Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

August 24th, 2017 08:02

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Michael Edwards said:

Great structure written to perfection.

August 24th, 2017 06:52

I SEE THE PYRAMIDS ! A Simple Form Poem
Mandi said:

Sounds like fun to be had by the pyramids. I love it ❤😄

August 24th, 2017 06:42

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Christina8 said:

Wonderful poem, but we\'ll agree to disagree on the peas! :-) But a fish dinner is fit for a king. Or a Queen! :-) Hugs-Christina

August 23rd, 2017 18:07

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Christina8 said:

Absolutely beautiful picture to accompany such a lovely poem! I applaud your wide range of poetry. And no I have never had a 3 minute egg. Wouldn\'t mind trying one! Hugs-Christina

August 23rd, 2017 18:03

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Ternic73 said:

wonderfully written. You are a awesome poet

August 23rd, 2017 16:55

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
myself and me said:

Holly runny yoke egg. First diamond, now the hour glass. I bet you must a master of geometry.

Those words flowing from top to bottom, just like the sand in the hour glass. I will keep this in my kitchen, so next time, I won\'t over boil the egg.

August 23rd, 2017 15:32

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
malubotelho said:

Very interesting form and nice words. I remember my mom looking up at the sun and comparing the shades from trees to know the time. She knew exactly. What a science

August 23rd, 2017 13:57

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Sefrin said:

Beautifully written!

August 23rd, 2017 13:04

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - how I love soldiers dipped in runny egg-yolk and remember my Gran\'s lovely timer too. The hour-glass figure of your chosen image is yet more on the subject too in this perfectly formed word-pivot poem - - well done again Brian.

August 23rd, 2017 12:20

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Another clever write Brian.

August 23rd, 2017 07:59

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Louis Gibbs said:

Intriguingly shaped poem, Brian! To me, as you have probably observed from my work, the shape of a poem is an important element of its appeal. This one certainly catches the eye. Enjoyed!

August 23rd, 2017 06:57

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Brian.

August 23rd, 2017 03:43

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
dusk arising said:

What a figure! Nice one....Oh and good writing too


August 23rd, 2017 03:40

HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem
Michael Edwards said:

Oh gosh yes and still have the egg cups but seldom use them these days - fond memories. Americans not familiar with them? How about the term \'Oh gosh\' very British. We British might be eccentric but we developed the language so there !! This is quite a work of art Brian - great piece.

August 23rd, 2017 03:34

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
myself and me said:

May I order two dishes. One for lunch, one for supper. Thank you.

August 22nd, 2017 21:37

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Azura Nightsong said:

Mmm food... these always make me hungry hehe
- Azuranna

August 22nd, 2017 17:58

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
burning-embers said:

Hate you!! I\'m on a diet. I know you\'re right tho..... oh my thoughts wander to the vast open spaces between me and the chippy, vinegar tears of regret salt my platter. Nice one!

August 22nd, 2017 14:07

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
malubotelho said:

Hum! Yummy!

August 22nd, 2017 13:39

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
WriteBeLight said:

That is nice Brian!

August 22nd, 2017 09:40

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
orchidee said:

A fine tasty write. Meanwhile, I \'m driving some people mad with me syllables thingy! lol

August 22nd, 2017 08:02

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Goldfinch60 said:

One of life\'s absolute musts to eat. Good write Brian.

August 22nd, 2017 08:01

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Fay Slimm. said:

A very yummy write my friend - and with a sprinkle of such classic form it indeed becomes a dish fit for kings. Great read.

August 22nd, 2017 04:12

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Michael Edwards said:

First Santita and now yourself - I must write one of these. This one is great as is the dish itself.

August 22nd, 2017 03:41

FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU
Frank Prem said:

Fit for a king indeed Brian. Nice presentation.

August 22nd, 2017 02:48

FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem
burning-embers said:

Clever stuff

August 21st, 2017 20:48

FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem
Christina8 said:

An awesome format you chose and it worked out wonderfully! You never cease to amaze what new type of poetry you are going to do from day to day. Love it! Hugs-Christina

August 21st, 2017 17:12

FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem
orchidee said:

An Epu-wotsit?! I must tune in for that!

August 21st, 2017 14:33

FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem
myself and me said:

Holly potato chip! A diamond with poem in it, even not seen one in museum. Far beyond nature power. I will keep this one in my safe box.

August 21st, 2017 09:47

FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem
malubotelho said:

Diamonds are to be shaped as poems. Gorgeous write Brian. Enjoyed reading. I have a series of pictures called from my window. Love the title. Intriguing.

August 21st, 2017 09:40



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