Comments received on poems by Ria_1005



Solivagant
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice poem of finding love. Well imaged and built in good form this poem tells its tale.

September 20th, 2025 04:04

but i will
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

This is a beautiful and deeply emotive poem.

September 19th, 2025 15:35

but i will
Paul Bell said:

LOVE. Four letters of hope, or four letters of despair.
In saying that, we all love that feeling.
Maybe phone the ex to see if she\'s forgiven me for that indiscretion.

September 19th, 2025 06:24

but i will
sorenbarrett said:

I love the cadence and flow of this poem punctuated with each resounding finishing line to the stanza. Very nicely done

September 19th, 2025 06:13

Lost Young
Cassie58 said:

A beautiful poem Ria, and I especially like that final line

And let my fractures sing of love, most meaningful.



September 16th, 2025 03:08

Lost Young
Fränz Müller said:

Nicely written.

September 15th, 2025 21:36

Lost Young
sorenbarrett said:

I love the use of a mirror as a gentle dreamland. This poem in its dichotomy of that dreamland and reality builds the essence of the poem to me. Reflections in reality and mentally become the epiphany. A most lovely write and a fave

September 15th, 2025 04:48

A Mother\'s Bed
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message of truth wrapped in word blankets and sheets of comfort. A lovely poem about a mothers unconditional love. Very nice

September 4th, 2025 04:50

A Bridge Of Words
orchidee said:

Good write R. If you have poems to contribute towards exams, etc, I\'m no professional poet, but can maybe comment on the poems, if you wish.

August 29th, 2025 02:38

A Bridge Of Words
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message that in language mankind leaves their mark. Nicely said

August 28th, 2025 04:10

World Art Day
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem dedicated to the arts and artists. Very nicely composed with good rhyme as well. Loved it

August 26th, 2025 05:08

Eternal Flame
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting poem of shadows. Nicely written

August 23rd, 2025 04:44

Epilogue
Salvia.S said:

Beautiful poem!!!

April 29th, 2025 21:55

Epilogue
sorenbarrett said:

Love exists beyond separation by death, distance, or even anger and hatred. A beautiful poem

April 6th, 2025 06:20

Epilogue
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of two loves being apart not through their own choosing, nicely written

April 6th, 2025 05:36

The Best
Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully written poem, very enjoyed the read.

December 2nd, 2024 21:14

The Best
2781 said:

I hope you signed them.

November 26th, 2024 04:24

The Best
Cassie58 said:

This poem sounds as though it is a tribute to a very inspirational person. You have penned it nicely ria. Well done.

November 25th, 2024 16:46

The Best
cellinic said:

very nice and deep!

November 25th, 2024 12:30

A Whisper in the Wind
cellinic said:

Very poetic and sincere... Best wishes,

November 24th, 2024 03:32

An Elegy To Deception
cellinic said:

Very emotional write

November 24th, 2024 03:03

Goodbye
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 23rd, 2024 11:52

An Elegy To Deception
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS! It’s a good place to be.😊

November 23rd, 2024 06:43

An Elegy To Deception
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 22nd, 2024 10:41