Comments received on poems by Augustus



Hysteria
P.H.Rose said:

Augustus I absolutely
Love this poem.
Has everything I
Believe also..
In England we
Would say it\'s
Bang on....
Really well done sir....
Ps.. I bloody hate
Political correctness !!!

December 22nd, 2016 16:45

Hysteria
Quemis said:

Individuality is important.

Gj.

December 22nd, 2016 12:18

Hysteria
Daniel said:

A much needed common sense message in a well written poem, well done!

December 22nd, 2016 11:53

Hysteria
Tony36 said:

Love it, It would be nice to get out of the state we are in. I wrote a poem called \"The Machine\" that looks at what is happening to our society today

December 22nd, 2016 11:38

Hysteria
WriteBeLight said:

FEAR is false evidence appearing real. I couldn\'t agree more Augustus! People can be sheep, trying to keep up with the \"Joneses.\" And, I feel this country is going to get a lot better. Great point of view in your poem!

December 22nd, 2016 10:25

Hysteria
willyweed said:

I concur everything has been going on forever, we now just have a wider view. very clever and well crafted. nice job. ww

December 22nd, 2016 10:19

La Espalda de Mi Madre (My Mother\'s Back)
Christina8 said:

Very nice piece. I like how you wrote it in both languages. Muy bien Augustus!

December 20th, 2016 21:06

La Espalda de Mi Madre (My Mother\'s Back)
myinnervoice said:

beautifully written.

December 20th, 2016 17:54

La Espalda de Mi Madre (My Mother\'s Back)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRACIAS \"A\" POR UNA POEMA ESPANOLA ELEGANTE ! Love the subject \"My Mothers Back\" Our Mothers carry us and bearallour burdens ~ from the day we are born ~ to the Day when they are called home to HEAVE N ~ All Mothers go to Heaven ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ TU AMIGO ~ BRIAN

December 20th, 2016 17:44

La Espalda de Mi Madre (My Mother\'s Back)
willyweed said:

muy bien mi amigo
poema encantador. ww

December 20th, 2016 16:04

La Espalda de Mi Madre (My Mother\'s Back)
P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant Augustus...
Love this...
It also writes like
Someone Spanish.
Very well done....

December 20th, 2016 14:37

La Espalda de Mi Madre (My Mother\'s Back)
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written

December 20th, 2016 10:08

La Pérdida del Hijo / The Loss of a Child
Augustus said:



December 19th, 2016 21:46

La Pérdida del Hijo / The Loss of a Child
WriteBeLight said:

Parents should never, ever have to experience the loss of a child.....:( But, your poem provides the understand they deserve.

December 19th, 2016 19:12

Merry Christmas
Christina8 said:

What an excellent poem and how you shaped it was incredible! Merry Christmas to you, Augustus!

December 18th, 2016 15:27

Merry Christmas
SharonMoemise said:

Stunning artwork and well penned. Very creative work, Augustus. Have a very Merry Christmas. Keep the talent flowing.

December 18th, 2016 12:58

Merry Christmas
SabreLi said:

Merry Christmas, A! I love what you\'ve managed to do here: it is very difficult to get the shape without compromising the message you\'ve written. A brilliant break from the norm and a festive treat to read. Great work xx

December 18th, 2016 12:56

Merry Christmas
WriteBeLight said:

I love the word bombastic! You covered everything, but the kitchen sink...hahaha. Merry Christmas to you too Augustus!

December 18th, 2016 11:36

Merry Christmas
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks \"A\" for a very special \"shaped\" poem wit a wonderful theme of \"Heartfelt Happiness\" at Christmas ! Your Friend as always BRIAN ! Please check my SF Poems about CYGNUS 3 ~ Thanks B

December 18th, 2016 11:35

Hate
Augustus said:

Another night owl. I think I know where you are coming from. I am so frustrated with the news that I watch it less and less. I get too cynical and angry. Thanks for reading and commenting.

December 17th, 2016 01:40

Hate
myinnervoice said:

Words from a man who thinks about the world around him. I\'m sorry I want to express a certain sentiment and apreciation for this poem that i cant seem to make come out. Which makes me apreciate it even more so. It makes me think and reminds me of realities I tend to try to ignore. Which makes me genuinly apreciate the fact that I got to read it. Sorry my comment was so long winded, but i felt that if i couldn\'t say what i wanted to that maybe expressing what i could would be enough.

December 17th, 2016 01:31

Pound Sterling?
isituorme said:

I am glad you commented on my poem or I might not have found this one of yours ,it falls into place a little more each time I read it ,I think it\'s excellent.

December 16th, 2016 20:22

Hate
WriteBeLight said:

Comments taken out of context, and twisted facts reported as truth, attributed to anonymous sources is \"journalism\" today. People have to remember that what is televised by the majority of the media is based on how much advertising they must sell. It is a business and they are in it to make a profit regardless of whose reputation they destroy. Lies and hate garner the most viewers. I hate, hate but love how you have written this, and appreciate your author\'s comment.

December 16th, 2016 13:16

Hate
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

December 16th, 2016 12:47

Hate
XxRaavenSairasxX said:

I love it.

December 16th, 2016 11:15

Hate
P.H.Rose said:

Augustus this is
Really very good,
I would be very
Proud to have written
This... It has all the things
I hate about hate in it..
Bloody well done.!!!!

December 16th, 2016 11:09

Hate
Christina8 said:

This is a terrific piece. I find myself unable lately to watch the news or most media, it makes me anxious to see the way they use fear and hate as tools. I agree with what you are saying here. Great job!

December 16th, 2016 09:43

Townsfolk
WriteBeLight said:

One more point. I had a person read your poem and he got your point immediately about regrets as we grow older. Sorry I focused on the comments more than what you were pointing out so well in your piece.

December 10th, 2016 07:49

Townsfolk
Quemis said:

This is a fun one. : )

December 10th, 2016 00:37

Townsfolk
Tony36 said:

Awesome write, love it

December 9th, 2016 14:40



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