Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness, betrayal, and disillusion. Because one fails on one’s first try there is no need to close the door. I love the rhyme in this poem and it’s flow towards the end. Nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness, betrayal, and disillusion. Because one fails on one’s first try there is no need to close the door. I love the rhyme in this poem and it’s flow towards the end. Nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:22
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will be safe and will come out again soon Thad.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will be safe and will come out again soon Thad.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:50
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the trimmings is it! Got you!
Suits the terrible monotony and depression after loss…. Your dirge or lament is very convincing… how long before you get cheerful again???
September 8th, 2024 21:22
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the trimmings is it! Got you!
Suits the terrible monotony and depression after loss…. Your dirge or lament is very convincing… how long before you get cheerful again???
September 8th, 2024 21:22
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, let\'s dedicate this to Ben Affleck, whose latest matrimonial ventures ended remarkably fast. I\'ve allus said my heart\'s been made a jigsaw puzzle for all the times it\'s been broken too many times sans matrimony. You do know how to write such perfect pieces, even when it\'s downright heartbreaking. Me loves. Too perfectly rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb detailing. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, let\'s dedicate this to Ben Affleck, whose latest matrimonial ventures ended remarkably fast. I\'ve allus said my heart\'s been made a jigsaw puzzle for all the times it\'s been broken too many times sans matrimony. You do know how to write such perfect pieces, even when it\'s downright heartbreaking. Me loves. Too perfectly rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb detailing. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:50
~> YIKES!
Cassie58 said:
You are a bad lad Thad but I like your sense of humour :)) That woman needs at least 36 inches added to her nightshirt lol. Thanks for the smile.
September 8th, 2024 04:03
Cassie58 said:
You are a bad lad Thad but I like your sense of humour :)) That woman needs at least 36 inches added to her nightshirt lol. Thanks for the smile.
September 8th, 2024 04:03
~> YIKES!
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot! I declare! Nuttin\' like puddy gettin\' a\' terrified by madam\'s ass a pointin\' \'eavenward. Ooh wee! Dat crack! Dat sight none should see but \'er lovin\' man! Frightful! Runnin\' fer dee hills right now I iz, oh yes I iz!
September 7th, 2024 14:43
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot! I declare! Nuttin\' like puddy gettin\' a\' terrified by madam\'s ass a pointin\' \'eavenward. Ooh wee! Dat crack! Dat sight none should see but \'er lovin\' man! Frightful! Runnin\' fer dee hills right now I iz, oh yes I iz!
September 7th, 2024 14:43
~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free of trouble here, but formerly massive amounts of self control required when in late October, right in the middle of my favorite TV programme a group of three foot high individuals would knock and through paper horror masks Woo Woo….. Terrifying….
September 6th, 2024 20:07
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free of trouble here, but formerly massive amounts of self control required when in late October, right in the middle of my favorite TV programme a group of three foot high individuals would knock and through paper horror masks Woo Woo….. Terrifying….
September 6th, 2024 20:07
~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh dear! Where\'s that, precisely? In TX??? I used to go every moonlit night and wander in our 3 acre yard, nestling beneath one of the huge Maples to revel in it all every Summer and Fall. This is too lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 6th, 2024 11:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh dear! Where\'s that, precisely? In TX??? I used to go every moonlit night and wander in our 3 acre yard, nestling beneath one of the huge Maples to revel in it all every Summer and Fall. This is too lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 6th, 2024 11:33
~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet
Cassie58 said:
Quite a different sonnet Thad. Refreshingly different. No romance here. No moonlight walking for me lol. Have a great Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:23
Cassie58 said:
Quite a different sonnet Thad. Refreshingly different. No romance here. No moonlight walking for me lol. Have a great Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:23
~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
May I contribute my mini limerick?
Poor old Clyde the turkey was booked
To be on Thanksgiving day cooked
He hid as a lamp
(Exceedingly camp)
But Clyde did not shine when they looked………
Keep e\'m coming - great fun (this one wasn\'t easy; had three goes before it came out..) Felt I had to make the effort as I\'m vegetarian!
September 5th, 2024 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
May I contribute my mini limerick?
Poor old Clyde the turkey was booked
To be on Thanksgiving day cooked
He hid as a lamp
(Exceedingly camp)
But Clyde did not shine when they looked………
Keep e\'m coming - great fun (this one wasn\'t easy; had three goes before it came out..) Felt I had to make the effort as I\'m vegetarian!
