Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Perception
Goldfinch60 said:
Whichever way you turn of perceive to turn it will open a new road in life and all will be new and wonderful.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Whichever way you turn of perceive to turn it will open a new road in life and all will be new and wonderful.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:12
Dark
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The pharoic satanic worldly powers this seems to be depicting in a dark chilling way. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2021 03:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The pharoic satanic worldly powers this seems to be depicting in a dark chilling way. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2021 03:18
Dark
L. B. Mek said:
(indeed, how unerringly accurately you pinpoint
that poetic vision for insightful commentary
you choose to share, so generously dear poet)..
\'that cyclical nature, revealed
through eyes who\'ve traversed life
to lands
where silver haired - wisdom
reflects, the morose predictability
of humanity\'s pathetic willingness
to hide
from all Truth\'s: but, those convenient - few
entrusted to distract
while we wait, for someone to come along
and sort-out, that inherited mess
we so effortlessly made far - far, worse...\'
May 3rd, 2021 06:35
L. B. Mek said:
(indeed, how unerringly accurately you pinpoint
that poetic vision for insightful commentary
you choose to share, so generously dear poet)..
\'that cyclical nature, revealed
through eyes who\'ve traversed life
to lands
where silver haired - wisdom
reflects, the morose predictability
of humanity\'s pathetic willingness
to hide
from all Truth\'s: but, those convenient - few
entrusted to distract
while we wait, for someone to come along
and sort-out, that inherited mess
we so effortlessly made far - far, worse...\'
May 3rd, 2021 06:35
Dark
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dark forces try to control us but some of us look beyond the darkness.
Andy
May 2nd, 2021 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dark forces try to control us but some of us look beyond the darkness.
Andy
May 2nd, 2021 01:39
Teetering
L. B. Mek said:
(its by getting it-off our chest, with write\'s like yours
we get a chance at experiencing, the best of life
great commentary, thanks for inspiring my only little rant, lol)
edging, ever closer to belated realisation\'s precipice
fulfilling our inherited tradition of self-destructive, promise
or, maybe - once more
like WW2 or other moments of annihilation, from way before
somehow - we\'ll get a second chance, for the umpteenth time
a new democratic social pyramid, all fresh and trusted
worshiping with blinded hope, while other\'s thrust themselves into
our revitalised new of logical science\'s despairing, grip
trump-esque/manufactured scapegoat - triumphed over
while that same society, routinely creating such a monstrosity
once more, goes unchecked
cos you know, its all Urim or Yin or Evil: definitely bad luck
so we\'re never really, at fault...
its everyone else that\'s ruining sh*t, if we only had the power
to do things right, world would be so perfect!
...
\'first they asking me if I\'ve paid my bills, like
whatcha think I\'m-a-tryina-do by applying to your sh*tty job!
and then they be asking if I read, or did good in school\' pssst
\'seriously? like I got time for dat sh*t!\'
...
truly, what an amazing time we\'re witnessing!
exclaimed everyone, that\'s breathed - long enough
to wonder how \'we\' homo sapiens: survived this long...
and they claim miracles don\'t exist
in that mirror - reflection, blinking: all dumbfounded
there\'s one, now refute that!
April 30th, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
(its by getting it-off our chest, with write\'s like yours
we get a chance at experiencing, the best of life
great commentary, thanks for inspiring my only little rant, lol)
edging, ever closer to belated realisation\'s precipice
fulfilling our inherited tradition of self-destructive, promise
or, maybe - once more
like WW2 or other moments of annihilation, from way before
somehow - we\'ll get a second chance, for the umpteenth time
a new democratic social pyramid, all fresh and trusted
worshiping with blinded hope, while other\'s thrust themselves into
our revitalised new of logical science\'s despairing, grip
trump-esque/manufactured scapegoat - triumphed over
while that same society, routinely creating such a monstrosity
once more, goes unchecked
cos you know, its all Urim or Yin or Evil: definitely bad luck
so we\'re never really, at fault...
its everyone else that\'s ruining sh*t, if we only had the power
to do things right, world would be so perfect!
...
\'first they asking me if I\'ve paid my bills, like
whatcha think I\'m-a-tryina-do by applying to your sh*tty job!
and then they be asking if I read, or did good in school\' pssst
\'seriously? like I got time for dat sh*t!\'
...
truly, what an amazing time we\'re witnessing!
exclaimed everyone, that\'s breathed - long enough
to wonder how \'we\' homo sapiens: survived this long...
and they claim miracles don\'t exist
in that mirror - reflection, blinking: all dumbfounded
there\'s one, now refute that!
April 30th, 2021 04:13
Performance Art
Goldfinch60 said:
Art is infinite within each artists mind and within the heart of those who see art for what it is.
Andy
April 25th, 2021 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Art is infinite within each artists mind and within the heart of those who see art for what it is.
Andy
April 25th, 2021 00:09
Gauntlet
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we\'re all
just a \'clicked, power button - of choice, away\'
from all that yearned-for: serenity...
intriguing, as always dear poet
April 23rd, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, we\'re all
just a \'clicked, power button - of choice, away\'
from all that yearned-for: serenity...
intriguing, as always dear poet
April 23rd, 2021 05:58
Gauntlet
Goldfinch60 said:
As we run that gauntlet each step we take gives us experience and when we have gained enough we will turn off those machines.
Andy
April 23rd, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
As we run that gauntlet each step we take gives us experience and when we have gained enough we will turn off those machines.
Andy
April 23rd, 2021 00:27
Attainment
L. B. Mek said:
truly, so many categorise of nearly - yet far, achievements
we so brazenly disregard - to forget:
\'imagine if Leonardo\'s \'Gran Cavallo\'
could have been financed till completion?
