Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Cannot Sleep Again
orchidee said:

Can you take some exercise during the day, even taking a walk? It may help, so that you actually feel tired at night.

March 7th, 2025 03:22

Cannot Sleep Again
arqios said:

That happens to me as well sometimes. Havenโ€™t found an effective solution ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

March 7th, 2025 03:15

The Success Of My Dreams.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Tobani.

Andy

March 7th, 2025 02:16

To Be Alone
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

This was deeply felt! Alone can be extremely hard. I hope that you no longer feel that way now. Iโ€™m sure this can resonate with many in the world today.

March 6th, 2025 14:03

Love Is In The Air
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

A beautiful rhythm to this. Had to favorite it!

March 6th, 2025 14:01

The Success Of My Dreams.
GenXer Shamrocker โ˜˜๏ธ said:

Not easy being a parent. Very wise words! A very important message.

March 6th, 2025 13:59

The Success Of My Dreams.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 6th, 2025 10:47

The Success Of My Dreams.
Cassie58 said:

A meaningful write which speaks to me about the determination to hold tight to your own dreams. Too many parents thinking they know best thwart the aspirations in their offspring. Nicely penned Tobani. Have a happy Thursday.

March 6th, 2025 06:15

The Success Of My Dreams.
David Wakeling said:

Yes excellent point.let children have a try even if they fail.Good poem

March 6th, 2025 05:45

The Success Of My Dreams.
Mutley Ravishes said:

Parents. Who needs them?! Wait a second...

March 6th, 2025 05:40

The Success Of My Dreams.
Doggerel Dave said:

Too much personal history to allow me to comment muchly on this. Let me just say \'Hear Hear\'!

March 6th, 2025 05:30

The Same Picture Frame
Naina Pandey said:

Beautiful thought ๐Ÿ’ญ

March 6th, 2025 03:32

The Success Of My Dreams.
sorenbarrett said:

Seen so many times on sports fields. Well written and in a style that provokes thought and rereading. Very nicely done

March 6th, 2025 03:31

The Success Of My Dreams.
orchidee said:

Good write T.

March 6th, 2025 03:31

The Success Of My Dreams.
arqios said:

Some things do need to be said and shared before the damage is done. Good work. ๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

March 6th, 2025 03:11

Love Is In The Air
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is so strong when it comes comes your way Tobani, as it has done for me.

Andy

March 6th, 2025 02:50

Love Is In The Air
Natalie Gladmir said:

I admire your indefatigable thirst for love. Keep it up!

March 5th, 2025 17:27

Love Is In The Air
Cassie58 said:

Donโ€™t do yourself down Tobani, this is a beautiful acrostic on love and I am shouting it out loud. A fine poem and very much enjoyed. Have a great evening.

March 5th, 2025 15:12

Love Is In The Air
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work, my friend.

March 5th, 2025 13:25

If i Were Made Off Glass
RSM0812 said:

Short and sweet. Great read.

March 5th, 2025 11:47

Love Is In The Air
Neville said:


these words could not possibly have fallen randomly or by chance in the order they have been so meticulously placed here .. this is surely a fine love poem in acrostic form, unless I am grossly mistaken .. Neville

March 5th, 2025 10:32

Love Is In The Air
arqios said:

How good it is to love and be loved. And donโ€™t worry, the expression of love is unique and very personal. Every sculptor needs a block before chipping away, I believe this is the same with poetry in a way of thinking and understanding it. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

March 5th, 2025 06:09

Love Is In The Air
sorenbarrett said:

Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem has many elements of touching and tender lines that pull at heart strings. A poem of love of which all of us have written and in love innocence is our best tool.

March 5th, 2025 05:56

Love Is In The Air
David Wakeling said:

Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem

March 5th, 2025 05:15

Love Is In The Air
orchidee said:

(Whispers) Good write T. heehee.

March 5th, 2025 03:36

On The Outside Looking In
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing . Thereโ€™s a nice softness to your words

March 5th, 2025 03:18

Love Is In The Air
Caring dove said:

Itโ€™s lovely ) a nice read ..

March 5th, 2025 02:48

Reasons to leave Mexico
Goldfinch60 said:

Such awful happenings Tobani.

Andy

March 5th, 2025 02:27

Reasons to leave Mexico
Doggerel Dave said:

Nothing to constructively add after your piece and Tristan\'s response. I\'ll shut up and fave it instead.

March 5th, 2025 01:06

Seasons In a Year.
Caring dove said:

Beautiful writing .. lovely to read this ))

March 4th, 2025 21:29



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