Comments received on poems by poetboy123
Ghost
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. To see through the eyes of a ghost. And yes, the ending is great.
June 22nd, 2017 14:12
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem. To see through the eyes of a ghost. And yes, the ending is great.
June 22nd, 2017 14:12
A Requiem For Everyone That Feels Forgotten
Hopey_xx said:
Wow, a great poem, and a great song to go with it!
June 19th, 2017 11:55
Hopey_xx said:
Wow, a great poem, and a great song to go with it!
June 19th, 2017 11:55
Reality of War
Louis Gibbs said:
Such is the mad history of man\'s expressing through conflict. Nicely done, poetboy!
June 16th, 2017 10:55
Louis Gibbs said:
Such is the mad history of man\'s expressing through conflict. Nicely done, poetboy!
June 16th, 2017 10:55
Reality of War
swingline said:
You go to war to take something from someone else . From another nation , another\'s freedom , or ideas of religion land , oil , gold , sheep , cattle , women , children . Or you take something from your own nation , men , money , political freedom , or religious freedom , land , oil , gold , sheep , cattle , women , children . Hmmm , sounds the same on either side .
June 16th, 2017 02:01
swingline said:
You go to war to take something from someone else . From another nation , another\'s freedom , or ideas of religion land , oil , gold , sheep , cattle , women , children . Or you take something from your own nation , men , money , political freedom , or religious freedom , land , oil , gold , sheep , cattle , women , children . Hmmm , sounds the same on either side .
June 16th, 2017 02:01
The People Had Grown Unruly
swingline said:
An energetic poem full of courage and determination . A much needed attitude adjustment .
June 10th, 2017 12:05
swingline said:
An energetic poem full of courage and determination . A much needed attitude adjustment .
June 10th, 2017 12:05
Past The Gray Clouds
swingline said:
Er , I\'m partial to rain , it\'s a fishing thing . But Sunshine is nice , I guess it will suffice .
June 6th, 2017 10:27
swingline said:
Er , I\'m partial to rain , it\'s a fishing thing . But Sunshine is nice , I guess it will suffice .
June 6th, 2017 10:27
Past The Gray Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the grey clouds pass and the light always appears. Go towards the light.
June 6th, 2017 07:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the grey clouds pass and the light always appears. Go towards the light.
June 6th, 2017 07:54
Cornered
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write. I can understand how you feel but war does not fix anything for us, the powers that are need to put away their weapons and talk peace.
June 6th, 2017 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write. I can understand how you feel but war does not fix anything for us, the powers that are need to put away their weapons and talk peace.
June 6th, 2017 01:09
Loss
MaddieJ said:
We ALL go through seasons where we can\'t find a muse. Sometimes our blindness gets in the way and sometimes it\'s because there\'s just nothing inspiring. That\'s a time when I go and write about how uninspired and lost I feel much like this poem. Good read!!
June 4th, 2017 19:08
MaddieJ said:
We ALL go through seasons where we can\'t find a muse. Sometimes our blindness gets in the way and sometimes it\'s because there\'s just nothing inspiring. That\'s a time when I go and write about how uninspired and lost I feel much like this poem. Good read!!
June 4th, 2017 19:08
Loss
swingline said:
King Arthur lost Excalibur in batitle but he picked up a spear and used it to kill Mordred but unfortunately Mordred fatally wounded Arthur in the head .
June 4th, 2017 12:33
swingline said:
King Arthur lost Excalibur in batitle but he picked up a spear and used it to kill Mordred but unfortunately Mordred fatally wounded Arthur in the head .
June 4th, 2017 12:33
Surviving the Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Everyone\'s future starts in their next moments existence, grab each moment as it comes they are each unique and cannot be replaced. Good write.
June 2nd, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Everyone\'s future starts in their next moments existence, grab each moment as it comes they are each unique and cannot be replaced. Good write.
June 2nd, 2017 01:07
From A Dying Ember
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Like many ashes a Phoenix can arise and your/our time will come.
May 29th, 2017 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Like many ashes a Phoenix can arise and your/our time will come.
May 29th, 2017 01:14
The Hunger
Augustus said:
Young people aren\'t allowed to fail at anything today. Every one gets a trophy. We forget that the bitterness of defeat is the stimulus to try harder to improve themselves. Great description of drive.
May 26th, 2017 21:39
Augustus said:
Young people aren\'t allowed to fail at anything today. Every one gets a trophy. We forget that the bitterness of defeat is the stimulus to try harder to improve themselves. Great description of drive.
May 26th, 2017 21:39
Painting of the Past
Hopey_xx said:
Wow- this is amazing. I can\'t stop reading it!
May 21st, 2017 12:57
Hopey_xx said:
Wow- this is amazing. I can\'t stop reading it!
May 21st, 2017 12:57
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