September 5th, 2024 16:52
~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun! I declare! My la, and that picture accompanying this is obvious perfection. What a veritable treat. Thank you very much!
September 5th, 2024 15:16
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun! I declare! My la, and that picture accompanying this is obvious perfection. What a veritable treat. Thank you very much!
September 5th, 2024 15:16
~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks
sorenbarrett said:
Thad, I’ve told you before I like limerick and this is a good one. It gave me a smile and that’s worth quite a bit.
September 5th, 2024 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
Thad, I’ve told you before I like limerick and this is a good one. It gave me a smile and that’s worth quite a bit.
September 5th, 2024 13:49
.`~ My Rain Of Love For You, ~.`
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving sonnet Thad, I feel very much the same about my Mary.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving sonnet Thad, I feel very much the same about my Mary.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:41
.`~ My Rain Of Love For You, ~.`
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, he waxes eloquent and must surely love her for lo, he\'s written her a sonnet!!! Jane Austen reflected the notion of that age in her novels and it was a sign of courtship when suitors penned sonnets for their intended ladies. This is a charming and most adorable example. I do so love it! Thank you very much for sharing!
September 4th, 2024 21:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, he waxes eloquent and must surely love her for lo, he\'s written her a sonnet!!! Jane Austen reflected the notion of that age in her novels and it was a sign of courtship when suitors penned sonnets for their intended ladies. This is a charming and most adorable example. I do so love it! Thank you very much for sharing!
September 4th, 2024 21:05
.`~ My Rain Of Love For You, ~.`
Caring dove said:
Nice writing like the mention of nature in this …
September 4th, 2024 09:11
Caring dove said:
Nice writing like the mention of nature in this …
September 4th, 2024 09:11
~ Bloody Red Riding Hood!
sorenbarrett said:
This nursery rhyme seems more fit for older people. At least I would expect, reading it to my grandchildren would give them nightmares. A Dark writing, but also a fun read. Loved your rhyming in this poem.
September 4th, 2024 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
This nursery rhyme seems more fit for older people. At least I would expect, reading it to my grandchildren would give them nightmares. A Dark writing, but also a fun read. Loved your rhyming in this poem.
September 4th, 2024 04:54
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy -
Cassie58 said:
What wonderful memories you brought me this Wednesday morning Thad. Reminded me of my little pirate:) Not so little now. Towers over me. An endearing read. Have a great day.
September 4th, 2024 03:34
Cassie58 said:
What wonderful memories you brought me this Wednesday morning Thad. Reminded me of my little pirate:) Not so little now. Towers over me. An endearing read. Have a great day.
September 4th, 2024 03:34
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy -
Goldfinch60 said:
Those childhood days were so special in our lives Thad and can bring back wonderful memories.
Andy
September 4th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those childhood days were so special in our lives Thad and can bring back wonderful memories.
Andy
September 4th, 2024 01:17
~ Bloody Red Riding Hood!
Dan Williams said:
Warren Zevon says hello. Good work.
September 4th, 2024 00:45
Dan Williams said:
Warren Zevon says hello. Good work.
September 4th, 2024 00:45
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy -
Dan Williams said:
With a nod to \"Puff the Magic Dragon\" very nice.
September 4th, 2024 00:42
Dan Williams said:
With a nod to \"Puff the Magic Dragon\" very nice.
September 4th, 2024 00:42
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy -
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww. How sweet! They\'re so adorable cavorting in imaginary realms until grounded and brought back to Terra ferma by good old milk and cookies.
September 3rd, 2024 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww. How sweet! They\'re so adorable cavorting in imaginary realms until grounded and brought back to Terra ferma by good old milk and cookies.
September 3rd, 2024 19:53
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy -
Doggerel Dave said:
Fight the good fight with all your might; let them villains know what\'s right... and just be home in time for tea....👍
Enjoyed muchly, Thad.
September 3rd, 2024 17:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Fight the good fight with all your might; let them villains know what\'s right... and just be home in time for tea....👍
Enjoyed muchly, Thad.
September 3rd, 2024 17:20
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy -
sorenbarrett said:
Brings back memories of childhood. I used to love those cookies. Thank you for sharing the innocence of youth in this poem.
September 3rd, 2024 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Brings back memories of childhood. I used to love those cookies. Thank you for sharing the innocence of youth in this poem.
September 3rd, 2024 16:45
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