Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Sides
burning-embers said:

How can you pick a side when your world is shattered. Good write

August 19th, 2017 22:41

Sides
Nicholas Browning said:

Neutrality. Nice.

August 19th, 2017 11:56

Merry Dream
Santita said:

\"By drowning, I have now learned how to breathe\"... THAT LINE!!
Sage writing here, PB54..I absolutely love this.

August 18th, 2017 15:17

Trip to the Sea
Nicholas Browning said:

The style is nice. Certain emotions entitle a poem to be written a certain way. Marching off to fight the end, now that is some serious stuff. As you grow, your style will evolve. I\'m looking forward to seeing where it takes you.

August 17th, 2017 21:36

Trip to the Sea
Santita said:

This was great! I think the rhyming was perfect, also. You are a very talented poet.

August 16th, 2017 20:15

Trip to the Sea
Brycycle said:

Nicely written poem :)
I thought all the rhyming was a bit much but the words and imagery are used well.

August 15th, 2017 14:20

Can You Hear Me?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Nice hard hitting thought provoking poem. Today\'s world and empathy without stirring. Thumbs up young poet.



Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.

August 15th, 2017 12:46

Can You Hear Me?
Jooles said:

Loved it

August 13th, 2017 13:51

Purpose
Santita said:

This is so incredibly good!

August 12th, 2017 13:46

World of Songs
Goldfinch60 said:

Natures symphony is wonderful, as is this write.

August 10th, 2017 01:11

World of Songs
Heather T said:

You\'ve made some great music here yourself, PB. Nice work!

August 9th, 2017 15:55

World of Songs
Louis Gibbs said:

You paint a lovely picture for us, p.b., with this one. Well done!

August 9th, 2017 15:26

Invisible Boundaries
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true. We look back at history and believe what we see. What is not realised is that history is written by the winners - what if the losers were right?

August 9th, 2017 00:11

Rising From Despair
Tris Eaton said:

I like this poem a lot. Very nice

August 7th, 2017 22:50

Uncontrollable
Brycycle said:

Very good write :D


August 5th, 2017 10:28

Uncontrollable
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 4th, 2017 10:22

Uncontrollable
orchidee said:

A fine write.

August 4th, 2017 10:06

Flames
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

August 4th, 2017 07:59

Flames
Thewildfire said:

This poem struck a cord with me. I guess because of the sullen words, but nevertheless I loved it!

August 3rd, 2017 18:16

Flames
FredPeyer said:

poetboy, nicely penned, a flame as metaphor of a dying love, broken promise, or friendship. I like it.

August 3rd, 2017 17:13

Start Living
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

July 31st, 2017 00:55

Start Living
Poetic Dan said:

Amazing work, no one can do it but plenty can help guide you, to live or to remain a ghost.

I find it\'s best to drift into both or stay in the middle watching from above or below. Inspired me already!

July 30th, 2017 16:40

Start Living
Hopey_xx said:

Great work, I really enjoyed this!

July 30th, 2017 16:13

Sinking Skeletons
onepauly said:

though the sink to the sea,
they shall rise again.

July 19th, 2017 21:44

Sinking Skeletons
AAA said:

i actually fell in love with this!

July 19th, 2017 21:07

Twilight
Gary Edward Geraci said:

You\'re a warrior to keep this beast cornered for \"the millionth\" time - talk about spiritual warfare! One simply cannot underestimate how pleasing this is to our Lord. The kind of struggle you describe does not go unnoticed in the realm of the supernatural. I wish you continued strength my fellow soldier. I enjoyed the imagery and the meter.

July 17th, 2017 22:12

Game of Life
onepauly said:

your the boss

July 17th, 2017 03:05

Game of Life
burning-embers said:

Now you\'ve altered it and its a whole different ballgame. The original was much better. And just cos i made that literal observation, it doesn\'t have to mean your original was invalid my friend. My interpretation was in MY head not yours. I\'m trying to give you faith and confidence in your work here.

July 16th, 2017 19:18

Game of Life
burning-embers said:

Erm, correct me if i\'m wrong but those who HAVE lived are no longer in the game of life. The past tense of live equates to \'died\'.

July 16th, 2017 18:57

Shake The World
Adri said:

So wise and beyond your years and with a sick talent too!!! Loved this poem of yours. Keep up the great work! You are amazing 😉

July 15th, 2017 11:13



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