Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
tealblueturtle said:

This was really interesting to read, and I liked it a lot!!


August 24th, 2017 19:53

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
sue.evans said:

I like your pyramid poem Brian. I will have to experiment with this and other shape poems- easier with pen and paper though than electronically fir some shapes! Have visited the Pyramids at Giza 😊

August 24th, 2017 15:51

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem! I\'ve long dreamt of seeing the pyramids! Maybe someday. Very creative poem. Hugs-Christina

August 24th, 2017 10:55

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
malubotelho said:

Like the feeling on your writing. Another place I get to visit. I visit it with a mantra non meditation. Well, I\'ve tried but never succeeded yet.

August 24th, 2017 09:06

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
WriteBeLight said:

Well done Brian!

August 24th, 2017 08:39

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
orchidee said:

A fine shaped write Brian.

August 24th, 2017 08:29

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

August 24th, 2017 08:02

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Michael Edwards said:

Great structure written to perfection.

August 24th, 2017 06:52

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Mandi said:

Sounds like fun to be had by the pyramids. I love it ❤😄

August 24th, 2017 06:42

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem, but we\'ll agree to disagree on the peas! :-) But a fish dinner is fit for a king. Or a Queen! :-) Hugs-Christina

August 23rd, 2017 18:07

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful picture to accompany such a lovely poem! I applaud your wide range of poetry. And no I have never had a 3 minute egg. Wouldn\'t mind trying one! Hugs-Christina

August 23rd, 2017 18:03

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Ternic73 said:

wonderfully written. You are a awesome poet

August 23rd, 2017 16:55

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
myself and me said:

Holly runny yoke egg. First diamond, now the hour glass. I bet you must a master of geometry.

Those words flowing from top to bottom, just like the sand in the hour glass. I will keep this in my kitchen, so next time, I won\'t over boil the egg.

August 23rd, 2017 15:32

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
malubotelho said:

Very interesting form and nice words. I remember my mom looking up at the sun and comparing the shades from trees to know the time. She knew exactly. What a science

August 23rd, 2017 13:57

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Sefrin said:

Beautifully written!

August 23rd, 2017 13:04

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - how I love soldiers dipped in runny egg-yolk and remember my Gran\'s lovely timer too. The hour-glass figure of your chosen image is yet more on the subject too in this perfectly formed word-pivot poem - - well done again Brian.

August 23rd, 2017 12:20

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Another clever write Brian.

August 23rd, 2017 07:59

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Louis Gibbs said:

Intriguingly shaped poem, Brian! To me, as you have probably observed from my work, the shape of a poem is an important element of its appeal. This one certainly catches the eye. Enjoyed!

August 23rd, 2017 06:57

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Brian.

August 23rd, 2017 03:43

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
dusk arising said:

What a figure! Nice one....Oh and good writing too


August 23rd, 2017 03:40

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Michael Edwards said:

Oh gosh yes and still have the egg cups but seldom use them these days - fond memories. Americans not familiar with them? How about the term \'Oh gosh\' very British. We British might be eccentric but we developed the language so there !! This is quite a work of art Brian - great piece.

August 23rd, 2017 03:34

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
myself and me said:

May I order two dishes. One for lunch, one for supper. Thank you.

August 22nd, 2017 21:37

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Azura Nightsong said:

Mmm food... these always make me hungry hehe
- Azuranna

August 22nd, 2017 17:58

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
burning-embers said:

Hate you!! I\'m on a diet. I know you\'re right tho..... oh my thoughts wander to the vast open spaces between me and the chippy, vinegar tears of regret salt my platter. Nice one!

August 22nd, 2017 14:07

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
malubotelho said:

Hum! Yummy!

August 22nd, 2017 13:39

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
WriteBeLight said:

That is nice Brian!

August 22nd, 2017 09:40

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
orchidee said:

A fine tasty write. Meanwhile, I \'m driving some people mad with me syllables thingy! lol

August 22nd, 2017 08:02

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Goldfinch60 said:

One of life\'s absolute musts to eat. Good write Brian.

August 22nd, 2017 08:01

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Fay Slimm. said:

A very yummy write my friend - and with a sprinkle of such classic form it indeed becomes a dish fit for kings. Great read.

August 22nd, 2017 04:12

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Michael Edwards said:

First Santita and now yourself - I must write one of these. This one is great as is the dish itself.

August 22nd, 2017 03:41



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