Comments received on poems by Augustus
Pound Sterling?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW \"A\" SORRY IU MISSED THIS ONE ~ IT\'S A GEM. hanks for the lesson on pre-decimal currency ~ It\'s like me telling you about the History of Thanksgiving ! A full sovereign today is worth £250 about $400 ! I have six I inherited from my Granddad ! Loved your poem ~ it is an excellent example of a sonnet ~ 14 lines ~ good rhyme pattern and the final two lines a rhyming doublet ~ well done _ Thanks for caring (about UK history) and sharing with us BRITS ~ Yours BRIAN
November 24th, 2016 11:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW \"A\" SORRY IU MISSED THIS ONE ~ IT\'S A GEM. hanks for the lesson on pre-decimal currency ~ It\'s like me telling you about the History of Thanksgiving ! A full sovereign today is worth £250 about $400 ! I have six I inherited from my Granddad ! Loved your poem ~ it is an excellent example of a sonnet ~ 14 lines ~ good rhyme pattern and the final two lines a rhyming doublet ~ well done _ Thanks for caring (about UK history) and sharing with us BRITS ~ Yours BRIAN
November 24th, 2016 11:18
Pound Sterling?
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful sonnet, Thanks for the authors notes, it really helped decipher a very well written and interesting piece!!
November 22nd, 2016 10:44
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful sonnet, Thanks for the authors notes, it really helped decipher a very well written and interesting piece!!
November 22nd, 2016 10:44
Pound Sterling?
WriteBeLight said:
Very very clever! You are right. Not everything turns out the way we envision. This is an interesting piece. I very much like that and thanks for the Author\'s Note.
November 22nd, 2016 09:33
WriteBeLight said:
Very very clever! You are right. Not everything turns out the way we envision. This is an interesting piece. I very much like that and thanks for the Author\'s Note.
November 22nd, 2016 09:33
Pressure Gauge
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow such a creatively awesome poem esp from the 2nd stanza onwards where the rhyming gets fabulous. It\'s always good to be friendship bound, yor train is going swell poetically here. We r joining one of the engines then. Best wishes.
November 21st, 2016 23:14
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow such a creatively awesome poem esp from the 2nd stanza onwards where the rhyming gets fabulous. It\'s always good to be friendship bound, yor train is going swell poetically here. We r joining one of the engines then. Best wishes.
November 21st, 2016 23:14
Pressure Gauge
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good advice \"A\" in Love & Life the \"Branch Line\" is always much more rewarding than the ROLLER COASTER. In my experience relationships on the ROLLER COASTER tend to be RORO ~ Roll on ~ Roll off ! Thanks BRIAN
November 19th, 2016 12:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good advice \"A\" in Love & Life the \"Branch Line\" is always much more rewarding than the ROLLER COASTER. In my experience relationships on the ROLLER COASTER tend to be RORO ~ Roll on ~ Roll off ! Thanks BRIAN
November 19th, 2016 12:22
Pressure Gauge
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Friendship does make a better foundation that blasting through with the rollercoaster ride a lot of young people find themselves in. Very nice--Christina
November 19th, 2016 11:03
Christina8 said:
Great poem! Friendship does make a better foundation that blasting through with the rollercoaster ride a lot of young people find themselves in. Very nice--Christina
November 19th, 2016 11:03
Winter Shirt
willyweed said:
a very poignant poem indeed.
God bless you brother. peace ww
November 17th, 2016 21:33
willyweed said:
a very poignant poem indeed.
God bless you brother. peace ww
November 17th, 2016 21:33
Winter Shirt
WriteBeLight said:
Hey Augustus! Like the shirt! I am guilty like your wife...sorry🙂
November 17th, 2016 19:26
WriteBeLight said:
Hey Augustus! Like the shirt! I am guilty like your wife...sorry🙂
November 17th, 2016 19:26
Winter Shirt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS \"A\" ~ Sorry to hear your LIFE is now in the hands of the LORD ~ but despite this your poetry still has its edge. I don\'t have a wife and I find it hard to decluutter ! Maybe when I get married my wife will do it for me. You are on my prayer list ~ Every Blessing ~ Yoiurs BRIAN
November 17th, 2016 17:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS \"A\" ~ Sorry to hear your LIFE is now in the hands of the LORD ~ but despite this your poetry still has its edge. I don\'t have a wife and I find it hard to decluutter ! Maybe when I get married my wife will do it for me. You are on my prayer list ~ Every Blessing ~ Yoiurs BRIAN
November 17th, 2016 17:54
Winter Shirt
Christina8 said:
I really liked reading your poem but the last two lines were sad because of your diagnosis. I love seeing you here in our little MPS community!
