Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Chasm
NafisaSB said:
most of us do - that is why this poem seems so familiar to many of us - thanks for sharing...
June 9th, 2026 00:12
NafisaSB said:
most of us do - that is why this poem seems so familiar to many of us - thanks for sharing...
June 9th, 2026 00:12
The Red Carpet
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! what an invitation that must have been. A fun read
June 8th, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! what an invitation that must have been. A fun read
June 8th, 2026 13:57
The Red Carpet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this made me smile. There is such warmth and enthusiasm in these lines...the anticipation, the welcome, and the simple joy of looking forward to someone\'s arrival all come through beautifully. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this made me smile. There is such warmth and enthusiasm in these lines...the anticipation, the welcome, and the simple joy of looking forward to someone\'s arrival all come through beautifully. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:56
The Pen (Is) a Problem
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what struck me most is the mirrored structure. By placing the two experiences side by side, the poem creates its argument through contrast rather than explanation. That simplicity gives the piece its impact. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what struck me most is the mirrored structure. By placing the two experiences side by side, the poem creates its argument through contrast rather than explanation. That simplicity gives the piece its impact. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 8th, 2026 10:55
The Pen (Is) a Problem
sorenbarrett said:
There is a message in this that gos deeper. Equality is never equal for all are different. One my protest the unfairness of it but the universe has a different standard of justice. Well written and a fave
June 8th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
There is a message in this that gos deeper. Equality is never equal for all are different. One my protest the unfairness of it but the universe has a different standard of justice. Well written and a fave
June 8th, 2026 04:33
Malicious Compliance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really moved me. There’s a sincerity here that feels refreshing...a simple plea for kindness in a world that often seems determined to choose the harder path. Its warmth is its strength. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really moved me. There’s a sincerity here that feels refreshing...a simple plea for kindness in a world that often seems determined to choose the harder path. Its warmth is its strength. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 6th, 2026 08:24
Malicious Compliance
sorenbarrett said:
Peace a much better option even appreciated by Sun Tzu in the art of war stating that the best victory is one that one does not need to fight. A lovely write Franz
June 5th, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
Peace a much better option even appreciated by Sun Tzu in the art of war stating that the best victory is one that one does not need to fight. A lovely write Franz
June 5th, 2026 18:41
Bruises
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, I think many people who have lived through difficult relationships or environments will recognize this immediately. That feeling of reading a room, reading a face, and knowing what is coming before it arrives is all too real. This resonated with me. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, I think many people who have lived through difficult relationships or environments will recognize this immediately. That feeling of reading a room, reading a face, and knowing what is coming before it arrives is all too real. This resonated with me. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 15:19
Bruises
sorenbarrett said:
Here sensitivity approaches paranoia or maybe post traumatic stress. A sad poem of present reaction to past treatment
June 4th, 2026 02:51
sorenbarrett said:
Here sensitivity approaches paranoia or maybe post traumatic stress. A sad poem of present reaction to past treatment
June 4th, 2026 02:51
Chasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard. The struggle here feels painfully human...knowing where you want to go while feeling uncertain how to get there. There’s an honesty in this that lands immediately. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 20:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard. The struggle here feels painfully human...knowing where you want to go while feeling uncertain how to get there. There’s an honesty in this that lands immediately. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 20:24
A Humble Request
Tristan Robert Lange said:
RIght!?!?! Totally agreed...and a fave for such a poetically put, simple request. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
RIght!?!?! Totally agreed...and a fave for such a poetically put, simple request. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:19
Shadowboxing
Durdica Porobija said:
You based the approximation of doubt on the gradation of shadows very successfully.
May 30th, 2026 07:16
Durdica Porobija said:
You based the approximation of doubt on the gradation of shadows very successfully.
May 30th, 2026 07:16
A Humble Request
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and written. I think I have been there before
May 29th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and written. I think I have been there before
May 29th, 2026 13:52
Humanity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is sharp, angry, and unflinching. I like how the poem broadens the idea of violence beyond physical harm and points toward the quieter ways people can be diminished and consumed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is sharp, angry, and unflinching. I like how the poem broadens the idea of violence beyond physical harm and points toward the quieter ways people can be diminished and consumed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:53
Humanity
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor that speaks of our hollowness. Well done
May 28th, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor that speaks of our hollowness. Well done
May 28th, 2026 15:59
Humanity
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
such a true and observant write on social injustice
May 28th, 2026 11:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
such a true and observant write on social injustice
May 28th, 2026 11:23
Phantasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this carries such a quiet loneliness to it. The feeling of standing present in the world while somehow remaining unseen comes through with painful clarity. The restraint of the piece makes the isolation feel even heavier. Beautiful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this carries such a quiet loneliness to it. The feeling of standing present in the world while somehow remaining unseen comes through with painful clarity. The restraint of the piece makes the isolation feel even heavier. Beautiful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:03
Phantasm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm. There is a feeling of alienation here. Well written
May 27th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm. There is a feeling of alienation here. Well written
May 27th, 2026 14:01
Correction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I appreciate how plainly the piece separates nakedness itself from the idea of moral failure, grounding the thought in Scripture rather than shock value. There’s a real sense of conviction throughout. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I appreciate how plainly the piece separates nakedness itself from the idea of moral failure, grounding the thought in Scripture rather than shock value. There’s a real sense of conviction throughout. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:25
Freewheelin’
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words. The shift from physical mileage to spiritual exhaustion lands immediately…and hard. “puts the miles on my soul / not just on my car” is one heck of a close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 26th, 2026 20:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words. The shift from physical mileage to spiritual exhaustion lands immediately…and hard. “puts the miles on my soul / not just on my car” is one heck of a close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 26th, 2026 20:05
Correction
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective. ,Well written and one must ask why being naked ever was considered a sin.
May 26th, 2026 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective. ,Well written and one must ask why being naked ever was considered a sin.
May 26th, 2026 18:25
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