Comments received on poems by poetboy123
Weakness
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A creative form and use of word repetition. I get that an object that is cracked would be structurally compromised, or weakened...and in your poem the crack appears to be getting worse....
January 10th, 2018 23:41
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A creative form and use of word repetition. I get that an object that is cracked would be structurally compromised, or weakened...and in your poem the crack appears to be getting worse....
January 10th, 2018 23:41
To Live or Die
Goldfinch60 said:
Chose the light and live for tomorrow, tomorrow will be good day.
December 26th, 2017 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Chose the light and live for tomorrow, tomorrow will be good day.
December 26th, 2017 02:20
This Song Shall Never Go Unsung
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write that will always be heard.
December 13th, 2017 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write that will always be heard.
December 13th, 2017 01:47
Artists of Speech
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your words spread throughout the ether.
December 11th, 2017 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your words spread throughout the ether.
December 11th, 2017 09:00
Wielded
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it depends on what you write to be able to answer the question.
December 8th, 2017 09:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it depends on what you write to be able to answer the question.
December 8th, 2017 09:08
Wielded
Laura🌻 said:
Both...
in my humble opinion!
Nicely expressed!
Thank you.
December 8th, 2017 08:37
Laura🌻 said:
Both...
in my humble opinion!
Nicely expressed!
Thank you.
December 8th, 2017 08:37
He Is A Failure
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a positive end, HE WILL RISE.
December 7th, 2017 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a positive end, HE WILL RISE.
December 7th, 2017 01:09
One Step At A Time
winternightsky123 said:
This is such an amazing, meaningful poem. I really like it! X
December 3rd, 2017 14:56
winternightsky123 said:
This is such an amazing, meaningful poem. I really like it! X
December 3rd, 2017 14:56
Potential
Goldfinch60 said:
Outrage destiny is there we must enjoy all our time to achieve a great outcome. Good write.
November 30th, 2017 09:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Outrage destiny is there we must enjoy all our time to achieve a great outcome. Good write.
November 30th, 2017 09:13
Not Giving In
winternightsky123 said:
I just love your style of writing! Everything you do just makes perfect sense to me and im so glad someone feels the same about us humans ruining the world! Amazing poem x
November 27th, 2017 14:43
winternightsky123 said:
I just love your style of writing! Everything you do just makes perfect sense to me and im so glad someone feels the same about us humans ruining the world! Amazing poem x
November 27th, 2017 14:43
Fallen
ElenaGrace said:
I love the imagery and how everything is so vividly and uniquely described, keep it up:)
November 15th, 2017 20:27
ElenaGrace said:
I love the imagery and how everything is so vividly and uniquely described, keep it up:)
November 15th, 2017 20:27
1 Year Anniversary on MPS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true, it is OPS not MPS. Congratulations on your annivesary, may there be many more
November 15th, 2017 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true, it is OPS not MPS. Congratulations on your annivesary, may there be many more
November 15th, 2017 02:00
1 Year Anniversary on MPS
Louis Gibbs said:
I share your feelings in this fine tribute to MPS, poetboy. Congratulations, on both the poem and your anniversary!
November 14th, 2017 09:10
Louis Gibbs said:
I share your feelings in this fine tribute to MPS, poetboy. Congratulations, on both the poem and your anniversary!
November 14th, 2017 09:10
1 Year Anniversary on MPS
Christina8 said:
A fine tribute to \"our\" poetic side! Yes, I feel the same way, \"telling tales we\'d never speak to our closest friends\". It\'s a very intimate community of people. Glad to have you here for the past year and hope to have you longer than that! :-)
November 14th, 2017 07:38
Christina8 said:
A fine tribute to \"our\" poetic side! Yes, I feel the same way, \"telling tales we\'d never speak to our closest friends\". It\'s a very intimate community of people. Glad to have you here for the past year and hope to have you longer than that! :-)
November 14th, 2017 07:38
1 Year Anniversary on MPS
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a delight to read such a tribute to this friendly site Poetboy - it is all that you write and hoping your next year helps with the moving forward.
November 14th, 2017 07:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a delight to read such a tribute to this friendly site Poetboy - it is all that you write and hoping your next year helps with the moving forward.
November 14th, 2017 07:24
Victory
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, those falls we have in life add to our experience for us to do better next time.
November 12th, 2017 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, those falls we have in life add to our experience for us to do better next time.
November 12th, 2017 01:12
Victory
Poetic Dan said:
If you would not mind I\'d like you to know the reason you just destroyed me and I will read this again and again until I can rise again. Yesterday my 13 year old boy was refused access to me, against his wishes.
Thank you so much, I\'ll clear my tears from my phone knowing the are others walking my path.
November 11th, 2017 10:17
Poetic Dan said:
If you would not mind I\'d like you to know the reason you just destroyed me and I will read this again and again until I can rise again. Yesterday my 13 year old boy was refused access to me, against his wishes.
Thank you so much, I\'ll clear my tears from my phone knowing the are others walking my path.
November 11th, 2017 10:17
Victory
Accidental Poet said:
Perseverance is never wasted pb. Great write.
November 11th, 2017 09:56
Accidental Poet said:
Perseverance is never wasted pb. Great write.
November 11th, 2017 09:56
Not Giving In
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, keep going ahead your destiny awaits you.
November 3rd, 2017 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write, keep going ahead your destiny awaits you.
November 3rd, 2017 02:04
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