Comments received on poems by John Prophet



Nextworld
Goldfinch60 said:

May that new world be filled with people who understand the glory of life.

Andy

December 28th, 2021 02:09

Nextworld
Caring dove said:

I believe the world will be a more peaceful place in the future .. that’s what I truly believe . I think things will change for the better

December 27th, 2021 08:51

Meant To Be
Goldfinch60 said:

The perfect you and the perfect me will be found in one of those infinitesimal parallel universes John.

Andy

December 24th, 2021 15:46

Eclectic
Draven said:

Interesting and nice poem. Love the layout too, to read it is very jarring and direct. Well done :)

December 21st, 2021 11:00

War Games
L. B. Mek said:

...and phew, must remember to breath:
\'Grant me the serenity, to accept
the things I cannot change
the courage, to change
the things I can
and the wisdom
to know: the difference...\'
(an all-consuming read
great execution, dear poet
thanks for sharing)

December 20th, 2021 06:35

Rinse And Repeat
Goldfinch60 said:

So much in life is repeated but does it necessarily get us into a better place.

Andy

December 15th, 2021 02:42

Rinse And Repeat
woundedheart said:

Very interesting piece , each generation paying for the lasts mistakes hoping not to repeat them.

December 14th, 2021 08:52

Rinse And Repeat
karvelD said:

Thought this was a cool read; liked the structure linking details to theme. ty_/\\_:)

December 14th, 2021 08:35

The Watchers
L. B. Mek said:

bad juju, lol
if only
the vindictive, despicable and abhorrent
actions of the maliciously greedy
can be excused away, so easily...
(always good to let out, the frustrations
thanks for sharing, dear poet)


December 13th, 2021 04:16

The Watchers
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John.

Andy

December 13th, 2021 01:50

Illusion2
Goldfinch60 said:

Those illusions are often there before us John but so many just look and do not see.

Andy

December 8th, 2021 02:24

Rage
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John but is that rage can be dispelled life would be so much better.

Andy

December 4th, 2021 02:37

Ghosts
L. B. Mek said:

I\'ve not come close to one
thus far in life
and I thank the universe, for that..
but I think, the concept
of our spirits
lingering on earth, after death
endlessly
is mindlessly sadistic;
and so, very much - against
the seemingly orderly, chaos
of nature, we inhabit
(a quirky write, thanks for sharing)

December 2nd, 2021 04:13

Life
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true, many look but so few see.

Andy

November 30th, 2021 01:46

Life
Caring dove said:

I don’t understand life . Life is for living , as they say .., so why do so many have to hurt go through problems and suffer … something I cannot understand ,

November 29th, 2021 10:33

Faith
L. B. Mek said:

worded drilling
excavating, the core
of religion\'s, many
hypocrisies...
\'dependent, Changeable
alter,
evolve.
What once
was, no
longer, Fervent\'
(a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)

November 29th, 2021 06:20

Faith
Goldfinch60 said:

We must have faith in ourselves as we are the only ones that can do anything about our lives.

Andy

November 29th, 2021 02:26

Games
Goldfinch60 said:

True words, we never know what they are planning for us so to move along a different path is the way for us who care.

Andy

November 27th, 2021 01:55

Dogma
L. B. Mek said:

it always made me wonder:
to the dogmatic - fanatic
who, do they assume
inked their dogma\'s, texts?
or at the very least
interpreted - it, as legible
to mere mortals,
was it not, other
fallible humans, just like us...?
ergo - why so adamant
that your dogma, is faultless
by what logic
did you end-up
at that, conveniently warped: conclusion...!
(a timely write
although, when reading history\'s pages
your words, would read
as being timely, at anytime
in humanity\'s history)

November 23rd, 2021 04:57

Lemmings
Goldfinch60 said:

So many follow along that path to nowhere, I take an alternative path to somewhere.

Andy

November 21st, 2021 02:05

Lemmings
Ameljor said:

Love this, I wrote a poem recently along the same lines 😁

November 20th, 2021 21:19

Creeping
Widowoflove said:

I really like the style- with a few words it seems like you tell a rich and deep story

November 18th, 2021 17:26

Only Now
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is such nonsense and is so variable in our lives.

Andy

November 17th, 2021 01:40

Hive Mind
John Prophet said:

Strange times indeed LBM,
thank you for reading JP

November 16th, 2021 18:55

Hive Mind
L. B. Mek said:

and all, by design
Hive minded = easier, to Herd
minimising opposition
to incessant, coercive oppression.
\'Imperialism\'s
tyrannically totalitarian
Mindsets\'
Never, went away
merely: Internalised
aimed, at its own
to solidify its threadbare, foundations!
Devoid
of democratic, republic
or Marxist, socialist
aesthetic: window dressing
mirages...

November 16th, 2021 05:05

Hive Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true John, we need to see the world for ourselves not through the eyes of others.

Andy

November 16th, 2021 01:47

Hive Mind
Edthepoet said:

Currently studying this topic as a psychology undergraduate John. Great write.

November 15th, 2021 21:24

Hive Mind
Paul Bell said:

Strangely enough, we even kill people on screen. The robots will make us all redundant.

November 15th, 2021 16:45

Antidote
Goldfinch60 said:

Walking with Nature can cure so many problems within our lives John.

Andy

November 14th, 2021 01:48

Empty2
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John, so many are not going out, but I go against that trend and am out every day.

Andy

November 12th, 2021 01:33



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