Comments received on poems by poetboy123
Pulsing
Poetic Dan said:
There is not many times your spirit doesn\'t run through my mind and it is normally after the same feeling in reading your rhymes!
I do hope that freedom is with you my friend as your Poetic soul one can never forget!
Much peace and respect!
Keep up the write my friend...
Ps... I had to properly hunt you down through the friends list!
So glad I did..
December 14th, 2020 12:26
Poetic Dan said:
There is not many times your spirit doesn\'t run through my mind and it is normally after the same feeling in reading your rhymes!
I do hope that freedom is with you my friend as your Poetic soul one can never forget!
Much peace and respect!
Keep up the write my friend...
Ps... I had to properly hunt you down through the friends list!
So glad I did..
December 14th, 2020 12:26
The Heartbeat of Freedom
MaddieJ said:
We are all born with the desire and the will to be free! Freedom is in the heart for sure. I love this... Thanks for posting.
June 11th, 2020 17:54
MaddieJ said:
We are all born with the desire and the will to be free! Freedom is in the heart for sure. I love this... Thanks for posting.
June 11th, 2020 17:54
The Voiceless Will Scream
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful write PB, that episode shows the racism is still in the world, why cannot everybody be treated equally and with respect.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful write PB, that episode shows the racism is still in the world, why cannot everybody be treated equally and with respect.
Andy
May 31st, 2020 00:35
Some Day
Poetic Dan said:
They did and I have, may I long remember your words! Then show you as a boy that ran from home at 14 with no dream, I\'ve made plenty along the way that has made my life worth living.... I now work with no degree, yet solve the problem others avoid with their certificates... The power is in your hands to make the difference!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
May 31st, 2020 00:22
Poetic Dan said:
They did and I have, may I long remember your words! Then show you as a boy that ran from home at 14 with no dream, I\'ve made plenty along the way that has made my life worth living.... I now work with no degree, yet solve the problem others avoid with their certificates... The power is in your hands to make the difference!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
May 31st, 2020 00:22
The Voiceless Will Scream
Poetic Dan said:
Holly flaps, see what I mean. Even if this didn\'t happen we know there is far more to be seen!
You tell it well of what we should all see, the unforgettable sounds of Silent Screams...
Change is coming and it won\'t hit the streets or sit comfortably on the front row seats, it will be down to each soul to look down deep, to not conform and take back the power that\'s past the skin. To see a true vibration that nature intended, not the self-righteous human intellect
Ha ha, cheers for the outlet and inspiration!
Keep up the write
May 31st, 2020 00:13
Poetic Dan said:
Holly flaps, see what I mean. Even if this didn\'t happen we know there is far more to be seen!
You tell it well of what we should all see, the unforgettable sounds of Silent Screams...
Change is coming and it won\'t hit the streets or sit comfortably on the front row seats, it will be down to each soul to look down deep, to not conform and take back the power that\'s past the skin. To see a true vibration that nature intended, not the self-righteous human intellect
Ha ha, cheers for the outlet and inspiration!
Keep up the write
May 31st, 2020 00:13
the shots ring out forever
DeviLove said:
It is so sad...all these shootings. The people who do this, I believe, do not need punishment, but need real help. For too long authorities just throw em in jail and call it good, or even give them the death penalty. Of course when these people show no remorse or signs of wanting to change it is hard and probably makes it seem hopeless...but I dont think that justifies just giving up on these hurting people.
February 8th, 2020 15:17
DeviLove said:
It is so sad...all these shootings. The people who do this, I believe, do not need punishment, but need real help. For too long authorities just throw em in jail and call it good, or even give them the death penalty. Of course when these people show no remorse or signs of wanting to change it is hard and probably makes it seem hopeless...but I dont think that justifies just giving up on these hurting people.
February 8th, 2020 15:17
Legacy
Poetic Dan said:
Saved after the first two lines, I believe its in me and I do fail when I\'m unwilling to speak as this is that freedom they have to me. Never to be afraid of saying what we feel, one day our souls will move on to see this message prevail.
Great work and always appreciated
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
December 16th, 2019 10:26
Poetic Dan said:
Saved after the first two lines, I believe its in me and I do fail when I\'m unwilling to speak as this is that freedom they have to me. Never to be afraid of saying what we feel, one day our souls will move on to see this message prevail.
Great work and always appreciated
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
December 16th, 2019 10:26
Legacy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good to see you again poetboy.
Your words resonate and I hope that freedom is with us soon.
December 16th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good to see you again poetboy.
Your words resonate and I hope that freedom is with us soon.
