Comments received on poems by AmIAPoet-QuestionMark
The Great Reset
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes an existential search and journey. Nicely done raw and outspoken. Well done
January 5th, 2026 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
This poem becomes an existential search and journey. Nicely done raw and outspoken. Well done
January 5th, 2026 16:50
Emotions
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the inner conflict between vulnerability and the desire for connection, highlighting the struggle to express love and the impact of past trauma on present emotions. The poet grapples with their inner child and the complexities of self-identity, ultimately revealing the exhaustion of trying to project love and happiness while feeling misunderstood and burdened by past experiences.
January 3rd, 2026 19:00
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the inner conflict between vulnerability and the desire for connection, highlighting the struggle to express love and the impact of past trauma on present emotions. The poet grapples with their inner child and the complexities of self-identity, ultimately revealing the exhaustion of trying to project love and happiness while feeling misunderstood and burdened by past experiences.
January 3rd, 2026 19:00
Emotions
sorenbarrett said:
Self revelation in this work. Nicely told revealing what the hood shields. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Self revelation in this work. Nicely told revealing what the hood shields. Well done
January 3rd, 2026 18:07
The Wall Calleth
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide a selfish act seldom considers the other that it will affect. A great write.
December 16th, 2025 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
Suicide a selfish act seldom considers the other that it will affect. A great write.
December 16th, 2025 14:15
The Colors of Love
sorenbarrett said:
I love the creative use of colors and each\'s meaning in this poem. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
I love the creative use of colors and each\'s meaning in this poem. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 04:08
Go
sorenbarrett said:
A most inventive shape poem that is very nicely done. Love it
June 24th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most inventive shape poem that is very nicely done. Love it
June 24th, 2025 04:31
The Tragedy
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write of the slow and sometimes painful deterioration of love, friendship, life etc, leaving ones self sitting wondering where it all went wrong, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 04:14
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write of the slow and sometimes painful deterioration of love, friendship, life etc, leaving ones self sitting wondering where it all went wrong, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 04:14
The Tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
I take this metaphorically to be not just people but a representation of care, love that end up dwindling and dying with nothing left but remorse. A dark poem of demise and deterioration. Well written
June 18th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
I take this metaphorically to be not just people but a representation of care, love that end up dwindling and dying with nothing left but remorse. A dark poem of demise and deterioration. Well written
June 18th, 2025 03:41
The Light in the Room
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed longing and desire for somthing they can no longer have, well written
June 4th, 2025 00:35
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed longing and desire for somthing they can no longer have, well written
June 4th, 2025 00:35
The Light in the Room
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic images and a longing feel very nice
June 3rd, 2025 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic images and a longing feel very nice
June 3rd, 2025 19:03
Please, Don\'t Move Your Hand
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and sensual this poem undresses love. Very nice
June 2nd, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and sensual this poem undresses love. Very nice
June 2nd, 2025 05:01
Please, Don\'t Move Your Hand
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully romantic and touching write of being utterly smitten in love, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:36
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderfully romantic and touching write of being utterly smitten in love, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:36
Please, Don\'t Move Your Hand
Caring dove said:
Such a lovely writing ! Love the mention of the butterfly .. so much gentleness in these words
June 2nd, 2025 02:11
Caring dove said:
Such a lovely writing ! Love the mention of the butterfly .. so much gentleness in these words
June 2nd, 2025 02:11
Holding on to Dust
sorenbarrett said:
Uncertainty and timidity conquered by the courage to try and confront fears. To bare oneself to the world and take chances. Raw and powerful a good write
March 31st, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Uncertainty and timidity conquered by the courage to try and confront fears. To bare oneself to the world and take chances. Raw and powerful a good write
March 31st, 2025 04:36
Holding on to Dust
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and passionate with good imagery, for roots to take hold and grow strong they have to planted in a safe place and looked after, until that happens they will never grow, well written and expressed write
March 31st, 2025 02:28
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and passionate with good imagery, for roots to take hold and grow strong they have to planted in a safe place and looked after, until that happens they will never grow, well written and expressed write
March 31st, 2025 02:28
In or out??
Poetic Licence said:
To me I get the sense of giving more than they get back and feeling they are not appreciated, passionate write
March 6th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
To me I get the sense of giving more than they get back and feeling they are not appreciated, passionate write
March 6th, 2025 05:09
In or out??
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds to me like you have already decided. Good logic too bad logic does not work on the heart.
March 6th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
It sounds to me like you have already decided. Good logic too bad logic does not work on the heart.
