Comments received on poems by poetboy5454
Why War and Poverty Will Exist Forever
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, where is the profit in peace!!
April 7th, 2017 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, where is the profit in peace!!
April 7th, 2017 07:53
Frustration and Anxiety
Hopey_xx said:
Wow this is amazing. I can\'t stop reading it over. One day I hope we can all unite and change this world for the better, im certain that in the future you definitely will.
April 4th, 2017 12:51
Hopey_xx said:
Wow this is amazing. I can\'t stop reading it over. One day I hope we can all unite and change this world for the better, im certain that in the future you definitely will.
April 4th, 2017 12:51
Frustration and Anxiety
lovelydarkanddeep said:
While your words inspire and intrigue our society-ridden minds to change and diversify, you inspire hearts as well to help with the journey to fix our world. I will be one to say, I would gladly join your army of powerful world-changers. Much care, Izzy xo
April 4th, 2017 10:31
lovelydarkanddeep said:
While your words inspire and intrigue our society-ridden minds to change and diversify, you inspire hearts as well to help with the journey to fix our world. I will be one to say, I would gladly join your army of powerful world-changers. Much care, Izzy xo
April 4th, 2017 10:31
Rise Up
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, helping others is something we should all do.
April 4th, 2017 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, helping others is something we should all do.
April 4th, 2017 01:50
Roar Into The Night
Goldfinch60 said:
We must unite indeed and battle against all the ill in this world with love and kindness.
March 30th, 2017 08:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We must unite indeed and battle against all the ill in this world with love and kindness.
March 30th, 2017 08:16
Lone Samurai and (another poem) Rage
Tony36 said:
Well written excellent write
March 29th, 2017 16:13
Tony36 said:
Well written excellent write
March 29th, 2017 16:13
Confused
Discreation said:
Once love happens, it happens dude. But remember, it is a most dangerous game.
March 28th, 2017 17:44
Discreation said:
Once love happens, it happens dude. But remember, it is a most dangerous game.
March 28th, 2017 17:44
Fly
Mello said:
Wow man that good. We kinda have flow but your art has structure. Well written.
March 25th, 2017 17:17
Mello said:
Wow man that good. We kinda have flow but your art has structure. Well written.
March 25th, 2017 17:17
Push Ahead and (another poem) Alone
Hopey_xx said:
Wow I love them-great poems! I especially love the last line \"I don\'t care\". I can relate. Well done
March 24th, 2017 02:16
Hopey_xx said:
Wow I love them-great poems! I especially love the last line \"I don\'t care\". I can relate. Well done
March 24th, 2017 02:16
Push Ahead and (another poem) Alone
Kurt Philip Behm said:
You\'re very talented, especially for your age. I love these lines ........
\"One by one, I watch my demons arise
They pull on my body, my hope their prize
Shaking them off, I stand firm and tall
Knowing only in my abyss can I fall\"
As you get older, I think your message will become clearer,
and your words will tighten up.
Keep writing, if only for the words themselves... they\'re worth it!
Kurt
March 23rd, 2017 20:28
Kurt Philip Behm said:
You\'re very talented, especially for your age. I love these lines ........
\"One by one, I watch my demons arise
They pull on my body, my hope their prize
Shaking them off, I stand firm and tall
Knowing only in my abyss can I fall\"
As you get older, I think your message will become clearer,
and your words will tighten up.
Keep writing, if only for the words themselves... they\'re worth it!
Kurt
March 23rd, 2017 20:28
Endless War
willyweed said:
yes all we all really need is love, end the hate and peace will prevail, nice thought and a good write!
March 22nd, 2017 15:35
willyweed said:
yes all we all really need is love, end the hate and peace will prevail, nice thought and a good write!
March 22nd, 2017 15:35
Endless War
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very mature write. Wars will not stop all the time those in power do not listen to the people they allegedly rule.
March 22nd, 2017 08:57
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very mature write. Wars will not stop all the time those in power do not listen to the people they allegedly rule.
March 22nd, 2017 08:57
The Power of A Single Word
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, if only more people would shout at injustice in this world.
March 21st, 2017 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, if only more people would shout at injustice in this world.
March 21st, 2017 01:56
To The Stars!
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes you are right go ahead and reach for the stars.
March 19th, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes you are right go ahead and reach for the stars.
March 19th, 2017 01:25
Why do I keep looking back?
Goldfinch60 said:
Don\'t look back, the past is a closed book, look forward to the bright life ahead.
March 7th, 2017 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Don\'t look back, the past is a closed book, look forward to the bright life ahead.
March 7th, 2017 02:39
Sometimes I Just Don\'t Know
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the truth is always the right way to go.
March 6th, 2017 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the truth is always the right way to go.
March 6th, 2017 01:52
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