Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Lessons
Doggerel Dave said:
The culminative result, it seems, is insight.
A confessional in good order.
April 20th, 2026 17:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The culminative result, it seems, is insight.
A confessional in good order.
April 20th, 2026 17:54
Lessons
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are all part but none the whole of it all and many would say that any one by itself is not a good thing. It is its opposite that has more value
April 20th, 2026 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are all part but none the whole of it all and many would say that any one by itself is not a good thing. It is its opposite that has more value
April 20th, 2026 12:22
Infidel
sorenbarrett said:
Why should one be ashamed and hide what God gave us. Well written
April 19th, 2026 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
Why should one be ashamed and hide what God gave us. Well written
April 19th, 2026 15:14
Grains of Sand
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful and lovely poem that is in some way mournful
April 18th, 2026 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful and lovely poem that is in some way mournful
April 18th, 2026 14:06
Carnality
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration and poetic words of human insight make this poem a fave
April 17th, 2026 20:22
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration and poetic words of human insight make this poem a fave
April 17th, 2026 20:22
Consequences
sorenbarrett said:
One must be most careful in what one says and does for it affects many. Well done
April 16th, 2026 21:24
sorenbarrett said:
One must be most careful in what one says and does for it affects many. Well done
April 16th, 2026 21:24
Shadowboxing
Friendship said:
Well written . Your poem delves into the psychological landscape of fear and paranoia, illustrating how these feelings can disrupt a person\'s peace of mind and manifest metaphorically as creeping shadows.
April 15th, 2026 18:34
Friendship said:
Well written . Your poem delves into the psychological landscape of fear and paranoia, illustrating how these feelings can disrupt a person\'s peace of mind and manifest metaphorically as creeping shadows.
April 15th, 2026 18:34
Shadowboxing
Mutley Ravishes said:
Sounds like real meditation! Great title too.
April 15th, 2026 18:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
Sounds like real meditation! Great title too.
April 15th, 2026 18:28
Shadowboxing
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely imaged and painted in poetic words. Well done
April 15th, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely imaged and painted in poetic words. Well done
April 15th, 2026 16:21
Collection
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is always a weight too heavy to bear and must be shed. Nicely written
April 14th, 2026 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
Regret is always a weight too heavy to bear and must be shed. Nicely written
April 14th, 2026 13:04
Field Stripped
sorenbarrett said:
Exposed and vulnerable are the elements. I read in this poem nicely written.
April 13th, 2026 22:20
sorenbarrett said:
Exposed and vulnerable are the elements. I read in this poem nicely written.
April 13th, 2026 22:20
Mile Marker
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and strong this statement cries out for recognition. Well said
April 13th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and strong this statement cries out for recognition. Well said
April 13th, 2026 04:01
Wendigo
shadowbones said:
Very good lines took me to Struggling with something challenging
April 12th, 2026 22:05
shadowbones said:
Very good lines took me to Struggling with something challenging
April 12th, 2026 22:05
Wendigo
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely set in words of power a great metaphor for primal drives. Loved it a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely set in words of power a great metaphor for primal drives. Loved it a fave
April 12th, 2026 05:33
Drive
sorenbarrett said:
Those wheels like the gears of the machinery of time never stop and can not be guided but grind out their work. Well done
April 10th, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Those wheels like the gears of the machinery of time never stop and can not be guided but grind out their work. Well done
April 10th, 2026 15:54
Adjuration
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem nicely written the truth is only what you believe. A fave
April 9th, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem nicely written the truth is only what you believe. A fave
April 9th, 2026 12:00
Life’s a Nude Beach
Doggerel Dave said:
Soren(above) is getting tired. He it\'s master couldn\'t, or chose not to, see the metaphor here.
But you never respond. \'Play up and play the game\' you will get a wider readership; your poetry is worth the effort.
I\'m probably out of order here - there\'s a possibility you have other more productive avenues....
April 9th, 2026 06:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Soren(above) is getting tired. He it\'s master couldn\'t, or chose not to, see the metaphor here.
But you never respond. \'Play up and play the game\' you will get a wider readership; your poetry is worth the effort.
I\'m probably out of order here - there\'s a possibility you have other more productive avenues....
April 9th, 2026 06:08
Life’s a Nude Beach
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good point made here, why are people ashamed of their naked form no other animal seems to be.
April 8th, 2026 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good point made here, why are people ashamed of their naked form no other animal seems to be.
April 8th, 2026 16:07
Archon
sorenbarrett said:
This feels very old testament in form and nature reminding me of the valley of dry bones
April 7th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
This feels very old testament in form and nature reminding me of the valley of dry bones
April 7th, 2026 19:40
Monday Morning Musings
sorenbarrett said:
True it seems that tragedy strikes when least expected and it takes time to heal. Well done
April 6th, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
True it seems that tragedy strikes when least expected and it takes time to heal. Well done
April 6th, 2026 09:34
Dead River Road
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun one that stretched the mind. Good to see you again
April 4th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun one that stretched the mind. Good to see you again
April 4th, 2026 20:44
Exodus
sorenbarrett said:
I am most glad for the author note for in reading the poem first it sounded more like birth and I was not so sure about purifying the world. Now it makes more sense. Powerful in that sense of interpretation
January 20th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I am most glad for the author note for in reading the poem first it sounded more like birth and I was not so sure about purifying the world. Now it makes more sense. Powerful in that sense of interpretation
January 20th, 2026 03:49
A Novel Perception
sorenbarrett said:
There is a definite foreboding to this poem that is echoed in each of its lines. Well done
January 19th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
There is a definite foreboding to this poem that is echoed in each of its lines. Well done
January 19th, 2026 04:02
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