Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine tasty write Brian.

September 19th, 2017 03:11

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHRISTINA ~ Thanks for your love and contribution to this FUSION ~ Pleased you like the \"Final Edition\" we do make a good Poetic Team and we must do it again sometime ! All we need is a TITLE (Theme) and a STRUCTURE ~ let me know if your MUSE moves ! Brotherly HUGS ~ BRIAN Your Poetic Soul Mate ~ @@@@@@@@@@

September 18th, 2017 18:17

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
myself and me said:

A love pair write a love poem in a love mood.

September 18th, 2017 15:27

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
FredPeyer said:

Two showers in only four stanzas! Am all for it, as long as the showers are taken together! :-)
Fun piece, great writing!
And as far as having the last word is concerned Brian, you can tell her: OK, have the last word...excuse yourself!

September 18th, 2017 13:09

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
malubotelho said:

Lovely love collaboration between you two. Great you are

September 18th, 2017 12:33

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Christina8 said:

It was a pleasure to collaborate with you! It\'s neat seeing how it all came together. Will be watching for the cartoon changes-Hugs-Christina

September 18th, 2017 06:45

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Fay Slimm. said:

Your collab struck all the right notes for me on the wonderful subject of love - well done you two.

September 18th, 2017 05:14

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:

Another spiffingly good collab - well done both.

September 18th, 2017 03:44

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is the absolute combing of souls travelling towards eternity.
Good write both of you.

September 18th, 2017 02:51

LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN
orchidee said:

Knew I would swoon! heehee. Good write.

September 18th, 2017 01:46

HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. We, our Church Choir, are already practising an anthem to sing on Harvest Sunday so I will be there.

September 18th, 2017 00:51

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
malubotelho said:

Well said Brian. We need to find solutions and bring it up to big media and government to help.

September 17th, 2017 17:35

HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY
FredPeyer said:

Very fine writing again, Brian!

September 17th, 2017 15:11

HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem! I really liked the last stanza of your write! I know God always knows my needs before I ask. Good authors notes--Can\'t stand the \"$19 wall to wall diners\" I can\'t even eat that much! Gluttony for sure! Fine write! Hugs-Christina

September 17th, 2017 11:06

HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY
orchidee said:

A fine write Brain. if put as 8-line stanzas, it fits the tune for \'Come, ye thankful people, come\' with minor adjustments.
I must have me meters, but it don\'t need to rhyme!
I\'m gonna swoon tomorrow then.... but I\'m conscious today! lol.

September 17th, 2017 07:05

HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY
Fay Slimm. said:

A true and humble estimate of God\'s great goodness as harvest is gathered - - a perceptive verse Brian and thank you for sharing God\'s great generosity

September 17th, 2017 03:09

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
myself and me said:

I do not know how could we change that. When I was young, I like to live in big city too.
Thank you for bring this up.

September 16th, 2017 18:21

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

You wrote a very fine and informative acrostic, Brian! I hope we can get leaders that know climate change is not a myth and we all work together to make ourselves as green as possible! Well done! Hugs-Christina

September 16th, 2017 14:21

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

The last two lines are so very true. Good write.

September 16th, 2017 10:11

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

As long as the jobs are in the big cities, people will flock there. Then, after they made their money, they move back to the small towns.

September 16th, 2017 04:59

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Accidental Poet said:

Sadly, your words ring hard and true. Man has been oblivious to his impact upon his world. A great but sad write Brian.

September 16th, 2017 03:46

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

A great reminder of the problems we have and face in the future.

September 16th, 2017 03:26

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Of course I knew those former civilisations, being around in person in 10,000 BC. I\'m very old you know. heehee.

September 16th, 2017 01:48

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Fay Slimm. said:

Stunning form and clever rhyming - a treat of a mirror-read Brian my friend.

September 15th, 2017 13:54

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

September 15th, 2017 12:07

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
malubotelho said:

Very nice writing Brian. I liked to fish when I was a child. It is fun. Now I feel sorry for the fish. Prefer to buy them so I don\'t see it dying

September 15th, 2017 11:19

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
WL Schuett said:

Nicely done ✅

September 15th, 2017 11:13

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Brian.

September 15th, 2017 08:08

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
myself and me said:

It is \"Mirror\" Friday. You are fishing here, and Michael Edwards \"Well fed Am I\'. Now I start to think, what fed him?
Beautiful mirrored piece.

September 15th, 2017 07:59

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Christina8 said:

Great job! I\'ve never fished at night so I wouldn\'t know (unless you count the wee hours of the morning) but you did an awesome job on your mirror poem! Hugs-Christina

September 15th, 2017 06:35



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