Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Love Is In The Air
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful rhythm to this. Had to favorite it!
March 6th, 2025 14:01
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful rhythm to this. Had to favorite it!
March 6th, 2025 14:01
The Success Of My Dreams.
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Not easy being a parent. Very wise words! A very important message.
March 6th, 2025 13:59
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Not easy being a parent. Very wise words! A very important message.
March 6th, 2025 13:59
The Success Of My Dreams.
Cassie58 said:
A meaningful write which speaks to me about the determination to hold tight to your own dreams. Too many parents thinking they know best thwart the aspirations in their offspring. Nicely penned Tobani. Have a happy Thursday.
March 6th, 2025 06:15
Cassie58 said:
A meaningful write which speaks to me about the determination to hold tight to your own dreams. Too many parents thinking they know best thwart the aspirations in their offspring. Nicely penned Tobani. Have a happy Thursday.
March 6th, 2025 06:15
The Success Of My Dreams.
David Wakeling said:
Yes excellent point.let children have a try even if they fail.Good poem
March 6th, 2025 05:45
David Wakeling said:
Yes excellent point.let children have a try even if they fail.Good poem
March 6th, 2025 05:45
The Success Of My Dreams.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Parents. Who needs them?! Wait a second...
March 6th, 2025 05:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Parents. Who needs them?! Wait a second...
March 6th, 2025 05:40
The Success Of My Dreams.
Doggerel Dave said:
Too much personal history to allow me to comment muchly on this. Let me just say \'Hear Hear\'!
March 6th, 2025 05:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Too much personal history to allow me to comment muchly on this. Let me just say \'Hear Hear\'!
March 6th, 2025 05:30
The Success Of My Dreams.
sorenbarrett said:
Seen so many times on sports fields. Well written and in a style that provokes thought and rereading. Very nicely done
March 6th, 2025 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
Seen so many times on sports fields. Well written and in a style that provokes thought and rereading. Very nicely done
March 6th, 2025 03:31
The Success Of My Dreams.
arqios said:
Some things do need to be said and shared before the damage is done. Good work. 🕊🙏🏻
March 6th, 2025 03:11
arqios said:
Some things do need to be said and shared before the damage is done. Good work. 🕊🙏🏻
March 6th, 2025 03:11
Love Is In The Air
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so strong when it comes comes your way Tobani, as it has done for me.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is so strong when it comes comes your way Tobani, as it has done for me.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:50
Love Is In The Air
Natalie Gladmir said:
I admire your indefatigable thirst for love. Keep it up!
March 5th, 2025 17:27
Natalie Gladmir said:
I admire your indefatigable thirst for love. Keep it up!
March 5th, 2025 17:27
Love Is In The Air
Cassie58 said:
Don’t do yourself down Tobani, this is a beautiful acrostic on love and I am shouting it out loud. A fine poem and very much enjoyed. Have a great evening.
March 5th, 2025 15:12
Cassie58 said:
Don’t do yourself down Tobani, this is a beautiful acrostic on love and I am shouting it out loud. A fine poem and very much enjoyed. Have a great evening.
March 5th, 2025 15:12
Love Is In The Air
Neville said:
these words could not possibly have fallen randomly or by chance in the order they have been so meticulously placed here .. this is surely a fine love poem in acrostic form, unless I am grossly mistaken .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:32
Neville said:
these words could not possibly have fallen randomly or by chance in the order they have been so meticulously placed here .. this is surely a fine love poem in acrostic form, unless I am grossly mistaken .. Neville
March 5th, 2025 10:32
Love Is In The Air
arqios said:
How good it is to love and be loved. And don’t worry, the expression of love is unique and very personal. Every sculptor needs a block before chipping away, I believe this is the same with poetry in a way of thinking and understanding it. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:09
arqios said:
How good it is to love and be loved. And don’t worry, the expression of love is unique and very personal. Every sculptor needs a block before chipping away, I believe this is the same with poetry in a way of thinking and understanding it. 🙏🏻🕊
March 5th, 2025 06:09
Love Is In The Air
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem has many elements of touching and tender lines that pull at heart strings. A poem of love of which all of us have written and in love innocence is our best tool.
March 5th, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem has many elements of touching and tender lines that pull at heart strings. A poem of love of which all of us have written and in love innocence is our best tool.
March 5th, 2025 05:56
Love Is In The Air
David Wakeling said:
Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem
March 5th, 2025 05:15
David Wakeling said:
Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem
March 5th, 2025 05:15
On The Outside Looking In
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing . There’s a nice softness to your words
March 5th, 2025 03:18
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing . There’s a nice softness to your words
March 5th, 2025 03:18
Reasons to leave Mexico
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to constructively add after your piece and Tristan\'s response. I\'ll shut up and fave it instead.
March 5th, 2025 01:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to constructively add after your piece and Tristan\'s response. I\'ll shut up and fave it instead.
March 5th, 2025 01:06
Seasons In a Year.
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing .. lovely to read this ))
March 4th, 2025 21:29
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing .. lovely to read this ))
March 4th, 2025 21:29
Reasons to leave Mexico
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. That\'s a macabre and ghastly list of ghoulish behaviors dealt out. Nothing like letting the demons run the show, I guess. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 4th, 2025 14:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. That\'s a macabre and ghastly list of ghoulish behaviors dealt out. Nothing like letting the demons run the show, I guess. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 4th, 2025 14:29
Reasons to leave Mexico
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. And here’s the kicker: Who arms those cartels? The U.S. of A! It turns out there is a lawsuit currently before the U.S. Supreme Court, where Mexico is suing American gun companies, including Smith & Wesson, for designing and selling firearms that end up in the hands of drug cartels. They claim that over 70% of the weapons used by these cartels originate from the United States.
Just read this in the news today. “God bless the USA,” right? We manufacture and sell the guns, then impose hefty tariffs on those countries we sell them to, all while they grapple with drug and gang violence fueled by our products.
Forgive me, anyone who isn’t American and is reading this. I am so disgusted with my country that I can hardly articulate it constructively—other than through poetry. But disgusting...that I find it all.
Now, back to your poem, well done my friend. You not only brought up a major humanitarian issue going on in Mexico, you also posted it on a day where some major news about the USAs impact on those cartels is becoming more and more clear and obvious. Timely and urgent. Well done,. friend. This gets a fave. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth. And here’s the kicker: Who arms those cartels? The U.S. of A! It turns out there is a lawsuit currently before the U.S. Supreme Court, where Mexico is suing American gun companies, including Smith & Wesson, for designing and selling firearms that end up in the hands of drug cartels. They claim that over 70% of the weapons used by these cartels originate from the United States.
Just read this in the news today. “God bless the USA,” right? We manufacture and sell the guns, then impose hefty tariffs on those countries we sell them to, all while they grapple with drug and gang violence fueled by our products.
Forgive me, anyone who isn’t American and is reading this. I am so disgusted with my country that I can hardly articulate it constructively—other than through poetry. But disgusting...that I find it all.
Now, back to your poem, well done my friend. You not only brought up a major humanitarian issue going on in Mexico, you also posted it on a day where some major news about the USAs impact on those cartels is becoming more and more clear and obvious. Timely and urgent. Well done,. friend. This gets a fave. 🌹👏
March 4th, 2025 10:05
Reasons to leave Mexico
arqios said:
So graphic and detailed! Never been and most probably never will set foot there. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:39
arqios said:
So graphic and detailed! Never been and most probably never will set foot there. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 4th, 2025 04:39
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