Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Inescapable
OUTBACK said:

WE ALL LOVE* & YET WILL FOREVER SO REMAIN IN A DENIAL OF THE PERSONAL EXPERIENTIAL* THEATRICAL DRAMS WE PUT OURSELVES THROUGH ! CASE IN POINT* = THAT* WHICH IS* - BIRTH-LESS & DEATHLESS ? WELL - HOW ABOUT GOING THROUGH THE DRAMATICS* OF THE IMPENDING* FEAR* OF CEASING* TO - EXIST ? THE STRUGGLE TO BEAT* DEATH ? (FREEDOM IS)* = UPON NO* STRUGGLE TO ATTAIN IT ! LOL* - IRONIC* - YET REALIZABLE* !

September 12th, 2017 07:02

Good In Evil
Santita said:

Excellent word choices, a write with such depth! Another great piece, PB!

September 11th, 2017 17:26

Good In Evil
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, that was powerful! but that last line kills me, as deep inside I know you are right. We are the only ones in this planet to keep thinking up better ways to blow each other apart, this part of the brain \"apathy\" is still struggling within us!

September 11th, 2017 12:02

Good In Evil
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Apathy can be a very strong weapon in some instances.

September 11th, 2017 08:08

Knowledge
Mugsdaddy said:

This is great writing excellent subject matter straight to the point and good contradiction to validate each line.

September 10th, 2017 16:29

Knowledge
Santita said:

A beautiful, powerful, sage write, PB! Out back said it best knowledge = power! Straight to my faves

September 10th, 2017 14:10

Knowledge
Candlewitch said:

hello poetboy,

in this pensive write, you seem to have uncovered one of the secrets of the universe! an excellent write!

*hugs, Cat

September 10th, 2017 12:30

Knowledge
OUTBACK said:

KNOWLEDGE* = IS POWER* ! THIS IS FACT* : YET* : THAT* WHICH IS OF THE ( KNOWN )* HAS LITTLE HISTORICAL CHANGING* IMPACT* - AS WHAT SO REMAINS - FOREVER* - INTACT* - IS THE IGNORANCE* of BELIEF* IN AUTHORITARIAN* RULE* & THE EVER PRESENT* STATE* OF DOOM* = ( WARFARE )* - 101

September 10th, 2017 09:55

Dreamers
Santita said:

A piece full of determination and hope! PB, your writing is inspiring. Thank you for sharing!

September 9th, 2017 17:09

Dreamers
Nicholas Browning said:

It\'s all about the journey. Nice work once again.

September 9th, 2017 14:52

Dreamers
Accidental Poet said:

A very positive and inspirational write. ; )

September 9th, 2017 13:18

Dreamers
Poetic Dan said:

So many lines taking back through my life, then you walked my through to where I am now.
A true privilege it is, to read your words so openly honest, I\'m left feeling better just knowing you\'re on the planet!


September 9th, 2017 11:54

Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:

May those words always arise with you as they did in this write.

September 9th, 2017 11:08

Dreamers
seeker123 said:

\'Let go of all your sorrow, it can’t hold you back anymore

Tomorrow is a new day and today is the door

Bring your dreams and make them reality

From who you are, become who you want to be\'

Wow I love that line, a very inspiring message. Thank you I enjoyed the read:)

September 9th, 2017 10:35

Mornings
Santita said:

Oh such a great write, PB. Lovely seeing your words here on mypoeticside. You have mastered the art of flow, my friend.

September 8th, 2017 10:47

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Poetic Dan said:

Your passion never falls short on wanting to heal this world. A great beacon of light you are my friend with words to break these invisible chains around us!

September 8th, 2017 10:45

Unfinished Journey
Poetic Dan said:

I feel revived after that read! Thank you

September 8th, 2017 10:36

Mornings
lasergraph said:

You described the way I feel most days. I could identify with every word. Great write.

September 8th, 2017 10:31

Mornings
Christina8 said:

Very good poem! Love the rhythm and the rhyme scheme. A very relatable poem, I enjoyed it!

September 8th, 2017 10:21

Unfinished Journey
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write, hope is always there and will be reached in time.

September 8th, 2017 01:27

Unfinished Journey
Nicholas Browning said:

Your favorite poem shines through in this. Nice.

September 7th, 2017 22:04

Unfinished Journey
myself and me said:

\"Lions let out their roar, hear their call
Take your own destiny, refuse to fall
Go towards hope if you must crawl
Bring a close to this unfinished journey\"
I see a knight fighting to his last stand.
Very well composed.


September 7th, 2017 13:10

Unfinished Journey
Santita said:

This is a liberating work, PB. I don\'t understand how these pieces don\'t have more comments your work has DEPTH and is nothing short of great.

September 7th, 2017 13:01

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
dusk arising said:

Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world today and its posturing. The second like reverie of a decaying heartfelt romance being sadly accepted. Outstanding writing. Please comment on my stuff.

September 6th, 2017 19:54

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:

Beautiful write. Speaks the truth.

September 6th, 2017 13:54

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
WriteBeLight said:

You have poetic talent poetboy!

September 6th, 2017 12:00

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Santita said:

These are two amazing writes, PB. I can\'t decide which one I like more.

The World Burns As We Speak - your title says it all there, \" a game for them, for us no prizes\" we are seen as pawns in this game, with only a few willing to see the truth!

Angels - beautifully written, my friend. The last stanza was great!

Sage writing, as usual!

September 6th, 2017 11:05

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 6th, 2017 10:20

Distorted
WriteBeLight said:

This is very well done and full of images :)

September 6th, 2017 08:20

Distorted
Candlewitch said:

absolutely distorted! good work, poetboy!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

September 5th, 2017 12:07



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