Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Big Sugar
sorenbarrett said:

This holds a blemd of the dark and light and leaves the reader wondering. Marvelous in its slow pacing that cuminates in its final phrase. Very nicely done

January 28th, 2025 04:02

Big Sugar
Cassie58 said:

Funny πŸ˜‚

January 28th, 2025 03:59

Big Sugar
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha. Me prefers C&H myself. Lovely, you rascal.

January 28th, 2025 01:52

Thymus, Forgive Us
jim56 said:

lot of morning song birds here
thanks for comment means a lot

January 25th, 2025 07:27

Thymus, Forgive Us
Thad Wilk said:

πŸ‘πŸ‘ Clapping!
Awesome poem! 😁
Thought provoking and
the imagery great! πŸ’―
A really \"gland\" read!
Gotta take care
of that prostate!!😳😁
Have a great weekend!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 24th, 2025 20:21

Thymus, Forgive Us
Cheeky Missy said:

Okay... I\'m thoroughly bewildered, but whatever. I\'m licensed still to add thyme to my dishes, mind you.

January 24th, 2025 16:49

Thymus, Forgive Us
Thomas W Case said:

Fun work and great rhyme.

January 24th, 2025 13:58

Thymus, Forgive Us
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 24th, 2025 10:52

Thymus, Forgive Us
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ignoring any part of our immune system is no bueno. Well written, my friend. πŸ™β€οΈ I am sure gland to read this! (yes...I know that was bad 🀣).

January 24th, 2025 09:02

Thymus, Forgive Us
arqios said:

Oh, another gland poem! Must be in vogue these days 😊 this poem would’ve kept me awake and intrigued during bio class! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 24th, 2025 06:13

Thymus, Forgive Us
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem about internal organs with a good rhyme.

January 24th, 2025 04:23

Dear Fiendess
Cassie58 said:

I started to laugh and then the more caring side of me went to the medicine cupboard to look for anti acid.

January 23rd, 2025 06:56

Dear Fiendess
arqios said:

It’ll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:44

Dear Fiendess
Poetic Licence said:

Now i think that`s to the point, enjoyed the read

January 22nd, 2025 22:10

Dear Fiendess
sorenbarrett said:

Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.

January 22nd, 2025 20:49

Dear Fiendess
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha!

January 22nd, 2025 19:12

Dear Fiendess
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

January 22nd, 2025 18:52

Medusa Rattle
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 21st, 2025 12:45

Blue Star
NafisaSB said:

i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful

January 21st, 2025 11:37

Medusa Rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. 🀣 Easily faved, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 21st, 2025 08:22

Medusa Rattle
sorenbarrett said:

You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it

January 21st, 2025 04:08

Appetite For Identification
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done

January 20th, 2025 04:27

Appetite For Identification
Cheeky Missy said:

Do you like leaving me speechless?

January 19th, 2025 23:35

Buffering
arqios said:

Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.

January 19th, 2025 03:05

Buffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 18th, 2025 21:59

Buffering
sorenbarrett said:

Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read

January 18th, 2025 20:37

Gland Goes On A Rant
sorenbarrett said:

Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read

January 18th, 2025 04:34

Gland Goes On A Rant
arqios said:

Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!

January 17th, 2025 20:32

Spazzm\'d
arqios said:

Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !

January 17th, 2025 07:56

Spazzm\'d
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. This flows really well.

January 17th, 2025 05:24



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