Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Dystopia Utopia
Goldfinch60 said:
Those eyes may even open wider and see the truth that is being hidden from us all.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those eyes may even open wider and see the truth that is being hidden from us all.
Andy
August 4th, 2021 00:42
Connection
L. B. Mek said:
next breakthrough - Gadget
companies like Tesla, are working on
are A. I. chips - implemented
Directly - Physically
within our Skulls
connecting
to our Brains...
(lookup BMI or BCI or Neauralink)
yup, it ain\'t no farfetched science fiction anymore
soon, Very soon
they\'ll be downloading their latest
whimsical - Ideologies
into our Herd mentality, Networks
with each software, \'upgrade\'
(thanks for sharing, such a sobering read
dear poet)
August 3rd, 2021 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
next breakthrough - Gadget
companies like Tesla, are working on
are A. I. chips - implemented
Directly - Physically
within our Skulls
connecting
to our Brains...
(lookup BMI or BCI or Neauralink)
yup, it ain\'t no farfetched science fiction anymore
soon, Very soon
they\'ll be downloading their latest
whimsical - Ideologies
into our Herd mentality, Networks
with each software, \'upgrade\'
(thanks for sharing, such a sobering read
dear poet)
August 3rd, 2021 04:53
Manifestation
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mind projection
connection
to all
there is.
Ideas.
Thoughts.
Concepts.
Reality
built.\'
(we can never tell, truly
and that\'s the beauty
for our truth today
maybe our ignorance
in tomorrow\'s supposedly wiser
rear-view mirror;
and yet
just a peek over our shoulders, today
reminds us, how much of wisdom\'s lessons
we\'ve already: forgotten...)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'Mind projection
connection
to all
there is.
Ideas.
Thoughts.
Concepts.
Reality
built.\'
(we can never tell, truly
and that\'s the beauty
for our truth today
maybe our ignorance
in tomorrow\'s supposedly wiser
rear-view mirror;
and yet
just a peek over our shoulders, today
reminds us, how much of wisdom\'s lessons
we\'ve already: forgotten...)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 04:29
Broken Pieces
Goldfinch60 said:
That warm breeze has been and come in my life but now is back again and will always be there.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That warm breeze has been and come in my life but now is back again and will always be there.
Andy
August 1st, 2021 00:12
Broken Pieces
John Prophet said:
Hi Neil.
I’ve been married to her for 12 years now! Thank you for reading.
JP
July 31st, 2021 08:03
John Prophet said:
Hi Neil.
I’ve been married to her for 12 years now! Thank you for reading.
JP
July 31st, 2021 08:03
Edge
Goldfinch60 said:
That edge can be very narrow but at my age it is now very thick thankfully.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That edge can be very narrow but at my age it is now very thick thankfully.
Andy
July 31st, 2021 00:52
Contemplation
L. B. Mek said:
\'who thinks
of such
things?
Who thinks
to ask
why?
How?
Moving on.
Much to
do.
No time.\'
(well, if this ain\'t the most acutely, apt
summarisation of modernity\'s: mindset
I don\'t know
what could word it more eloquently)
another insightful write of measured commentary
dear poet
July 30th, 2021 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'who thinks
of such
things?
Who thinks
to ask
why?
How?
Moving on.
Much to
do.
No time.\'
(well, if this ain\'t the most acutely, apt
summarisation of modernity\'s: mindset
I don\'t know
what could word it more eloquently)
another insightful write of measured commentary
dear poet
July 30th, 2021 03:43
Immersion
Goldfinch60 said:
Being immersed can make you stronger within and then able to break out into a new place of freedom and wonder.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Being immersed can make you stronger within and then able to break out into a new place of freedom and wonder.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 00:54
Integers
John Prophet said:
Thank you LBM. Your comments are always appreciated JP
July 20th, 2021 07:37
John Prophet said:
Thank you LBM. Your comments are always appreciated JP
July 20th, 2021 07:37
Integers
L. B. Mek said:
I laugh at how they try and bring \'maths\'
into philosophical arguments this days, assuming
by hanging-on to its coattail\'s, they can claim back
some level of credibility..
then I remember Pythagoras and wonder
if he had found Mexican jumping beans
whether he\'d have started
a necromancy religion...? lmao
(another insightful and thought provoking write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 20th, 2021 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
I laugh at how they try and bring \'maths\'
into philosophical arguments this days, assuming
by hanging-on to its coattail\'s, they can claim back
some level of credibility..
then I remember Pythagoras and wonder
if he had found Mexican jumping beans
whether he\'d have started
a necromancy religion...? lmao
(another insightful and thought provoking write
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
July 20th, 2021 04:05
Integers
Goldfinch60 said:
Calculations can be seen in so many places John.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Calculations can be seen in so many places John.
