Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller



Closure
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 13th, 2025 09:45

Closure
sorenbarrett said:

Such vivid words paint a clear picture of weakness struggling for the smallest sign of pardon. A wonderful write and a fave

June 13th, 2025 08:30

Ode to Poe
sorenbarrett said:

Well done I think the he would be proud to take a bow to this. Very well rhymed with the aid of a little poetic license. A fun read

June 12th, 2025 13:13

Lives
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

June 11th, 2025 11:45

Lives
sorenbarrett said:

What a beautiful poem! Words of deterioration and rot in a metaphor of love. A definite fave

June 11th, 2025 11:21

Words About the Journey
Tony36 said:

Gtreat write

June 10th, 2025 10:29

Words About the Journey
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem that speaks of a path of life in dark and no markers where we listen to others guide us, sometimes for good and others for ill. It is our choice whom to listen to but who do you trust? Good thought provoking write

June 10th, 2025 07:18

Words About the Journey
Poetic Licence said:

Very true write we decide the paths we will travel on, enjoyed the read

June 10th, 2025 07:16

Pilgrimage
Poetic Licence said:

A beautiful sensuous piece of poetry, nicely crafted

June 9th, 2025 20:01

Pilgrimage
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of a sensuous nature. A lovely poetic write. A fave

June 9th, 2025 19:45

Mary’s Reef
sorenbarrett said:

A simply lovely metaphor with such great images portrayed in every line. Short but exquisitely worded. A fave

June 8th, 2025 10:15

Caged
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderfully worded poem that moves the emotions without mention of what is caged. Left open to interpretation it applies to many. Well done

June 7th, 2025 12:48

Dwelling
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June 6th, 2025 10:51

Dwelling
sorenbarrett said:

Great metaphor of a relationship gone past decay to rot and still one remains just as the parts of the house still remains. Whether memories or attempts to hang on they continue hang on. Very well done

June 6th, 2025 10:51

Gravity’s Fall
sorenbarrett said:

A well written poem with a great meter that fits the mood of the poem. Nicely rhymed and with great imagery all of which gets a fave

June 5th, 2025 13:30

Covet
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 4th, 2025 15:14

Covet
sorenbarrett said:

Used to watch the beach when the Portuguese Men of War would be blown by the wind to wash up on the beach. I thought of this with this poem. A lovely write.

June 4th, 2025 08:45

Distance
sorenbarrett said:

Powerful and dark it speaks of death and pain of ground gained in a struggle, whether a battle literal or of life itself all comes to the same end. This was a very well written piece and a fave.

June 4th, 2025 04:25

Distance
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s quite a powerful and poignant write, nicely expressed

June 4th, 2025 00:45

Lamentation
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

June 3rd, 2025 09:07

Lamentation
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of loss that leaves a feeling of melancholy and longing. Well written

June 3rd, 2025 03:45

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