Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA HERMOSA SANTITA ~ Gracias por Tu Collaboracion en este Poema. To collalborate on the ELEMENTS was your idea initially ~ i don\'t think you realised there we so many (Broma privata !) BUT we selected three each and the outcome is Perfect ! SIX of my FAVORITE ELEMENTS in one Tanked Up Poem ~ AWESOME ! Besos y Abrazos Poeticas ~ BRIAN XOXOX Brian Afficionado de Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas XOXOX
September 29th, 2017 15:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA HERMOSA SANTITA ~ Gracias por Tu Collaboracion en este Poema. To collalborate on the ELEMENTS was your idea initially ~ i don\'t think you realised there we so many (Broma privata !) BUT we selected three each and the outcome is Perfect ! SIX of my FAVORITE ELEMENTS in one Tanked Up Poem ~ AWESOME ! Besos y Abrazos Poeticas ~ BRIAN XOXOX Brian Afficionado de Haiku ~ Senryu ~ Tankas XOXOX
September 29th, 2017 15:47
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Tony36 said:
Great writes
September 29th, 2017 12:59
Tony36 said:
Great writes
September 29th, 2017 12:59
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Azura Nightsong said:
I dunno I like silver and bismuth hehe. Chemistry is fun, and there are many fascinating elements.
September 29th, 2017 10:41
Azura Nightsong said:
I dunno I like silver and bismuth hehe. Chemistry is fun, and there are many fascinating elements.
September 29th, 2017 10:41
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
malubotelho said:
What a lovely gift from you two. This is beautiful and fun too. I was watching the series about Einstein the genius not long ago. I love to study and my main interest now is the quantum physics but I like chemistry too. I dye fabrics and need to use some chemicals to make it stabilized. Like to use organic dyes home made for just small amount of fabric. Thanks Brian and Santita.
September 29th, 2017 08:32
malubotelho said:
What a lovely gift from you two. This is beautiful and fun too. I was watching the series about Einstein the genius not long ago. I love to study and my main interest now is the quantum physics but I like chemistry too. I dye fabrics and need to use some chemicals to make it stabilized. Like to use organic dyes home made for just small amount of fabric. Thanks Brian and Santita.
September 29th, 2017 08:32
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Christina8 said:
Hi Brian! Nice tankas. You both did very well in this together. I\'m not that old but I swear I don\'t remember a few of these elements in the periodic table! Very good Brian and Santita!
September 29th, 2017 04:59
Christina8 said:
Hi Brian! Nice tankas. You both did very well in this together. I\'m not that old but I swear I don\'t remember a few of these elements in the periodic table! Very good Brian and Santita!
September 29th, 2017 04:59
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Michael Edwards said:
Great tankas - congrats to you both.
September 29th, 2017 03:47
Michael Edwards said:
Great tankas - congrats to you both.
September 29th, 2017 03:47
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
FredPeyer said:
Well done, you two! But the subject matter is something I don\'t want to see in my spare time. Have enough to do with it during working hours!
September 29th, 2017 03:09
FredPeyer said:
Well done, you two! But the subject matter is something I don\'t want to see in my spare time. Have enough to do with it during working hours!
September 29th, 2017 03:09
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
orchidee said:
Good write there. Doh! I was OK until I got to the oxygen verse, then I needed some cos of a swoon!
Also, I tried doing without oxygen for 24 hours - a whole day. It was rather bad for my health. I\'m dead now! oohh.
September 29th, 2017 03:09
orchidee said:
Good write there. Doh! I was OK until I got to the oxygen verse, then I needed some cos of a swoon!
Also, I tried doing without oxygen for 24 hours - a whole day. It was rather bad for my health. I\'m dead now! oohh.
September 29th, 2017 03:09
SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN
Goldfinch60 said:
This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my career and the number of elements in the Periodic Table was only 104.
September 29th, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my career and the number of elements in the Periodic Table was only 104.
September 29th, 2017 02:24
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Fay Slimm. said:
Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever set of Oxymorons on the word love - - well penned.
