Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Petrification
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is delightfully grim. The rhythm keeps it light while the humor grows darker with each stanza, and by the end I couldn\'t help but smile at the shared misery of greeting another fresh horror...another new day. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 18:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is delightfully grim. The rhythm keeps it light while the humor grows darker with each stanza, and by the end I couldn\'t help but smile at the shared misery of greeting another fresh horror...another new day. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 18:57
Exposed
sorenbarrett said:
Suggestive and sensual it turns warm and welcoming a lovely reassuring poem or relationship.
July 14th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Suggestive and sensual it turns warm and welcoming a lovely reassuring poem or relationship.
July 14th, 2026 07:33
Exposed
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sweet intimacy here, finding love in the ordinary moments before the world wakes up.
A simple kitchen scene becomes a warm little portrait of affection, comfort, and quiet devotion.
July 14th, 2026 07:14
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sweet intimacy here, finding love in the ordinary moments before the world wakes up.
A simple kitchen scene becomes a warm little portrait of affection, comfort, and quiet devotion.
July 14th, 2026 07:14
Exposed
isa kemmy said:
es errineret mich an die gutes altes Gedächtnis, est ist sehr schön
July 14th, 2026 06:37
isa kemmy said:
es errineret mich an die gutes altes Gedächtnis, est ist sehr schön
July 14th, 2026 06:37
Petrification
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has an appealing flow to it and the content is about a feeling that most have had before an uneasiness that seems to have no reason or cause but is identifiable and present. Well done
July 14th, 2026 03:04
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has an appealing flow to it and the content is about a feeling that most have had before an uneasiness that seems to have no reason or cause but is identifiable and present. Well done
July 14th, 2026 03:04
Humanity
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of current war in the world. Unnecessary and regretable. Machines of death.
July 12th, 2026 09:41
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of current war in the world. Unnecessary and regretable. Machines of death.
July 12th, 2026 09:41
Choose Your Poison
RSM0812 said:
Blue or red. Which one to take. The blue, i think.
July 12th, 2026 09:40
RSM0812 said:
Blue or red. Which one to take. The blue, i think.
July 12th, 2026 09:40
The Pen (Is) a Problem
RSM0812 said:
Naked women is art of God. Naked man is angels reincarnated. Good write.
July 12th, 2026 09:39
RSM0812 said:
Naked women is art of God. Naked man is angels reincarnated. Good write.
July 12th, 2026 09:39
Unblessed
rhmn_7 said:
Your poem beautifully highlights the profound power of free will, reminding us that our daily choices shape our destinies and invite either divine blessings or curses dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 08:09
rhmn_7 said:
Your poem beautifully highlights the profound power of free will, reminding us that our daily choices shape our destinies and invite either divine blessings or curses dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 08:09
Unblessed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thoughtful poem. \"Every night and every morn / we get to choose\" especially resonated with me. I like that it keeps the focus on personal responsibility while also holding onto the hope that each day offers a fresh beginning. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thoughtful poem. \"Every night and every morn / we get to choose\" especially resonated with me. I like that it keeps the focus on personal responsibility while also holding onto the hope that each day offers a fresh beginning. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:29
Unblessed
sorenbarrett said:
Viewing blessings from a religious point of view and how they should motivate. Well written
July 11th, 2026 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
Viewing blessings from a religious point of view and how they should motivate. Well written
July 11th, 2026 14:25
Calmicidal
sorenbarrett said:
We are often wearing a mask that covers the true self below. A good read
July 10th, 2026 03:37
sorenbarrett said:
We are often wearing a mask that covers the true self below. A good read
July 10th, 2026 03:37
Calmicidal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, you got me with this one. That wonderfully restrained opening paired with the completely unrestrained inner monologue is a fantastic contrast. It\'s sharp, funny, and just relatable enough to make the grin a little guilty. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, you got me with this one. That wonderfully restrained opening paired with the completely unrestrained inner monologue is a fantastic contrast. It\'s sharp, funny, and just relatable enough to make the grin a little guilty. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:58
Tribulations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful piece. The conflict here feels deeply human, and that image of the embers continuing on after everything else has burned away carries real staying power. We all wrestle with parts of ourselves we\'d rather have neatly resolved, and this doesn\'t pretend otherwise. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful piece. The conflict here feels deeply human, and that image of the embers continuing on after everything else has burned away carries real staying power. We all wrestle with parts of ourselves we\'d rather have neatly resolved, and this doesn\'t pretend otherwise. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:33
Tribulations
sorenbarrett said:
The fires of passion so well put in this poem and in horror as we roar down that hill we find the breaks are out. Too late to shift into low gear the rpm\'s too high. We head for destruction. A fave
July 9th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
The fires of passion so well put in this poem and in horror as we roar down that hill we find the breaks are out. Too late to shift into low gear the rpm\'s too high. We head for destruction. A fave
July 9th, 2026 04:26
Buried Bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, I’ve felt that same delayed ache…not seeing the knife until after it’s already found its mark. There’s something so honest about admitting the wound came before the understanding of it. You captured that so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, I’ve felt that same delayed ache…not seeing the knife until after it’s already found its mark. There’s something so honest about admitting the wound came before the understanding of it. You captured that so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:17
Tongues of Fire
Nerd said:
I like how you mentioning a gentle word could change a person’s mood that is so true and the same goes for the opposite.
July 7th, 2026 23:37
Nerd said:
I like how you mentioning a gentle word could change a person’s mood that is so true and the same goes for the opposite.
July 7th, 2026 23:37
Clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, the image of extending friendship to the stranger you’ve become is what struck me most. It’s such a gentle, curious response to something that could easily feel like loss. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, the image of extending friendship to the stranger you’ve become is what struck me most. It’s such a gentle, curious response to something that could easily feel like loss. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 7th, 2026 22:21
Buried Bones
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks metaphorically of the mark a dead relationship leaves. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks metaphorically of the mark a dead relationship leaves. Nicely written
July 7th, 2026 16:04
Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a thought that many have had of a previous life and I wonder would they extend a hand of friendship back. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:24
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed a thought that many have had of a previous life and I wonder would they extend a hand of friendship back. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:24
Terror
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration turned panic for those that don\'t understand. Well written
July 5th, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
A celebration turned panic for those that don\'t understand. Well written
July 5th, 2026 15:59
Leaves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really struck me. So few words, yet they carry such a heavy weight. It feels both apocalyptic and deeply human. Beautiful haiku, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really struck me. So few words, yet they carry such a heavy weight. It feels both apocalyptic and deeply human. Beautiful haiku, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:41
Leaves
Lyriclitty said:
This line landed—like the small comforts don’t hold when everything’s burning. Thank you for that clear, quiet ache.
July 4th, 2026 00:09
Lyriclitty said:
This line landed—like the small comforts don’t hold when everything’s burning. Thank you for that clear, quiet ache.
July 4th, 2026 00:09
Divine Retribution
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautiful piece. I love how it moves from the stripping away of the old life to the quiet hope of becoming something new. The final image of thoughts as pure as a newborn leaves the poem resting in grace. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautiful piece. I love how it moves from the stripping away of the old life to the quiet hope of becoming something new. The final image of thoughts as pure as a newborn leaves the poem resting in grace. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:41
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