Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Grave Concerns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this delivers an entire existential reckoning in a handful of lines. The vastness around us only makes our inevitable destination feel more intimate...and more chilling. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2026 21:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this delivers an entire existential reckoning in a handful of lines. The vastness around us only makes our inevitable destination feel more intimate...and more chilling. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2026 21:24
Sparks
sorenbarrett said:
Spectacular the stage well set in this poem. Nicely done.
September 10th, 2026 21:02
sorenbarrett said:
Spectacular the stage well set in this poem. Nicely done.
September 10th, 2026 21:02
Grave Concerns
sorenbarrett said:
So true but I won\'t know then. My space is already purchased. Of course there is always cremation. Well done.
September 9th, 2026 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
So true but I won\'t know then. My space is already purchased. Of course there is always cremation. Well done.
September 9th, 2026 17:56
Shabbat
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
The best lessons delivered are those I deem, that strut in their poetic finery.
September 3rd, 2026 10:43
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
The best lessons delivered are those I deem, that strut in their poetic finery.
September 3rd, 2026 10:43
The Problem
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a terrific piece, Fränz! The contrast between social presentation and complete self-acceptance is sharp, funny, and quietly profound...then the weather arrives and renders every imposed distinction meaningless. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a terrific piece, Fränz! The contrast between social presentation and complete self-acceptance is sharp, funny, and quietly profound...then the weather arrives and renders every imposed distinction meaningless. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 3rd, 2026 10:22
The Problem
somberabyss said:
“Why must I
dress myself up to your standards
when nakedness fits me best?”
such a good line! great work :)
September 2nd, 2026 17:49
somberabyss said:
“Why must I
dress myself up to your standards
when nakedness fits me best?”
such a good line! great work :)
September 2nd, 2026 17:49
The Problem
sorenbarrett said:
Open and closed to opposites in duality. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 17:22
sorenbarrett said:
Open and closed to opposites in duality. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 17:22
Blossom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vivid little poem, Fränz. The creative spark here feels wild and fertile...something that does not merely appear, but roots itself and starts spreading everywhere. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vivid little poem, Fränz. The creative spark here feels wild and fertile...something that does not merely appear, but roots itself and starts spreading everywhere. Loved this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 1st, 2026 12:30
Blossom
sorenbarrett said:
Riot of roses a great image here. Nicely written it runs rampant
August 31st, 2026 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
Riot of roses a great image here. Nicely written it runs rampant
August 31st, 2026 20:32
The Long Shadow
Jabberwocky said:
Mmm
But some things die while the shadow lies over them.
Interesting read. Makes me think, jeez I hate that! My head is too busy as is 🤪
August 31st, 2026 16:35
Jabberwocky said:
Mmm
But some things die while the shadow lies over them.
Interesting read. Makes me think, jeez I hate that! My head is too busy as is 🤪
August 31st, 2026 16:35
Hooligan
Jabberwocky said:
Pirates of the world unite, you have nothing to lose but your timidity... and a few canonballs
👍
August 31st, 2026 03:30
Jabberwocky said:
Pirates of the world unite, you have nothing to lose but your timidity... and a few canonballs
👍
August 31st, 2026 03:30
Tend Your Garden
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a meaningful poem, my friend. You take something so ordinary and so dangerous, the words we throw out in anger, and bring it back to intention, restraint, and love. A very worthwhile reminder, Fränz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a meaningful poem, my friend. You take something so ordinary and so dangerous, the words we throw out in anger, and bring it back to intention, restraint, and love. A very worthwhile reminder, Fränz. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2026 21:24
Tend Your Garden
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write where pain is compared to joy and love. Well written with good rhyme and meter. Well done
August 29th, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write where pain is compared to joy and love. Well written with good rhyme and meter. Well done
August 29th, 2026 20:23
Frenzy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful and relatable piece. I know that desperate struggle to express yourself while emotion is still running the show...and that final comparison captures the self-inflicted damage perfectly. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 15:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful and relatable piece. I know that desperate struggle to express yourself while emotion is still running the show...and that final comparison captures the self-inflicted damage perfectly. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 15:54
Frenzy
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording gets the fave in this poem of wisdom. Nicely written with a vivid image
August 27th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording gets the fave in this poem of wisdom. Nicely written with a vivid image
August 27th, 2026 03:42
Trees
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is wonderfully dark and brutally effective. That reversal makes humanity temporary while the natural world becomes the enduring witness...we are foolish to believe nature depends upon us rather than the other way around. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 15:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is wonderfully dark and brutally effective. That reversal makes humanity temporary while the natural world becomes the enduring witness...we are foolish to believe nature depends upon us rather than the other way around. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 15:22
Trees
Kevin Hulme said:
I don\'t think I\'ll ever see ,
Resentment more in the form of a Tree.
