Comments received on poems by Stephanie Showers
Disposable
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but be assured there will be people out there on whom you have left a memory.
July 25th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but be assured there will be people out there on whom you have left a memory.
July 25th, 2017 00:52
Disposable
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. I know that feeling of insignificance all too well. But I assure you, this poem left it’s mark on me. So in that respect, you are irreplaceable. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 16:21
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. I know that feeling of insignificance all too well. But I assure you, this poem left it’s mark on me. So in that respect, you are irreplaceable. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 16:21
Disposable
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Stephanie, you are right, we are insignificant when compared to for example the Universe. But, you say you left a piece of yourself everywhere you have been. That piece lives on. A smile here, a helping hand there, it all adds up, and out of all these insignificant little gestures grows something significant: A memory about you, the invisible, the insignificant.
July 24th, 2017 16:08
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Stephanie, you are right, we are insignificant when compared to for example the Universe. But, you say you left a piece of yourself everywhere you have been. That piece lives on. A smile here, a helping hand there, it all adds up, and out of all these insignificant little gestures grows something significant: A memory about you, the invisible, the insignificant.
July 24th, 2017 16:08
Disposable
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m sure you have impacted the world more than you realize, but as they say; \"Graveyards are full of irreplaceable people\" ... yet the world goes on without any of us. And as my recently posted poem \"Of No Consequence\" points out, no life is of consequence in the final analysis. Thanks for sharing your heart-felt poem with us, Stephanie.
July 24th, 2017 13:04
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m sure you have impacted the world more than you realize, but as they say; \"Graveyards are full of irreplaceable people\" ... yet the world goes on without any of us. And as my recently posted poem \"Of No Consequence\" points out, no life is of consequence in the final analysis. Thanks for sharing your heart-felt poem with us, Stephanie.
July 24th, 2017 13:04
Disposable
burning-embers said:
Welcome to the economy, LOL . Cruel isn\'t it. But the trade off is some people like you for free.
July 24th, 2017 12:26
burning-embers said:
Welcome to the economy, LOL . Cruel isn\'t it. But the trade off is some people like you for free.
July 24th, 2017 12:26
callousness
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a positive end. Start all over again in the knowledge that all will be well.
July 11th, 2017 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a positive end. Start all over again in the knowledge that all will be well.
July 11th, 2017 00:10
callousness
Nicholas Browning said:
Bravo! I just so happen to have done this a while ago. Someone who doesn\'t appreciate you for who you are or the love that you provide is better not being with you. Their loss, though. Good stuff, keep it up!
July 10th, 2017 10:16
Nicholas Browning said:
Bravo! I just so happen to have done this a while ago. Someone who doesn\'t appreciate you for who you are or the love that you provide is better not being with you. Their loss, though. Good stuff, keep it up!
July 10th, 2017 10:16
I Don’t Give a Fuck
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a way to say when it\'s over it\'s over! The end of a relationship is reached when, as you say \"I don\'t even care enough anymore to fight\". Very good poem!
Mahalo
July 5th, 2017 13:41
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a way to say when it\'s over it\'s over! The end of a relationship is reached when, as you say \"I don\'t even care enough anymore to fight\". Very good poem!
Mahalo
July 5th, 2017 13:41
Love of my life
FredPeyer said:
After reading your latest poem I went to look at some of your earlier ones. Like this one a lot, especially the last three lines.
Mahalo!
July 5th, 2017 13:37
FredPeyer said:
After reading your latest poem I went to look at some of your earlier ones. Like this one a lot, especially the last three lines.
Mahalo!
July 5th, 2017 13:37
Lowly
FredPeyer said:
You say a lot with few well chosen words arranged in a beautiful way.
Mahalo, would love to read more from you.
July 5th, 2017 13:35
FredPeyer said:
You say a lot with few well chosen words arranged in a beautiful way.
Mahalo, would love to read more from you.
