Comments received on poems by Stephanie Showers



If you could know
Augustus said:

If one could look inside there would be no doubt. Nicely done.

February 10th, 2017 17:04

Purpose of tears
BeckyJo said:

I concur...I\'m an open closed person. Lol true statement and not hard for a poet to understand I\'m sure! Good poem!

February 8th, 2017 18:26

Purpose of tears
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

February 8th, 2017 16:43

Purpose of tears
MendedFences27 said:

To be alive requires an open heart. Trying to live with a closed heart is like speaking with a closed mouth. To appreciate love and to emanate love we need an open heart. A closed heart shuts out love and hoards what we have of it. Live openly and be free. Loved your poem. - Phil A.

February 8th, 2017 14:50

Purpose of tears
Edthepoet said:

I wouldn\'t say it\'s silly to live with an open heart, I would say it\'s courageous. A broken heart is destined to fix itself. Nice write x

February 8th, 2017 14:20

Spin
Augustus said:

Sounds like a real fight. Enjoyed.

December 23rd, 2016 17:49

It ends with you
monicaandchandler1 said:

nice

December 22nd, 2016 13:51

The Garden
SabreLi said:

Contemplation is a good thing, but we must take care not to let it limit us; for sometimes we can get lost in the contemplation alone and look at life just through the lens of our mind\'s eye rather than actually taking the plunge and experiencing and exploring. Great piece! xx

December 15th, 2016 08:29

The Garden
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

December 14th, 2016 14:17

The Garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing STEPH ~ beautiful contemplation. In my experience some things (In Life and Love) some things are best enjoyed \"FROM A DISTANCE !\" Hugs ~ BRIAN.

December 14th, 2016 11:04

Turning away
Augustus said:

Yes, the pursuit of truth and beauty.

December 14th, 2016 01:01

Unheard
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing STEPHANIE ! A beautifully and delicately scripted poem and yet it throbs with unrequited desire and longings. We all lov you SWEETHEART and want to send you a big CYBER CUDDLE to warm your heart and gently say SWEETHEART you are BEAUTIFUL ~ Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 10th, 2016 04:46

Unheard
Augustus said:

Wow!

December 10th, 2016 00:15

Unheard
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 9th, 2016 14:38

Start Over
gelyn said:

Hi Steph,

1st congratulations for this lovely piece. ..
2nd I love the layout of this
3rd the emotions really kick the bucket. ..

All in all this is a great write. ..

Gel

December 8th, 2016 19:48

Start Over
Augustus said:

Hope it is working for you. Nicely done. Hugs.

December 8th, 2016 17:28

Start Over
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FOR SHARING STEPH # Sometimes SWEETHEART when our love life gets too tangled and complicated the only solution (I find this too) is to START OVER ! Thinking of you ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 8th, 2016 15:46

Timing is everything
Augustus said:

Happy for you the timing was right.Cheers.

December 6th, 2016 16:28

SPACES
Augustus said:

I love all the words rhyming with spaces and that being the central theme.

December 5th, 2016 22:23

SPACES
Christina8 said:

Very well written poem. So sad about your love inching apart day by day. Well done. Thanks for sharing!

December 5th, 2016 12:45

Since you came along
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A lovely lyrical and beautifully sentimental poem rap like song like , which is why it so attractive to read. It has great poetic appeal as to creative rhyming. Kudos.

U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.

December 3rd, 2016 08:54

Since you came along
Francesco said:

Lovely piece. I am happy for you in your siuation. I hope very soon I\'ll be able to live the exact same thing. :)

December 3rd, 2016 01:00

Since you came along
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 2nd, 2016 15:06

Weakest Hearts of Men
Augustus said:

This could be mankind or more likely one particular guy letting the world pass him by. Food for thought. Thanks for sharing.

December 1st, 2016 22:21

Your words
Wensley_Gabriel said:

I appreciate your passion for the language. The way that you describe how people just throw their words around couldn\'t be more true. Love the writing, however my own personal criticism would be to either add some punctuation, or to break the lines up differently, I understand that the poem is about the words, however it reads sort-of broken as is. Otherwise excellent work!!

November 30th, 2016 19:01

Your words
SabreLi said:

Such truth in these words - I completely agree! Whomever said \'sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me\' was so very, very wrong. Often our most brutal weapons are our mouths - the bullets; those words we hurl so carelessly at others. Thank you for a lovely piece of work :D xx

November 30th, 2016 17:21

Framework
Francesco said:

Projections and expectations. A sensitive subject indeed. Lovely poem.

November 30th, 2016 01:31

Framework
Augustus said:

Love? Or goodbye? Or perhaps setting limits as to what is permisible and what is not. Either way I like it.

November 29th, 2016 18:18

Framework
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 29th, 2016 14:14

You stole my heart
Augustus said:

Aweeee. Purdy, purdy.

November 18th, 2016 20:53

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