Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes



Thymus, Forgive Us
Cheeky Missy said:

Okay... I\'m thoroughly bewildered, but whatever. I\'m licensed still to add thyme to my dishes, mind you.

January 24th, 2025 16:49

Thymus, Forgive Us
Thomas W Case said:

Fun work and great rhyme.

January 24th, 2025 13:58

Thymus, Forgive Us
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 24th, 2025 10:52

Thymus, Forgive Us
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ignoring any part of our immune system is no bueno. Well written, my friend. πŸ™β€οΈ I am sure gland to read this! (yes...I know that was bad 🀣).

January 24th, 2025 09:02

Thymus, Forgive Us
arqios said:

Oh, another gland poem! Must be in vogue these days 😊 this poem would’ve kept me awake and intrigued during bio class! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 24th, 2025 06:13

Thymus, Forgive Us
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem about internal organs with a good rhyme.

January 24th, 2025 04:23

Dear Fiendess
Cassie58 said:

I started to laugh and then the more caring side of me went to the medicine cupboard to look for anti acid.

January 23rd, 2025 06:56

Dear Fiendess
arqios said:

It’ll take much more than Mylanta to sort this out! πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:44

Dear Fiendess
Poetic Licence said:

Now i think that`s to the point, enjoyed the read

January 22nd, 2025 22:10

Dear Fiendess
sorenbarrett said:

Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.

January 22nd, 2025 20:49

Dear Fiendess
Cheeky Missy said:

Hahaha!

January 22nd, 2025 19:12

Dear Fiendess
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

January 22nd, 2025 18:52

Medusa Rattle
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 21st, 2025 12:45

Blue Star
NafisaSB said:

i see a hint of sorrow in this beautiful verse on the city of stars, where the dew got hidden
wow, beautiful

January 21st, 2025 11:37

Medusa Rattle
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. 🀣 Easily faved, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 21st, 2025 08:22

Medusa Rattle
sorenbarrett said:

You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry is like an apple in life it keeps the doctor away and is good medicine. Loved it

January 21st, 2025 04:08

Appetite For Identification
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done

January 20th, 2025 04:27

Appetite For Identification
Cheeky Missy said:

Do you like leaving me speechless?

January 19th, 2025 23:35

Buffering
arqios said:

Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.

January 19th, 2025 03:05

Buffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 18th, 2025 21:59

Buffering
sorenbarrett said:

Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read

January 18th, 2025 20:37

Gland Goes On A Rant
sorenbarrett said:

Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read

January 18th, 2025 04:34

Gland Goes On A Rant
arqios said:

Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!

January 17th, 2025 20:32

Spazzm\'d
arqios said:

Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !

January 17th, 2025 07:56

Spazzm\'d
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done. This flows really well.

January 17th, 2025 05:24

Spazzm\'d
sorenbarrett said:

A few lines that pack a punch. Lovely

January 16th, 2025 21:22

Spazzm\'d
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to leave them lingering, searching for the inner meaning it speaks to them within. That, imho, is true art. Multiple interpretations fit this...for me, it spoke of addiction because that is something that has affected me personally. But that need not be what it is about. Again, that is the brilliance of this brief but extremely impactful poem. Well done, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 16th, 2025 19:11

Hormoans
sorenbarrett said:

Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone whoremones would be closely related but this is too much mental masterbation. A fun read that seduces the reader.

January 16th, 2025 04:08

Hormoans
arqios said:

Wild, explosive and full of desire! πŸ‘πŸ»

January 16th, 2025 02:23

Hormoans
Cheeky Missy said:

Haha. Hor-rifying, eh? You\'re too fun.

January 15th, 2025 23:40



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