Comments received on poems by Augustus
Your Baby is Dead
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant poem. Very well expressed.
October 28th, 2016 11:32
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant poem. Very well expressed.
October 28th, 2016 11:32
Your Baby is Dead
Jeff said:
Another example of why you are my favorite poet on here.... Very well done
October 28th, 2016 08:43
Jeff said:
Another example of why you are my favorite poet on here.... Very well done
October 28th, 2016 08:43
I Would Have Known
Christina8 said:
Another fine rhyming poem. Lamenting about what \"worlds we would have known\". Maybe someone better will come along, who knows?
October 26th, 2016 20:33
Christina8 said:
Another fine rhyming poem. Lamenting about what \"worlds we would have known\". Maybe someone better will come along, who knows?
October 26th, 2016 20:33
Sense
Christina8 said:
This is really good rhyming verse. I love the way you describe a womans beauty. Almost sensual. Awesome!
October 26th, 2016 20:29
Christina8 said:
This is really good rhyming verse. I love the way you describe a womans beauty. Almost sensual. Awesome!
October 26th, 2016 20:29
Links of Steel
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" for a great write and a great read. \"LORD please take these chains from my heart and set me free.\" While STEEL is mainly IRON there are also alloying elements which affect the properties of the STEEL ! Carbon ~ manganese ~ titanium ~ ~ vanadium ~ chromium ~ cobalt ~ nickel ~ tungsten etc. In your analogy these elements could represent the sins which permeate our lives and make the chains much stronger and the links not subject to errosion ! STEEL is a big subject ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
October 26th, 2016 03:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" for a great write and a great read. \"LORD please take these chains from my heart and set me free.\" While STEEL is mainly IRON there are also alloying elements which affect the properties of the STEEL ! Carbon ~ manganese ~ titanium ~ ~ vanadium ~ chromium ~ cobalt ~ nickel ~ tungsten etc. In your analogy these elements could represent the sins which permeate our lives and make the chains much stronger and the links not subject to errosion ! STEEL is a big subject ~ thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
October 26th, 2016 03:32
Links of Steel
WriteBeLight said:
I can feel and hear the pain in the words. Good job.
October 25th, 2016 09:52
WriteBeLight said:
I can feel and hear the pain in the words. Good job.
October 25th, 2016 09:52
My Son
Wolf2778 said:
It was... Stunning... so little words yet the meaning behind each one was a book... Amazing
October 24th, 2016 13:40
Wolf2778 said:
It was... Stunning... so little words yet the meaning behind each one was a book... Amazing
October 24th, 2016 13:40
My Son
willyweed said:
Good work very relevant to many I\'m sure, me being one! pride and joy sir! ww
October 23rd, 2016 11:32
willyweed said:
Good work very relevant to many I\'m sure, me being one! pride and joy sir! ww
October 23rd, 2016 11:32
My Son
WriteBeLight said:
I get goosebumps! My son is away as well. Miss and love him! Thanks for the words.
October 23rd, 2016 10:45
WriteBeLight said:
I get goosebumps! My son is away as well. Miss and love him! Thanks for the words.
October 23rd, 2016 10:45
Listen To A Friend
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow touching minds, what a new poetic idea, this poem is sowing much thought , weaving muse and friendship so nicely. ESP liked the \'inhibition line and \' fertile mind\' line best, which enhances the interesting elements of the poem. Kudos,.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 23rd, 2016 08:01
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow touching minds, what a new poetic idea, this poem is sowing much thought , weaving muse and friendship so nicely. ESP liked the \'inhibition line and \' fertile mind\' line best, which enhances the interesting elements of the poem. Kudos,.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 23rd, 2016 08:01
Listen To A Friend
willyweed said:
very well written with great rhyme and flow and the content, it\'s all smooth as butter! nice ! ww
October 22nd, 2016 20:09
willyweed said:
very well written with great rhyme and flow and the content, it\'s all smooth as butter! nice ! ww
October 22nd, 2016 20:09
Sense Of Humor
SilentLaugh said:
This is great. It really showes all the underlying problems of our world. Beutiful and cleaverly writen. BTW nice pic!
October 18th, 2016 10:58
SilentLaugh said:
This is great. It really showes all the underlying problems of our world. Beutiful and cleaverly writen. BTW nice pic!
October 18th, 2016 10:58
Sense Of Humor
Augustus said:
Thanks, I started with a list of all the horrible things that happen to people and then decided to progress from everyday little annoyances to the catastrophic.
October 18th, 2016 09:47
Augustus said:
Thanks, I started with a list of all the horrible things that happen to people and then decided to progress from everyday little annoyances to the catastrophic.
October 18th, 2016 09:47
Sense Of Humor
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great rectangular poem \"A\" and a neat account of \"24 hoiurs of AUGUSTUS\". Muche the same as mine ~ but I\'m a Queens Scout and we whistle and smile under all difficulties ! As TONY would say GREAT WRITE ! Yours BRIAN
October 18th, 2016 09:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Great rectangular poem \"A\" and a neat account of \"24 hoiurs of AUGUSTUS\". Muche the same as mine ~ but I\'m a Queens Scout and we whistle and smile under all difficulties ! As TONY would say GREAT WRITE ! Yours BRIAN
October 18th, 2016 09:43
In Parting
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" Life is a continuous cycle of birth ~ life ~ death and in my extended Family it seems as ONE dies at least TWO are born so we are multiplying ! The global population could reach 10 billion by 2050 I\'ll be 67 so I could be in GLORY ! In my experience(in an extended Family) BIRTH relieves the pain of death. Your excellent photo reminds us the animals feel the remorse of death (of a Family Member} as well ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
October 16th, 2016 11:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" Life is a continuous cycle of birth ~ life ~ death and in my extended Family it seems as ONE dies at least TWO are born so we are multiplying ! The global population could reach 10 billion by 2050 I\'ll be 67 so I could be in GLORY ! In my experience(in an extended Family) BIRTH relieves the pain of death. Your excellent photo reminds us the animals feel the remorse of death (of a Family Member} as well ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
October 16th, 2016 11:38
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