Comments received on poems by poetboy5454
I Am Lightning
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, the light always has the strength to dispel the dark.
September 18th, 2017 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, the light always has the strength to dispel the dark.
September 18th, 2017 02:44
I Am Lightning
Poetic Dan said:
That it will all fade, as does my fear of this day when I read your words feeling like I\'m free from my cage.
September 18th, 2017 02:16
Poetic Dan said:
That it will all fade, as does my fear of this day when I read your words feeling like I\'m free from my cage.
September 18th, 2017 02:16
Resilience
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, those chains are easily broken.
September 17th, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, those chains are easily broken.
September 17th, 2017 00:36
Resilience
F.G. Franklin said:
I love the spirit of dedication and courage in this. It resounds like a battle cry. Excellent work.
September 16th, 2017 13:50
F.G. Franklin said:
I love the spirit of dedication and courage in this. It resounds like a battle cry. Excellent work.
September 16th, 2017 13:50
Resilience
Poetic Dan said:
My soul will walk tall
Singing our song
More united I feel
After reading your words
More than outstanding, words do not fit when passion is shared just like this.
September 16th, 2017 10:57
Poetic Dan said:
My soul will walk tall
Singing our song
More united I feel
After reading your words
More than outstanding, words do not fit when passion is shared just like this.
September 16th, 2017 10:57
Cursed or Blessed
Seek said:
In your poem, you capture so many realities and articulate them so well. Enjoyed reading this!
September 15th, 2017 08:15
Seek said:
In your poem, you capture so many realities and articulate them so well. Enjoyed reading this!
September 15th, 2017 08:15
World Changers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write, those last two lines are so meaningful.
September 15th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write, those last two lines are so meaningful.
September 15th, 2017 00:47
Inescapable
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant reflection of my frustration inside today. Reading your words helped calm today\'s page in my life.
September 12th, 2017 12:33
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant reflection of my frustration inside today. Reading your words helped calm today\'s page in my life.
September 12th, 2017 12:33
Inescapable
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write but if you look up you can see the light above the waves, reach for it.
September 12th, 2017 08:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write but if you look up you can see the light above the waves, reach for it.
September 12th, 2017 08:11
Good In Evil
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that was powerful! but that last line kills me, as deep inside I know you are right. We are the only ones in this planet to keep thinking up better ways to blow each other apart, this part of the brain \"apathy\" is still struggling within us!
September 11th, 2017 12:02
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that was powerful! but that last line kills me, as deep inside I know you are right. We are the only ones in this planet to keep thinking up better ways to blow each other apart, this part of the brain \"apathy\" is still struggling within us!
September 11th, 2017 12:02
Good In Evil
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Apathy can be a very strong weapon in some instances.
September 11th, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Apathy can be a very strong weapon in some instances.
September 11th, 2017 08:08
Knowledge
Mugsdaddy said:
This is great writing excellent subject matter straight to the point and good contradiction to validate each line.
September 10th, 2017 16:29
Mugsdaddy said:
This is great writing excellent subject matter straight to the point and good contradiction to validate each line.
September 10th, 2017 16:29
Dreamers
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s all about the journey. Nice work once again.
September 9th, 2017 14:52
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s all about the journey. Nice work once again.
September 9th, 2017 14:52
Dreamers
Accidental Poet said:
A very positive and inspirational write. ; )
September 9th, 2017 13:18
Accidental Poet said:
A very positive and inspirational write. ; )
September 9th, 2017 13:18
Dreamers
Poetic Dan said:
So many lines taking back through my life, then you walked my through to where I am now.
A true privilege it is, to read your words so openly honest, I\'m left feeling better just knowing you\'re on the planet!
September 9th, 2017 11:54
Poetic Dan said:
So many lines taking back through my life, then you walked my through to where I am now.
A true privilege it is, to read your words so openly honest, I\'m left feeling better just knowing you\'re on the planet!
September 9th, 2017 11:54
Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words always arise with you as they did in this write.
September 9th, 2017 11:08
Goldfinch60 said:
May those words always arise with you as they did in this write.
September 9th, 2017 11:08
Dreamers
seeker123 said:
\'Let go of all your sorrow, it can’t hold you back anymore
Tomorrow is a new day and today is the door
Bring your dreams and make them reality
From who you are, become who you want to be\'
Wow I love that line, a very inspiring message. Thank you I enjoyed the read:)
September 9th, 2017 10:35
seeker123 said:
\'Let go of all your sorrow, it can’t hold you back anymore
Tomorrow is a new day and today is the door
Bring your dreams and make them reality
From who you are, become who you want to be\'
Wow I love that line, a very inspiring message. Thank you I enjoyed the read:)
September 9th, 2017 10:35
The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Poetic Dan said:
Your passion never falls short on wanting to heal this world. A great beacon of light you are my friend with words to break these invisible chains around us!
September 8th, 2017 10:45
Poetic Dan said:
Your passion never falls short on wanting to heal this world. A great beacon of light you are my friend with words to break these invisible chains around us!
September 8th, 2017 10:45
Unfinished Journey
Poetic Dan said:
I feel revived after that read! Thank you
September 8th, 2017 10:36
Poetic Dan said:
I feel revived after that read! Thank you
September 8th, 2017 10:36
Mornings
lasergraph said:
You described the way I feel most days. I could identify with every word. Great write.
September 8th, 2017 10:31
lasergraph said:
You described the way I feel most days. I could identify with every word. Great write.
September 8th, 2017 10:31
Mornings
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! Love the rhythm and the rhyme scheme. A very relatable poem, I enjoyed it!
September 8th, 2017 10:21
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! Love the rhythm and the rhyme scheme. A very relatable poem, I enjoyed it!
September 8th, 2017 10:21
Unfinished Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, hope is always there and will be reached in time.
September 8th, 2017 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good positive write, hope is always there and will be reached in time.
September 8th, 2017 01:27
Unfinished Journey
Nicholas Browning said:
Your favorite poem shines through in this. Nice.
September 7th, 2017 22:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Your favorite poem shines through in this. Nice.
September 7th, 2017 22:04
Unfinished Journey
myself and me said:
\"Lions let out their roar, hear their call
Take your own destiny, refuse to fall
Go towards hope if you must crawl
Bring a close to this unfinished journey\"
I see a knight fighting to his last stand.
Very well composed.
September 7th, 2017 13:10
myself and me said:
\"Lions let out their roar, hear their call
Take your own destiny, refuse to fall
Go towards hope if you must crawl
Bring a close to this unfinished journey\"
I see a knight fighting to his last stand.
Very well composed.
September 7th, 2017 13:10
The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
dusk arising said:
Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world today and its posturing. The second like reverie of a decaying heartfelt romance being sadly accepted. Outstanding writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 19:54
dusk arising said:
Two pieces of contrast here. The first quite quite apposite for the world today and its posturing. The second like reverie of a decaying heartfelt romance being sadly accepted. Outstanding writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 19:54
The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:
Beautiful write. Speaks the truth.
September 6th, 2017 13:54
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:
Beautiful write. Speaks the truth.
September 6th, 2017 13:54
The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
WriteBeLight said:
You have poetic talent poetboy!
September 6th, 2017 12:00
WriteBeLight said:
You have poetic talent poetboy!
September 6th, 2017 12:00
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