Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Phantasm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm. There is a feeling of alienation here. Well written
May 27th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm. There is a feeling of alienation here. Well written
May 27th, 2026 14:01
Correction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I appreciate how plainly the piece separates nakedness itself from the idea of moral failure, grounding the thought in Scripture rather than shock value. There’s a real sense of conviction throughout. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I appreciate how plainly the piece separates nakedness itself from the idea of moral failure, grounding the thought in Scripture rather than shock value. There’s a real sense of conviction throughout. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:25
Freewheelin’
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words. The shift from physical mileage to spiritual exhaustion lands immediately…and hard. “puts the miles on my soul / not just on my car” is one heck of a close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 26th, 2026 20:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words. The shift from physical mileage to spiritual exhaustion lands immediately…and hard. “puts the miles on my soul / not just on my car” is one heck of a close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 26th, 2026 20:05
Correction
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective. ,Well written and one must ask why being naked ever was considered a sin.
May 26th, 2026 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective. ,Well written and one must ask why being naked ever was considered a sin.
May 26th, 2026 18:25
Tongues of Fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this feels like the perfect Pentecost poem, my friend. A reminder that the same tongue can either bless or wound is about as timely and Spirit-filled as it gets. There’s such warmth and wisdom in the simplicity of this. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 14:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this feels like the perfect Pentecost poem, my friend. A reminder that the same tongue can either bless or wound is about as timely and Spirit-filled as it gets. There’s such warmth and wisdom in the simplicity of this. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 14:58
Tongues of Fire
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem advocates for kindness and the conscious choice to use gentle words to positively impact others, aligning with the biblical teaching from the Book of James about the importance of controlling one\'s speech.
May 24th, 2026 16:41
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem advocates for kindness and the conscious choice to use gentle words to positively impact others, aligning with the biblical teaching from the Book of James about the importance of controlling one\'s speech.
May 24th, 2026 16:41
Tongues of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message contained in this write well said.
May 24th, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message contained in this write well said.
May 24th, 2026 15:54
The Burning Bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz…this burns with a sharp, compact intensity. The progression from “Desire” to “Passion” to “Sin” to “Id” feels almost like descending levels of the psyche, each stanza stripping away another layer of restraint. “drives sense right off the rails” lands perfectly at the end. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz…this burns with a sharp, compact intensity. The progression from “Desire” to “Passion” to “Sin” to “Id” feels almost like descending levels of the psyche, each stanza stripping away another layer of restraint. “drives sense right off the rails” lands perfectly at the end. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:09
The Burning Bones
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of how primal urges take over. With Id driving the bus ego takes a back seat and superego is never picked up. Well done Franz
May 24th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of how primal urges take over. With Id driving the bus ego takes a back seat and superego is never picked up. Well done Franz
May 24th, 2026 03:54
Compassion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard because of how quietly true it feels. The poem starts almost conversationally, then slowly reveals the emotional cost of self-protection underneath it all. That final image of the spirit becoming “cold and pure” lands with real sadness. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard because of how quietly true it feels. The poem starts almost conversationally, then slowly reveals the emotional cost of self-protection underneath it all. That final image of the spirit becoming “cold and pure” lands with real sadness. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:32
Mile Marker
arqios said:
Best drives are on asphalt roads. But that\'s just a personal preference. And melting asphalt, now there\'s the limit. Very engaging read. 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:02
arqios said:
Best drives are on asphalt roads. But that\'s just a personal preference. And melting asphalt, now there\'s the limit. Very engaging read. 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:02
Compassion
sorenbarrett said:
Well written a poem of conflict between the is and the desired. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
Well written a poem of conflict between the is and the desired. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 19:27
Compassion
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the tension between authenticity and the desire to maintain appearances: that being true to oneself can lead to emotional exhaustion, while putting up emotional barriers might protect the ego at the cost of genuine connection and warmth.
May 22nd, 2026 18:37
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the tension between authenticity and the desire to maintain appearances: that being true to oneself can lead to emotional exhaustion, while putting up emotional barriers might protect the ego at the cost of genuine connection and warmth.
May 22nd, 2026 18:37
Bare Necessities
sorenbarrett said:
Return to nature in this poem of the AL natural. Well done
May 20th, 2026 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
Return to nature in this poem of the AL natural. Well done
May 20th, 2026 10:43
Cremation
sorenbarrett said:
Maintaining proper mental health by stress management and organizing one\'s life is important. Here this poem seems to indicate that prayer may also help. Nicely done
May 19th, 2026 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Maintaining proper mental health by stress management and organizing one\'s life is important. Here this poem seems to indicate that prayer may also help. Nicely done
May 19th, 2026 18:07
The Warning
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab enchanting like intrigue. Abstract muse poem woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab enchanting like intrigue. Abstract muse poem woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:17
The Warning
sorenbarrett said:
Things do not always go as planned and we do not always get what we search for. Nicely written Franz
May 19th, 2026 03:21
sorenbarrett said:
Things do not always go as planned and we do not always get what we search for. Nicely written Franz
May 19th, 2026 03:21
Failure
sorenbarrett said:
Whether habits, stubbornness, blindness, or stupidity many walk the same path over and over. Well written with good rhyme and flow. Loved it a fave
May 18th, 2026 02:23
sorenbarrett said:
Whether habits, stubbornness, blindness, or stupidity many walk the same path over and over. Well written with good rhyme and flow. Loved it a fave
May 18th, 2026 02:23
Wilderness
sorenbarrett said:
Most coincidentally this poem falls on the day I return to my forest home and its wonders. A lovely write well done
May 15th, 2026 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
Most coincidentally this poem falls on the day I return to my forest home and its wonders. A lovely write well done
May 15th, 2026 13:35
Morning Mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this has such a peaceful meditative quality to it. The mist becomes more than weather…it feels like a temporary veil over the harshness of the world, allowing imagination and tranquility room to breathe. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this has such a peaceful meditative quality to it. The mist becomes more than weather…it feels like a temporary veil over the harshness of the world, allowing imagination and tranquility room to breathe. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:34
Morning Mist
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful transition from sleep to waking state where the blur softens all. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful transition from sleep to waking state where the blur softens all. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 08:08
Censored
sorenbarrett said:
This is clear in its message but it applies to being yourself at most any level. People do not want to see the real person just the dressed up one. Well done
May 13th, 2026 16:33
sorenbarrett said:
This is clear in its message but it applies to being yourself at most any level. People do not want to see the real person just the dressed up one. Well done
May 13th, 2026 16:33
Weary
Janey_Boo said:
What a beautiful way to describe this, wonderful written!!
May 13th, 2026 07:05
Janey_Boo said:
What a beautiful way to describe this, wonderful written!!
May 13th, 2026 07:05
Dissonance
Abdullah123 said:
All of us feel this dissociated from the world at times, and I personally believe it is those moments we must live for… great write, it reminds me of the short story: The Man Who Walked On The Moon by JG Ballard.
May 12th, 2026 08:39
Abdullah123 said:
All of us feel this dissociated from the world at times, and I personally believe it is those moments we must live for… great write, it reminds me of the short story: The Man Who Walked On The Moon by JG Ballard.
May 12th, 2026 08:39
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