Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Dwelling
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor of a relationship gone past decay to rot and still one remains just as the parts of the house still remains. Whether memories or attempts to hang on they continue hang on. Very well done
June 6th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor of a relationship gone past decay to rot and still one remains just as the parts of the house still remains. Whether memories or attempts to hang on they continue hang on. Very well done
June 6th, 2025 10:51
Gravity’s Fall
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem with a great meter that fits the mood of the poem. Nicely rhymed and with great imagery all of which gets a fave
June 5th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem with a great meter that fits the mood of the poem. Nicely rhymed and with great imagery all of which gets a fave
June 5th, 2025 13:30
Covet
sorenbarrett said:
Used to watch the beach when the Portuguese Men of War would be blown by the wind to wash up on the beach. I thought of this with this poem. A lovely write.
June 4th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Used to watch the beach when the Portuguese Men of War would be blown by the wind to wash up on the beach. I thought of this with this poem. A lovely write.
June 4th, 2025 08:45
Distance
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and dark it speaks of death and pain of ground gained in a struggle, whether a battle literal or of life itself all comes to the same end. This was a very well written piece and a fave.
June 4th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and dark it speaks of death and pain of ground gained in a struggle, whether a battle literal or of life itself all comes to the same end. This was a very well written piece and a fave.
June 4th, 2025 04:25
Distance
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s quite a powerful and poignant write, nicely expressed
June 4th, 2025 00:45
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s quite a powerful and poignant write, nicely expressed
June 4th, 2025 00:45
Lamentation
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss that leaves a feeling of melancholy and longing. Well written
June 3rd, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss that leaves a feeling of melancholy and longing. Well written
June 3rd, 2025 03:45
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