Andy
July 20th, 2021 01:11
Narrative
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words John, those humans have a great deal for which to answer.
Andy
July 15th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words John, those humans have a great deal for which to answer.
Andy
July 15th, 2021 00:37
Blending
Goldfinch60 said:
But it will not end yet as there are endless possibilities in those mixes.
Andy
July 11th, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
But it will not end yet as there are endless possibilities in those mixes.
Andy
July 11th, 2021 00:56
Tentacles
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John but maybe if we look hard enough some of us can avoid those tentacles.
Andy
July 11th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true John but maybe if we look hard enough some of us can avoid those tentacles.
Andy
July 11th, 2021 00:39
Aggregator
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new creations come into our minds every moment of our lives John.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Those new creations come into our minds every moment of our lives John.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:38
Culmination
Goldfinch60 said:
I often wonder what would have happened if I took a different turning in my life to the ones I took but feel that I have ended in the right place for me.
Andy
July 7th, 2021 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I often wonder what would have happened if I took a different turning in my life to the ones I took but feel that I have ended in the right place for me.
Andy
July 7th, 2021 00:56
What Now
L. B. Mek said:
that artwork is so impactful
the profound distinction
between the closed eyes in the corner
whether through despair or acceptance
and that, bold - accusatory glare at the front
with those hauntingly beautiful eyes,
creates such an unnerving feel
as if, just by looking at the artwork
we\'re trespassing
on something, so delicately private..
and how your words
give voice to those defiant eyes
all together, what a wonderful marriage
of art and poetry..
thank you for sharing!
(may I ask who the artist is, dear poet)
July 6th, 2021 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
that artwork is so impactful
the profound distinction
between the closed eyes in the corner
whether through despair or acceptance
and that, bold - accusatory glare at the front
with those hauntingly beautiful eyes,
creates such an unnerving feel
as if, just by looking at the artwork
we\'re trespassing
on something, so delicately private..
and how your words
give voice to those defiant eyes
all together, what a wonderful marriage
of art and poetry..
thank you for sharing!
(may I ask who the artist is, dear poet)
July 6th, 2021 03:33
What Now
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment is so different and we must treasure each one in that moment before they are gone.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment is so different and we must treasure each one in that moment before they are gone.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 01:33
Uneasy Passage
Goldfinch60 said:
But your navigation brought you home to us with your wonderful words John.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
But your navigation brought you home to us with your wonderful words John.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 01:10
En Gard
Goldfinch60 said:
That existence in this place is the fight we have all one to be in this place.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
That existence in this place is the fight we have all one to be in this place.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:09
Chess
L. B. Mek said:
a timeless metaphor
worded so accessible,
but unlike life
Chess, offers a Draw-path
of an escape...
a wonderful read, thank you
June 29th, 2021 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
a timeless metaphor
worded so accessible,
but unlike life
Chess, offers a Draw-path
of an escape...
a wonderful read, thank you
June 29th, 2021 03:03
Chess
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John.
I play croquet and one form of croquet is looked upon as playing chess in some ways in the moves you make in trying to prevent your opponent running a hoop.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
So true John.
I play croquet and one form of croquet is looked upon as playing chess in some ways in the moves you make in trying to prevent your opponent running a hoop.
Andy
June 29th, 2021 00:29
Red Bow
L. B. Mek said:
by anyway, were you up relatively early on a Saturday
watching a certain show
when you were inspired to write this? lol
I especially enjoyed
your metaphorical utilisation of spatial imagery
June 28th, 2021 07:06
L. B. Mek said:
by anyway, were you up relatively early on a Saturday
watching a certain show
when you were inspired to write this? lol
I especially enjoyed
your metaphorical utilisation of spatial imagery
June 28th, 2021 07:06
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