Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet
dusk arising said:
Wonderful feeling to offer that bridge for another soul and ask nothing. Nice writing.
August 27th, 2017 08:15
dusk arising said:
Wonderful feeling to offer that bridge for another soul and ask nothing. Nice writing.
August 27th, 2017 08:15
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet
malubotelho said:
Brother Brian, you\'ve touched me with your prayer. So lovely the way you pray. I was like that before looking for understanding, looking for answers everywhere. I found the answer when I stoped to look for understanding. It is like love. One can only love. No need to understand. Thanks for this beauty
August 27th, 2017 08:04
malubotelho said:
Brother Brian, you\'ve touched me with your prayer. So lovely the way you pray. I was like that before looking for understanding, looking for answers everywhere. I found the answer when I stoped to look for understanding. It is like love. One can only love. No need to understand. Thanks for this beauty
August 27th, 2017 08:04
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet
FredPeyer said:
I love your prayer/poem, Brian. So many times in life we DO need this bridge over troubled waters!
Btw, I am going to ask you to join my circle of friends. I always read and comment on their submittals first, and then, if I have time, I look in the general section. Reading your poems would make it so much easier if you are in the friend section!
August 27th, 2017 03:03
FredPeyer said:
I love your prayer/poem, Brian. So many times in life we DO need this bridge over troubled waters!
Btw, I am going to ask you to join my circle of friends. I always read and comment on their submittals first, and then, if I have time, I look in the general section. Reading your poems would make it so much easier if you are in the friend section!
August 27th, 2017 03:03
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Brian
August 27th, 2017 02:22
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Brian
August 27th, 2017 02:22
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good prayer Brian. Amen.
August 27th, 2017 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good prayer Brian. Amen.
August 27th, 2017 02:09
BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. I think it was the David-Bathsheba episode, as some describe it, that led to this Psalm. Now look, Solomon, how did you manage your harem of about 1,000 women?! (it says somewhere in the Bible). Swoon! lol.
August 27th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. I think it was the David-Bathsheba episode, as some describe it, that led to this Psalm. Now look, Solomon, how did you manage your harem of about 1,000 women?! (it says somewhere in the Bible). Swoon! lol.
August 27th, 2017 01:48
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic Brian and tribute to one of our wonderful poets on this site.
August 27th, 2017 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic Brian and tribute to one of our wonderful poets on this site.
August 27th, 2017 00:39
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
myself and me said:
\"WHY are we scared of the Night ?\"
Because I am afraid the monster in the closet could come out and eat me.
A blue office with a blue mind.
Nice writing.
August 26th, 2017 19:44
myself and me said:
\"WHY are we scared of the Night ?\"
Because I am afraid the monster in the closet could come out and eat me.
A blue office with a blue mind.
Nice writing.
August 26th, 2017 19:44
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
myself and me said:
Thank you for speaking for us. Today, I just post a cinquain, which she encouraged me to try.
August 26th, 2017 19:29
myself and me said:
Thank you for speaking for us. Today, I just post a cinquain, which she encouraged me to try.
August 26th, 2017 19:29
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely focusing point though Brian. Nicely done.
August 26th, 2017 12:55
dusk arising said:
Such a lovely focusing point though Brian. Nicely done.
August 26th, 2017 12:55
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:
Wonderful acrostic! I love how you lift us all up!! Hugs-Christina
August 26th, 2017 11:48
Christina8 said:
Wonderful acrostic! I love how you lift us all up!! Hugs-Christina
August 26th, 2017 11:48
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
malubotelho said:
I love Santita and I did not see her yet today. Hei Santita. Look 👀 for you. So adorable. Thanks Brian. Beautiful words.
August 26th, 2017 11:22
malubotelho said:
I love Santita and I did not see her yet today. Hei Santita. Look 👀 for you. So adorable. Thanks Brian. Beautiful words.
August 26th, 2017 11:22
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
orchidee said:
I swooned! I thought you was singing MY praises alone! heehee. A true write.
August 26th, 2017 04:59
orchidee said:
I swooned! I thought you was singing MY praises alone! heehee. A true write.
August 26th, 2017 04:59
S A N T I T A ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:
Hear hear !! Well written - well said.
August 26th, 2017 02:49
Michael Edwards said:
Hear hear !! Well written - well said.
August 26th, 2017 02:49
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
malubotelho said:
A nice writing Brian, as always a new subject to write. It is not my case either. Still working and don\'t know if I will retire with the economy as it is with Trump ruling he might cut our retirement. I want to get two pensions. Here and in Brazil. Let\'s see. I\'m a self employed person. I\'m the candy girl and the bikini lady. 😂😂😂
August 25th, 2017 16:16
malubotelho said:
A nice writing Brian, as always a new subject to write. It is not my case either. Still working and don\'t know if I will retire with the economy as it is with Trump ruling he might cut our retirement. I want to get two pensions. Here and in Brazil. Let\'s see. I\'m a self employed person. I\'m the candy girl and the bikini lady. 😂😂😂
August 25th, 2017 16:16
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:
A remedy I heard about doing, just as you put your head on the pillow, is to think of all the good things you accomplished that day, instead of what you did not. That is what will settle within you as you sleep. I am glad your life is happy Dear Brian. I was a little bummed about your subject, but it is well pointed out.
