Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:
Thanks Brian. I\'m a bit un-cultuerd poetically, re: structures, etc,. I don\'t have any structure when I\'m on the sherries. I should write some rubbish when I\'ve had three or four! lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:07
orchidee said:
Thanks Brian. I\'m a bit un-cultuerd poetically, re: structures, etc,. I don\'t have any structure when I\'m on the sherries. I should write some rubbish when I\'ve had three or four! lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:07
LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Great structure as always Brian - works so well.
August 8th, 2017 05:10
Michael Edwards said:
Great structure as always Brian - works so well.
August 8th, 2017 05:10
LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfect form and structure to your appealing rhyme Brian - best of all wishes for your success with the lady.
August 8th, 2017 05:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfect form and structure to your appealing rhyme Brian - best of all wishes for your success with the lady.
August 8th, 2017 05:09
LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your love is out there for you.
August 8th, 2017 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your love is out there for you.
August 8th, 2017 02:39
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:
Wonderful acrostic! I do so much appreciate that you dedicated this sonnet to me!! And since I do live near the water, I do wish I got to get out on the lake more often. Blessed to live near it! This poem is very descriptive. Great structure. I know thats what you strive for! Love it! Hugs--Christina
August 7th, 2017 22:31
Christina8 said:
Wonderful acrostic! I do so much appreciate that you dedicated this sonnet to me!! And since I do live near the water, I do wish I got to get out on the lake more often. Blessed to live near it! This poem is very descriptive. Great structure. I know thats what you strive for! Love it! Hugs--Christina
August 7th, 2017 22:31
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Heather T said:
Brian, you always do such a fantastic job with these things. I don\'t know if I\'m disciplined enough! I enjoy living in a coastal state where I have the beauty of the mountains, but know I can reach the Atlantic coast in a few short hours! My favorite place to be is the NC Outer Banks.
August 7th, 2017 18:49
Heather T said:
Brian, you always do such a fantastic job with these things. I don\'t know if I\'m disciplined enough! I enjoy living in a coastal state where I have the beauty of the mountains, but know I can reach the Atlantic coast in a few short hours! My favorite place to be is the NC Outer Banks.
August 7th, 2017 18:49
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
malubotelho said:
Beautiful picture and another nice writing. Not scary at all, except for me because I can not swim.
August 7th, 2017 15:21
malubotelho said:
Beautiful picture and another nice writing. Not scary at all, except for me because I can not swim.
August 7th, 2017 15:21
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Azura Nightsong said:
I was raised on a freshwater lake, so saltwater isn\'t really my thing, but I still LOVE the water. My family always called me fish because once I got in I would never get out.
Lovely poem, and I learned a new word!
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 7th, 2017 14:32
Azura Nightsong said:
I was raised on a freshwater lake, so saltwater isn\'t really my thing, but I still LOVE the water. My family always called me fish because once I got in I would never get out.
Lovely poem, and I learned a new word!
Sincerely, Azuranna
August 7th, 2017 14:32
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
malubotelho said:
Amen. Beautiful and so glorious writing. May God grace be upon us.
August 7th, 2017 08:45
malubotelho said:
Amen. Beautiful and so glorious writing. May God grace be upon us.
August 7th, 2017 08:45
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'m a bit worried though! What about when the 1000 years are up?! Oh do stop worrying about EVERY thing Orchi! lol.
August 7th, 2017 05:59
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'m a bit worried though! What about when the 1000 years are up?! Oh do stop worrying about EVERY thing Orchi! lol.
August 7th, 2017 05:59
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Only wish I was closer but live
slam donk in the middle of the country - at least I\'ll be one of the last to be affected by rising tides.
August 7th, 2017 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
Only wish I was closer but live
slam donk in the middle of the country - at least I\'ll be one of the last to be affected by rising tides.
August 7th, 2017 04:04
THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and dedication.
August 7th, 2017 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and dedication.
August 7th, 2017 02:59
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem--AMEN! I loved the picture you picked to go with this. Thanks for always being so uplifting on Sunday! Hugs-Christina
August 6th, 2017 15:48
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem--AMEN! I loved the picture you picked to go with this. Thanks for always being so uplifting on Sunday! Hugs-Christina
August 6th, 2017 15:48
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine sentiment well expressed, my friend, but if all this came to pass, what would have been the point of leaving heaven to begin with? Wouldn\'t what you describe be heaven on earth? Just can\'t help wondering about such things, forgive me.
August 6th, 2017 10:56
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine sentiment well expressed, my friend, but if all this came to pass, what would have been the point of leaving heaven to begin with? Wouldn\'t what you describe be heaven on earth? Just can\'t help wondering about such things, forgive me.
