Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Bronze Age
L. B. Mek said:

I don\'t know, dear poet
if you compare the past and the present
a lot has changed, but
depending on your perspective
it may be for the slightly better or much - much, worse..?

November 1st, 2021 05:11

Bronze Age
Goldfinch60 said:

So true that we have not changed that much except that life expectancy is longer.

Andy

November 1st, 2021 00:52

Sirens
Goldfinch60 said:

M\\y the sirens we hear be the ones that spell danger.

Andy

October 30th, 2021 00:31

Dawn Till Dusk
Goldfinch60 said:

That treadmill can be so tiring, I came off it and walk at my own speed in differing directions now I am retired.

Andy

October 24th, 2021 00:53

Dawn Till Dusk
Accidental Poet said:

That\'s the highway of life John, which you envisioned here so perfectly. I turn 65 in December and in the process of signing up for Medicare. The transition between working full time and retiring will be a welcome relief. Fortunately I have many hobbies to keep me active. Great write John. 😊

October 23rd, 2021 10:25

Dawn Till Dusk
Lorna said:

You\'ve got it in a nutshell............ tiring isn\'t it.......

October 23rd, 2021 05:52

Deities
Goldfinch60 said:

Those human designed deities are meaningless, we each have our own Spirit within us that will take us to eternity.

Andy

October 23rd, 2021 00:45

Sight
Goldfinch60 said:

Many just look but never see.

Andy

October 22nd, 2021 00:48

Sight
HangingbyaHalo said:

Oh what a different world it would be if none of us could see.
This piece made me stop and think. Well put thank you for sharing.
-B-

October 21st, 2021 18:13

Beyond The Veil
Goldfinch60 said:

Behind that veil we sometimes find reality.

Andy

October 20th, 2021 00:45

Empyrean
L. B. Mek said:

\'Universal
knowledge.
Learning.
Bungee
bounce back.
Back to
the source.
Never ending
journey.
Next stop,
next challenge
one after
the next.\'
that\'s why, we need only
\'forgive\' ourselves a break,
progress, as to the rate of our \'gifted\' fate
accept, the distance
to our insurmountable mountain peaks;
then simply succumb to that veiled meaning, in our: \'Journey\'s\' worth..
I ask, genuinely
how conceited must we be
to reach for perfection\'s mirages,
when we\'re - yet, to embark on the path for understanding
which Questions: are Relevant?
\'Let us, instead
accept our limitations
and succeed in identifying, exploiting and exhausting
all our gifted opportunities, maybe then
our future generations, can begin to contemplate
why the word Empyrean exists, for a humanity
that has yet to unfurl the repressed wings, tucked blind
deep, in its own genetics and mind...\' lol
(I can never help my lol cynicism in humanity\'s unlimited capacity for self aggrandisement,
we dream-up our endless heavens and deities
just to curate our escapism\'s future where we \'deservedly\' seat among them, while
simultaneously we wage a war with ourselves, daily
to convince ourselves
the dishes, \'should really be done, tonight\'
and not left for tomorrow morning
that will inevitably turn to
tomorrow evening and etc.
our dance of ludicrous hypocrisy continues, to entangle us
forever - stagnant
in our cyclical \'progression\', of elite level wilful ignorance
hiding, fervently
from that question, we never contemplate proactively
what-if,
this life we experience - as limited and foiled by suffering, as it is
is all that we\'re supposed, to \'perfect, elevate: evolve within\'...
and nothing else!
(ah, what can I say
once more your brilliant insights have my qwerty keys dancing away, mindlessly lol
thank you for sharing and inspiring my little scribbled reply, dear poet)

October 18th, 2021 06:04

Despotism
Paul Bell said:

Great thing about despots.
Another despot usually comes along and replaces them. A bit like British politics.

October 16th, 2021 06:38

Despotism
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes there are so many \"snake charmers\" in our world John, hopefully one day the snakes will bite back.

Andy

October 16th, 2021 01:31

Lotus
L. B. Mek said:

\'Lotus.
Unfolding
flower.
Unfolding
realms.
Each different,
unfolding
differently.
Different
hues.
Hues of
existence.
Infinite
unfolding’s.
Floating
on the
endless.\'..
these words, unearth
that Lotus flower, connectivity
in the recycling
of Nature and Humanity,
that inevitable rebirth of universal matter
\'dust to ashes
ashes to dust;
petals to earth
leaves to wind,
birds to water
fishes to clouds:
that cyclicality in our commonality\'..
A great write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet

October 14th, 2021 03:20

Lotus
Goldfinch60 said:

May those thoughts go on for eternity John.

