Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Big Sugar
sorenbarrett said:
This holds a blemd of the dark and light and leaves the reader wondering. Marvelous in its slow pacing that cuminates in its final phrase. Very nicely done
January 28th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
This holds a blemd of the dark and light and leaves the reader wondering. Marvelous in its slow pacing that cuminates in its final phrase. Very nicely done
January 28th, 2025 04:02
Big Sugar
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha. Me prefers C&H myself. Lovely, you rascal.
January 28th, 2025 01:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha. Me prefers C&H myself. Lovely, you rascal.
January 28th, 2025 01:52
Thymus, Forgive Us
jim56 said:
lot of morning song birds here
thanks for comment means a lot
January 25th, 2025 07:27
jim56 said:
lot of morning song birds here
thanks for comment means a lot
January 25th, 2025 07:27
Thymus, Forgive Us
Thad Wilk said:
ππ Clapping!
Awesome poem! π
Thought provoking and
the imagery great! π―
A really \"gland\" read!
Gotta take care
of that prostate!!π³π
Have a great weekend!!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 24th, 2025 20:21
Thad Wilk said:
ππ Clapping!
Awesome poem! π
Thought provoking and
the imagery great! π―
A really \"gland\" read!
Gotta take care
of that prostate!!π³π
Have a great weekend!!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 24th, 2025 20:21
Thymus, Forgive Us
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay... I\'m thoroughly bewildered, but whatever. I\'m licensed still to add thyme to my dishes, mind you.
January 24th, 2025 16:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay... I\'m thoroughly bewildered, but whatever. I\'m licensed still to add thyme to my dishes, mind you.
January 24th, 2025 16:49
Thymus, Forgive Us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ignoring any part of our immune system is no bueno. Well written, my friend. πβ€οΈ I am sure gland to read this! (yes...I know that was bad π€£).
January 24th, 2025 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ignoring any part of our immune system is no bueno. Well written, my friend. πβ€οΈ I am sure gland to read this! (yes...I know that was bad π€£).
January 24th, 2025 09:02
Thymus, Forgive Us
arqios said:
Oh, another gland poem! Must be in vogue these days π this poem wouldβve kept me awake and intrigued during bio class! ππ»ππ»π
January 24th, 2025 06:13
arqios said:
Oh, another gland poem! Must be in vogue these days π this poem wouldβve kept me awake and intrigued during bio class! ππ»ππ»π
January 24th, 2025 06:13
Thymus, Forgive Us
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem about internal organs with a good rhyme.
January 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem about internal organs with a good rhyme.
January 24th, 2025 04:23
Dear Fiendess
Cassie58 said:
I started to laugh and then the more caring side of me went to the medicine cupboard to look for anti acid.
January 23rd, 2025 06:56
Cassie58 said:
I started to laugh and then the more caring side of me went to the medicine cupboard to look for anti acid.
January 23rd, 2025 06:56
Dear Fiendess
arqios said:
Itβll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! ππ»ππ»π
January 23rd, 2025 04:44
arqios said:
Itβll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! ππ»ππ»π
January 23rd, 2025 04:44
Dear Fiendess
Poetic Licence said:
Now i think that`s to the point, enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 22:10
Poetic Licence said:
Now i think that`s to the point, enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 22:10
Dear Fiendess
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.
January 22nd, 2025 20:49
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.
January 22nd, 2025 20:49
Blue Star
NafisaSB said:
i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:37
NafisaSB said:
i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful
January 21st, 2025 11:37
Medusa Rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. π€£ Easily faved, my friend! πΉπ
January 21st, 2025 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. π€£ Easily faved, my friend! πΉπ
January 21st, 2025 08:22
Medusa Rattle
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it
January 21st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it
January 21st, 2025 04:08
Appetite For Identification
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:27
Appetite For Identification
Cheeky Missy said:
Do you like leaving me speechless?
January 19th, 2025 23:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Do you like leaving me speechless?
January 19th, 2025 23:35
Buffering
arqios said:
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
January 19th, 2025 03:05
arqios said:
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
January 19th, 2025 03:05
Buffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! πΉπ
January 18th, 2025 21:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! πΉπ
January 18th, 2025 21:59
Buffering
sorenbarrett said:
Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 20:37
Gland Goes On A Rant
sorenbarrett said:
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 04:34
Gland Goes On A Rant
arqios said:
Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!
January 17th, 2025 20:32
arqios said:
Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!
January 17th, 2025 20:32
Spazzm\'d
arqios said:
Hereβs hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !
January 17th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
Hereβs hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !
January 17th, 2025 07:56
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