August 6th, 2017 10:56
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Azura Nightsong said:
All of this is so true these days. It is needed and I hope it comes.
August 6th, 2017 10:30
Azura Nightsong said:
All of this is so true these days. It is needed and I hope it comes.
August 6th, 2017 10:30
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
orchidee said:
A fine write B. The Psalm was originally a prayer for King Solomon, I think! I would do a \'full face avi\' too, but the camera lens keep cracking! hmmm. lol.
August 6th, 2017 09:47
orchidee said:
A fine write B. The Psalm was originally a prayer for King Solomon, I think! I would do a \'full face avi\' too, but the camera lens keep cracking! hmmm. lol.
August 6th, 2017 09:47
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
rrodriguez said:
Excellent poem... we need peace & justice today. Wonderful poem my brother. Be blessed!
August 6th, 2017 09:28
rrodriguez said:
Excellent poem... we need peace & justice today. Wonderful poem my brother. Be blessed!
August 6th, 2017 09:28
PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY
Michael Edwards said:
May all those who have a God be touched by Him
August 6th, 2017 02:29
Michael Edwards said:
May all those who have a God be touched by Him
August 6th, 2017 02:29
L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic
SMD said:
This is amazing Brian!A tribute to your work :)
August 5th, 2017 17:16
SMD said:
This is amazing Brian!A tribute to your work :)
August 5th, 2017 17:16
TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply honoured for the dedication my friend - - the tragic tale of Isolde the \"trophy bride\" and told with your flair for the romantic captures the feel of Wagner\'s opera and brings back the sounds of its wonderful music. A real classic and penned as a sonnet is fit for a Queen !! This goes for sure into my favourites.
August 5th, 2017 10:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply honoured for the dedication my friend - - the tragic tale of Isolde the \"trophy bride\" and told with your flair for the romantic captures the feel of Wagner\'s opera and brings back the sounds of its wonderful music. A real classic and penned as a sonnet is fit for a Queen !! This goes for sure into my favourites.
August 5th, 2017 10:33
TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Brian. Bought classically from old times. I love those past classic romances. Thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2017 09:38
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Brian. Bought classically from old times. I love those past classic romances. Thanks for sharing
August 5th, 2017 09:38
TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'m too un-culture - in me sherry times anyway! - to know all this. A fine write Brian!
August 5th, 2017 08:55
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'m too un-culture - in me sherry times anyway! - to know all this. A fine write Brian!
August 5th, 2017 08:55
TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
Adri said:
\"Be careful what you drink, and who you drink it with,\" such a true statement. I always loved the story of Tristan and Isolde such a beautiful love story filled with sadness. I really enjoyed this poem Brian! Another one perfectly written! 🦋
August 5th, 2017 08:53
Adri said:
\"Be careful what you drink, and who you drink it with,\" such a true statement. I always loved the story of Tristan and Isolde such a beautiful love story filled with sadness. I really enjoyed this poem Brian! Another one perfectly written! 🦋
August 5th, 2017 08:53
MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY
Adri said:
Hell Brian! Just catching up on reading some poems! The title caught my attention. The word, \"tapestry\" brought fond memories back. This was an excellent poem it literally gave me chills. It captured my beliefs however, I also agree with Louis about the \"higher self.\" Your poems are always amazing! Thank you for sharing, always, 🦋
August 5th, 2017 08:40
Adri said:
Hell Brian! Just catching up on reading some poems! The title caught my attention. The word, \"tapestry\" brought fond memories back. This was an excellent poem it literally gave me chills. It captured my beliefs however, I also agree with Louis about the \"higher self.\" Your poems are always amazing! Thank you for sharing, always, 🦋
August 5th, 2017 08:40
TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
Like he choice of painting - our chemist is out of love potion at the moment. Informative poem Brian - thanks for posting.
August 5th, 2017 08:00
Michael Edwards said:
Like he choice of painting - our chemist is out of love potion at the moment. Informative poem Brian - thanks for posting.
August 5th, 2017 08:00
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
malubotelho said:
The number 9 is for me. Thanks for this beauty Brian.
August 4th, 2017 19:25
malubotelho said:
The number 9 is for me. Thanks for this beauty Brian.
August 4th, 2017 19:25
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
Christina8 said:
Another great example of Tanka! You never cease to amaze me with your positivity and educational bits you insert into your writes. Love it! Hugs--Christina
August 4th, 2017 19:24
Christina8 said:
Another great example of Tanka! You never cease to amaze me with your positivity and educational bits you insert into your writes. Love it! Hugs--Christina
August 4th, 2017 19:24
SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS !
WriteBeLight said:
Adds up to a great one Brian.
August 4th, 2017 12:31
WriteBeLight said:
Adds up to a great one Brian.
August 4th, 2017 12:31
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