Comments received on poems by poetboy5454

Crash into Tomorrow
psychofemale said:

the the different rhyme patterns you have going on here....nicely done :)

January 9th, 2019 21:34

Another Wall To Climb
Goldfinch60 said:

Those walls are always there and as we climb every one our life experience increases our knowledge. Do not let them stop you.

October 30th, 2018 02:08

Another Wall To Climb
fuche_bu said:

Keep climbing. We all need to keep climbing. We\'ll get there eventually. nice poem.

October 29th, 2018 19:05

Battle Call
Poetic Dan said:

Wizard with your words
Masterful is your work
Blessed to read your thoughts
Rippling out from your core

October 28th, 2018 04:50

Battle Call
Goldfinch60 said:

May those miseries in the world soon be long gone. Good write.

October 28th, 2018 02:30

Poetic Dan said:

As I said before your fire is so pure, words felt in my core. Forever an inspiration by just being who you are, shape away my friend. Be the star that you are!

October 27th, 2018 03:26

Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write. Always go forward - there are no limits.

\"If your dreams do not scare you they are not big enough\"

September 30th, 2018 01:07

Time Is Like A River
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, I too float on My River of time.
\"Yesterday is another country\"

September 24th, 2018 00:42

Those words
Poetic Dan said:

You are a master of your word, I have no doubt they will be found then heard. One thing for sure when they do, the world will know and witness You. As amazingly wonderful as I already do, no word of a lie I\'m inspired by every one of your writes.

Much peace and respect
My broetry friend

September 9th, 2018 03:29

Those words
Crystal Hope said:

so incredibly moving

September 8th, 2018 19:56

Human Dictionary
Santita said:

Powerful write, PB. Great to read your words again

September 7th, 2018 13:33

Human Dictionary
Goldfinch60 said:

That definition is a great way of purging ones mind.

September 7th, 2018 07:59

War of Words
Poetic Dan said:

Loved the video but your words out shined
As we play our own game not twisted in lies
I feel my power through this verbal war
The pen is stronger than the sword
My stand is taken with a verse

Not in my name or my land
Do I want an army to stand
Responsibility is my own
No royal blood or privilege soul
Is worth more than our glow
When we\'re all on the same boat
If anything we keep them afloat

Always love the passion in your words
Keep reloading and spraying this art
It\'s the only way we\'ll win the spirit battle.

August 27th, 2018 04:02

War of Words
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true in this modern world, the 99% are just not heard and even worse not cared about.

August 27th, 2018 00:57

Writing Block
Goldfinch60 said:

That barrier has now been broken and Calliope is showing you the way once more.

August 6th, 2018 00:18

Writing Block
Poetic Dan said:

A well expressed block, like an athletic person you\'ve pushed through to see even that can\'t stop you! Nothing ever will my friend even if we put down the pen.

Keep keeping it real my friend

August 5th, 2018 15:40

Burning Dreams
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant done, your words always feels so settling no matter the vibration they are in.
There was a wonderful balance to this

July 26th, 2018 12:52

Burning Dreams
Heartwriter said:

A very lovely write tented with a darker side. Enjoyed!

July 25th, 2018 13:21

Reaching For the Sun
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant I felt so much energy in this, my mind felt full but my breath at the end let go of it.
Thank you as always
Look forward to hearing you again

July 24th, 2018 02:08

Reaching For the Sun
little dove said:

this is lovely such fantastic imagery and you have written this poem in such a lovely way

July 23rd, 2018 01:17

What We\'re Made Of
Poetic Dan said:

Magnificent as always
I feel those chains loosening
You\'re so god dam amazing!

July 21st, 2018 03:56

What We\'re Made Of
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, as we go through our lives we learn from experience and remember that experience cannot be taught.

July 21st, 2018 00:27

What We\'re Made Of
Ternic73 said:

wow for 15 years old this is wonderful

July 20th, 2018 18:14

Together, Change Is Possible
E-Poems said:

You\'re brilliant at writing. I cannot wait to read more.

July 14th, 2018 15:25

Together, Change Is Possible
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you my friend these words felt like my life boat today.

July 5th, 2018 08:13

Together, Change Is Possible
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that single voice can change the world if others listen.

June 14th, 2018 01:55

Together, Change Is Possible
minak said:

So so beautiful love your style ✨

June 13th, 2018 15:48

A Fire Must Be Born
GON said:

Rock and roll dude. Be that fire.

June 11th, 2018 18:47

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
Jhe said:

made me think of an interview
that could go really well
and lead to a job
you\'ve always wanted
to do
or go badly
so sadly
the days before are exciting
but nauseating too

June 7th, 2018 05:14

Jhe said:

great poem :-)
\"And justice, like lightning, appears only in flashes\" is brilliant
thanks for sharing / caring

June 7th, 2018 04:58

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