Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Just a Bit Of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Just a Bit Of Fun
Cheeky Missy said:
Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
February 16th, 2025 09:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
February 16th, 2025 09:21
Just a Bit Of Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.
February 16th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.
February 16th, 2025 04:09
Yesterday Was
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Yesterday Was
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Yesterday Was
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
Yesterday Was
John Prophet said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
John Prophet said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
Yesterday Was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Yesterday Was
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
A thing called the heart is so easy to break, yet so many times, it heals with love. The chances were high yesterday. Love this poem❤️
February 15th, 2025 08:12
My Boy Ryngkhlem said:
A thing called the heart is so easy to break, yet so many times, it heals with love. The chances were high yesterday. Love this poem❤️
February 15th, 2025 08:12
Yesterday Was
Michael Edwards said:
I am noty usually into \'lovey\' poems but this rings so true and is so well written - much enjoyed - ikudos.
February 15th, 2025 05:08
Michael Edwards said:
I am noty usually into \'lovey\' poems but this rings so true and is so well written - much enjoyed - ikudos.
February 15th, 2025 05:08
Yesterday Was
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message contained in your poem. Sensitivity, empathy, awareness are things that have been dulled in a fast moving society. Being aware that not all people experience life the same is critical to being a caring person. A most poignant write. Nicely worded and written.
February 15th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message contained in your poem. Sensitivity, empathy, awareness are things that have been dulled in a fast moving society. Being aware that not all people experience life the same is critical to being a caring person. A most poignant write. Nicely worded and written.
February 15th, 2025 04:38
The Passion Has Gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Tobani, may that passion re-emerge once again.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad words Tobani, may that passion re-emerge once again.
Andy
February 15th, 2025 02:42
The Clock has stopped Ticking
whats write for me said:
Deep and dark prose. Perhaps it was not his fault. The demons that chase us each and every one. Come from our own deep, dark soul.
February 15th, 2025 00:47
whats write for me said:
Deep and dark prose. Perhaps it was not his fault. The demons that chase us each and every one. Come from our own deep, dark soul.
February 15th, 2025 00:47
The Passion Has Gone
David Wakeling said:
Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and thoughtful poem.
February 14th, 2025 15:41
David Wakeling said:
Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and thoughtful poem.
February 14th, 2025 15:41
The Passion Has Gone
Cheeky Missy said:
On Valentine\'s Day of all days in the year, this eloquent tribute to the reality of this holiday and oft-extolled romance. La dee. Too perfect. Charmingly rendered in seeming simplicity and tantalizing brevity, with tasteful imagery and an almost exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:38
Cheeky Missy said:
On Valentine\'s Day of all days in the year, this eloquent tribute to the reality of this holiday and oft-extolled romance. La dee. Too perfect. Charmingly rendered in seeming simplicity and tantalizing brevity, with tasteful imagery and an almost exquisitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:38
The Passion Has Gone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s sad...but I live in this poem. Not what I want, never what I wanted, but my reality all the same. Thank you for giving it words. Brought me to tears this morning. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 14th, 2025 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s sad...but I live in this poem. Not what I want, never what I wanted, but my reality all the same. Thank you for giving it words. Brought me to tears this morning. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
February 14th, 2025 09:49
The Passion Has Gone
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A hard truth in life at times
February 14th, 2025 08:29
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A hard truth in life at times
February 14th, 2025 08:29
The Passion Has Gone
arqios said:
If only there was a refresh button… or even a reboot function!
February 14th, 2025 07:48
arqios said:
If only there was a refresh button… or even a reboot function!
February 14th, 2025 07:48
The Passion Has Gone
Mutley Ravishes said:
We\'re being asked to dig deep.
The electricity
Never dies
It lies
In wait
Keep the faith
What if the snake
Can only awake
When all passion dissipates?
February 14th, 2025 07:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
We\'re being asked to dig deep.
The electricity
Never dies
It lies
In wait
Keep the faith
What if the snake
Can only awake
When all passion dissipates?
February 14th, 2025 07:33
The Passion Has Gone
sorenbarrett said:
The old song \"You\'ve lost that lovin feeling\" comes through strong and clear in this poem. It is hard to keep the fire alive and once out it is even harder to restart. A wonderful write.
February 14th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
The old song \"You\'ve lost that lovin feeling\" comes through strong and clear in this poem. It is hard to keep the fire alive and once out it is even harder to restart. A wonderful write.
February 14th, 2025 05:07
The Passion Has Gone
Neville said:
One of the sad things in life and I guess, something of a universal truth .. is that when the passion has well n truly dissipated there\'s no getting it back .. a fact so well poemed .. Neville
February 14th, 2025 04:31
Neville said:
One of the sad things in life and I guess, something of a universal truth .. is that when the passion has well n truly dissipated there\'s no getting it back .. a fact so well poemed .. Neville
February 14th, 2025 04:31
The Clock has stopped Ticking
Goldfinch60 said:
I know that my wife who died 5 years ago is waiting in heaven for me Tobani.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
I know that my wife who died 5 years ago is waiting in heaven for me Tobani.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:24
The Clock has stopped Ticking
Cheeky Missy said:
You know my wonted assessment, yet the haunting poignancy of this particular number grapples with me every single time I read it, initially dredging up my late father\'s burial, albeit it was not at all similar and we kids still regret things and wish we\'d a second chance with him, nor is it like he never lived since so much of what each of us are is Dad, and Mom. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a lingering, killer poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:38
Cheeky Missy said:
You know my wonted assessment, yet the haunting poignancy of this particular number grapples with me every single time I read it, initially dredging up my late father\'s burial, albeit it was not at all similar and we kids still regret things and wish we\'d a second chance with him, nor is it like he never lived since so much of what each of us are is Dad, and Mom. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a lingering, killer poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:38
My Bed For The Night
Emile Dubois said:
The spectacle of a broken society in plain view. A different world and yet we are all only half a step from the gutter.
A fine insight into a modern day outrage.😎
February 13th, 2025 17:52
Emile Dubois said:
The spectacle of a broken society in plain view. A different world and yet we are all only half a step from the gutter.
A fine insight into a modern day outrage.😎
February 13th, 2025 17:52
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