December 16th, 2019 01:09
When
Poetic Dan said:
There is that flame I see, keep being strong me friend. We are the many, they are the few. Time has still only just begun for us... Always inspiring ;)
Thank you
September 1st, 2019 14:15
Poetic Dan said:
There is that flame I see, keep being strong me friend. We are the many, they are the few. Time has still only just begun for us... Always inspiring ;)
Thank you
September 1st, 2019 14:15
When
dusk arising said:
Sincere and moving writing from you. I share your emotion here.
shall we know peace when she comes
this stranger to our land
will she lay to rest the lost who loved
denied by murdering hands
father the orphaned child
and soothe its ravaged loss
heal the wounds
which seep the pus of vengence
plant seeds of forgiveness
rebuild a faith in trust
feed the hungry mouths
restore human dignity
for tomorrows child is watching
September 1st, 2019 11:34
dusk arising said:
Sincere and moving writing from you. I share your emotion here.
shall we know peace when she comes
this stranger to our land
will she lay to rest the lost who loved
denied by murdering hands
father the orphaned child
and soothe its ravaged loss
heal the wounds
which seep the pus of vengence
plant seeds of forgiveness
rebuild a faith in trust
feed the hungry mouths
restore human dignity
for tomorrows child is watching
September 1st, 2019 11:34
the shots ring out forever
Seek said:
Shots ring out and the NRA coffers continue to swell. Trump said the shooting must stop. Not if the guns aren\'t stopped. America may be quickly running out of its quota of thoughts and prayers. How sad.
August 5th, 2019 08:17
Seek said:
Shots ring out and the NRA coffers continue to swell. Trump said the shooting must stop. Not if the guns aren\'t stopped. America may be quickly running out of its quota of thoughts and prayers. How sad.
August 5th, 2019 08:17
the shots ring out forever
Goldfinch60 said:
I cannot add anything more to what Brian wrote. I agree with all he has said.
August 5th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I cannot add anything more to what Brian wrote. I agree with all he has said.
August 5th, 2019 00:44
the shots ring out forever
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Friend and having th courage to speak out against the idiotic GUN LAWS in the USA ! There are 330 million Americans and 330 million GUNS loose on the Streets. When I visited a Gun Shop in ALABAMA I was physically sick and I was 32. Until GUNS are BANNED there will be more & more mass shootings ! In the USA there are 100 times more DEATH by GUN per 10,000 of the population than in the UK. Our Countries are similar (I love Texas) the only difference is that GUNS ARE BANNED in the UK. In the main our POLICE (and CRIMINALS) do not carry GUNS. With a GUNG-HO President like TRUMP there is little chance of a repeal ! In MASS SHOOTINGS in the USA it is always the innocent who suffer. If I was an American Citizen I would seek to raise awareness of the Stupidity and Danger of the GUN LAWS and spend my life seeking to ban them. Its not just Homicide in the USA it is also Suicide is much easier & complete if you have a GUN. I would begin by closing all GUN STORES Nationwide ~ calling an amnesty for People to hand in their GUNS and then making possession of a GUN of any sort ILLEGAL ! You live in Texas a Frontier State with Mexico ~ Do you have a GUN ~ have you ever needed or wanted a GUN ? Most Americans I have spoken to (who have GUNS) say they have them just in case they confront an Armed Criminal etc even though the chances are less than 1000 to 1. That is the problem because ANY PERSON with a GUN is liable to use it foolishly on himself or his neighbour when He is DRUNK or ANGRY or UNDER STRESS ! I rest my case !
Yours BRIAN !
August 4th, 2019 11:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Friend and having th courage to speak out against the idiotic GUN LAWS in the USA ! There are 330 million Americans and 330 million GUNS loose on the Streets. When I visited a Gun Shop in ALABAMA I was physically sick and I was 32. Until GUNS are BANNED there will be more & more mass shootings ! In the USA there are 100 times more DEATH by GUN per 10,000 of the population than in the UK. Our Countries are similar (I love Texas) the only difference is that GUNS ARE BANNED in the UK. In the main our POLICE (and CRIMINALS) do not carry GUNS. With a GUNG-HO President like TRUMP there is little chance of a repeal ! In MASS SHOOTINGS in the USA it is always the innocent who suffer. If I was an American Citizen I would seek to raise awareness of the Stupidity and Danger of the GUN LAWS and spend my life seeking to ban them. Its not just Homicide in the USA it is also Suicide is much easier & complete if you have a GUN. I would begin by closing all GUN STORES Nationwide ~ calling an amnesty for People to hand in their GUNS and then making possession of a GUN of any sort ILLEGAL ! You live in Texas a Frontier State with Mexico ~ Do you have a GUN ~ have you ever needed or wanted a GUN ? Most Americans I have spoken to (who have GUNS) say they have them just in case they confront an Armed Criminal etc even though the chances are less than 1000 to 1. That is the problem because ANY PERSON with a GUN is liable to use it foolishly on himself or his neighbour when He is DRUNK or ANGRY or UNDER STRESS ! I rest my case !
