Comments received on poems by Christina8



My Purpose
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for your reply CHRIS ~ The World of Work is an escape from \"The Trivial round the Common Task ! We do have some House Husbands in the UK ~ who stay home and look after the Kids & the House & the Dog etc. but they are much less than 1 in a 100 ! Generally the WIFE has a high powered Job and earns much more than the Husband ! I guess I will always earn marginally more than Angela ~ so when we do get married and if we have a Family ~ it wont be a problem ! Giving up work is one of the many sacrifices Married ladies have to make ~ My Poems are HAIKUS tomorrow so look out for them ~ Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN

November 14th, 2017 18:30

My Purpose
myself and me said:

You are such a wonderful person, even at the depress moment, still put your kids\' interest on the top.

November 14th, 2017 15:02

My Purpose
lasergraph said:

I think the top is just waiting for you. Great write

November 14th, 2017 12:58

My Purpose
FredPeyer said:

I like your straight forward poem. There are always times in our lives when we question our purpose in life, when we think that there should be more, or maybe something different.

November 14th, 2017 10:33

My Purpose
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

To every life there is a PURPOSE and to every PURPOSE there is a SEASON ! You are currently very Blessed Chris ! A Loving Husband A Boy & A Girl ~ My Mum tells me they make different demands ~ variety ! A nice home to decorate for Christmas and lots of nice Friends on MPS who all love you ~ Your Faith & Church Family and you live in One of the most Beautiful States in the USA ! You are a qualified Nurse (as I am a qualified Science Lecturer ~ now tenured !) and I believe and pray that one day you will be \"Back on the Wards\" You are currently very Blessed ! I think of you and pray for you 24/7 AMEN Multiple Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN \"Contented Man !\" Thanks for sharing your Heart & Soul with us ! Don\'t forget to add another BUNCH of FLOWERS to my FUSION ~ Hugs BRIAN @@@@@@@

November 14th, 2017 08:57

My Purpose
Fay Slimm. said:

Good aims dear Christina and put into a charmingly honest verse - you will get there on top and stay there with goals so warm and from the heart. Hugs from Fay xxxxx.

November 14th, 2017 07:26

I\'ve Never Told
WL Schuett said:

This feels like another step forward , good writing Christina!

November 13th, 2017 23:53

I\'ve Never Told
Fay Slimm. said:

A heart-wrenching feel to this honest piece dear Christina - the positive ending shows how best to cope. Thanks for sharing a time of great challenge.

November 13th, 2017 17:19

I\'ve Never Told
Simple-Man87 said:

This was incredible. These subtle secrets define our lives. You\'ve become a very strong writer and an even stronger woman, due to your experience, thank you for sharing a bit of heart with us.

November 13th, 2017 14:39

I\'ve Never Told
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhh PANDORA ~ You have at last opened the BOX ! So many intriguing triplets released in one Poetic Confession ! 30 years ~ tears ~ fears # toy ~ joy ~ coy # youth ~ truth ~ smooth # gold ~ told ~ unfold # And NOW ~ You can stand on your own two beautiful feet ~ AMEN ! I\'m pleased you left it OBJECTIVE ANGEL ~ because you don\'t want to hurt ~ those you desperately wanted to love ! This is your best poem ever Angel ~ it flows and ripples like a cleansing Mountain Stream ~ I\'m not surprised you got 20+ reads and lots of lovely comments ~ MPS Loves You (me included !) Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HUGS in the SPIRIT ~ BRIAN \"Soul Searcher\"

November 13th, 2017 11:29

I\'ve Never Told
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina. me new word for today: *looks up piñata*. Hey , it\'s put a squiggle over the \'n\'\'. I never put it there! Oh, it\'s a tilde. Do shut up now Orchi, you\'re rambling. lol.

November 13th, 2017 11:11

I\'ve Never Told
Syd said:

Hi Christina, l like this poem. You\'l have to forgive me as I\'m not too good at reviews but I\'m a sucker for poems that rhyme and I like the punchline of that last stanza - Syd

November 13th, 2017 10:39

I\'ve Never Told
Shadowbox15 said:

That is a powerful message. But, who are ‘they’?

November 13th, 2017 09:50

I\'ve Never Told
Michael Edwards said:

Strong write from a strong person - well writ Christina.

November 13th, 2017 09:22

I\'ve Never Told
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write, I hope al, is well in your life now,

November 13th, 2017 09:15

I\'ve Never Told
Drewp said:

This is powerful.I hope it’s not written from personal experience. Still amazed at the power of words

November 13th, 2017 07:49

Writer\'s Block
dusk arising said:

Writers block as it is known is a contrivence. When a writer has something worth writing they will write about it. When they haven\'t some people call it writers block, others simply don\'t write.

November 12th, 2017 21:54

Writer\'s Block
skyebellasario said:

We all have writers block at some time Christina but it seems as though yours has gone! :) Lovely poem!

November 12th, 2017 16:07

Writer\'s Block
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Gracias CHRIS comprendo ! Although some of the best poems on MPS are ~ oddly enough ~ Writers Bloc Poems ! Looking forward to tomorrow\'s ODD ODE ~ Happy Hugs ~ Brother BRIAN @@@@@@@

November 12th, 2017 11:07

Writer\'s Block
kevin browne said:

look at it this way. this elusive thing we call writers-block, to me, just appears to be a fictional illusion. it\'s just an excuse I believe. you never hear of mechanic block, engineering blocks or any any blocks you can thing of. it\'s writers that just seem to get it. we think about a million irrelevant things a day which invade us mentally. simply block those out. it\'s too easy to blame so blame nothing, free your beautiful mind up with some new spare space and it will rise to fill it up with poetry. good luck and a good poem.

November 12th, 2017 09:50

Writer\'s Block
FredPeyer said:

Christine, your poem about writers block ain\'t bad for somebody with writers block!
See my point?!!! There ain\'t no such thing as writers block!

November 12th, 2017 02:51

Writer\'s Block
Fay Slimm. said:

This comes to us all from time to time dear friend - - I keep pen and paper to hand and write down snatches of thought as they come to the mind.Great however to see you posting such a sweet rhyme.

November 12th, 2017 02:49

Writer\'s Block
Michael Edwards said:

Great work C - if I can\'t think of anything I just walk - something always comes whatever I am doing - I only hope there is pencil and paper to hand.

November 12th, 2017 02:35

Writer\'s Block
orchidee said:

Good write Christine. Be all extempore - long word there lol. Be flowing, and maybe gushing and waffling too! A bit of waffle never did anyone any harm, as long it don\'t go on for ever! heehee.

November 12th, 2017 02:23

Writer\'s Block
Goldfinch60 said:

Well your block seems to have disappeared with this poem Christine.

November 12th, 2017 01:59

The Holidays
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, giving is s special especially at Christmas and the most precious gift that you can give is time.

November 10th, 2017 02:14

The Holidays
WL Schuett said:

Very sweet Christina, a lovely piece

November 9th, 2017 19:56

The Holidays
FredPeyer said:

Very uplifting, beautiful reminder of what the Holidays are all about, Christina! You nailed it!

November 9th, 2017 14:12

The Holidays
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina. I\'m dreading Black Friday though. We have it in UK too, but don\'t have Thanksgiving.
Oh well, it\'ll be nothing new, just the usual - lots of silly people going mad in buying things they neither want nor need, and may not be able to afford even at sale prices! doh!

November 9th, 2017 11:46

The Holidays
lasergraph said:

Giving is the spirit of Christmas. Good write.

November 9th, 2017 11:28



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