Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Knitting
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of few is being forced into the lives of the many.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality of few is being forced into the lives of the many.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 00:30
Enlightenment
Goldfinch60 said:
That enlightenment is there for us all if only people used it and moved to a better life.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That enlightenment is there for us all if only people used it and moved to a better life.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:38
Paradox
L. B. Mek said:
why is it, we never assume
they, like us
were fallible, and so
wiped each other out
and created
what we assume as being
\'the big bang\'...
how\'s that for a twist, lol
August 19th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
why is it, we never assume
they, like us
were fallible, and so
wiped each other out
and created
what we assume as being
\'the big bang\'...
how\'s that for a twist, lol
August 19th, 2021 05:13
Archaic2
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new ideas within us bring us to a new reality in life.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new ideas within us bring us to a new reality in life.
Andy
August 19th, 2021 00:40
Consciousness2
Goldfinch60 said:
That global mind often thinks in the wrong way.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That global mind often thinks in the wrong way.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:48
Hypnotics
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, we need to walk \'the path less trodden\' to get away from it.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John, we need to walk \'the path less trodden\' to get away from it.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:27
Hypnotics
Coyote said:
A poignant piece on the present state of affairs. Well done John🙂
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Coyote said:
A poignant piece on the present state of affairs. Well done John🙂
August 14th, 2021 11:47
Crushed
Coyote said:
Remindes me of Yeats \'Second Coming\'. A very poignant write for these turbulent times. Spot on.
August 12th, 2021 12:26
Coyote said:
Remindes me of Yeats \'Second Coming\'. A very poignant write for these turbulent times. Spot on.
August 12th, 2021 12:26
Evaporation
L. B. Mek said:
\'Infinite
futures.
Future
you’s
ghost like.
Depending
on choices\'..
insightful commentary with arrowed aim
drilling to excavate and unfurl
a gleaning of consequence\'s: sequences
outing those truth\'s, we wish
someone had told us, way before
we: learnt our Math, of life...
(poetry, any of that great metaphysical generation
would have been proud, to claim as their own, I think
a thought provoking read, thanks for sharing dear poet)
August 12th, 2021 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Infinite
futures.
Future
you’s
ghost like.
Depending
on choices\'..
insightful commentary with arrowed aim
drilling to excavate and unfurl
a gleaning of consequence\'s: sequences
outing those truth\'s, we wish
someone had told us, way before
we: learnt our Math, of life...
(poetry, any of that great metaphysical generation
would have been proud, to claim as their own, I think
a thought provoking read, thanks for sharing dear poet)
August 12th, 2021 03:48
Menticide
Goldfinch60 said:
Have things changed since 1984, I don\'t think so, they have only become worse.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Have things changed since 1984, I don\'t think so, they have only become worse.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:43
Menticide
Coyote said:
Wow John, you really hit paydirt here. This concise verse taps into the present chaos perfectly. Nicely done sir.
August 10th, 2021 10:38
Coyote said:
Wow John, you really hit paydirt here. This concise verse taps into the present chaos perfectly. Nicely done sir.
August 10th, 2021 10:38
War
Goldfinch60 said:
They may be controlling us in many ways but some realise this and are looking for better individualistic ways to move on.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
They may be controlling us in many ways but some realise this and are looking for better individualistic ways to move on.
Andy
August 7th, 2021 00:12
War
Coyote said:
The war few see coming. It boils down to whether we serve technology or technology serves us. Welcome to the machine. Excellent poem.
August 6th, 2021 13:00
Coyote said:
The war few see coming. It boils down to whether we serve technology or technology serves us. Welcome to the machine. Excellent poem.
August 6th, 2021 13:00
Dystopia Utopia
Goldfinch60 said:
Those eyes may even open wider and see the truth that is being hidden from us all.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those eyes may even open wider and see the truth that is being hidden from us all.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:42
Connection
L. B. Mek said:
next breakthrough - Gadget
companies like Tesla, are working on
are A. I. chips - implemented
Directly - Physically
within our Skulls
connecting
to our Brains...
(lookup BMI or BCI or Neauralink)
yup, it ain\'t no farfetched science fiction anymore
soon, Very soon
they\'ll be downloading their latest
whimsical - Ideologies
into our Herd mentality, Networks
with each software, \'upgrade\'
(thanks for sharing, such a sobering read
dear poet)
August 3rd, 2021 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
next breakthrough - Gadget
companies like Tesla, are working on
are A. I. chips - implemented
Directly - Physically
within our Skulls
connecting
to our Brains...
(lookup BMI or BCI or Neauralink)
yup, it ain\'t no farfetched science fiction anymore
soon, Very soon
they\'ll be downloading their latest
whimsical - Ideologies
into our Herd mentality, Networks
with each software, \'upgrade\'
(thanks for sharing, such a sobering read
dear poet)
August 3rd, 2021 04:53
Manifestation
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mind projection
connection
to all
there is.
Ideas.
Thoughts.
Concepts.
Reality
built.\'
(we can never tell, truly
and that\'s the beauty
for our truth today
maybe our ignorance
in tomorrow\'s supposedly wiser
rear-view mirror;
and yet
just a peek over our shoulders, today
reminds us, how much of wisdom\'s lessons
we\'ve already: forgotten...)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mind projection
connection
to all
there is.
Ideas.
Thoughts.
Concepts.
Reality
built.\'
(we can never tell, truly
and that\'s the beauty
for our truth today
maybe our ignorance
in tomorrow\'s supposedly wiser
rear-view mirror;
and yet
just a peek over our shoulders, today
reminds us, how much of wisdom\'s lessons
we\'ve already: forgotten...)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 04:29
Broken Pieces
Goldfinch60 said:
That warm breeze has been and come in my life but now is back again and will always be there.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That warm breeze has been and come in my life but now is back again and will always be there.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:12
Broken Pieces
John Prophet said:
Hi Neil.
I’ve been married to her for 12 years now! Thank you for reading.
JP
July 31st, 2021 08:03
John Prophet said:
Hi Neil.
I’ve been married to her for 12 years now! Thank you for reading.
JP
July 31st, 2021 08:03
Edge
Goldfinch60 said:
That edge can be very narrow but at my age it is now very thick thankfully.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That edge can be very narrow but at my age it is now very thick thankfully.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:52
Contemplation
L. B. Mek said:
\'who thinks
of such
things?
Who thinks
to ask
why?
How?
Moving on.
Much to
do.
No time.\'
(well, if this ain\'t the most acutely, apt
summarisation of modernity\'s: mindset
I don\'t know
what could word it more eloquently)
another insightful write of measured commentary
dear poet
July 30th, 2021 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'who thinks
of such
things?
Who thinks
to ask
why?
How?
Moving on.
Much to
do.
No time.\'
(well, if this ain\'t the most acutely, apt
summarisation of modernity\'s: mindset
I don\'t know
what could word it more eloquently)
another insightful write of measured commentary
dear poet
July 30th, 2021 03:43
Immersion
Goldfinch60 said:
Being immersed can make you stronger within and then able to break out into a new place of freedom and wonder.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Being immersed can make you stronger within and then able to break out into a new place of freedom and wonder.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:54
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