Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



When
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an emotive write and so very true.

September 2nd, 2019 01:35

When
Poetic Dan said:

There is that flame I see, keep being strong me friend. We are the many, they are the few. Time has still only just begun for us... Always inspiring ;)
Thank you

September 1st, 2019 14:15

When
dusk arising said:

Sincere and moving writing from you. I share your emotion here.

shall we know peace when she comes
this stranger to our land
will she lay to rest the lost who loved
denied by murdering hands
father the orphaned child
and soothe its ravaged loss
heal the wounds
which seep the pus of vengence
plant seeds of forgiveness
rebuild a faith in trust
feed the hungry mouths
restore human dignity

for tomorrows child is watching

September 1st, 2019 11:34

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
Santita said:

Incredible write, PB. Powerful and evocative. Nice to see you are still around, my friend!

August 7th, 2019 14:27

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
Seek said:

Shots ring out and the NRA coffers continue to swell. Trump said the shooting must stop. Not if the guns aren\'t stopped. America may be quickly running out of its quota of thoughts and prayers. How sad.

August 5th, 2019 08:17

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
Goldfinch60 said:

I cannot add anything more to what Brian wrote. I agree with all he has said.

August 5th, 2019 00:44

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
OUTBACK said:

\" ASK NOT* for WHOM THE \" BELL \" - TOLLS* ! IT \" TOLLS \" - FOR = (( ALL )) !

August 4th, 2019 14:47

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
OUTBACK said:

POLICE* & MILLITARY* - MURDERERS* - ALLOWED* - ACCESS to GUNS* = ? WELL THEN* - THE -PLAYING FIELD* - IS - EVENED* ! YEA - I KNOW* ! THEY* - ALL - HATE* - THAT* - DEAL : ALWAYS !

August 4th, 2019 14:43

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
OUTBACK said:

FACT* = THERE* - IS NO* - \" LAW \" -PROCLAIMED* BY ANYONE/ THING - WHATSOEVER* AT ALL* - THAT CAN BEAT* : \" KILLING \" / MURDER* / WARFARE* / REVOLUTION* - INCLUDING* SELF DEFENSE* = MY* = RIGHT* to KEEP at BAY & IF NECESSARY* - ELIMINATE* - ANY* - SELF WILLED* - OPRESSIVE* - INTRUDER* - ATTACKER* - GUN TOATING* A- HOLE* ! THE CRIMINAL* MENTALITY DOSE NOT - GIVE - ONE - SHIT - ABOUT* - ANY = \" LAW \" = PROCLAIMED* by IDIOT* - AUTHORITY* & THE SELF - ACCOUNTABLE* - SELF DEFENDING* FREE* & INDEPENDENT* -INDIVIDUAL* COULD - CARE - LESS - ABOUT - ANY LAWS* of THOU* - SHALT* NOT* - WHATEVER* ! PRIVET - PROPERTY* IS - PRIVET* ! INTRUDE* / TRESPASS* w ILL* - INTENT* & ONE* SHALL SO = ( RIP )* - ASAP* ! ( BTW ) - ALL THESE* \" M-A$$* \" SHOOTINGS* - ENTIRLY - POLITICALY - ENGINEERED* & PROPAGANDIZED* by WAY of THE - \" FAKE \" - NEW$* - MEDIA* - INSTATUTIONALIZED - INDOCTRNATIONAL - MACHINE* ! I\'M BUYING INTO - NONE of THAT* - \" $HIT \" ! . . . ( PS )* KING GEORGEIE* of BRITANNIA* - TRIED his HAND AT -BANNING* the COLLINISTS* in PRIVET* / COLLECTIVE* - GUN* - OWNERSHIP* ! HISTORY* IS A - TESTEMENT* to HOW WELL - THAT* IDIOCY* - WORKED OUT* ! THE ONLY WAY U\'LL EVER GET ANY GUNS* - AWAY FROM a FREE* & INDEPENDENT*- INDIVIDUAL* is BY - PERSONALLY* - CONFRONTING* = DEATH* = ITSELF* ! LETS SEE HOW WELL of A - \" GAMBLER* - THOU* - ART* ! ? THE ARMEND \" CRIMINAL\" = ? \" THAT - WOULD BE = ( GOVERNMENT ) ! THER\'S NO ROOM for F* SOCA;ISTS* in A FREE* - ASS - REPUBLIC* ! DEMOCRACY - BE - DAMNED* ! LIVING - LIFE* - ONE DIES* ! THAT\'S THE Fn* DEAL ! SUICIDE* IS a REALITY* of LIFE* - JUST as IS - ONES* - SELF * -ACCOUNTABLE* - SELF* DEFENSE* ! THE \" LAW \" !!! A LAW PERPOSED* & IMPOSED* is A LAW* to BE* - DEPOSED* ! . . . MY CASE* - ? - FOREVER *- VIGILANT* ! NEVER* at REST* ! ( BTW ) YOUR* - NOT* AN - AMERICAN - CITIZEN ! PERIOD !

