Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Trio of Chuckles
sorenbarrett said:

Limericks always bring a smile my favorite the first that reminded me of an old dog of mine that was always jumping the fence

December 29th, 2024 05:26

Trio of Chuckles
arqios said:

2 cats and a dog, none with a good year to tell! Enjoyed the hilarity of their separate situations. πŸ‘πŸ»

December 29th, 2024 05:15

Trio of Chuckles
Neville said:



Each one an absurd little gem ............ πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

December 29th, 2024 04:59

Take What`s Left
arqios said:

Such a life and such is life. We do what we can until we can’t. Much enjoyed experience in poetry not so much in actually.

December 28th, 2024 18:57

Take What`s Left
David Wakeling said:

Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out

December 28th, 2024 15:31

Take What`s Left
Thad Wilk said:

Wow 😳 so poignant
Indeed.
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!!😒
Wonderful brevity my friend,
my pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad




December 28th, 2024 13:35

Take What`s Left
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 28th, 2024 12:05

Take What`s Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I know this feeling. I am sure the circumstances are different, but I know this feeling. Well expressed my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 28th, 2024 09:12

Take What`s Left
sorenbarrett said:

When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new beginning. What is painful at the time becomes a burning of the field for a new crop. Very emotive this poem and the feeling flows out of it

December 28th, 2024 04:50

Take What`s Left
Neville said:


Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville

December 28th, 2024 03:44

Take What`s Left
Neville said:


Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville

December 28th, 2024 03:44

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Thad Wilk said:

Ho,Ho,Ho! πŸ§‘β€πŸŽ„
a jolly good poem and
Christmas story my friend!! πŸ‘
Really heart touching,
beginning to end!!🌟🀩
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 27th, 2024 20:07

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
David Wakeling said:

This is amazing. Great fun story of believing in Santa. enjoyable

December 27th, 2024 18:27

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful poem my friend...truly! Smart dad! LOL! πŸ˜‚πŸŒΉπŸ‘

December 27th, 2024 17:21

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Thomas W Case said:

Very creative.

December 27th, 2024 14:27

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Neville said:



You just done good .. in fact, as a devoted Dad myself, you just done very good πŸ˜ŽπŸŽ…πŸ‘

December 27th, 2024 11:02

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 27th, 2024 10:27

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
arqios said:

Quick thinking dad! And the Santa radar worked as well! Very important to get the wish list right!!! I was fortunate enough to get my proper train set early. For it was a early too that the Santa lore ended for me, I was 10 when it was set in stone; 9 was a bit of a fogged up year.

December 27th, 2024 07:01

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful story told in a poetic form that seems so appropriate for Christmas. Absolutely lovely

December 27th, 2024 04:03

The Turkeys Done A Runner
Thad Wilk said:

LoL!! 🀣🀣
Three cheers for
Ole Tom turkey πŸ¦ƒ,
no meat on the plate!! 🍽️
Thanks for sharing,
Two thumbs up πŸ‘πŸ‘
this poem was great!! πŸ’―
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 26th, 2024 22:45

The Turkeys Done A Runner
David Wakeling said:

The Turkey is hiding in the straw. I saw him in a dream. Wonderful fun poem

December 26th, 2024 15:08

The Turkeys Done A Runner
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh wow! Great read! Much fun, indeed! And as a vegetarian...good for the turkey 🀣 (as the veggies all roll their eyes in disgust! πŸ™„LOL!) Well done, my friend! Really enjoyed this!

December 26th, 2024 13:27

The Turkeys Done A Runner
Cassie58 said:

You know I can’t help liking the fact that the poor turkey got away. The older I get the more difficult I find it to eat what was once roaming on farms or in fields. Having said that, I still managed some beef yesterday. Reminded me of Gordon Ramsey. Served up the turkey the kids had fed all year round for Christmas dinner. Oh my, eating your pets, definitely a no no. Hope you had a pleasant day yesterday Tobani. All the best.

December 26th, 2024 12:56

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
aDarkerMind said:

and for me also....
this Christmas was a very lonely time for me.
lets hope for better times.

December 26th, 2024 12:46

The Turkeys Done A Runner
sorenbarrett said:

A turkey pardoned by an escape how totally organic is that ? A most fun read and quite seasonal as well

December 26th, 2024 04:12

The Turkeys Done A Runner
arqios said:

Oh dear. And the turkey took off with the potato salad! Most enjoyed.

December 26th, 2024 02:40

Can You See
NafisaSB said:

exactly - unless the person can actually see the real you, passing judgement would be one sided, and maybe wrong too
good write up - keep it up

December 26th, 2024 02:06

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
Thad Wilk said:

A bittersweet poem
really touching!
Great reminder that
there are a lot of folks
that are alone Christmas
and not a happy time
at all,, for some.
A little company would
put a smile on their faces. ☺️
Thanks for sharing,! πŸ™
Best regards ✌️ Thad


December 25th, 2024 22:13

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
RSM0812 said:

Your poem makes you realize a lot of people have to spend Christmas alone. Of course the end is the cure. A bit of company. Lol. It was written really really well. Thanks for the read.

December 25th, 2024 08:34

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thank you, dear friend, for this poem. To me the most important reminder of all. Nobody should be alone on any day, let alone a holiday.
Your message is apt and tugs at the heartstrings! Tobani, I am sorry this is yours and many others reality. If I could hop the great lake dividing us, I would swing by and spend some time saying hi and eating cookies…or anything for that matter! 🀣 All of that said, I am truly sending you warm wishes on this cold day, my dear friend. I feel blessed to have met you. ❀️

December 25th, 2024 08:10



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