Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Calmicidal
sorenbarrett said:
We are often wearing a mask that covers the true self below. A good read
July 10th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
We are often wearing a mask that covers the true self below. A good read
July 10th, 2026 03:37
Calmicidal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, you got me with this one. That wonderfully restrained opening paired with the completely unrestrained inner monologue is a fantastic contrast. It\'s sharp, funny, and just relatable enough to make the grin a little guilty. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, you got me with this one. That wonderfully restrained opening paired with the completely unrestrained inner monologue is a fantastic contrast. It\'s sharp, funny, and just relatable enough to make the grin a little guilty. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:58
Tribulations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful piece. The conflict here feels deeply human, and that image of the embers continuing on after everything else has burned away carries real staying power. We all wrestle with parts of ourselves we\'d rather have neatly resolved, and this doesn\'t pretend otherwise. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful piece. The conflict here feels deeply human, and that image of the embers continuing on after everything else has burned away carries real staying power. We all wrestle with parts of ourselves we\'d rather have neatly resolved, and this doesn\'t pretend otherwise. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:33
Tribulations
sorenbarrett said:
The fires of passion so well put in this poem and in horror as we roar down that hill we find the breaks are out. Too late to shift into low gear the rpm\'s too high. We head for destruction. A fave
July 9th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
The fires of passion so well put in this poem and in horror as we roar down that hill we find the breaks are out. Too late to shift into low gear the rpm\'s too high. We head for destruction. A fave
July 9th, 2026 04:26
Buried Bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, I’ve felt that same delayed ache…not seeing the knife until after it’s already found its mark. There’s something so honest about admitting the wound came before the understanding of it. You captured that so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, I’ve felt that same delayed ache…not seeing the knife until after it’s already found its mark. There’s something so honest about admitting the wound came before the understanding of it. You captured that so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:17
Tongues of Fire
Nerd said:
I like how you mentioning a gentle word could change a person’s mood that is so true and the same goes for the opposite.
July 7th, 2026 23:37
Nerd said:
I like how you mentioning a gentle word could change a person’s mood that is so true and the same goes for the opposite.
July 7th, 2026 23:37
Clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, the image of extending friendship to the stranger you’ve become is what struck me most. It’s such a gentle, curious response to something that could easily feel like loss. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, the image of extending friendship to the stranger you’ve become is what struck me most. It’s such a gentle, curious response to something that could easily feel like loss. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:21
Buried Bones
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks metaphorically of the mark a dead relationship leaves. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks metaphorically of the mark a dead relationship leaves. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 16:04
Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a thought that many have had of a previous life and I wonder would they extend a hand of friendship back. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a thought that many have had of a previous life and I wonder would they extend a hand of friendship back. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:24
Terror
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration turned panic for those that don\'t understand. Well written
July 5th, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration turned panic for those that don\'t understand. Well written
July 5th, 2026 15:59
Leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really struck me. So few words, yet they carry such a heavy weight. It feels both apocalyptic and deeply human. Beautiful haiku, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really struck me. So few words, yet they carry such a heavy weight. It feels both apocalyptic and deeply human. Beautiful haiku, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:41
Leaves
Lyriclitty said:
This line landed—like the small comforts don’t hold when everything’s burning. Thank you for that clear, quiet ache.
July 4th, 2026 00:09
Lyriclitty said:
This line landed—like the small comforts don’t hold when everything’s burning. Thank you for that clear, quiet ache.
July 4th, 2026 00:09
Divine Retribution
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautiful piece. I love how it moves from the stripping away of the old life to the quiet hope of becoming something new. The final image of thoughts as pure as a newborn leaves the poem resting in grace. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautiful piece. I love how it moves from the stripping away of the old life to the quiet hope of becoming something new. The final image of thoughts as pure as a newborn leaves the poem resting in grace. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:41
Divine Retribution
sorenbarrett said:
This reads almost scriptural. It is an announcement of cleansing. Well written and a fave
July 3rd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This reads almost scriptural. It is an announcement of cleansing. Well written and a fave
July 3rd, 2026 03:55
Divine Retribution
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful, reflective poem. Spiritual transformation with quiet grace.
July 3rd, 2026 01:22
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful, reflective poem. Spiritual transformation with quiet grace.
July 3rd, 2026 01:22
Tarnished
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the image of \"joints frozen, machine seized\" really caught me. It\'s such a vivid way of expressing what prolonged pain and struggle can do, which makes the closing image of the machine coming alive all the more satisfying. Wonderfully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the image of \"joints frozen, machine seized\" really caught me. It\'s such a vivid way of expressing what prolonged pain and struggle can do, which makes the closing image of the machine coming alive all the more satisfying. Wonderfully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:17
Perilous Beauty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now...this has me howling! Love it my friend! 🌕🐺
July 1st, 2026 22:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now...this has me howling! Love it my friend! 🌕🐺
July 1st, 2026 22:43
Tarnished
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that takes through life and its damages. Well written
July 1st, 2026 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that takes through life and its damages. Well written
July 1st, 2026 14:52
American Autopsy
Dan Williams said:
So sad and so true. I disregard warnings about how we need to change before it is too late; it is already too late. I\'m glad I\'m an old man, worry for my daughter. Arrogance and greed have destroyed us. Oh well?
July 1st, 2026 03:08
Dan Williams said:
So sad and so true. I disregard warnings about how we need to change before it is too late; it is already too late. I\'m glad I\'m an old man, worry for my daughter. Arrogance and greed have destroyed us. Oh well?
July 1st, 2026 03:08
Perilous Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
An image that shakes the foundation of archetypal fears. Well written
June 30th, 2026 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
An image that shakes the foundation of archetypal fears. Well written
June 30th, 2026 14:13
Metamorphosis In Two Acts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really moved me. The invitation to begin again each morning carries such quiet hope, reminding us that change remains possible for as long as life does. A thoughtful and encouraging piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 17:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really moved me. The invitation to begin again each morning carries such quiet hope, reminding us that change remains possible for as long as life does. A thoughtful and encouraging piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 17:10
Metamorphosis In Two Acts
Friendship said:
A strong write, your poem addresses the daily routine of waking up and the habitual tendency to revert to our previous identities. It encourages the reader to seize the opportunity for self-improvement and to embrace change, highlighting the urgency of this transformation, which is only limited by the inevitability of time.
June 29th, 2026 14:42
Friendship said:
A strong write, your poem addresses the daily routine of waking up and the habitual tendency to revert to our previous identities. It encourages the reader to seize the opportunity for self-improvement and to embrace change, highlighting the urgency of this transformation, which is only limited by the inevitability of time.
June 29th, 2026 14:42
Metamorphosis In Two Acts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement for changing for the better. Well done
June 29th, 2026 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement for changing for the better. Well done
June 29th, 2026 14:23
American Autopsy
Kevin Hulme said:
Powerful Piece. Here in the U.K. Free Speech is coughing up Blood. Good Write.
June 29th, 2026 07:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Powerful Piece. Here in the U.K. Free Speech is coughing up Blood. Good Write.
June 29th, 2026 07:28
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