Would Mona Lisa\'s all-knowing smirk, have survived
all those centuries
without so much as a doubtful - dent...\'
lol, sorry if I ignorantly hijacked your meaning to a different continent, dear poet..
I just found this a fun read, thanks for sharing
April 22nd, 2021 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
truly, so many categorise of nearly - yet far, achievements
we so brazenly disregard - to forget:
\'imagine if Leonardo\'s \'Gran Cavallo\'
could have been financed till completion?
Would Mona Lisa\'s all-knowing smirk, have survived
all those centuries
without so much as a doubtful - dent...\'
lol, sorry if I ignorantly hijacked your meaning to a different continent, dear poet..
I just found this a fun read, thanks for sharing
April 22nd, 2021 04:38
Attainment
Goldfinch60 said:
We each gain an attainment over the years to lead us to where we are today.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We each gain an attainment over the years to lead us to where we are today.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:26
Thought Machine
John Prophet said:
Yup, the looking glass. The more I see the more I wonder. Thank you for reading my work
April 21st, 2021 07:14
John Prophet said:
Yup, the looking glass. The more I see the more I wonder. Thank you for reading my work
April 21st, 2021 07:14
Thought Machine
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true I often wonder where my thoughts come from.
Andy
April 21st, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true I often wonder where my thoughts come from.
Andy
April 21st, 2021 00:57
Sojourn
L. B. Mek said:
a thought provoking write, yet again dear poet
(and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
\'there is a reason why zebra\'s have evolutionarily masked themselves in unnatural stripes and choose to blend-in, than stand - out..
there is a reason why democracy was hated by ancient empires who strived for that \'ever greater\'..
there is a reason
we like to forget - existence
is but a sojourned state
and that our countdown, started
before we drew, our very first breath...\'
April 20th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
a thought provoking write, yet again dear poet
(and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
\'there is a reason why zebra\'s have evolutionarily masked themselves in unnatural stripes and choose to blend-in, than stand - out..
there is a reason why democracy was hated by ancient empires who strived for that \'ever greater\'..
there is a reason
we like to forget - existence
is but a sojourned state
and that our countdown, started
before we drew, our very first breath...\'
April 20th, 2021 04:15
Sojourn
Goldfinch60 said:
Those lessons in life give us the experience to move forward into a better future.
Andy
April 20th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Those lessons in life give us the experience to move forward into a better future.
Andy
April 20th, 2021 00:23
Sprites
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sprite can be all around us and help us in times of need.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sprite can be all around us and help us in times of need.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:34
Product
L. B. Mek said:
same as with your previous post
I found this an insightful write of poetically framed commentary
good read!
April 16th, 2021 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
same as with your previous post
I found this an insightful write of poetically framed commentary
good read!
April 16th, 2021 03:48
Packaging
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly underlines the underlying systemic malevolence in our aesthetic-first judgements of fellow humans,
great write!
April 15th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
brilliantly underlines the underlying systemic malevolence in our aesthetic-first judgements of fellow humans,
great write!
April 15th, 2021 05:44
Packaging
Goldfinch60 said:
Packaging is certainly immaterial in this world but there is an awful lot of it.
Andy
April 15th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Packaging is certainly immaterial in this world but there is an awful lot of it.
Andy
April 15th, 2021 00:43
Strangeness
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the rules are wrong and need changing then one can climb out of the swamp.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the rules are wrong and need changing then one can climb out of the swamp.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:48
Synergy
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, the speed of life is now a blur.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, the speed of life is now a blur.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:16
Clay
Goldfinch60 said:
I may have been formed originally but found my own way into the place where I am now.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I may have been formed originally but found my own way into the place where I am now.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:22
Grid
L. B. Mek said:
great wordplay and theme on Asimov\'s laws (mule indeed)
thought provoking, astute and impassioned commentary!
while briefly studying computer science and they were lecturing
this supposedly \'statute laws\' to programming, I too
couldn\'t help wondering how negligently short-sighted
and self-servingly ignorant, it all sounded
I mean: what rule exists within humanity to adhere?
by what measure do you quantify integrity
when our very choices
curate existence\'s binary of fate or ill-fate...
how easy to forget
in the very same generation that nurtured
that lauded humanitarian Gandhi
\'our\' collective society helped curate:
that human nightmare of cruelty, Hitler...
and what has cost more lives
in the history of humankind
than that corrosive perversion of love
titled theology...
April 2nd, 2021 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
great wordplay and theme on Asimov\'s laws (mule indeed)
thought provoking, astute and impassioned commentary!
while briefly studying computer science and they were lecturing
this supposedly \'statute laws\' to programming, I too
couldn\'t help wondering how negligently short-sighted
and self-servingly ignorant, it all sounded
I mean: what rule exists within humanity to adhere?
by what measure do you quantify integrity
when our very choices
curate existence\'s binary of fate or ill-fate...
how easy to forget
in the very same generation that nurtured
that lauded humanitarian Gandhi
\'our\' collective society helped curate:
that human nightmare of cruelty, Hitler...
and what has cost more lives
in the history of humankind
than that corrosive perversion of love
titled theology...
April 2nd, 2021 04:36
Grid
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us in that Brave New World think outside the box and are beyond the future planned for us.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us in that Brave New World think outside the box and are beyond the future planned for us.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:11
Baton
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, sad when humanity\'s past is deemed obsolete to validate progressive ignorance, as modernity\'s go-to state..
good write of measured lament
March 29th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, sad when humanity\'s past is deemed obsolete to validate progressive ignorance, as modernity\'s go-to state..
good write of measured lament
March 29th, 2021 04:30
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