September 28th, 2017 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever set of Oxymorons on the word love - - well penned.
September 28th, 2017 16:16
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
malubotelho said:
Great fun write baby Brian. Like you said we always want to make harmless things not so ok to do. I had an amicable divorce that my ex never signed. We are good friends now. He keeps calling me everyday.
September 28th, 2017 14:59
malubotelho said:
Great fun write baby Brian. Like you said we always want to make harmless things not so ok to do. I had an amicable divorce that my ex never signed. We are good friends now. He keeps calling me everyday.
September 28th, 2017 14:59
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Azura Nightsong said:
Some of these make me laugh terribly hard. (And since I\'m in English class I probably shouldn\'t(don\'t worry I\'m done with my work)) The others are kind of sad, but they are truths people need to learn. I enjoyed this greatly.
However, there is such thing as a break up at least that ends up with still being friends, my parents an example, which I am so thankful for.
September 28th, 2017 13:21
Azura Nightsong said:
Some of these make me laugh terribly hard. (And since I\'m in English class I probably shouldn\'t(don\'t worry I\'m done with my work)) The others are kind of sad, but they are truths people need to learn. I enjoyed this greatly.
However, there is such thing as a break up at least that ends up with still being friends, my parents an example, which I am so thankful for.
September 28th, 2017 13:21
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Christina8 said:
I have to agree with GF on the amicable divorce one--I have known quite a few people to get along with ex\'s. But there are quite a few good ones in here! i just can\'t pick one as my favorite. Great job! Sisterly hugs--Christina
September 28th, 2017 06:16
Christina8 said:
I have to agree with GF on the amicable divorce one--I have known quite a few people to get along with ex\'s. But there are quite a few good ones in here! i just can\'t pick one as my favorite. Great job! Sisterly hugs--Christina
September 28th, 2017 06:16
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
orchidee said:
A fine write B. As I\'m millions of years old, I would know about positions! Did I pass on my experience to you, for that line?! heehee.
September 28th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write B. As I\'m millions of years old, I would know about positions! Did I pass on my experience to you, for that line?! heehee.
September 28th, 2017 01:48
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
Goldfinch60 said:
Some good writes but I would disagree with \'amicable divorce\' I am divorced from my first wife 38 years ago but still we talk to each other and in fact she and her husband and Joyce and myself have got together many times over the years without any acrimony, we both remarried in the same year, 1981.
September 28th, 2017 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Some good writes but I would disagree with \'amicable divorce\' I am divorced from my first wife 38 years ago but still we talk to each other and in fact she and her husband and Joyce and myself have got together many times over the years without any acrimony, we both remarried in the same year, 1981.
September 28th, 2017 01:44
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE !
FredPeyer said:
You got me thinking, Brian. There must be a lot more of these relationship oxymorons in our every day life. Well penned!
September 28th, 2017 01:15
FredPeyer said:
You got me thinking, Brian. There must be a lot more of these relationship oxymorons in our every day life. Well penned!
September 28th, 2017 01:15
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
FredPeyer said:
Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original subject matter of a Ghazal (love, separtion, pain of love), it does not seem to follow the original form of couplets with the second line rhyming with the original stanza.
But hey, as a poet you have artistic freedom, and no matter what, I do love it!
September 27th, 2017 11:09
FredPeyer said:
Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original subject matter of a Ghazal (love, separtion, pain of love), it does not seem to follow the original form of couplets with the second line rhyming with the original stanza.
But hey, as a poet you have artistic freedom, and no matter what, I do love it!
September 27th, 2017 11:09
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
Michael Edwards said:
Thankfully I\'m just over 18 and can read this - nice one Brian
September 27th, 2017 08:27
Michael Edwards said:
Thankfully I\'m just over 18 and can read this - nice one Brian
September 27th, 2017 08:27
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
orchidee said:
But seriously, it should be marked 18+. You\'ll get shot, leading under 18\'s astray! oohh.