November 17th, 2016 10:50
Christina8 said:
I really liked reading your poem but the last two lines were sad because of your diagnosis. I love seeing you here in our little MPS community!
November 17th, 2016 10:50
Winter Shirt
Tony36 said:
Old clothes are like old friends. You hate to let them go
November 17th, 2016 09:29
Tony36 said:
Old clothes are like old friends. You hate to let them go
November 17th, 2016 09:29
Lunatic
kevin browne said:
brilliantly expressed your love for our moon and the magical motions and adverse connections upon the human mind it has. facinating write Augustus.
November 15th, 2016 22:01
kevin browne said:
brilliantly expressed your love for our moon and the magical motions and adverse connections upon the human mind it has. facinating write Augustus.
November 15th, 2016 22:01
One Bark Away
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS \"A\" One of the problems with pets (unless they are Elephants) we always outlive them and we always get closer than we should ! It is especially hard for kids. Thanks for caring BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 15:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS \"A\" One of the problems with pets (unless they are Elephants) we always outlive them and we always get closer than we should ! It is especially hard for kids. Thanks for caring BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 15:05
One Bark Away
Christina8 said:
A very nice poem. But its so sad to see our pets leave us. Well done.
November 15th, 2016 11:45
Christina8 said:
A very nice poem. But its so sad to see our pets leave us. Well done.
November 15th, 2016 11:45
Lunatic
WriteBeLight said:
I guess we have one more time to see the Super Moon, which is today, Tuesday, Nov. 15. Hope the weather is perfect for it where ever you are. Timely poem!
November 15th, 2016 06:38
WriteBeLight said:
I guess we have one more time to see the Super Moon, which is today, Tuesday, Nov. 15. Hope the weather is perfect for it where ever you are. Timely poem!
November 15th, 2016 06:38
Lunatic
avigail said:
we can\'t be indifferent to the moon.
lovely Augustus
November 14th, 2016 22:13
avigail said:
we can\'t be indifferent to the moon.
lovely Augustus
November 14th, 2016 22:13
Lunatic
Christina8 said:
Very well done! It is true about hospital admits whenever the moon is full. As a nurse, never did figure that out. Thanks for sharing. Christina
November 14th, 2016 17:39
Christina8 said:
Very well done! It is true about hospital admits whenever the moon is full. As a nurse, never did figure that out. Thanks for sharing. Christina
November 14th, 2016 17:39
Lunatic
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WE ARE ALL LUNATICS \"A\" Because the MOON affects us all more than we realise. The MOON is not there by chance it was created specifically by GOD t o provide light at night ~ move the tides and influence fertility of animals ect.. It is much bigger and closer than normal Moons because GOD created it that way ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 17:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WE ARE ALL LUNATICS \"A\" Because the MOON affects us all more than we realise. The MOON is not there by chance it was created specifically by GOD t o provide light at night ~ move the tides and influence fertility of animals ect.. It is much bigger and closer than normal Moons because GOD created it that way ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
November 14th, 2016 17:31
Color Master
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow eloquent diction and in poetic colors. I esp like to use alabaster and vermilion in my poems so I enjoyed your use of them. Your palette was amazing combined with your muse. Kudos.
Great to read from U again.
November 13th, 2016 03:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow eloquent diction and in poetic colors. I esp like to use alabaster and vermilion in my poems so I enjoyed your use of them. Your palette was amazing combined with your muse. Kudos.
Great to read from U again.
November 13th, 2016 03:43
Color Master
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another amazing piece Augustus....sometimes your style reminds me of mine (Minus The derogatory words lol)
November 10th, 2016 12:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Another amazing piece Augustus....sometimes your style reminds me of mine (Minus The derogatory words lol)
November 10th, 2016 12:41
Color Master
WriteBeLight said:
Emotionally read, you handsome Devil in your Beret! I really loved what you had to say! Wonderful, creative imagination! Augustus, what a great presentation! (Loved the pop-ups!)
November 10th, 2016 10:45
WriteBeLight said:
Emotionally read, you handsome Devil in your Beret! I really loved what you had to say! Wonderful, creative imagination! Augustus, what a great presentation! (Loved the pop-ups!)
November 10th, 2016 10:45
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