Comments received on poems by katherinem7
Somewhere else
FredPeyer said:
You just perfectly described the place we all would like to be. Beautiful writing. Thank you!
July 20th, 2017 18:31
FredPeyer said:
You just perfectly described the place we all would like to be. Beautiful writing. Thank you!
July 20th, 2017 18:31
Emptiness
FredPeyer said:
You captured loneliness perfectly with a haunting tale of emptiness. Love your writing!
Mahalo
July 5th, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
You captured loneliness perfectly with a haunting tale of emptiness. Love your writing!
Mahalo
July 5th, 2017 11:24
Fleeting love
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
I really liked this poem! Your emotion screams with every paragraph simply beautiful
July 4th, 2017 11:21
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
I really liked this poem! Your emotion screams with every paragraph simply beautiful
July 4th, 2017 11:21
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burning-embers said:
What an amazing verse! I am in awe of your talent! You ARE like stardust and if i were the person \'holding\' u in your writing here, then i would graciously encourage you to slip away into the world where your beautiful future awaits. I would glory in the knowledge that u once looked into my old eyes and were so inspired.
This goes straight into my favourites. I\'m zonked by this.
July 3rd, 2017 14:36
burning-embers said:
What an amazing verse! I am in awe of your talent! You ARE like stardust and if i were the person \'holding\' u in your writing here, then i would graciously encourage you to slip away into the world where your beautiful future awaits. I would glory in the knowledge that u once looked into my old eyes and were so inspired.
This goes straight into my favourites. I\'m zonked by this.
July 3rd, 2017 14:36
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kevin browne said:
Don\'t allow this poem to slip through though because it\'s pretty magical. great write.
July 3rd, 2017 13:47
kevin browne said:
Don\'t allow this poem to slip through though because it\'s pretty magical. great write.
July 3rd, 2017 13:47
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Louis Gibbs said:
A beauty of a poem, Katherine! Brilliant and touching. You have a rare gift for poetry.
July 3rd, 2017 13:07
Louis Gibbs said:
A beauty of a poem, Katherine! Brilliant and touching. You have a rare gift for poetry.
July 3rd, 2017 13:07
Why can\'t you love me?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooh KATHERINE another "cri de coeur" I hope you find it cathartic ! Love the structure of the poem ! I can empathise because I have had an S /O (significant other) who - didn't really love me - took me for granted and I could never please her ! Thinking of you every blessing - Yours - BRIAN
June 7th, 2016 15:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooh KATHERINE another "cri de coeur" I hope you find it cathartic ! Love the structure of the poem ! I can empathise because I have had an S /O (significant other) who - didn't really love me - took me for granted and I could never please her ! Thinking of you every blessing - Yours - BRIAN
June 7th, 2016 15:58
Summer breeze
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL KATHERINE - Your describe the sensation of being loved by the "elements" perfectly. My favourite is playing and bathing in a waterfall ! The water caresses every cell in my body - perfection. Thanks for sharing love al fresco - BRIAN
June 6th, 2016 14:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL KATHERINE - Your describe the sensation of being loved by the "elements" perfectly. My favourite is playing and bathing in a waterfall ! The water caresses every cell in my body - perfection. Thanks for sharing love al fresco - BRIAN
June 6th, 2016 14:51
Drowning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KATHERINE - A great "free verse" poem. I'm sure you don't want to drown yourself - BUT - if you do remember to tie a heavy weight to yourself before you jump in and you will drown ! I have been in difficulty in water twice and there was a lot of what I experienced in you poem. You can see the surface but you can't reach it - I was trapped in a lake underwater in weeds ! When i was a child I jumped in the deep end (six feet) and inhaled the water - awful - someone pulled me out and pumped the water out ! I still love water but would never jump off a bridge to end it all - unless it was a Motorway Bridge ! A great poem and it made me shiver ! Thanks for sharing. Yours BRIAN
June 5th, 2016 16:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KATHERINE - A great "free verse" poem. I'm sure you don't want to drown yourself - BUT - if you do remember to tie a heavy weight to yourself before you jump in and you will drown ! I have been in difficulty in water twice and there was a lot of what I experienced in you poem. You can see the surface but you can't reach it - I was trapped in a lake underwater in weeds ! When i was a child I jumped in the deep end (six feet) and inhaled the water - awful - someone pulled me out and pumped the water out ! I still love water but would never jump off a bridge to end it all - unless it was a Motorway Bridge ! A great poem and it made me shiver ! Thanks for sharing. Yours BRIAN
June 5th, 2016 16:08
I remember
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM KATHERINE ! A symbiosis of despair and hope ! This is true in my life when I feel low. God knows and understands my situation and sends just the right person to pick me up or one of His Angels just when I am near to breaking. Thanks for caring & sharing. As well as an encouraging content it is a beautifully crafted poem - quatrains & rhyming couplets - perfection ! Yours BRIAN
June 4th, 2016 10:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM KATHERINE ! A symbiosis of despair and hope ! This is true in my life when I feel low. God knows and understands my situation and sends just the right person to pick me up or one of His Angels just when I am near to breaking. Thanks for caring & sharing. As well as an encouraging content it is a beautifully crafted poem - quatrains & rhyming couplets - perfection ! Yours BRIAN
June 4th, 2016 10:08
For a friend
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL LOVE POEM KATHERINE ! Love the rhythm and consistent rhyme pattern. Love shared multiplies the joy of love a million times. I'm a nature boy at heart so i love every word in this poem ! Thanks for caring (about nature) and sharing (about love !) Yours BRIAN
June 3rd, 2016 16:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL LOVE POEM KATHERINE ! Love the rhythm and consistent rhyme pattern. Love shared multiplies the joy of love a million times. I'm a nature boy at heart so i love every word in this poem ! Thanks for caring (about nature) and sharing (about love !) Yours BRIAN
June 3rd, 2016 16:23
My mind is hiding
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KATHERINE - INTERESTING FIRST POEM - Good "free verse" structure and a very painful content. As Humans we are tripartate Body - Mind - Spirit. As we get older our bodies and minds get weaker and the Spirit depends on our faith. I know many people (mainly in the 60+ age group) whose minds are slowly slipping away. YES it does hide the BAD times (pain) but the GOOD times recede as well ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
June 2nd, 2016 12:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KATHERINE - INTERESTING FIRST POEM - Good "free verse" structure and a very painful content. As Humans we are tripartate Body - Mind - Spirit. As we get older our bodies and minds get weaker and the Spirit depends on our faith. I know many people (mainly in the 60+ age group) whose minds are slowly slipping away. YES it does hide the BAD times (pain) but the GOOD times recede as well ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
June 2nd, 2016 12:11