March 6th, 2025 03:47
I am a Flower
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this read and the idea that humans are like flowers, we clearly have a lot in common with them, nice write
February 10th, 2025 03:46
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed this read and the idea that humans are like flowers, we clearly have a lot in common with them, nice write
February 10th, 2025 03:46
Failed Compromise
burnerphone said:
this is a good poem, i love how you put the words together, hope you\'re doing well now
January 2nd, 2025 12:01
burnerphone said:
this is a good poem, i love how you put the words together, hope you\'re doing well now
January 2nd, 2025 12:01
Drugs...mmmkay?
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya. The bombshell. Nothing like beginning to learn what truly matters, and what doesn\'t. Doubtless many envied you the honors, but I\'ll guarantee none envied you the memorable part. Beautifully rendered with a crushing poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 19:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya. The bombshell. Nothing like beginning to learn what truly matters, and what doesn\'t. Doubtless many envied you the honors, but I\'ll guarantee none envied you the memorable part. Beautifully rendered with a crushing poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 19:58
The Mad Freeway Minnie Van Lady
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh dude! I love, love, LOVE this!!!! Just please do me a favor and never ride without a helmet. That said, have you an opinion of Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance? Into the Wind? At one point years ago most of my six younger brothers were licensed motorcycle riders or wannabes, now I think only a couple still ride. Maybe when I grow up I\'ll finally join you all.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and striking poignancy, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh dude! I love, love, LOVE this!!!! Just please do me a favor and never ride without a helmet. That said, have you an opinion of Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance? Into the Wind? At one point years ago most of my six younger brothers were licensed motorcycle riders or wannabes, now I think only a couple still ride. Maybe when I grow up I\'ll finally join you all.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and striking poignancy, I love it. Thank you for sharing.
December 25th, 2024 18:52
The Mad Freeway Minnie Van Lady
sorenbarrett said:
Whether riding, driving, watching the sea or whatever there is a Zen mood hypnotized and zoned out. Time has little meaning and so does what ever around us. A wonderful write.
December 25th, 2024 16:49
sorenbarrett said:
Whether riding, driving, watching the sea or whatever there is a Zen mood hypnotized and zoned out. Time has little meaning and so does what ever around us. A wonderful write.
December 25th, 2024 16:49
The Doc Good Will Hunted Me
Poetic Licence said:
A lifetime of pain coming from childhood, and you get the sense they are carrying there fathers pain as well. It`s more than ok to cry and say i am hurting, at that point you can start the long healing process. Wish you all the best.
December 24th, 2024 14:18
Poetic Licence said:
A lifetime of pain coming from childhood, and you get the sense they are carrying there fathers pain as well. It`s more than ok to cry and say i am hurting, at that point you can start the long healing process. Wish you all the best.
December 24th, 2024 14:18
Again
Cheeky Missy said:
Sometimes it seems like it does, albeit the ache and scar never do; we wouldn\'t be what we are if those did, though, you know? Beautifully rendered with heartwrenching poignancy and superb imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 22nd, 2024 18:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Sometimes it seems like it does, albeit the ache and scar never do; we wouldn\'t be what we are if those did, though, you know? Beautifully rendered with heartwrenching poignancy and superb imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 22nd, 2024 18:08
Again
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful piece of writing disclosing the trauma and stresses you have been through, and you can clearly feel the pain and anguish in the writing. I feel writing can help (it is not the be all and end all) but it can help, things can become a little clearer to try and understand if written in front of you. Thank you for your honesty in this piece of work, Wishing Best wishes
December 22nd, 2024 13:59
Poetic Licence said:
A very powerful piece of writing disclosing the trauma and stresses you have been through, and you can clearly feel the pain and anguish in the writing. I feel writing can help (it is not the be all and end all) but it can help, things can become a little clearer to try and understand if written in front of you. Thank you for your honesty in this piece of work, Wishing Best wishes
December 22nd, 2024 13:59
Again
Cassie58 said:
I have always found writing to be a therapy. I was most moved by the trauma
you and your family have been through. A most sad situation. I can offer no more other than to say, I hear you and you convey your pain so well. All good wishes.
December 22nd, 2024 13:07
Cassie58 said:
I have always found writing to be a therapy. I was most moved by the trauma
you and your family have been through. A most sad situation. I can offer no more other than to say, I hear you and you convey your pain so well. All good wishes.
December 22nd, 2024 13:07
« Return to the profile of AmIAPoet-QuestionMark
