Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Nudism: A Senryū
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, you got me with this one. There’s such a playful freedom packed into just a few lines. It made me smile and reminded me how simple joy can be when we stop overthinking it. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 18:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, you got me with this one. There’s such a playful freedom packed into just a few lines. It made me smile and reminded me how simple joy can be when we stop overthinking it. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 18:09
Prophet Margin
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a biting piece. The satire lands with a grin, but there’s an uneasiness underneath that never lets up. It made me chuckle…then it made me think. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a biting piece. The satire lands with a grin, but there’s an uneasiness underneath that never lets up. It made me chuckle…then it made me think. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:41
Nudism: A Senryū
sorenbarrett said:
One might take this as only physical but I bet that it is meant metaphorically to be naked in all respects, mentally, emotionally, physically or in other words take off one\'s mask and be oneself. A lovely write.
August 3rd, 2026 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
One might take this as only physical but I bet that it is meant metaphorically to be naked in all respects, mentally, emotionally, physically or in other words take off one\'s mask and be oneself. A lovely write.
August 3rd, 2026 06:32
Nudism: A Senryū
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes. But Security in my Local Supermarket take a dim View of such things. I mean they don\'t have to be so rough.
A good Write.
August 3rd, 2026 06:24
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes. But Security in my Local Supermarket take a dim View of such things. I mean they don\'t have to be so rough.
A good Write.
August 3rd, 2026 06:24
Prophet Margin
sorenbarrett said:
Another step toward loss that began in the stone age when social laws was instituted and continued down the path of evolution. Nicely written with many reminders of what we are loosing. Well done my friend
August 2nd, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Another step toward loss that began in the stone age when social laws was instituted and continued down the path of evolution. Nicely written with many reminders of what we are loosing. Well done my friend
August 2nd, 2026 10:26
Snakes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a fun little piece. The question is playful, the image is wonderfully absurd, and leaving it unanswered lets the reader’s imagination do the rest. It gave me a genuine chuckle. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a fun little piece. The question is playful, the image is wonderfully absurd, and leaving it unanswered lets the reader’s imagination do the rest. It gave me a genuine chuckle. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:33
Snakes
sorenbarrett said:
They have already stuck out their tongue. A good read my friend.
July 31st, 2026 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
They have already stuck out their tongue. A good read my friend.
July 31st, 2026 18:53
Venus Disrobed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautifully intimate poem! After many years of marriage, I understand the gift of being thoroughly known and still genuinely desired...and I love the mutual delight within this moment. The passion remains alive because the love beneath it has deepened. Beautifully done, my friend! A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautifully intimate poem! After many years of marriage, I understand the gift of being thoroughly known and still genuinely desired...and I love the mutual delight within this moment. The passion remains alive because the love beneath it has deepened. Beautifully done, my friend! A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 11:43
Venus Disrobed
sorenbarrett said:
Love enthralled with the beauty of another over years is a wonderful thing. Represented in this poem well written it speaks to an enduring love.
July 30th, 2026 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Love enthralled with the beauty of another over years is a wonderful thing. Represented in this poem well written it speaks to an enduring love.
July 30th, 2026 10:47
Raven and Dove
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a wonderfully thoughtful and charming poem! All that existential wondering…only to discover your feline companion may have been contemplating lunch. 🤣 Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a wonderfully thoughtful and charming poem! All that existential wondering…only to discover your feline companion may have been contemplating lunch. 🤣 Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 08:54
Raven and Dove
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful pondering poem. It personifies the cat. At the same time it shows our arrogance in thinking that we are something special that no other animal thinks as we think. This is of course true because they are not human but it assumes a sense of superiority which is not true but only a perspective that our difference is the best one. Very nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful pondering poem. It personifies the cat. At the same time it shows our arrogance in thinking that we are something special that no other animal thinks as we think. This is of course true because they are not human but it assumes a sense of superiority which is not true but only a perspective that our difference is the best one. Very nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 04:08
Raven and Dove
Poetic Dan said:
I believe they don\'t and what a beautiful flow! A breath of fresh air as I look on to tomorrow
July 27th, 2026 02:01
Poetic Dan said:
I believe they don\'t and what a beautiful flow! A breath of fresh air as I look on to tomorrow
July 27th, 2026 02:01
Plague
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard…raw, intimate, and absolutely devastating. The pain feels immediate and merciless throughout. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard…raw, intimate, and absolutely devastating. The pain feels immediate and merciless throughout. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:05
Plague
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of alienation from self itself. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of alienation from self itself. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 18:53
Buried Bones
RSM0812 said:
This is very well written. Denial, confusion and acceptance. Nice write.
