Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Good In Evil
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Apathy can be a very strong weapon in some instances.

September 11th, 2017 08:08

Knowledge
Mugsdaddy said:

This is great writing excellent subject matter straight to the point and good contradiction to validate each line.

September 10th, 2017 16:29

Knowledge
Santita said:

A beautiful, powerful, sage write, PB! Out back said it best knowledge = power! Straight to my faves

September 10th, 2017 14:10

Knowledge
Candlewitch said:

hello poetboy,

in this pensive write, you seem to have uncovered one of the secrets of the universe! an excellent write!

*hugs, Cat

September 10th, 2017 12:30

Knowledge
OUTBACK said:

KNOWLEDGE* = IS POWER* ! THIS IS FACT* : YET* : THAT* WHICH IS OF THE ( KNOWN )* HAS LITTLE HISTORICAL CHANGING* IMPACT* - AS WHAT SO REMAINS - FOREVER* - INTACT* - IS THE IGNORANCE* of BELIEF* IN AUTHORITARIAN* RULE* & THE EVER PRESENT* STATE* OF DOOM* = ( WARFARE )* - 101

September 10th, 2017 09:55

Dreamers
Santita said:

A piece full of determination and hope! PB, your writing is inspiring. Thank you for sharing!

September 9th, 2017 17:09

Dreamers
Nicholas Browning said:

It\'s all about the journey. Nice work once again.

September 9th, 2017 14:52

Dreamers
Accidental Poet said:

A very positive and inspirational write. ; )

September 9th, 2017 13:18

Dreamers
Poetic Dan said:

So many lines taking back through my life, then you walked my through to where I am now.
A true privilege it is, to read your words so openly honest, I\'m left feeling better just knowing you\'re on the planet!


September 9th, 2017 11:54

Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:

May those words always arise with you as they did in this write.

September 9th, 2017 11:08

Dreamers
seeker123 said:

\'Let go of all your sorrow, it can’t hold you back anymore

Tomorrow is a new day and today is the door

Bring your dreams and make them reality

From who you are, become who you want to be\'

Wow I love that line, a very inspiring message. Thank you I enjoyed the read:)

September 9th, 2017 10:35

Mornings
Santita said:

Oh such a great write, PB. Lovely seeing your words here on mypoeticside. You have mastered the art of flow, my friend.

September 8th, 2017 10:47

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Poetic Dan said:

Your passion never falls short on wanting to heal this world. A great beacon of light you are my friend with words to break these invisible chains around us!

September 8th, 2017 10:45

Unfinished Journey
Poetic Dan said:

I feel revived after that read! Thank you

September 8th, 2017 10:36

Mornings
lasergraph said:

You described the way I feel most days. I could identify with every word. Great write.

September 8th, 2017 10:31

Mornings
Christina8 said:

Very good poem! Love the rhythm and the rhyme scheme. A very relatable poem, I enjoyed it!

September 8th, 2017 10:21

Unfinished Journey
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write, hope is always there and will be reached in time.

September 8th, 2017 01:27

Unfinished Journey
Nicholas Browning said:

Your favorite poem shines through in this. Nice.

September 7th, 2017 22:04

Unfinished Journey
myself and me said:

\"Lions let out their roar, hear their call
Take your own destiny, refuse to fall
Go towards hope if you must crawl
Bring a close to this unfinished journey\"
I see a knight fighting to his last stand.
Very well composed.


September 7th, 2017 13:10

Unfinished Journey
Santita said:

This is a liberating work, PB. I don\'t understand how these pieces don\'t have more comments your work has DEPTH and is nothing short of great.

September 7th, 2017 13:01

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
dusk arising said:

Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world today and its posturing. The second like reverie of a decaying heartfelt romance being sadly accepted. Outstanding writing. Please comment on my stuff.

September 6th, 2017 19:54

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:

Beautiful write. Speaks the truth.

September 6th, 2017 13:54

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
WriteBeLight said:

You have poetic talent poetboy!

September 6th, 2017 12:00

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Santita said:

These are two amazing writes, PB. I can\'t decide which one I like more.

The World Burns As We Speak - your title says it all there, \" a game for them, for us no prizes\" we are seen as pawns in this game, with only a few willing to see the truth!

Angels - beautifully written, my friend. The last stanza was great!

Sage writing, as usual!

September 6th, 2017 11:05

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 6th, 2017 10:20

Distorted
WriteBeLight said:

This is very well done and full of images :)

September 6th, 2017 08:20

Distorted
Candlewitch said:

absolutely distorted! good work, poetboy!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

September 5th, 2017 12:07

True Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write. Love, the strongest of all emotions.

September 5th, 2017 00:54

True Love
Seek said:

Wonderful reflections on true love. And for me --- just as you state ---- if it is fleeting, it cannot be true love. The last stanza says it all. Excellent rhyming too.

September 4th, 2017 20:01

True Love
myself and me said:

A nice writing about true love.

September 4th, 2017 15:08



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