September 27th, 2017 08:13
orchidee said:
But seriously, it should be marked 18+. You\'ll get shot, leading under 18\'s astray! oohh.
September 27th, 2017 08:13
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
Christina8 said:
This piece was really well written and parts of it made me giggle too! This is one of your saucier writes, which I like! Really great job! Hugs-Christina
September 27th, 2017 06:11
Christina8 said:
This piece was really well written and parts of it made me giggle too! This is one of your saucier writes, which I like! Really great job! Hugs-Christina
September 27th, 2017 06:11
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
orchidee said:
Oh heck, this should be 18+, seeing as I\'m sometimes telling people off for not ticking the 18+ box! I do it for my own sake too, to reduce the swoons.
Not at this time of the (UK) morning surely, Brian?! heehee.
September 27th, 2017 01:42
orchidee said:
Oh heck, this should be 18+, seeing as I\'m sometimes telling people off for not ticking the 18+ box! I do it for my own sake too, to reduce the swoons.
Not at this time of the (UK) morning surely, Brian?! heehee.
September 27th, 2017 01:42
DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL
Louis Gibbs said:
You and Santita are on fire this morning, B! Very clever.
September 27th, 2017 00:10
Louis Gibbs said:
You and Santita are on fire this morning, B! Very clever.
September 27th, 2017 00:10
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........?
Azura Nightsong said:
I love and play music myself. Though I typically play more jazz and listen to rock, classical can be very cool as well. As long as it sends me somewhere I am happy.
Sincerely, Azzy
September 26th, 2017 15:34
Azura Nightsong said:
I love and play music myself. Though I typically play more jazz and listen to rock, classical can be very cool as well. As long as it sends me somewhere I am happy.
Sincerely, Azzy
September 26th, 2017 15:34
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........?
malubotelho said:
Music is really a touching for the soul. I was watching LALALAND last night. Beautiful movie with musical. Another great poem baby Brian. I forgot to go to your fusion. Sorry, been too busy lately.
September 26th, 2017 14:39
malubotelho said:
Music is really a touching for the soul. I was watching LALALAND last night. Beautiful movie with musical. Another great poem baby Brian. I forgot to go to your fusion. Sorry, been too busy lately.
September 26th, 2017 14:39
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........?
FredPeyer said:
You know Brian, I love the music, but what I find so awesome is how these composers could \'hear\' the whole orchestra in their minds. Especially Beethoven, after going deaf, is an incredible example of this God-given talent.
Thanks for posting this poem!
September 26th, 2017 11:46
FredPeyer said:
You know Brian, I love the music, but what I find so awesome is how these composers could \'hear\' the whole orchestra in their minds. Especially Beethoven, after going deaf, is an incredible example of this God-given talent.
Thanks for posting this poem!
September 26th, 2017 11:46
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........?
Pintu Mahakul said:
Tortured mind resounds but life still hears the tender music of life and love of God to get recovery from obstacles and stress. Classic sounds of music vibrate mind and give new essence. Classical Musicians who have faithful perseverance have kept them alive. Amen! May God bless them all. Excellent poem is shared here.
September 26th, 2017 08:25
Pintu Mahakul said:
Tortured mind resounds but life still hears the tender music of life and love of God to get recovery from obstacles and stress. Classic sounds of music vibrate mind and give new essence. Classical Musicians who have faithful perseverance have kept them alive. Amen! May God bless them all. Excellent poem is shared here.
September 26th, 2017 08:25
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........?
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the food of life, good music, which transcends all other languages! Well done, Brian.
September 26th, 2017 08:13
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the food of life, good music, which transcends all other languages! Well done, Brian.
September 26th, 2017 08:13
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........?
Michael Edwards said:
Classical music is my choice every time - you can do away with all the rest but keep the classical - well writ B
September 26th, 2017 07:01
Michael Edwards said:
Classical music is my choice every time - you can do away with all the rest but keep the classical - well writ B
September 26th, 2017 07:01
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