July 23rd, 2026 05:51
RSM0812 said:
This is very well written. Denial, confusion and acceptance. Nice write.
July 23rd, 2026 05:51
Bruises
RSM0812 said:
Interesting write man. Messed up pic to go along with it. We are all alone sometimes and need to make the best out of it. That is what i got from your poem. Hope im close.
July 23rd, 2026 05:49
RSM0812 said:
Interesting write man. Messed up pic to go along with it. We are all alone sometimes and need to make the best out of it. That is what i got from your poem. Hope im close.
July 23rd, 2026 05:49
Hobgoblins
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is one heck of a poem. Those destructive patterns become almost mischievous little saboteurs here...waiting for the slightest lapse to send us tumbling again. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 19:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is one heck of a poem. Those destructive patterns become almost mischievous little saboteurs here...waiting for the slightest lapse to send us tumbling again. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 19:19
Hobgoblins
sorenbarrett said:
Hobbled by hobgoblins quite the image created here. It seems amusing at one level but has great metaphoric meaning as well. Nicely written
July 21st, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Hobbled by hobgoblins quite the image created here. It seems amusing at one level but has great metaphoric meaning as well. Nicely written
July 21st, 2026 04:21
Shabbat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ränz, this is a passionate defense of Sabbath and a strong challenge to inherited tradition. I deeply agree that sacred rest should be remembered and protected, even where our theological conclusions differ. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ränz, this is a passionate defense of Sabbath and a strong challenge to inherited tradition. I deeply agree that sacred rest should be remembered and protected, even where our theological conclusions differ. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:21
Shabbat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of old vs new where a day of worship was changed from the seventh to the first day of the week. People do not realize this just as they do not realize that an eye for an eye was changed for forgiveness depending on what religion one follows. We live in a changing world.
July 18th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of old vs new where a day of worship was changed from the seventh to the first day of the week. People do not realize this just as they do not realize that an eye for an eye was changed for forgiveness depending on what religion one follows. We live in a changing world.
July 18th, 2026 03:34
Shabbat
Doggerel Dave said:
I have no intention of doing the study, nothing to disagree or agree with.
However good luck to you - go in peace .
July 18th, 2026 00:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I have no intention of doing the study, nothing to disagree or agree with.
However good luck to you - go in peace .
July 18th, 2026 00:32
Got Dem Oligarchy Blues
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Fränz, this is concise and damning! Those with the greatest power to change our course remain consumed by profit while everything collapses around them. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Fränz, this is concise and damning! Those with the greatest power to change our course remain consumed by profit while everything collapses around them. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:22
Got Dem Oligarchy Blues
sorenbarrett said:
Priorities come into view and like a monopoly game everyone leaves their money, houses and hotels in the box when the game is over. A good read Franz
July 17th, 2026 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
Priorities come into view and like a monopoly game everyone leaves their money, houses and hotels in the box when the game is over. A good read Franz
July 17th, 2026 03:17
Wildfires
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful little piece. The hazy window creates such an uneasy distance...close enough to witness what\'s happening, but never quite sure if there\'s still time to act. That final note of hope keeps the whole poem balanced beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful little piece. The hazy window creates such an uneasy distance...close enough to witness what\'s happening, but never quite sure if there\'s still time to act. That final note of hope keeps the whole poem balanced beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:04
Exposed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really warmed my heart. There\'s something so beautifully ordinary about this moment, and that\'s exactly what makes it special. Love doesn\'t always need grand gestures. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really warmed my heart. There\'s something so beautifully ordinary about this moment, and that\'s exactly what makes it special. Love doesn\'t always need grand gestures. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:44
Wildfires
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s the same every Summer. Is it to late?
The Burning (Pardon the Pun) Question.
These Haiku\'s hit the nail on the Head: as did yours.
July 15th, 2026 20:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s the same every Summer. Is it to late?
The Burning (Pardon the Pun) Question.
These Haiku\'s hit the nail on the Head: as did yours.
July 15th, 2026 20:23
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