Andy

October 14th, 2021 01:12

Avatar
Goldfinch60 said:

It is on its way John.

Andy

October 10th, 2021 01:07

Peaceful
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true John, I find my peace in Nature and in Music.

Andy

October 9th, 2021 00:28

Invasion2
Goldfinch60 said:

Many are now seeing this invasion and are moving away from it into a more individual life.

Andy

October 8th, 2021 00:26

Unhinged
Goldfinch60 said:

Free will is still there if you live outside the box.

Andy

October 6th, 2021 01:11

Philosophy
Goldfinch60 said:

Why? The only question that can never be answered, why?

Andy

October 5th, 2021 00:57

Philosophy
L. B. Mek said:

\'Shackled by
reality.
Dancing
in a
small hall.
Dancing,
exploring
nonetheless.
Philosophy,
why not?\'
Because its easier, to reverse engineer
Nature
and call it, progressively commercialised Science...
(where as, we
intrigued by antiquity\'s
searching mindset\'s, continue our inherited questing legacy
for historically contexed, wisdom
gotta stick together,
endlessly/pointlessly toiling away, like that great gadfly, and excepting nothing more
than what he himself received, in the end.
but hoping, one of us
will find that important question, as a key
to answering humanity\'s timeless need, for the meaning
in anything and Everything!)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

October 4th, 2021 07:12

Continuum2
John Prophet said:

Works for me Andy.
Thank you for reading

JP

October 3rd, 2021 07:28

Continuum2
Goldfinch60 said:

May those free minds move on to the positives that we deserve in our lives John.

Andy

October 3rd, 2021 00:49

Fields
Goldfinch60 said:

Many people are unaware that the answer to all computing scenarios is zero or one.
Maybe one day we will all be able to answer any question by saying zero or one. It will be easier for us oldies as we will not have to remember the things that we keep on forgetting.

Andy

October 1st, 2021 00:25

Fields
L. B. Mek said:

but still,
we get to have a lotta fun
on the way
a spontaneous hootenanny
to save the day
hip hip hooray! lol
(yeah its a Thursday morning
grey clouds of ensuing winter
all around,
allow me this moment of frivolity),
thanks for sharing, dear poet
sorry, I\'m just in a silly mood

September 30th, 2021 05:09

Hostage
Goldfinch60 said:

That battle is with us every moment John.

Andy

September 30th, 2021 00:18

Blank Slate
Goldfinch60 said:

That blank slate can be filled with so many things, one can only wish that only good things could be put on it.

Andy

September 29th, 2021 01:00

Lies2
L. B. Mek said:

(thanks for sharing, and for inspiring my scribbled reply, dear poet)
its easy to look back and judge those from the past for believing too easily,
for allowing others to lie to them and lead them blindly..
but aren\'t we the generation of modernity, that shut down Life itself
because of a lab leak, that needed Fauci, his greedy \'Investor\'s\' and their zealot scientists:
to Lie and Lie and Lie and Lie...
so Science, doesn\'t get branded with the same \'cancel\' brush
as all-things seemingly fraudulent and Archaic, like having faith?
see, its easy to find the faults in the world
we all see it, even when we try to ignore it,
but it gets a little heated, when we try and find the Faults in ourselves,
you know
the one thing in our lives, we have Direct control over
that One thing, we All - Equally, in the here & now of actuality
have a chance of changing: for the Better...
Here\'s a Wild notion
how about we start, with stopping the \'Lies\': \'We All\'
tell ourselves?
\'gnothi sauton\'
yeah, they knew this sht two millenniums ago....!
and we\'re still refusing: to utilise it!!!!!!!!!!!
its all so inanely hopeless, and so depressingly deflating...

September 28th, 2021 04:16

Lies2
Goldfinch60 said:

We are led by lies so we need to walk our own path in this world.

Andy

September 28th, 2021 00:35

Days
John Prophet said:

So true…

September 27th, 2021 19:51



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