August 4th, 2019 14:33

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing Friend and having th courage to speak out against the idiotic GUN LAWS in the USA ! There are 330 million Americans and 330 million GUNS loose on the Streets. When I visited a Gun Shop in ALABAMA I was physically sick and I was 32. Until GUNS are BANNED there will be more & more mass shootings ! In the USA there are 100 times more DEATH by GUN per 10,000 of the population than in the UK. Our Countries are similar (I love Texas) the only difference is that GUNS ARE BANNED in the UK. In the main our POLICE (and CRIMINALS) do not carry GUNS. With a GUNG-HO President like TRUMP there is little chance of a repeal ! In MASS SHOOTINGS in the USA it is always the innocent who suffer. If I was an American Citizen I would seek to raise awareness of the Stupidity and Danger of the GUN LAWS and spend my life seeking to ban them. Its not just Homicide in the USA it is also Suicide is much easier & complete if you have a GUN. I would begin by closing all GUN STORES Nationwide ~ calling an amnesty for People to hand in their GUNS and then making possession of a GUN of any sort ILLEGAL ! You live in Texas a Frontier State with Mexico ~ Do you have a GUN ~ have you ever needed or wanted a GUN ? Most Americans I have spoken to (who have GUNS) say they have them just in case they confront an Armed Criminal etc even though the chances are less than 1000 to 1. That is the problem because ANY PERSON with a GUN is liable to use it foolishly on himself or his neighbour when He is DRUNK or ANGRY or UNDER STRESS ! I rest my case !

Yours BRIAN !

August 4th, 2019 11:47

the shots ring out forever (Mass Shootings, please read.)
OUTBACK said:

INTELEGENT* & SELF* ACCOUNTABLE* - \" PERSONAL \" - \" SELF DEFENSE \" SHOTS* RING OUT* & END* THE CRIMINAL PERPETRATOR* - SILENCED* - FOREVER* ! EVERY* - SINGLE ONE of EM - ALL ! BULLETS* - STOP BULLETS* or CATCH* - 22 / CHECKMATE* - 101* !

August 4th, 2019 09:57

Despite the Cost
Poetic Dan said:

That cost is worth paying every time, to achieve what some say could never happen in our time!

Another thank you my friend

July 2nd, 2019 06:43

A Million Suns
Poetic Dan said:

Dam! What a goosebump of a read, your flow has been missed my friend. To others it may not mean much but to rest it is like sitting under the sun.

This was a great one!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

July 2nd, 2019 06:40

A Million Suns
marijoy said:

Love your poem honoring our great majesty, the sun. Thanks

July 1st, 2019 21:48

The Green Ballot Box
Poetic Dan said:

As always you writing are phenomenal, this flowed and inspirational

Thank you my friend
Always appreciated

May 2nd, 2019 06:33

The Land Without Name
DeviLove said:

Is this poem about trying to find a name for the poem? That\'s so creative and interesting!

March 8th, 2019 21:36

The Land Without Name
Poetic Dan said:

You\'re all dried up and I\'m in the rain as I read your words I feel more sain. Good to read your work again

March 7th, 2019 02:52

The Land Without Name
ForeverJesus6 said:

The only way to Heaven is through Christ Jesus, the son of the true living God.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key

March 6th, 2019 22:17

Crash into Tomorrow
psychofemale said:

the the different rhyme patterns you have going on here....nicely done :)

January 9th, 2019 21:34

Another Wall To Climb
Goldfinch60 said:

Those walls are always there and as we climb every one our life experience increases our knowledge. Do not let them stop you.

October 30th, 2018 02:08

Another Wall To Climb
fuche_bu said:

Keep climbing. We all need to keep climbing. We\'ll get there eventually. nice poem.

October 29th, 2018 19:05

Battle Call
Poetic Dan said:

Wizard with your words
Masterful is your work
Blessed to read your thoughts
Rippling out from your core


October 28th, 2018 04:50

Battle Call
Goldfinch60 said:

May those miseries in the world soon be long gone. Good write.

October 28th, 2018 02:30

Limitless
Poetic Dan said:

As I said before your fire is so pure, words felt in my core. Forever an inspiration by just being who you are, shape away my friend. Be the star that you are!

October 27th, 2018 03:26

Limitless
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write. Always go forward - there are no limits.

\"If your dreams do not scare you they are not big enough\"

September 30th, 2018 01:07

Time Is Like A River
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, I too float on My River of time.
\"Yesterday is another country\"

September 24th, 2018 00:42

Those words
Poetic Dan said:

You are a master of your word, I have no doubt they will be found then heard. One thing for sure when they do, the world will know and witness You. As amazingly wonderful as I already do, no word of a lie I\'m inspired by every one of your writes.

Much peace and respect
My broetry friend

September 9th, 2018 03:29

Those words
Crystal Hope said:

so incredibly moving

September 8th, 2018 19:56

Human Dictionary
Santita said:

Powerful write, PB. Great to read your words again

September 7th, 2018 13:33

Human Dictionary
Goldfinch60 said:

That definition is a great way of purging ones mind.

September 7th, 2018 07:59

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