Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Twists And Turns
lasergraph said:

I can identify with these struggles all too well. I have been on the same search and yet the well was too dry to be of any use.

October 6th, 2017 09:40

To Surmount
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, keep going up the light is there for you.

October 5th, 2017 00:57

To Surmount
Santita said:

Amazing! You are a fighter, PB! I am always impressed by your well written pieces, my friend!

October 4th, 2017 17:45

Facade
Santita said:

Another sage write, PB! So well written, & I was surprised by the length, you usually write longer; its nice to switch it up! Great job, wise soul!

October 3rd, 2017 21:41

Facade
DeviLove said:

This is sad but beautifully written!

October 3rd, 2017 21:15

Facade
chinaaliciarivera said:

Love the rhyme. I kind-of wish this was longer. It is interesting. β€πŸ’—πŸ’•

October 3rd, 2017 21:06

Wild and Crazy World
Santita said:

PB, your wise pen always takes my breath away! Great write!

September 28th, 2017 12:12

Wild and Crazy World
Poetic Dan said:

Never last if we are not in the rat race
Turning that page is definitely all we have that is waiting for us to paint, write dance and sing filling up all we can until we move on again!

Great writing as always! Sparking my thoughts to no end ;)

September 28th, 2017 11:14

Wild and Crazy World
Goldfinch60 said:

All you or any of us can do is move on fearlessly in humility.

September 28th, 2017 08:22

Just Because
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, face those challenges with faith and they will become part of experience.

September 28th, 2017 00:35

Broken Pond
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may your walk with life never falter.

September 27th, 2017 00:58

Broken Pond
Christina8 said:

This is really heartfelt! Very descriptive too. A wonderful read. Oh, love the rhymes!

September 26th, 2017 20:57

Broken Pond
Santita said:

This is POWERFUL, PB!! One of your best to date, love it!

September 26th, 2017 17:20

Pulse
Santita said:

A sad, yet powerful, write that turned hopeful! Excellent writing, PB! Always look forward to your sage writes, my friend.

September 23rd, 2017 10:08

Battle For The Crown
Hopey_xx said:

Great write Poetboy! I especially love the stanza one from last. I agree with Santita and Gf😊And yes, keep those words pouring!

September 20th, 2017 15:22

Battle For The Crown
Santita said:

PB, you will fly! Amazing writing, powerful, my friend! Don\'t worry about the failure just a bump in the road.

September 20th, 2017 12:47

Battle For The Crown
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, fly high towards your dreams,

September 20th, 2017 07:56

Behind The Silence
Santita said:

Excellent write, PB! I know the author of this piece is a glowing star. Sage & well expressed, like all of your work! Wait for my post tomorrow, I have a feeling you are going to like it!

September 19th, 2017 16:23

Sound
Poetic Dan said:

I hear it, it comes when I play, or listen to the brave. Your words are more than art, it is the light deep within us, ready to rip through and change the world.

As you see I really enjoyed you piece

September 18th, 2017 08:24

I Am Lightning
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write, the light always has the strength to dispel the dark.

September 18th, 2017 02:44

I Am Lightning
Poetic Dan said:

That it will all fade, as does my fear of this day when I read your words feeling like I\'m free from my cage.

September 18th, 2017 02:16

I Am Lightning
Santita said:

This powerful & amazing, PB!

September 18th, 2017 00:17

I Am Lightning
Candlewitch said:

wow! such a powerful write...it is absolutely inspired writing!!!

*hugs, Cat

September 17th, 2017 15:28

Resilience
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write, those chains are easily broken.

September 17th, 2017 00:36

Resilience
Candlewitch said:

yes! kick doubt out of your life and assume a positive attitude!!! I really like this poem!!!

*hugs, Cat

September 16th, 2017 14:41

Resilience
F.G. Franklin said:

I love the spirit of dedication and courage in this. It resounds like a battle cry. Excellent work.

September 16th, 2017 13:50

Resilience
Poetic Dan said:

My soul will walk tall
Singing our song
More united I feel
After reading your words

More than outstanding, words do not fit when passion is shared just like this.

September 16th, 2017 10:57

Cursed or Blessed
Santita said:

PB54, this is superb! \"smile as fake as our chances to succeeded\" I wrote of fake smiles too today, coincidentally lol. Great flow, as usual!

September 15th, 2017 16:33

Cursed or Blessed
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 15th, 2017 11:59

Cursed or Blessed
Candlewitch said:

hello,

awhile back I wrote and posted a very angry poem, titled \"Cursed Or Blessed\" this reminded me of it. perhaps I will repost it. I much enjoyed your presentation of your point of view. thank you for this.

*hugs, Cat

September 15th, 2017 09:53

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