Comments received on poems by Augustus
Courage
WriteBeLight said:
Great idea for a poem, Augustus. I have a friend who is going to try one of those match sites. She is very nervous about it, but feels it may be a better choice then just going to bars. I guess the vetting process is pretty tough. She seems happy so far with her results.
January 8th, 2017 07:40
WriteBeLight said:
Great idea for a poem, Augustus. I have a friend who is going to try one of those match sites. She is very nervous about it, but feels it may be a better choice then just going to bars. I guess the vetting process is pretty tough. She seems happy so far with her results.
January 8th, 2017 07:40
Courage
Christina8 said:
Yeah it\'s gotta be terrible these days. Don\'t even know if the picture posted is actually even their picture!!
January 7th, 2017 16:50
Christina8 said:
Yeah it\'s gotta be terrible these days. Don\'t even know if the picture posted is actually even their picture!!
January 7th, 2017 16:50
Courage
willyweed said:
well said Augustus this made me laugh I know I\'m terrible. ww
January 7th, 2017 13:36
willyweed said:
well said Augustus this made me laugh I know I\'m terrible. ww
January 7th, 2017 13:36
Chill in the Air
Daniel said:
Wow what an amazing story, brilliantly written!
January 6th, 2017 12:55
Daniel said:
Wow what an amazing story, brilliantly written!
January 6th, 2017 12:55
Chill in the Air
Christina8 said:
A very thoughtfully written story. I wonder what the meddler does to stay warm and clothed!
January 6th, 2017 12:26
Christina8 said:
A very thoughtfully written story. I wonder what the meddler does to stay warm and clothed!
January 6th, 2017 12:26
Chill in the Air
rrodriguez said:
Thoughtful and poignant in its message. We have to live and we must be wise in how we live and let others live.
January 6th, 2017 11:12
rrodriguez said:
Thoughtful and poignant in its message. We have to live and we must be wise in how we live and let others live.
January 6th, 2017 11:12
Chill in the Air
WriteBeLight said:
I can visualize the hypocrite sitting and enjoying the fire. Makes me think of the (acid rain) detrimental-impact, Electric-Car argument, about the emmissions from the power plants that generate the electricity to charge the electric-car batteries.
January 6th, 2017 11:09
WriteBeLight said:
I can visualize the hypocrite sitting and enjoying the fire. Makes me think of the (acid rain) detrimental-impact, Electric-Car argument, about the emmissions from the power plants that generate the electricity to charge the electric-car batteries.
January 6th, 2017 11:09
Chill in the Air
willyweed said:
Very clever and so well written, it gave me a chill. ww
January 6th, 2017 11:00
willyweed said:
Very clever and so well written, it gave me a chill. ww
January 6th, 2017 11:00
Spiraling
rrodriguez said:
Mr. Augustus, I pray that you get well very soon. It saddens me to hear that you are in the hospital.
January 5th, 2017 16:27
rrodriguez said:
Mr. Augustus, I pray that you get well very soon. It saddens me to hear that you are in the hospital.
January 5th, 2017 16:27
Spiraling
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem Augustus,
Horrible subject..
But great poem
January 4th, 2017 15:51
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem Augustus,
Horrible subject..
But great poem
January 4th, 2017 15:51
Spiraling
Christina8 said:
I do like your poem but its so sad to get the news. So many people struggle with it. Great job!--Christina
January 4th, 2017 12:17
Christina8 said:
I do like your poem but its so sad to get the news. So many people struggle with it. Great job!--Christina
January 4th, 2017 12:17
Spiraling
WriteBeLight said:
Love the science and reality in your poem and HATE cancer!!
January 4th, 2017 10:40
WriteBeLight said:
Love the science and reality in your poem and HATE cancer!!
January 4th, 2017 10:40
Spiraling
willyweed said:
cancer nuclear war in the body, your facts are sad but true. the clock is ticking.
January 4th, 2017 10:30
willyweed said:
cancer nuclear war in the body, your facts are sad but true. the clock is ticking.
