Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

As long as the jobs are in the big cities, people will flock there. Then, after they made their money, they move back to the small towns.

September 16th, 2017 04:59

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

A great reminder of the problems we have and face in the future.

September 16th, 2017 03:26

C I V I L I Z A T I O N OK ? An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Of course I knew those former civilisations, being around in person in 10,000 BC. I\'m very old you know. heehee.

September 16th, 2017 01:48

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Fay Slimm. said:

Stunning form and clever rhyming - a treat of a mirror-read Brian my friend.

September 15th, 2017 13:54

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

September 15th, 2017 12:07

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
malubotelho said:

Very nice writing Brian. I liked to fish when I was a child. It is fun. Now I feel sorry for the fish. Prefer to buy them so I don\'t see it dying

September 15th, 2017 11:19

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
WL Schuett said:

Nicely done ✅

September 15th, 2017 11:13

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Brian.

September 15th, 2017 08:08

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
myself and me said:

It is \"Mirror\" Friday. You are fishing here, and Michael Edwards \"Well fed Am I\'. Now I start to think, what fed him?
Beautiful mirrored piece.

September 15th, 2017 07:59

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Christina8 said:

Great job! I\'ve never fished at night so I wouldn\'t know (unless you count the wee hours of the morning) but you did an awesome job on your mirror poem! Hugs-Christina

September 15th, 2017 06:35

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Yep, I understand it even if whole lines are written backwards, after a few sherries! I would say then - Write fine A!
Oh do shut up Orchi, and put that sherry down! lol.

September 15th, 2017 03:47

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
FredPeyer said:

Brian, nice work. Can you do this for ice fishing too? If yes, don\'t forget the whiskey!

September 15th, 2017 03:31

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Frank Prem said:

Nice work Brian.

September 15th, 2017 02:34

FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM
Michael Edwards said:

Brilliant - it must be mirror day today Brian

September 15th, 2017 02:33

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
malubotelho said:

You guys are really great together. I can barely write my little things without having to think too much.

September 14th, 2017 23:47

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
myself and me said:

This collaboration will sure last long (4300 miles).
Congratulation, you found your soul mate.

September 14th, 2017 12:32

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
Christina8 said:

Very good acrostic! I\'ve only done a few collaborations but they are fun! You guys should keep doing them. You work well together! Hugs-Christina

September 14th, 2017 08:55

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
Goldfinch60 said:

you two have a great way of combining, keep it up.

September 14th, 2017 08:33

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
drchito fl said:

Briansodes, this type of poetry is tricky because you have to start the lines with a certain letter, and you still have to get your message across!
Well done!
Drchito fl

September 14th, 2017 08:31

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
WL Schuett said:

Great work you two a joy to read ....

September 14th, 2017 07:56

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Oohh collaboratiana - or whatever! heehee.

September 14th, 2017 07:53

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
FredPeyer said:

It IS fun to read your collaboration poems! Maybe one day, when I feel real adventurous, I\'ll be looking for a poetic soulmate to try this.

September 14th, 2017 03:51

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
Fay Slimm. said:

Cheers to both fabulous poets for your collabs - keep up the good work.

September 14th, 2017 02:53

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
Michael Edwards said:

I take my hat to you both - great result from two super poets.

September 14th, 2017 02:10

C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet !
orchidee said:

Sounds a good idea, to collabor-wotsit. I can\'t say these long words. Anything over 3 syllables that is. lol.

September 14th, 2017 02:05

SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA
Goldfinch60 said:

Glorious tankas from you both.

September 13th, 2017 23:39

SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA
malubotelho said:

They all so beautiful. Can not choose a verse and can not choose a season. I love all of them. Each has a different interest. If I would choose one of the trees I would choose the second one. The colorful one. So pretty. You two are amazing together. Awesome writing.

September 13th, 2017 23:04

SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA
myself and me said:

\"Seasons of love\", another beautiful fruit of collaboration.
The structure, the content, the color and the picture fit perfect.

September 13th, 2017 12:07

SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA
Christina8 said:

Wonderful collaboration! Did Santita do Spring and Fall? Either way, these are simply fabulous! Great set of Tankas! Hugs to both--Christina

September 13th, 2017 10:53

SEASONS OF LOVE ~ TANKAS ~ COLLABORATION ~ BRIAN & SANTITA
FredPeyer said:

A wonderful collaboration. You changed basic math from 1+1=2 to 1+1=3

September 13th, 2017 10:41



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