Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
orchidee said:
It\'s Long Metre (8888 = LM). Found a tune: Gelobt Sei Gott [God be Praised]. Hymn: \'Christ is the King! O friends upraise\'.
There are 3 lines of 8 syllables each verse, plus a line of three \'Alleluias\' as the last line of each verse.
Need one more line for the last verse! I can get a bit formal and waffly though!
October 1st, 2017 09:10
orchidee said:
It\'s Long Metre (8888 = LM). Found a tune: Gelobt Sei Gott [God be Praised]. Hymn: \'Christ is the King! O friends upraise\'.
There are 3 lines of 8 syllables each verse, plus a line of three \'Alleluias\' as the last line of each verse.
Need one more line for the last verse! I can get a bit formal and waffly though!
October 1st, 2017 09:10
GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
Christina8 said:
Wonderful sunday write Brian. With the world the way it is, I think we all need to be reminded that God is by our side. (footprints in the sand does apply well as Fred aptly said)--Spiritual hugs-Christina
October 1st, 2017 08:19
Christina8 said:
Wonderful sunday write Brian. With the world the way it is, I think we all need to be reminded that God is by our side. (footprints in the sand does apply well as Fred aptly said)--Spiritual hugs-Christina
October 1st, 2017 08:19
GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
orchidee said:
A fine psalm-poem Brian. There\'s a danger I may find a tune to it, then sing it! Meoowwo! lol.
October 1st, 2017 06:56
orchidee said:
A fine psalm-poem Brian. There\'s a danger I may find a tune to it, then sing it! Meoowwo! lol.
October 1st, 2017 06:56
GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of faith and encouragement this inspiring read Brian - how we all need this assurance whatever our reasons.
October 1st, 2017 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of faith and encouragement this inspiring read Brian - how we all need this assurance whatever our reasons.
October 1st, 2017 05:15
GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
FredPeyer said:
Remember that story where Jesus said I always walk with you, and the man said I only see one set of foot prints in the sand, and Jesus said that was when I was carrying you!
Kind of fits your poem.
October 1st, 2017 02:54
FredPeyer said:
Remember that story where Jesus said I always walk with you, and the man said I only see one set of foot prints in the sand, and Jesus said that was when I was carrying you!
Kind of fits your poem.
October 1st, 2017 02:54
SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
FredPeyer said:
I must say, Brian, you picked the right one! Great poem, she must have helped you a lot!
I signed up on this internet muse referral service, where you answer a hundred questions and they will match you with the perfect muse, but haven\'t found anybody yet.
September 30th, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
I must say, Brian, you picked the right one! Great poem, she must have helped you a lot!
I signed up on this internet muse referral service, where you answer a hundred questions and they will match you with the perfect muse, but haven\'t found anybody yet.
September 30th, 2017 12:24
SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
WL Schuett said:
I never knew about the 9 muses , looks like you picked a good one or she picked you , cool poem
September 30th, 2017 08:56
WL Schuett said:
I never knew about the 9 muses , looks like you picked a good one or she picked you , cool poem
September 30th, 2017 08:56
SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem! Lovely picture too. I had never heard of Erato before this but this poem is sweet! Hugs--Christina
September 30th, 2017 07:40
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem! Lovely picture too. I had never heard of Erato before this but this poem is sweet! Hugs--Christina
September 30th, 2017 07:40
SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. but I\'m not getting far me self:
Oh woe, woe, where can I find so soon
A muse that will not make me swoon?!\' lol
September 30th, 2017 05:39
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. but I\'m not getting far me self:
Oh woe, woe, where can I find so soon
A muse that will not make me swoon?!\' lol
September 30th, 2017 05:39
SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
Fay Slimm. said:
Both the picture and words have that wonderful appeal that only you and your muse produce dear Brian.
September 30th, 2017 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Both the picture and words have that wonderful appeal that only you and your muse produce dear Brian.
September 30th, 2017 05:13
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA HERMOSA SANTITA ~ Gracias por Tu Collaboracion en este Poema. To collalborate on the ELEMENTS was your idea initially ~ i don\'t think you realised there we so many (Broma privata !) BUT we selected three each and the outcome is Perfect ! SIX of my FAVORITE ELEMENTS in one Tanked Up Poem ~ AWESOME ! Besos y Abrazos Poeticas ~ BRIAN XOXOX Brian Afficionado de Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas XOXOX
September 29th, 2017 15:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA HERMOSA SANTITA ~ Gracias por Tu Collaboracion en este Poema. To collalborate on the ELEMENTS was your idea initially ~ i don\'t think you realised there we so many (Broma privata !) BUT we selected three each and the outcome is Perfect ! SIX of my FAVORITE ELEMENTS in one Tanked Up Poem ~ AWESOME ! Besos y Abrazos Poeticas ~ BRIAN XOXOX Brian Afficionado de Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas XOXOX
September 29th, 2017 15:47
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Tony36 said:
Great writes
September 29th, 2017 12:59
Tony36 said:
Great writes
September 29th, 2017 12:59
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Azura Nightsong said:
I dunno I like silver and bismuth hehe. Chemistry is fun, and there are many fascinating elements.
September 29th, 2017 10:41
Azura Nightsong said:
I dunno I like silver and bismuth hehe. Chemistry is fun, and there are many fascinating elements.
September 29th, 2017 10:41
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
malubotelho said:
What a lovely gift from you two. This is beautiful and fun too. I was watching the series about Einstein the genius not long ago. I love to study and my main interest now is the quantum physics but I like chemistry too. I dye fabrics and need to use some chemicals to make it stabilized. Like to use organic dyes home made for just small amount of fabric. Thanks Brian and Santita.
