Comments received on poems by Charlotte3



YHWH
orchidee said:

A fine write C. Yes, we can\'t have life without breath or spirit.
Also - rhythm -a word with no vowels, though some say \'y\' is used as a vowel sometimes!

October 5th, 2024 14:28

YHWH
2781 said:

I tend to stay safe and call Him Father.

October 5th, 2024 10:27

The journey with Christ
orchidee said:

Good write C.

September 29th, 2024 11:19

The trumpet bell tolls
pablo said:

Serious philosophy and sound advice.

September 28th, 2024 12:04

Pain demands to be felt
Tony36 said:

Love it

September 21st, 2024 17:23

The journey
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 14th, 2024 21:08

The First 12
ForeverJesus7 said:

I enjoyed this piece. Still, you don\'t have to categorize Christianity as religion.
Persistence is Key

September 8th, 2024 22:02

Free will
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 31st, 2024 19:12

When God steps back, chaos fills the gap
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting concept.

August 24th, 2024 18:45

When God steps back, chaos fills the gap
Mackenz said:

Nice write

August 24th, 2024 15:39

The unforgiving Christian
sorenbarrett said:

True for all beliefs there are those that follow and those that just want to identify with the belief but don\'t believe. Nicely written \" By their fruits ye shall know them\"

August 4th, 2024 14:03

A girl I used to know
sorenbarrett said:

A declaration of strength nicely written giving credit to God.

July 27th, 2024 19:56

A girl I used to know
2781 said:

Ye have not chosen me but I have chosen you, and ordained you, that ye should go and bring forth fruit, and that your fruit should remain: that whatsoever ye shall ask of the Father in my name, he may give it to you.

July 27th, 2024 08:38

The trumpet bell tolls
orchidee said:

Good write C.
King Hezekiah in the Old Testament was a bit \'I\'m all right, Jack\'. He said \'Ahh, it\'s good that prophesied trouble won\'t come in MY days\'.

July 21st, 2024 01:50

The trumpet bell tolls
2781 said:

To everything there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven:

July 20th, 2024 18:31

The story of two gardens
orchidee said:

Good write C.
I suppose we have to be among the \'gentiles\', though not follow worldly ways.

July 20th, 2024 01:18

Anoint me
orchidee said:

Good write C.

July 14th, 2024 14:07

Anoint me
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 14th, 2024 12:40

The weight of the wait
Qurrathul Ain said:

Reading this flattened out so many of my questions. I think we just need a constant reminder, that whatever He has planned for us is the best. When we don\'t get what we want, that is also for our best. It must mean that we are destined for something better than what we\'ve lost. Thank you for this!

July 3rd, 2024 21:26

A reason to be thankful
𓆩Maseπ“†ͺ said:

Beautiful write!

July 1st, 2024 01:22

The chains of fear
Tony36 said:

Excellent

June 16th, 2024 14:45

Time
Thomas W Case said:

Great work. So true.

June 14th, 2024 14:37

To Love
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Indeed we do! A beautiful reminder for all! Thank you for sharing this!

June 10th, 2024 07:38

I am at war
Doggerel Dave said:

I have no religion. So I usually avoid pins which have religious connotations in their title or pseudonym.
Not long out of bed – still sleepy, saw β€˜war’ and went for it.
Glad I did – I found it well structured with a coherent argument, which I like.
So just one small question (which you can afford to ignore): Just what is the role of God? Noninterventionist? A bystander?
Did enjoy the poem, though. 😊


June 8th, 2024 19:00

A debt I owe
2781 said:

That\'s truth. I think the greatest sin is when we crucify him, all over again.

June 7th, 2024 01:28

Little Butterfly
Bird In Red said:

So beautifully written! I think my soul turned into a butterfly while reading it.

June 6th, 2024 15:39