Fine write.
August 24th, 2026 19:53
Kevin Hulme said:
I don\'t think I\'ll ever see ,
Resentment more in the form of a Tree.
Fine write.
August 24th, 2026 19:53
Trees
sorenbarrett said:
Trees having the last laugh is an interesting image reminding me of Avatar. Well done
August 24th, 2026 18:56
sorenbarrett said:
Trees having the last laugh is an interesting image reminding me of Avatar. Well done
August 24th, 2026 18:56
Trees
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh yes - that\'s right on the money I think. the whole of the next phase in a nutshell.
I enjoyed your directness and brevity.
August 24th, 2026 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh yes - that\'s right on the money I think. the whole of the next phase in a nutshell.
I enjoyed your directness and brevity.
August 24th, 2026 18:34
The Fawn Response
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me deeply. You reveal how apparent warmth and composure can be survival strategies rather than signs that someone feels safe. A powerful reminder to approach others with compassion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me deeply. You reveal how apparent warmth and composure can be survival strategies rather than signs that someone feels safe. A powerful reminder to approach others with compassion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:44
The Fawn Response
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its message well. What lies behind the social facade that we all put on for others. Politeness does it mask other feelings? Nicely written
August 23rd, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its message well. What lies behind the social facade that we all put on for others. Politeness does it mask other feelings? Nicely written
August 23rd, 2026 03:54
The Brothel
NafisaSB said:
a poignant and moving poem - hope you got/get closure...
August 21st, 2026 01:51
NafisaSB said:
a poignant and moving poem - hope you got/get closure...
August 21st, 2026 01:51
Bliss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a freeing piece, Fränz. The humor and vulnerability draw us in, while the ocean carries away everything heavy and guarded. Even the wordplay embodies that release from living too cautiously. Beautifully done, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a freeing piece, Fränz. The humor and vulnerability draw us in, while the ocean carries away everything heavy and guarded. Even the wordplay embodies that release from living too cautiously. Beautifully done, my friend. A fave for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:53
Oceans
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, the ocean has always fascinated and unsettled me for exactly this reason. We glimpse the surface while an entire unseen world moves beneath us. This captures that fear perfectly, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, the ocean has always fascinated and unsettled me for exactly this reason. We glimpse the surface while an entire unseen world moves beneath us. This captures that fear perfectly, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:38
Bliss
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of disinhibition and freedom very nicely written
August 20th, 2026 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of disinhibition and freedom very nicely written
August 20th, 2026 15:58
Oceans
sorenbarrett said:
This write has a most ominous feel to it. Nicely written Franz
August 19th, 2026 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
This write has a most ominous feel to it. Nicely written Franz
August 19th, 2026 20:31
Petrification
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
An excellent and relatable poem, that for me undeniably strikes too close to home. We will all lose the war with Time. In my personal struggle circumstance has conspired to inflict me with Photophobia. Daytime no longer holds any particular joy and is yet another foe I must add to an ever growing list. A poem to remember. Bravo Zulu.
August 19th, 2026 10:11
Rhan Sterling Henry said:
An excellent and relatable poem, that for me undeniably strikes too close to home. We will all lose the war with Time. In my personal struggle circumstance has conspired to inflict me with Photophobia. Daytime no longer holds any particular joy and is yet another foe I must add to an ever growing list. A poem to remember. Bravo Zulu.
August 19th, 2026 10:11
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