July 5th, 2017 13:35
Lowly
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
Iambic diameter done in a really well way. I am glad that you were able to pull this off.I personally have a hard time being so short with what I want to say in so little words. Usually I would talk about the lack of punctuation in a poem, however this one doesn\'t need any. If it had punctuation it would ruin what you have here. I am glad you wrote it, and can relate when I feel in a lowly state. If I were to grade this poem I would give it a 8/10. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.
July 5th, 2017 12:10
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
Iambic diameter done in a really well way. I am glad that you were able to pull this off.I personally have a hard time being so short with what I want to say in so little words. Usually I would talk about the lack of punctuation in a poem, however this one doesn\'t need any. If it had punctuation it would ruin what you have here. I am glad you wrote it, and can relate when I feel in a lowly state. If I were to grade this poem I would give it a 8/10. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.
July 5th, 2017 12:10
Lowly
lostgirl24 said:
Really well written and the emotion is beautiful. (And I totally relate to this)
July 5th, 2017 10:39
lostgirl24 said:
Really well written and the emotion is beautiful. (And I totally relate to this)
July 5th, 2017 10:39
Where We Will Land
Augustus said:
Women are much better at communicating. Sometimes you have to insist that they tell you what is going on inside their heads.
June 2nd, 2017 17:17
Augustus said:
Women are much better at communicating. Sometimes you have to insist that they tell you what is going on inside their heads.
June 2nd, 2017 17:17
I Don’t Give a Fuck
Sammertheone said:
Hot damn lady! Pushed to far with feelings ! Be honest be straight, be strong and move on! Sorry for the pain but your strength is there. I hope for the best for you. You deserve it!
May 31st, 2017 21:32
Sammertheone said:
Hot damn lady! Pushed to far with feelings ! Be honest be straight, be strong and move on! Sorry for the pain but your strength is there. I hope for the best for you. You deserve it!
May 31st, 2017 21:32
I Don’t Give a Fuck
Augustus said:
Wow. Let em have it with both barrels! Nice rant. Hugs.
May 31st, 2017 17:03
Augustus said:
Wow. Let em have it with both barrels! Nice rant. Hugs.
May 31st, 2017 17:03
I Don’t Give a Fuck
Louis Gibbs said:
Succinctly put, Stephanie! Nice poem, keep them coming.
May 31st, 2017 16:27
Louis Gibbs said:
Succinctly put, Stephanie! Nice poem, keep them coming.
May 31st, 2017 16:27
I Don’t Give a Fuck
valene said:
Straight and to the point! Poetically speaking, I\'d say you\'ve done a damn good job! :)
May 31st, 2017 16:17
valene said:
Straight and to the point! Poetically speaking, I\'d say you\'ve done a damn good job! :)
May 31st, 2017 16:17
I Love You Enough
IAmBeu said:
Beautiful. Definitely gave me chills and tears in my eyes, your very talented and i just want to say keep it up! 😊
May 26th, 2017 01:06
IAmBeu said:
Beautiful. Definitely gave me chills and tears in my eyes, your very talented and i just want to say keep it up! 😊
May 26th, 2017 01:06
I Love You Enough
Augustus said:
A man would think himself a prince to receive such. Exceedingly well done.
May 25th, 2017 18:00
Augustus said:
A man would think himself a prince to receive such. Exceedingly well done.
May 25th, 2017 18:00
Nagging
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEPHANIE for an enigmatic poem. I find as I grow older I have more NAGGING DOUBTS about Life and about Love etc. However I have learned to stand by my decisions and trust they were for the best ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Blessings & Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poems an mt FISHY FUSION ~ Thanks B.
May 17th, 2017 10:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEPHANIE for an enigmatic poem. I find as I grow older I have more NAGGING DOUBTS about Life and about Love etc. However I have learned to stand by my decisions and trust they were for the best ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Blessings & Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poems an mt FISHY FUSION ~ Thanks B.
May 17th, 2017 10:59
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