Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Note for the Future
Santita said:

They poured out of you magnificently, I\'d say! PB, you\'re writing is incredible, it is sage and makes me think you have an old soul.

August 21st, 2017 21:00

Sides
Goldfinch60 said:

A myriad of reflected sides. Good write.

August 20th, 2017 00:37

Sides
burning-embers said:

How can you pick a side when your world is shattered. Good write

August 19th, 2017 22:41

Sides
Nicholas Browning said:

Neutrality. Nice.

August 19th, 2017 11:56

Merry Dream
Santita said:

\"By drowning, I have now learned how to breathe\"... THAT LINE!!
Sage writing here, PB54..I absolutely love this.

August 18th, 2017 15:17

Trip to the Sea
Nicholas Browning said:

The style is nice. Certain emotions entitle a poem to be written a certain way. Marching off to fight the end, now that is some serious stuff. As you grow, your style will evolve. I\'m looking forward to seeing where it takes you.

August 17th, 2017 21:36

Trip to the Sea
Santita said:

This was great! I think the rhyming was perfect, also. You are a very talented poet.

August 16th, 2017 20:15

Trip to the Sea
Brycycle said:

Nicely written poem :)
I thought all the rhyming was a bit much but the words and imagery are used well.

August 15th, 2017 14:20

Can You Hear Me?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Nice hard hitting thought provoking poem. Today\'s world and empathy without stirring. Thumbs up young poet.



Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.

August 15th, 2017 12:46

Can You Hear Me?
OUTBACK said:

( PS )* I HEAR YOU !

August 13th, 2017 14:21

Can You Hear Me?
OUTBACK said:

AS FAR AS THE PLANET GETTING HOTTER ? DO LOOK INTO THE FOLLOWING =( HAARP & DARPA )* ! HI-TECH* TESLA* WEAPONIZED* ( WEATHER CONTROL ) ! AS FAR AS THE PLANET EARTH* BEING IN DANGER* ? NEVER ! THE HUMAN SPECIES* - AS ALL SPECIES* - HISTORICALLY* - AS WELL AS PRESENTLY SO* - BECOME EXTINCT WITHIN TIME* DUE TO THE PREMIS OF THE NATURE OF (LIFE)* ITSELF = ( CHANGE)* A STATE* OF PERMANENCY & ABSOLUTE SUSTAINABILITY* IS (NON EXISTENT)* nor IS THE PERMANENCY* OF ANYTHING* EXISTENT* - WHATSOEVER* - AT ALL - NECESSARY ! ALL SO EXISTENT* ARE BUT TEMPORARY* EXPLORATIONAL* - EXPRESSIONS* OF (LIFE)* ! (HERE & THEN GONE)* ! LIFE* HAS NO INTEREST* IN ANYTHING SUCH AS IMMORTALITY* - AS SUCH* - NOT* BEING OF (CHANGE)* - IS STAGNATION* & A REPETITION* OF THAT WHICH HAS BECOME (KNOWN)* & FEARFUL OF ITS IMPENDING DEMISE ! (ALL IS FOOD* - FOR ALL)* - SUCH IS THE NATURE* OF THAT* WHICH IS LIVING* - PRESENTLY* SO* HERE & NOW ! ( LIFE & DEATH ARE ONE )* SO* - ENJOY - THE MOMENT* ! LIFE* IS NOT A REWARD* & DEATH* IS NOT A PUNISHMENT* ! THE SO CALLED DEATH* OF THE TEMPORARY* EXPRESSIONS* OF LIFE* - DOSE NOT - IN ANY WAY - INVALIDATE* ITS EXISTENCE* ! FREEDOM IS NOTHING WHATSOEVER* AT ALL THAT CAN BE DEMANDED* - AS ONESELF* IS ALREADY OF FREEDOM* - YET - OBSTRUCTED - AS SUCH BY WAY OF ONES DENIAL OF BEING FREE !

August 13th, 2017 14:20

Can You Hear Me?
Jooles said:

Loved it

August 13th, 2017 13:51

Purpose
Santita said:

This is so incredibly good!

August 12th, 2017 13:46

World of Songs
Goldfinch60 said:

Natures symphony is wonderful, as is this write.

August 10th, 2017 01:11

World of Songs
Heather T said:

You\'ve made some great music here yourself, PB. Nice work!

August 9th, 2017 15:55

World of Songs
Louis Gibbs said:

You paint a lovely picture for us, p.b., with this one. Well done!

August 9th, 2017 15:26

Invisible Boundaries
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true. We look back at history and believe what we see. What is not realised is that history is written by the winners - what if the losers were right?

August 9th, 2017 00:11

Rising From Despair
Tris Eaton said:

I like this poem a lot. Very nice

August 7th, 2017 22:50

Uncontrollable
Brycycle said:

Very good write :D


August 5th, 2017 10:28

Uncontrollable
OUTBACK said:

THE (CAGE)* AS WELL AS THE PERUSED* STATE OF FREEDOM* - IS* - AS ( ALL )* - THAT\'S* SO EXPERIENTIALLY* EXISTENT* - BY WAY OF (IMAGINATION)*- IN THE FIRST PLACE !

August 4th, 2017 10:55

Uncontrollable
OUTBACK said:

CONTROL ? WHAT CONTROL ? THE (ILLUSION)* OF CONTROL* IS [ THE STATE OF WARFARE ]* MAINTAINED* - AS SUCH* - FOR THE VERY PURPOSE* OF ( CONTROL ) ! ( CATCH - 22 / CHECKMATE ) !

August 4th, 2017 10:51

Uncontrollable
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 4th, 2017 10:22

Uncontrollable
orchidee said:

A fine write.

August 4th, 2017 10:06

Flames
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

August 4th, 2017 07:59

Flames
Thewildfire said:

This poem struck a cord with me. I guess because of the sullen words, but nevertheless I loved it!

August 3rd, 2017 18:16

Flames
FredPeyer said:

poetboy, nicely penned, a flame as metaphor of a dying love, broken promise, or friendship. I like it.

August 3rd, 2017 17:13

Start Living
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

July 31st, 2017 00:55

Start Living
Poetic Dan said:

Amazing work, no one can do it but plenty can help guide you, to live or to remain a ghost.

I find it\'s best to drift into both or stay in the middle watching from above or below. Inspired me already!

July 30th, 2017 16:40

Start Living
Hopey_xx said:

Great work, I really enjoyed this!

July 30th, 2017 16:13

Sinking Skeletons
onepauly said:

though the sink to the sea,
they shall rise again.

July 19th, 2017 21:44



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