Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Angels Watching Over You
Simurgh said:

This poem is great with its heart touching messages. I like this poem and hope that you will share lot of your talents in poetry here.

February 5th, 2025 03:16

Voice of darkness
2781 said:

He the king over all the children of pride. It\'s never to late, ask and you shall receive.

February 5th, 2025 03:15

Silent Opinions
ginny jayne said:

So true are your words, I loved reading it ☺️

February 4th, 2025 18:30

Silent Opinions
rawaneigh.99 said:

I really love the energy and message in this! It’s like a call to action, reminding people to embrace their opinions and share them, even when it\'s challenging. The emphasis on the power of expressing ourselves and not staying silent rings true. It highlights the importance of participation and how it shapes the world around us. The line about “speaking the truth” really stands out—sometimes we hold back out of fear, but when we do speak up, even if it\'s just for our own peace of mind, we’re still making an impact.

February 4th, 2025 17:43

Silent Opinions
E.J. Waling said:

Wonderful work.. Many flames attest to your talent!

February 4th, 2025 16:12

Silent Opinions
hzugman said:

Right on! But that\'s just my opinion.

February 4th, 2025 14:52

Silent Opinions
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

February 4th, 2025 13:24

Silent Opinions
Cassie58 said:

No one should ever be afraid to express their own opinion out of fear of others not agreeing with them. We are all different, no two people are the same. This is a fine composition Tobani. Well done.

February 4th, 2025 07:20

Silent Opinions
sorenbarrett said:

In thought this poem is meta in that it voices its own opinion within a poem about that very subject. Very nicely stated and expressed in great meter

February 4th, 2025 04:54

Silent Opinions
arqios said:

Beautiful poem… I’ve been tinkering with one on the same topic/theme… but it isn’t ready yet. To have an opinion without being opinionated is quite a challenge at times. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊


February 4th, 2025 02:16

The Trap
Neville said:



We are all precisely where we are today because of the choices we made that are both good and bad .. and regardless of the outcomes of them .. Much enjoyed Neville

February 3rd, 2025 16:16

The Trap
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

A powerful write

February 3rd, 2025 13:21

The Trap
Bloomingdale said:

Death is freedom to some…I love this one nataiella

February 3rd, 2025 12:52

The Trap
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 3rd, 2025 10:43

The Trap
David Wakeling said:

Sounds like a dramatic life style that comes to a horrible end. He who lives by the sword dies by the sword. Well written

February 3rd, 2025 05:53

The Trap
sorenbarrett said:

Choices we make take us to where we are today and this may not be where we wanted to be. Bad choices bad results. Great write well written with good rhyme

February 3rd, 2025 04:14

The Trap
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for your feedback, it was quite rare back then, but today i should think it is very common.

February 3rd, 2025 03:19

The Trap
arqios said:

So sad so sorry. We all probably have someone we know that got swallowed up whole by The Trap! Very meaningful if somewhat painful as well. Superb read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊

February 3rd, 2025 03:10

Real Fake Beauty
Salvia.S said:

A poignant and thought provoking poem. Well written!

February 1st, 2025 23:46

Wise Man Say (1)
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

February 1st, 2025 21:15

Real Fake Beauty
E.J. Waling said:

So true. Nice work.
John

January 31st, 2025 20:00

Wise Man Say (1)
Cheeky Missy said:

Nothing like a bit of hearty good sense to set off the weekend in style! This is way too fun and too excellently said. Beautifully rendered in excellent good humor with a waltzing poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing!

January 31st, 2025 17:38

Real Fake Beauty
Cheeky Missy said:

You half wonder when she\'ll finally comprehend that the exterior trimmings don\'t truly add the beauty she imagined. Then again, there\'s the Kardashians who admit they wear cosmetics to hide themselves, as my close friend does likewise, where, crazily enough, I literally cannot tolerate my face if it\'s hidden by cosmetics. You could ask my friend if you wondered, since she had no sooner complimented me to high heaven over the \"French girl\" style of making up the face (which my late mother had carefully trained me to do), but I shortly washed my face clean, unable to tolerate my face thus \"hidden,\" or as I termed it, no longer my own face. You also remind me of a discussion on this topic years ago with one of my brothers who was disappointed when I listed off the multitudinous means my sex uses to \"enhance\" itself, or rather, attempt to deceive the opposite. Enough of that, however. Beautifully rendered with awesome imagery and a tastefully haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.

January 31st, 2025 17:34

Real Fake Beauty
Skally said:

Beautiful poem. Than you for sharing ! Well done :)

January 31st, 2025 16:58

Wise Man Say (1)
David Wakeling said:

This fun and lots of wisdom here. Excellent

January 31st, 2025 15:16

Real Fake Beauty
Tom Dylan said:

Good point well made. A fine write.

January 31st, 2025 08:28

Wise Man Say (1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wise indeed. Well done. Love it, Tobani! 🌹👏

January 31st, 2025 08:19

Wise Man Say (1)
arqios said:

Having this as a poster on a feature wall would be awesome! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

January 31st, 2025 06:51

Wise Man Say (1)
sorenbarrett said:

I can always use the humor and well put indeed. The title led me to expect an Elvis song but I was not disapointed I felt like I had a six course dinner at a chineese restaurant. Enjoyed it.

January 31st, 2025 04:18

Wise Man Say (1)
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated

January 31st, 2025 03:28



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