January 4th, 2017 10:30
Spiraling
Michael Edwards said:
Cancer is such a big worry and there are so many forms - yes our diet and life styles are questionable as your great poem indicates.
January 4th, 2017 10:15
Michael Edwards said:
Cancer is such a big worry and there are so many forms - yes our diet and life styles are questionable as your great poem indicates.
January 4th, 2017 10:15
Hate
John-C-Hunter said:
I like this one, (the first which I read of your set). It\'s nice to see meaningful words used to lead the flow of thought and not just a \"wordsmith\" trying to impress.
January 4th, 2017 00:31
John-C-Hunter said:
I like this one, (the first which I read of your set). It\'s nice to see meaningful words used to lead the flow of thought and not just a \"wordsmith\" trying to impress.
January 4th, 2017 00:31
Ways of Love
Seeker said:
Augustus, the poem is beautiful, well written. I too have a son who has drifted away and has said some cruel things and strangely I feel guilty. Projectbeing is spot on, if we can love without expectation that can be the most rewarding love. This has been a bittersweet holiday season for me also. I lost a 27 year old grandson on Thanksgiving Day to drugs. We weren\'t especially close but now I wish we had been. Life is so damn fragile and short. Hang in there old boy.
January 3rd, 2017 07:26
Seeker said:
Augustus, the poem is beautiful, well written. I too have a son who has drifted away and has said some cruel things and strangely I feel guilty. Projectbeing is spot on, if we can love without expectation that can be the most rewarding love. This has been a bittersweet holiday season for me also. I lost a 27 year old grandson on Thanksgiving Day to drugs. We weren\'t especially close but now I wish we had been. Life is so damn fragile and short. Hang in there old boy.
January 3rd, 2017 07:26
Ways of Love
Projectbeing said:
Sweet read. I felt a little rejected by my son over the holidays. I remember telling my self once that the greatest thing you\'ll ever learn is to love even when love is not returned. I hope this helps,stay strong, you are love itself
January 3rd, 2017 00:11
Projectbeing said:
Sweet read. I felt a little rejected by my son over the holidays. I remember telling my self once that the greatest thing you\'ll ever learn is to love even when love is not returned. I hope this helps,stay strong, you are love itself
January 3rd, 2017 00:11
Ways of Love
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written poem, sorry to hear about your son
January 2nd, 2017 19:32
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written poem, sorry to hear about your son
January 2nd, 2017 19:32
Ways of Love
Hopey_xx said:
Beautiful poem, I hope your son returns all the calls you have sent x
January 2nd, 2017 13:59
Hopey_xx said:
Beautiful poem, I hope your son returns all the calls you have sent x
January 2nd, 2017 13:59
Ways of Love
WriteBeLight said:
Regret is a terrible thing. I hope they pick up the phone. I have my fingers crossed, and all will be good for you, Augustus!
January 2nd, 2017 12:59
WriteBeLight said:
Regret is a terrible thing. I hope they pick up the phone. I have my fingers crossed, and all will be good for you, Augustus!
January 2nd, 2017 12:59
Ways of Love
kevin browne said:
Brilliantly written with a depth of meaning that is hiding in the shadows of the poem, your son. writing poetry is an art form that creates so many stories that we can all learn from and cherish those words if need be. your poem here is one of those important pieces of work. keep your chin up and I hope you and your son rejoice in getting together at some point.
January 2nd, 2017 11:50
kevin browne said:
Brilliantly written with a depth of meaning that is hiding in the shadows of the poem, your son. writing poetry is an art form that creates so many stories that we can all learn from and cherish those words if need be. your poem here is one of those important pieces of work. keep your chin up and I hope you and your son rejoice in getting together at some point.
January 2nd, 2017 11:50
Ways of Love
Christina8 said:
beautifully written poem. So sad to hear about your son. Words dont seem to do this justice. Praying for you.--Christina
January 2nd, 2017 11:37
Christina8 said:
beautifully written poem. So sad to hear about your son. Words dont seem to do this justice. Praying for you.--Christina
January 2nd, 2017 11:37
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