August 25th, 2017 12:00
WriteBeLight said:
A remedy I heard about doing, just as you put your head on the pillow, is to think of all the good things you accomplished that day, instead of what you did not. That is what will settle within you as you sleep. I am glad your life is happy Dear Brian. I was a little bummed about your subject, but it is well pointed out.
August 25th, 2017 12:00
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Well you already know about my life but I think your poem was fantastic!!! There are so many people that hate their job and I\'m glad that I don\'t know anyone close to me that feel that way. Most people I know retire at about 62-65 and thats the plan for us. Great work! Hugs-Christina
August 25th, 2017 11:02
Christina8 said:
Well you already know about my life but I think your poem was fantastic!!! There are so many people that hate their job and I\'m glad that I don\'t know anyone close to me that feel that way. Most people I know retire at about 62-65 and thats the plan for us. Great work! Hugs-Christina
August 25th, 2017 11:02
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
ShannonXx said:
A great write!! Nice one Brian
August 25th, 2017 10:24
ShannonXx said:
A great write!! Nice one Brian
August 25th, 2017 10:24
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Work? WORK? Oh yes I remember work. I have now been retired for over five years having done mu forty seven years and one month working consistently during all that time.
I am having a good day thank you Brian.
August 25th, 2017 07:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Work? WORK? Oh yes I remember work. I have now been retired for over five years having done mu forty seven years and one month working consistently during all that time.
I am having a good day thank you Brian.
August 25th, 2017 07:39
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
dusk arising said:
I will be working till aged 70 at least thanks to tat credit crunch and the current state of the economy in UK. Nicely written.
August 25th, 2017 04:30
dusk arising said:
I will be working till aged 70 at least thanks to tat credit crunch and the current state of the economy in UK. Nicely written.
August 25th, 2017 04:30
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Certainly here in the UK I am one of the lucky generation having retired early with good pensions - our children and all subsequent generations will not be so lucky . Liked the poem Brian although I find that troubles seem far worse at night in the hours of darkness when the mind wanders.
August 25th, 2017 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
Certainly here in the UK I am one of the lucky generation having retired early with good pensions - our children and all subsequent generations will not be so lucky . Liked the poem Brian although I find that troubles seem far worse at night in the hours of darkness when the mind wanders.
August 25th, 2017 04:28
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Even though it\'s not your typical life, I did enjoy!
August 25th, 2017 04:22
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Even though it\'s not your typical life, I did enjoy!
August 25th, 2017 04:22
ANOTHER BLUE DAY AT THE OFFICE ! A Blank Verse Sonnet
orchidee said:
Good write Brian.
August 25th, 2017 03:25
orchidee said:
Good write Brian.
August 25th, 2017 03:25
I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
myself and me said:
Another shape done. I bet this Pyramid poem will last longer than the Pyramid itself.
Excellent.
August 24th, 2017 20:04
myself and me said:
Another shape done. I bet this Pyramid poem will last longer than the Pyramid itself.
Excellent.
August 24th, 2017 20:04
I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
tealblueturtle said:
This was really interesting to read, and I liked it a lot!!
August 24th, 2017 19:53
tealblueturtle said:
This was really interesting to read, and I liked it a lot!!
August 24th, 2017 19:53
I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
sue.evans said:
I like your pyramid poem Brian. I will have to experiment with this and other shape poems- easier with pen and paper though than electronically fir some shapes! Have visited the Pyramids at Giza 😊
August 24th, 2017 15:51
sue.evans said:
I like your pyramid poem Brian. I will have to experiment with this and other shape poems- easier with pen and paper though than electronically fir some shapes! Have visited the Pyramids at Giza 😊
August 24th, 2017 15:51
I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! I\'ve long dreamt of seeing the pyramids! Maybe someday. Very creative poem. Hugs-Christina
August 24th, 2017 10:55
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! I\'ve long dreamt of seeing the pyramids! Maybe someday. Very creative poem. Hugs-Christina
August 24th, 2017 10:55
I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
malubotelho said:
Like the feeling on your writing. Another place I get to visit. I visit it with a mantra non meditation. Well, I\'ve tried but never succeeded yet.
August 24th, 2017 09:06
malubotelho said:
Like the feeling on your writing. Another place I get to visit. I visit it with a mantra non meditation. Well, I\'ve tried but never succeeded yet.
August 24th, 2017 09:06
I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
orchidee said:
A fine shaped write Brian.
August 24th, 2017 08:29
orchidee said:
A fine shaped write Brian.
August 24th, 2017 08:29
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