Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Dissonance
Friendship said:
Lovely written, your poem captures the essence of mindfulness and the beauty of living in the present moment. It contrasts the rush of daily life with the serenity found in stillness and reflection.
May 11th, 2026 12:05
Friendship said:
Lovely written, your poem captures the essence of mindfulness and the beauty of living in the present moment. It contrasts the rush of daily life with the serenity found in stillness and reflection.
May 11th, 2026 12:05
NSFW
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a well written message that remains a cultural problem to this day. Well said and a fave
May 10th, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Clever a well written message that remains a cultural problem to this day. Well said and a fave
May 10th, 2026 09:30
Fables
sorenbarrett said:
What a great poem with a great message. The rhyme is good and the last lines made the poem. A fave
May 8th, 2026 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
What a great poem with a great message. The rhyme is good and the last lines made the poem. A fave
May 8th, 2026 19:55
Skin
sorenbarrett said:
How comfortable are each of us with our naked self. Well expressed
May 7th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
How comfortable are each of us with our naked self. Well expressed
May 7th, 2026 13:25
Pilgrim
Friendship said:
Pilgrim State Psychiatric Hospital on Long Island. I heard so many Horror stories of this place growing up on the Island.
May 6th, 2026 11:54
Friendship said:
Pilgrim State Psychiatric Hospital on Long Island. I heard so many Horror stories of this place growing up on the Island.
May 6th, 2026 11:54
A Force of Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Pride and strength hold firm and the wind rushes by until strong enough to break them. Well done
May 5th, 2026 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
Pride and strength hold firm and the wind rushes by until strong enough to break them. Well done
May 5th, 2026 20:21
Fractured
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the various roles a person can embody in different situations. You highlight the struggle of self-perception and the pressure to conform to societal expectations while grappling with one\'s inner self.
May 5th, 2026 05:48
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the various roles a person can embody in different situations. You highlight the struggle of self-perception and the pressure to conform to societal expectations while grappling with one\'s inner self.
May 5th, 2026 05:48
Fractured
sorenbarrett said:
We are all complex beings with different facets. To understand all of them would be a monumental task. Well written
May 4th, 2026 21:21
sorenbarrett said:
We are all complex beings with different facets. To understand all of them would be a monumental task. Well written
May 4th, 2026 21:21
Babylon
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem addresses themes of temptation, excess, and the psychological toll of modern life, emphasizing how easy access to indulgent distractions can lead to a deterioration of mental and spiritual well-being.
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem addresses themes of temptation, excess, and the psychological toll of modern life, emphasizing how easy access to indulgent distractions can lead to a deterioration of mental and spiritual well-being.
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
Babylon
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and metered this poem has an old biblical feel to values
May 3rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and metered this poem has an old biblical feel to values
May 3rd, 2026 04:12
Babylon
Poetic Dan said:
Ooo that\'s good and definitely worth a read. One more click is sometimes all I didn\'t need
May 3rd, 2026 01:08
Poetic Dan said:
Ooo that\'s good and definitely worth a read. One more click is sometimes all I didn\'t need
May 3rd, 2026 01:08
Carnality
Durdica Porobija said:
I agree that this duality, the ambivalence of the human being is a source of frustration and an unfinished battle. A well-written poem.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Durdica Porobija said:
I agree that this duality, the ambivalence of the human being is a source of frustration and an unfinished battle. A well-written poem.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Witness
sorenbarrett said:
The news a transmitter of tragedy leaves all shocked and broken. Nicely written
May 1st, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
The news a transmitter of tragedy leaves all shocked and broken. Nicely written
May 1st, 2026 16:36
Violins
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and seductive. This poem is a sirens call. Nicely written.
April 30th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and seductive. This poem is a sirens call. Nicely written.
April 30th, 2026 09:16
Violins
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. Your poem focuses on a shared experience between lovers, capturing a moment of reunion and affection following a shower. You emphasize physical and emotional closeness, suggesting that love can be felt in the smallest details.
April 30th, 2026 09:10
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. Your poem focuses on a shared experience between lovers, capturing a moment of reunion and affection following a shower. You emphasize physical and emotional closeness, suggesting that love can be felt in the smallest details.
April 30th, 2026 09:10
Oklahoma
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and rhyme of this poem but more so the message given a fave and by the way I lived in Oklahoma for four years and there is not much to see there.
April 29th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and rhyme of this poem but more so the message given a fave and by the way I lived in Oklahoma for four years and there is not much to see there.
April 29th, 2026 04:43
Atonement
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor of our means of transferring blame in scapegoating and what better method that poetic. Well written
April 26th, 2026 00:32
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor of our means of transferring blame in scapegoating and what better method that poetic. Well written
April 26th, 2026 00:32
Transformation
RSM0812 said:
Tbis could be about transformation in the natural world. From wood to a human being. Everything changes with time into something else. Hopefully for the better. Nicely written.
April 25th, 2026 04:14
RSM0812 said:
Tbis could be about transformation in the natural world. From wood to a human being. Everything changes with time into something else. Hopefully for the better. Nicely written.
April 25th, 2026 04:14
Transformation
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that takes us to two extremes of life. Nicely written
April 24th, 2026 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that takes us to two extremes of life. Nicely written
April 24th, 2026 18:38
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