Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Christina8 said:

Looks like our lighthearted collab. turned out okay. I did own those animals in another lifetime. Amusing poems. Soul sister Christina

October 3rd, 2017 19:52

DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
marielababy said:

new here and I already love your poetry , it\'s just so stunning!!!

October 3rd, 2017 18:04

PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:

Great fun collab - super work both.

October 3rd, 2017 14:33

PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - love the flow and rhyme in this fun read from you two clever poets.

October 3rd, 2017 13:42

PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN
FredPeyer said:

A fun collaboration of the two of you. Enjoyed every word!

October 3rd, 2017 11:31

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
DeeDee said:

Very inspiring indeed! I want to go on one now!

October 3rd, 2017 08:33

PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN
orchidee said:

Delightful write from you two! Very apt too. Did you know it\'s National Animal Day on 4th Oct? We\'ve had cats, mice, hamsters, fish, just about everything over the years. And 4 piggies at present - two of them look like the ones in my pic.

October 3rd, 2017 08:09

PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for collaborating CHRISTINA ! Thanks for the alacrity (Nurses are always quick on the job !) with which you chose your Pets and produced two very amusing poems. The photo looks real cute. You are a PERFECT MPS FRIEND ~ Hugs ~ Soul Brother BRIAN @@@@@@@

October 3rd, 2017 03:49

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - you make ballooning so worth a try Brian - - the experience must be fantastic. Thanks for sharing the treat of flying surrounded by silence.

October 2nd, 2017 16:48

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Pintu Mahakul said:

BALLOONS ~ They are so elegant and they fly with silky wings with nice hope in so far sky. Wonderful imagery is drawn in this poem. Brightness is seen with eagerness. Brilliant poem is shared here.

October 2nd, 2017 15:49

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Azura Nightsong said:

I\'ve never been in a hot air balloon, and everyone thinks I\'m crazy because I want to :)

October 2nd, 2017 13:47

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Clearsky94 said:

Lovely poem Brian, always wanted to go in a hot air balloon! :) x

October 2nd, 2017 12:12

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Tony36 said:

Great write, nothing like a balloon ride over the countryside

October 2nd, 2017 10:31

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
malubotelho said:

Sweet writing Brian baby. I love the images of the colorful balloons but don\'t trust them enough.

October 2nd, 2017 09:21

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

We should take certain people with us, who are full of hot air! Save buying the gas! Names being..... (insert own answer).

October 2nd, 2017 08:09

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I have never been up in one but we used to have a hit air balloon festival in our town s few years ago and I have some great pictures of them.

October 2nd, 2017 07:47

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Great poem. I would be deathly afraid--just too afraid of heights to go on one. You do well with rhyming acrostics! Hugs-Christina

October 2nd, 2017 06:15

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

Great Poem, Brian! Love hot air balloons.

October 2nd, 2017 04:35

HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Yes I\'ve been up and what a great experience - mind you we did have a bad landing on one occasion in which I ended up straddling a young lady (mind you she was the same age as me at the time) in a very suggestive manner. Luckily she saw the funny side of it and we both up in fits of laughter. Love the write Brian.

October 2nd, 2017 02:45

GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
Goldfinch60 said:

Amen Brian, Amen indeed.

October 2nd, 2017 00:38

GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
orchidee said:

It\'s Long Metre (8888 = LM). Found a tune: Gelobt Sei Gott [God be Praised]. Hymn: \'Christ is the King! O friends upraise\'.
There are 3 lines of 8 syllables each verse, plus a line of three \'Alleluias\' as the last line of each verse.
Need one more line for the last verse! I can get a bit formal and waffly though!

October 1st, 2017 09:10

GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
Christina8 said:

Wonderful sunday write Brian. With the world the way it is, I think we all need to be reminded that God is by our side. (footprints in the sand does apply well as Fred aptly said)--Spiritual hugs-Christina

October 1st, 2017 08:19

GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
orchidee said:

A fine psalm-poem Brian. There\'s a danger I may find a tune to it, then sing it! Meoowwo! lol.

October 1st, 2017 06:56

GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
Fay Slimm. said:

Full of faith and encouragement this inspiring read Brian - how we all need this assurance whatever our reasons.

October 1st, 2017 05:15

GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN !
FredPeyer said:

Remember that story where Jesus said I always walk with you, and the man said I only see one set of foot prints in the sand, and Jesus said that was when I was carrying you!
Kind of fits your poem.

October 1st, 2017 02:54

SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
FredPeyer said:

I must say, Brian, you picked the right one! Great poem, she must have helped you a lot!
I signed up on this internet muse referral service, where you answer a hundred questions and they will match you with the perfect muse, but haven\'t found anybody yet.

September 30th, 2017 12:24

SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
WL Schuett said:

I never knew about the 9 muses , looks like you picked a good one or she picked you , cool poem

September 30th, 2017 08:56

SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem! Lovely picture too. I had never heard of Erato before this but this poem is sweet! Hugs--Christina

September 30th, 2017 07:40

SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. but I\'m not getting far me self:
Oh woe, woe, where can I find so soon
A muse that will not make me swoon?!\' lol

September 30th, 2017 05:39

SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE !
Fay Slimm. said:

Both the picture and words have that wonderful appeal that only you and your muse produce dear Brian.

September 30th, 2017 05:13



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