Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Confused
Discreation said:

Once love happens, it happens dude. But remember, it is a most dangerous game.

March 28th, 2017 17:44

Collapse
Goldfinch60 said:

Always head towards the light. Good write.

March 28th, 2017 01:05

Sick of It
Hopey_xx said:

I love it- so good

March 27th, 2017 01:15

Fly
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 25th, 2017 19:31

Fly
Somerica said:

Wow man that good. We kinda have flow but your art has structure. Well written.

March 25th, 2017 17:17

Fly
Hopey_xx said:

Beautiful write, well done.

March 25th, 2017 16:08

Endless War
OUTBACK said:

YES *! {TRUTH}* ! THE END* OF OF WAR* IS THE END OF THE POLITICAL CONTROLLING POWER* THAT EVER SO ASPIRES* TO A STATE* OF {ABSOLUTE IMMORTALITY}* = [ PERMANENCY of BEING ]* !!!

March 24th, 2017 19:05

Push Ahead and (another poem) Alone
Hopey_xx said:

Wow I love them-great poems! I especially love the last line \"I don\'t care\". I can relate. Well done

March 24th, 2017 02:16

Push Ahead and (another poem) Alone
Kurt Philip Behm said:

You\'re very talented, especially for your age. I love these lines ........
\"One by one, I watch my demons arise

They pull on my body, my hope their prize

Shaking them off, I stand firm and tall

Knowing only in my abyss can I fall\"

As you get older, I think your message will become clearer,
and your words will tighten up.

Keep writing, if only for the words themselves... they\'re worth it!

Kurt

March 23rd, 2017 20:28

Endless War
willyweed said:

yes all we all really need is love, end the hate and peace will prevail, nice thought and a good write!

March 22nd, 2017 15:35

Endless War
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a very mature write. Wars will not stop all the time those in power do not listen to the people they allegedly rule.

March 22nd, 2017 08:57

The Power of A Single Word
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, if only more people would shout at injustice in this world.

March 21st, 2017 01:56

To The Stars!
Jooles said:

Lovely poem ☺

March 19th, 2017 03:48

To The Stars!
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes you are right go ahead and reach for the stars.

March 19th, 2017 01:25

Shadows
JJCooke said:

I enjoyed reading this. Strong words and well done.

March 18th, 2017 22:32

Abyss
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, keep flying towards the light.

March 15th, 2017 13:41

Don The Cloak, Leave It Behind
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 8th, 2017 02:24

Why do I keep looking back?
Goldfinch60 said:

Don\'t look back, the past is a closed book, look forward to the bright life ahead.

March 7th, 2017 02:39

Sometimes I Just Don\'t Know
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, the truth is always the right way to go.

March 6th, 2017 01:52

Justice Drought
Tony36 said:

I agree the system sucks. Great write

February 25th, 2017 09:17

Nothing To Write
Tris Eaton said:

Awesome poem I like it a lot

February 24th, 2017 09:24

Nothing To Write
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with a positive end.

February 24th, 2017 08:40

Falling Apart
Ash said:

I love how unique and intriguing your writing is, well done.

February 23rd, 2017 22:21

What\'s the point?
Laydii said:

Wah this hit me in the feels 😱💕

February 18th, 2017 05:10

Normal, Average, Standard, The Usual
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

February 8th, 2017 19:53

Normal, Average, Standard, The Usual
BeckyJo said:

Wow! Intense poem. I am speechless!

February 8th, 2017 18:08

What\'s there to worry about?
Corey said:

Hello Poetboy, Nothing worth having comes easy and suffering can teach us to appreciate them more. Love your poem!

February 7th, 2017 22:42

Sunshine
JerryBolton said:

Loved the rhyming sequence for sure. I, too, like happy endings, but of course all ending are not happy. Good write!

February 6th, 2017 19:05

Fierce Flames
Hopey_xx said:

Great poem, I especially love the last line!

February 3rd, 2017 16:15

Our True Enemy
Shona Loya said:

What a splendid poem and well written, keep up the gwd work Bro!


February 3rd, 2017 01:46

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