Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Where Is The Outrage?
Resa71 said:

Your writing is a lot like mine when I was your age.
Not necessarily the same word style, honestly your vocabulary is much broader than mine was at 14.
Reading your work has made me realize, how self absorbed in my own problems I’ve become.
I have morphed into the kind of person I once raged against in my youth.
That’s what happens sometimes, when you grow up and have children. Thank you for your words!
They are a much needed reminder to open our eyes , and take a stand whenever possible!

February 6th, 2018 13:00

Where Is The Outrage?
Resa71 said:

Your writing is a lot like mine when I was your age.
Not necessarily the same word style, honestly your vocabulary is much broader than mine was at 14.
Reading your work has made me realize, how self absorbed in my own problems I’ve become.
I have morphed into the kind of person I once raged against in my youth.
That’s what happens sometimes, when you grow up and have children. Thank you for your words!
They are a much needed reminder to open our eyes , and take a stand whenever possible!

February 6th, 2018 13:00

Through The Night
Santita said:

Awesome write and empowering last two lines, PB! You write with wisdom beyond your years!

February 6th, 2018 11:22

Where Is The Outrage?
dusk arising said:

Death is an end to existence in our dimension but not spiritually. There are poets on here who have a faith which tells them there is more to existence than out life in this dimension. Some believe blindly, others have experienced the inexplicable evidence that proves the continuum.
Very good writing poetboy.

January 30th, 2018 17:38

Where Is The Outrage?
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 30th, 2018 11:26

Where Is The Outrage?
OUTBACK said:

DEATH ( IS ) DEATH* & PART* of LIFE* ! THE CRIMINAL* BANKER$* CARTEL* - THE $ PRINTER$ - DEBT MASTERS* INTEREST % RATE* - LOAN* SHARK* -PREDATOR$* - PARASITE$ * - THE FUNDER$* of ALL* WAR$* - BOTH $IDE$* - HISTORICALLY * & PROFITABLY* ! THE ORIGINAL* - TERRORI$T$ * & OWNER* - MONOPOLIZING* - CONTROLLER$* of ( THIS WORLD )* UNTIL* = OTHERWISE* DIRECTLY & DEFINITIVELY* - ( CHALLENGED )* !

January 30th, 2018 08:54

Where Is The Outrage?
LittleGift said:

Such a strong message in this piece. You express so well the reality of our mortality and our countless mistakes which cost so many lives. This spoke to me. Such a good piece

January 30th, 2018 07:47

Time To Say Goodbye
Poetic Dan said:

Ripped me apart and stitched back up. You are one powerful soul that has so much, as always I thank you with a passion I know you understand.

January 22nd, 2018 12:36

This Flame Will Burn On
yellowrose said:

very nice :-) there has to be something to live for

January 19th, 2018 14:35

Endless Possibilities
FredPeyer said:

Well written, poetboy, every new day brings endless opportunities and it is up to us to grab and hold on to them!

January 19th, 2018 11:27

Endless Possibilities
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 19th, 2018 09:22

This Flame Will Burn On
Poetic Dan said:

Burn on my friend.
Thank you for a powerful read as the sun rises for me

January 19th, 2018 04:16

This Flame Will Burn On
Goldfinch60 said:

May that flame never ever be extinguished.

January 19th, 2018 02:00

Time To Say Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may that poison soon find an antidote and life goes on as normal.

January 17th, 2018 02:16

Time To Say Goodbye
Jooles said:

Loved this...to what were you saying goodbye so sadly but with so final may I ask?

January 16th, 2018 17:25

There Is A Flicker, At Least
Aislinn Wilson said:

You\'re clearly a skilled writer.

January 15th, 2018 19:56

Weakness
Gary Edward Geraci said:

A creative form and use of word repetition. I get that an object that is cracked would be structurally compromised, or weakened...and in your poem the crack appears to be getting worse....

January 10th, 2018 23:41

Enough
DeviLove said:

so positive for the new year! love it!

January 6th, 2018 19:05

Enough
Diamond said:

A \"C L A S S I C\" piece. Thanks for sharing.

January 6th, 2018 18:12

To Live or Die
Goldfinch60 said:

Chose the light and live for tomorrow, tomorrow will be good day.

December 26th, 2017 02:20

This Song Shall Never Go Unsung
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write that will always be heard.

December 13th, 2017 01:47

Artists of Speech
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may your words spread throughout the ether.

December 11th, 2017 09:00

Potential
deepthoughts said:

I love this poem!

December 10th, 2017 22:37

Caged
Nrodriquez said:

I like it

December 10th, 2017 19:12

Wielded
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and it depends on what you write to be able to answer the question.

December 8th, 2017 09:08

Wielded
Laura said:

Both...
in my humble opinion!
Nicely expressed!
Thank you.

December 8th, 2017 08:37

Triumph
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write.

December 8th, 2017 03:01

He Is A Failure
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with a positive end, HE WILL RISE.

December 7th, 2017 01:09

Castaway
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write.

December 4th, 2017 09:07

One Step At A Time
winternightsky123 said:

This is such an amazing, meaningful poem. I really like it! X

December 3rd, 2017 14:56

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