue
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If ever being attacked by ladies, it is duly noted that living in a shack will be a deterrent to them. One never knows! 🤷♂️🤣 Then again, not sure I am ever going to be a Thousandaire, let alone a Billionaire. All jokes aside, loved this, my friend. Hence the fave! 🌹👏
April 24th, 2025 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
If ever being attacked by ladies, it is duly noted that living in a shack will be a deterrent to them. One never knows! 🤷♂️🤣 Then again, not sure I am ever going to be a Thousandaire, let alone a Billionaire. All jokes aside, loved this, my friend. Hence the fave! 🌹👏
April 24th, 2025 21:22
Immortal Chortles
NafisaSB said:
your words[verse] does make one sit up and think..what a question you have raised, and who will be able to answer it?
April 23rd, 2025 02:19
NafisaSB said:
your words[verse] does make one sit up and think..what a question you have raised, and who will be able to answer it?
April 23rd, 2025 02:19
Returns
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There are no answers to these questions, that is the quest, perhaps it is history and even humanity all reflected in this short concise powerful poem.
April 23rd, 2025 01:33
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There are no answers to these questions, that is the quest, perhaps it is history and even humanity all reflected in this short concise powerful poem.
April 23rd, 2025 01:33
Possession
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliantly crafted. The metaphor, crystal clear in so very few words! The internal war rages on! Well done! 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 20:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brilliantly crafted. The metaphor, crystal clear in so very few words! The internal war rages on! Well done! 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 20:19
Possession
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is well constructed and sends its message so poetically
April 22nd, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is well constructed and sends its message so poetically
April 22nd, 2025 20:05
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