Comments received on poems by Ria_1005
The Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss with this poem as one leaves the room and emptiness ensues. Well written
August 27th, 2026 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss with this poem as one leaves the room and emptiness ensues. Well written
August 27th, 2026 08:05
The Things That Knew Me
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a metaphor as well for relationships of all kinds and the change that happens to individuals as well as their relationship. A fave
August 18th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a metaphor as well for relationships of all kinds and the change that happens to individuals as well as their relationship. A fave
August 18th, 2026 07:55
The Cost of Light
Fränz Müller said:
Wow, I love this! Won’t look at candles quite the same way now…
August 15th, 2026 15:44
Fränz Müller said:
Wow, I love this! Won’t look at candles quite the same way now…
August 15th, 2026 15:44
The Cost of Light
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely metaphor so well expressed in this poem. It struck me particularly hard with the second added metaphor to it. It is rare that a metaphor can be extended so well as this and so nicely done a fave
August 15th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely metaphor so well expressed in this poem. It struck me particularly hard with the second added metaphor to it. It is rare that a metaphor can be extended so well as this and so nicely done a fave
August 15th, 2026 04:00
The Cost of Light
Syd said:
Hi Ria, I love this! Such a clever write. The candle sure is a victim of its own design.
- Syd 🍄
August 15th, 2026 03:33
Syd said:
Hi Ria, I love this! Such a clever write. The candle sure is a victim of its own design.
- Syd 🍄
August 15th, 2026 03:33
Strangers
Paul Bell said:
Noticing the world go by is great.
We all want to know what the others are thinking.
August 14th, 2026 08:20
Paul Bell said:
Noticing the world go by is great.
We all want to know what the others are thinking.
August 14th, 2026 08:20
Strangers
Fränz Müller said:
The imagery in this one is fantastic. Nicely done.
August 14th, 2026 06:55
Fränz Müller said:
The imagery in this one is fantastic. Nicely done.
August 14th, 2026 06:55
Strangers
sorenbarrett said:
Observations lead to wishful thinking in this write. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Observations lead to wishful thinking in this write. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 05:49
I’d Call It Muscle Memory
sorenbarrett said:
\"Will I ever get to feel your cold warmth again?\" a great line that sums it all up. Contradiction expressed in the last line \"It keeps reaching for what I\'m trying to forget\". Well done
August 13th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
\"Will I ever get to feel your cold warmth again?\" a great line that sums it all up. Contradiction expressed in the last line \"It keeps reaching for what I\'m trying to forget\". Well done
August 13th, 2026 04:24
The Waiting Room
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling somehow separate and not a part of. Well written a poem of isolation. Well done
August 12th, 2026 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling somehow separate and not a part of. Well written a poem of isolation. Well done
August 12th, 2026 09:49
Freedom, at What Cost?
sorenbarrett said:
A philosophical, existential write of everything having a cost and freedom an illusion of just choosing which piper one wishes to pay. A fave
August 11th, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A philosophical, existential write of everything having a cost and freedom an illusion of just choosing which piper one wishes to pay. A fave
August 11th, 2026 03:51
The Doorbell
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of when someone has placed their heart in the hand of one that shows it little value. Well written
August 10th, 2026 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of when someone has placed their heart in the hand of one that shows it little value. Well written
August 10th, 2026 06:51
Today I Found a Box Under My Bed
sorenbarrett said:
The sporadic rhyme in this poem adds interest to its flow. The metaphor also makes it alive with images of a container we pile parts we don\'t want to deal with at the moment, storing them away. Well done
August 3rd, 2026 11:13
sorenbarrett said:
The sporadic rhyme in this poem adds interest to its flow. The metaphor also makes it alive with images of a container we pile parts we don\'t want to deal with at the moment, storing them away. Well done
August 3rd, 2026 11:13
Guilt Is a Scorpion
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of symbols in this poem nicely done
November 6th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of symbols in this poem nicely done
November 6th, 2025 11:42
GIVE THEM WINGS TO FLY, AND WILL TO TRY
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely message in wonderful wording that unravels the issue of giving. I do not send my money to charity but instead attempt to give directly to others in need whether street beggar or neighbor even one asking a ride. Loved it a fave
October 22nd, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely message in wonderful wording that unravels the issue of giving. I do not send my money to charity but instead attempt to give directly to others in need whether street beggar or neighbor even one asking a ride. Loved it a fave
October 22nd, 2025 09:58
now you know what lies feel like
Paul Bell said:
Yes look after number one cos no one else will.
October 17th, 2025 08:50
Paul Bell said:
Yes look after number one cos no one else will.
October 17th, 2025 08:50
now you know what lies feel like
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling common to most of us that feel justice must be done for past wrongs. Nicely written
October 17th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling common to most of us that feel justice must be done for past wrongs. Nicely written
October 17th, 2025 07:02
Solivagant
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of finding love. Well imaged and built in good form this poem tells its tale.
September 20th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of finding love. Well imaged and built in good form this poem tells its tale.
September 20th, 2025 04:04
but i will
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a beautiful and deeply emotive poem.
September 19th, 2025 15:35
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is a beautiful and deeply emotive poem.
September 19th, 2025 15:35
but i will
Paul Bell said:
LOVE. Four letters of hope, or four letters of despair.
In saying that, we all love that feeling.
Maybe phone the ex to see if she\'s forgiven me for that indiscretion.
September 19th, 2025 06:24
Paul Bell said:
LOVE. Four letters of hope, or four letters of despair.
In saying that, we all love that feeling.
Maybe phone the ex to see if she\'s forgiven me for that indiscretion.
September 19th, 2025 06:24
but i will
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cadence and flow of this poem punctuated with each resounding finishing line to the stanza. Very nicely done
September 19th, 2025 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cadence and flow of this poem punctuated with each resounding finishing line to the stanza. Very nicely done
September 19th, 2025 06:13
Lost Young
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful poem Ria, and I especially like that final line
And let my fractures sing of love, most meaningful.
September 16th, 2025 03:08
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful poem Ria, and I especially like that final line
And let my fractures sing of love, most meaningful.
September 16th, 2025 03:08
Lost Young
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of a mirror as a gentle dreamland. This poem in its dichotomy of that dreamland and reality builds the essence of the poem to me. Reflections in reality and mentally become the epiphany. A most lovely write and a fave
September 15th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of a mirror as a gentle dreamland. This poem in its dichotomy of that dreamland and reality builds the essence of the poem to me. Reflections in reality and mentally become the epiphany. A most lovely write and a fave
September 15th, 2025 04:48
A Mother\'s Bed
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message of truth wrapped in word blankets and sheets of comfort. A lovely poem about a mothers unconditional love. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message of truth wrapped in word blankets and sheets of comfort. A lovely poem about a mothers unconditional love. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 04:50
A Bridge Of Words
orchidee said:
Good write R. If you have poems to contribute towards exams, etc, I\'m no professional poet, but can maybe comment on the poems, if you wish.
August 29th, 2025 02:38
orchidee said:
Good write R. If you have poems to contribute towards exams, etc, I\'m no professional poet, but can maybe comment on the poems, if you wish.
August 29th, 2025 02:38
A Bridge Of Words
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that in language mankind leaves their mark. Nicely said
August 28th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that in language mankind leaves their mark. Nicely said
August 28th, 2025 04:10
World Art Day
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem dedicated to the arts and artists. Very nicely composed with good rhyme as well. Loved it
August 26th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem dedicated to the arts and artists. Very nicely composed with good rhyme as well. Loved it
August 26th, 2025 05:08
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