Yours BRIAN !
August 4th, 2019 11:47
Despite the Cost
Poetic Dan said:
That cost is worth paying every time, to achieve what some say could never happen in our time!
Another thank you my friend
July 2nd, 2019 06:43
Poetic Dan said:
That cost is worth paying every time, to achieve what some say could never happen in our time!
Another thank you my friend
July 2nd, 2019 06:43
A Million Suns
Poetic Dan said:
Dam! What a goosebump of a read, your flow has been missed my friend. To others it may not mean much but to rest it is like sitting under the sun.
This was a great one!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
July 2nd, 2019 06:40
Poetic Dan said:
Dam! What a goosebump of a read, your flow has been missed my friend. To others it may not mean much but to rest it is like sitting under the sun.
This was a great one!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
July 2nd, 2019 06:40
A Million Suns
marijoy said:
Love your poem honoring our great majesty, the sun. Thanks
July 1st, 2019 21:48
marijoy said:
Love your poem honoring our great majesty, the sun. Thanks
July 1st, 2019 21:48
The Green Ballot Box
Poetic Dan said:
As always you writing are phenomenal, this flowed and inspirational
Thank you my friend
Always appreciated
May 2nd, 2019 06:33
Poetic Dan said:
As always you writing are phenomenal, this flowed and inspirational
Thank you my friend
Always appreciated
May 2nd, 2019 06:33
The Land Without Name
DeviLove said:
Is this poem about trying to find a name for the poem? That\'s so creative and interesting!
March 8th, 2019 21:36
DeviLove said:
Is this poem about trying to find a name for the poem? That\'s so creative and interesting!
March 8th, 2019 21:36
The Land Without Name
Poetic Dan said:
You\'re all dried up and I\'m in the rain as I read your words I feel more sain. Good to read your work again
March 7th, 2019 02:52
Poetic Dan said:
You\'re all dried up and I\'m in the rain as I read your words I feel more sain. Good to read your work again
March 7th, 2019 02:52
The Land Without Name
ForeverJesus7 said:
The only way to Heaven is through Christ Jesus, the son of the true living God.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key
March 6th, 2019 22:17
ForeverJesus7 said:
The only way to Heaven is through Christ Jesus, the son of the true living God.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key
March 6th, 2019 22:17
Crash into Tomorrow
psychofemale said:
the the different rhyme patterns you have going on here....nicely done :)
January 9th, 2019 21:34
psychofemale said:
the the different rhyme patterns you have going on here....nicely done :)
January 9th, 2019 21:34
Another Wall To Climb
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walls are always there and as we climb every one our life experience increases our knowledge. Do not let them stop you.
October 30th, 2018 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walls are always there and as we climb every one our life experience increases our knowledge. Do not let them stop you.
October 30th, 2018 02:08
Another Wall To Climb
fuche_bu said:
Keep climbing. We all need to keep climbing. We\'ll get there eventually. nice poem.
October 29th, 2018 19:05
fuche_bu said:
Keep climbing. We all need to keep climbing. We\'ll get there eventually. nice poem.
October 29th, 2018 19:05
Battle Call
Poetic Dan said:
Wizard with your words
Masterful is your work
Blessed to read your thoughts
Rippling out from your core
October 28th, 2018 04:50
Poetic Dan said:
Wizard with your words
Masterful is your work
Blessed to read your thoughts
Rippling out from your core
October 28th, 2018 04:50
Battle Call
Goldfinch60 said:
May those miseries in the world soon be long gone. Good write.
October 28th, 2018 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May those miseries in the world soon be long gone. Good write.
October 28th, 2018 02:30
Limitless
Poetic Dan said:
As I said before your fire is so pure, words felt in my core. Forever an inspiration by just being who you are, shape away my friend. Be the star that you are!
October 27th, 2018 03:26
Poetic Dan said:
As I said before your fire is so pure, words felt in my core. Forever an inspiration by just being who you are, shape away my friend. Be the star that you are!
October 27th, 2018 03:26
Limitless
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write. Always go forward - there are no limits.
\"If your dreams do not scare you they are not big enough\"
September 30th, 2018 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write. Always go forward - there are no limits.
\"If your dreams do not scare you they are not big enough\"
September 30th, 2018 01:07
Time Is Like A River
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, I too float on My River of time.
\"Yesterday is another country\"
September 24th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, I too float on My River of time.
\"Yesterday is another country\"
September 24th, 2018 00:42
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