September 29th, 2017 08:32
malubotelho said:
What a lovely gift from you two. This is beautiful and fun too. I was watching the series about Einstein the genius not long ago. I love to study and my main interest now is the quantum physics but I like chemistry too. I dye fabrics and need to use some chemicals to make it stabilized. Like to use organic dyes home made for just small amount of fabric. Thanks Brian and Santita.
September 29th, 2017 08:32
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Christina8 said:
Hi Brian! Nice tankas. You both did very well in this together. I\'m not that old but I swear I don\'t remember a few of these elements in the periodic table! Very good Brian and Santita!
September 29th, 2017 04:59
Christina8 said:
Hi Brian! Nice tankas. You both did very well in this together. I\'m not that old but I swear I don\'t remember a few of these elements in the periodic table! Very good Brian and Santita!
September 29th, 2017 04:59
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:
Great tankas - congrats to you both.
September 29th, 2017 03:47
Michael Edwards said:
Great tankas - congrats to you both.
September 29th, 2017 03:47
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
FredPeyer said:
Well done, you two! But the subject matter is something I don\'t want to see in my spare time. Have enough to do with it during working hours!
September 29th, 2017 03:09
FredPeyer said:
Well done, you two! But the subject matter is something I don\'t want to see in my spare time. Have enough to do with it during working hours!
September 29th, 2017 03:09
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
orchidee said:
Good write there. Doh! I was OK until I got to the oxygen verse, then I needed some cos of a swoon!
Also, I tried doing without oxygen for 24 hours - a whole day. It was rather bad for my health. I\'m dead now! oohh.
September 29th, 2017 03:09
orchidee said:
Good write there. Doh! I was OK until I got to the oxygen verse, then I needed some cos of a swoon!
Also, I tried doing without oxygen for 24 hours - a whole day. It was rather bad for my health. I\'m dead now! oohh.
September 29th, 2017 03:09
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Goldfinch60 said:
This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my career and the number of elements in the Periodic Table was only 104.
September 29th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my career and the number of elements in the Periodic Table was only 104.
September 29th, 2017 02:24
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Fay Slimm. said:
Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever set of Oxymorons on the word love - - well penned.
September 28th, 2017 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever set of Oxymorons on the word love - - well penned.
September 28th, 2017 16:16
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
malubotelho said:
Great fun write baby Brian. Like you said we always want to make harmless things not so ok to do. I had an amicable divorce that my ex never signed. We are good friends now. He keeps calling me everyday.
September 28th, 2017 14:59
malubotelho said:
Great fun write baby Brian. Like you said we always want to make harmless things not so ok to do. I had an amicable divorce that my ex never signed. We are good friends now. He keeps calling me everyday.
September 28th, 2017 14:59
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Azura Nightsong said:
Some of these make me laugh terribly hard. (And since I\'m in English class I probably shouldn\'t(don\'t worry I\'m done with my work)) The others are kind of sad, but they are truths people need to learn. I enjoyed this greatly.
However, there is such thing as a break up at least that ends up with still being friends, my parents an example, which I am so thankful for.
September 28th, 2017 13:21
Azura Nightsong said:
Some of these make me laugh terribly hard. (And since I\'m in English class I probably shouldn\'t(don\'t worry I\'m done with my work)) The others are kind of sad, but they are truths people need to learn. I enjoyed this greatly.
However, there is such thing as a break up at least that ends up with still being friends, my parents an example, which I am so thankful for.
September 28th, 2017 13:21
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Christina8 said:
I have to agree with GF on the amicable divorce one--I have known quite a few people to get along with ex\'s. But there are quite a few good ones in here! i just can\'t pick one as my favorite. Great job! Sisterly hugs--Christina
September 28th, 2017 06:16
Christina8 said:
I have to agree with GF on the amicable divorce one--I have known quite a few people to get along with ex\'s. But there are quite a few good ones in here! i just can\'t pick one as my favorite. Great job! Sisterly hugs--Christina
September 28th, 2017 06:16
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
orchidee said:
A fine write B. As I\'m millions of years old, I would know about positions! Did I pass on my experience to you, for that line?! heehee.
September 28th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write B. As I\'m millions of years old, I would know about positions! Did I pass on my experience to you, for that line?! heehee.
September 28th, 2017 01:48
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Goldfinch60 said:
Some good writes but I would disagree with \'amicable divorce\' I am divorced from my first wife 38 years ago but still we talk to each other and in fact she and her husband and Joyce and myself have got together many times over the years without any acrimony, we both remarried in the same year, 1981.
September 28th, 2017 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Some good writes but I would disagree with \'amicable divorce\' I am divorced from my first wife 38 years ago but still we talk to each other and in fact she and her husband and Joyce and myself have got together many times over the years without any acrimony, we both remarried in the same year, 1981.
September 28th, 2017 01:44
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
FredPeyer said:
You got me thinking, Brian. There must be a lot more of these relationship oxymorons in our every day life. Well penned!
September 28th, 2017 01:15
FredPeyer said:
You got me thinking, Brian. There must be a lot more of these relationship oxymorons in our every day life. Well penned!
September 28th, 2017 01:15
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
FredPeyer said:
Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original subject matter of a Ghazal (love, separtion, pain of love), it does not seem to follow the original form of couplets with the second line rhyming with the original stanza.
But hey, as a poet you have artistic freedom, and no matter what, I do love it!
September 27th, 2017 11:09
FredPeyer said:
Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original subject matter of a Ghazal (love, separtion, pain of love), it does not seem to follow the original form of couplets with the second line rhyming with the original stanza.
But hey, as a poet you have artistic freedom, and no matter what, I do love it!
September 27th, 2017 11:09
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