Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Broken Pond
Christina8 said:

This is really heartfelt! Very descriptive too. A wonderful read. Oh, love the rhymes!

September 26th, 2017 20:57

Broken Pond
Santita said:

This is POWERFUL, PB!! One of your best to date, love it!

September 26th, 2017 17:20

Pulse
Santita said:

A sad, yet powerful, write that turned hopeful! Excellent writing, PB! Always look forward to your sage writes, my friend.

September 23rd, 2017 10:08

Battle For The Crown
Hopey_xx said:

Great write Poetboy! I especially love the stanza one from last. I agree with Santita and Gf😊And yes, keep those words pouring!

September 20th, 2017 15:22

Battle For The Crown
Santita said:

PB, you will fly! Amazing writing, powerful, my friend! Don\'t worry about the failure just a bump in the road.

September 20th, 2017 12:47

Battle For The Crown
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, fly high towards your dreams,

September 20th, 2017 07:56

Behind The Silence
Santita said:

Excellent write, PB! I know the author of this piece is a glowing star. Sage & well expressed, like all of your work! Wait for my post tomorrow, I have a feeling you are going to like it!

September 19th, 2017 16:23

Sound
Poetic Dan said:

I hear it, it comes when I play, or listen to the brave. Your words are more than art, it is the light deep within us, ready to rip through and change the world.

As you see I really enjoyed you piece

September 18th, 2017 08:24

I Am Lightning
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write, the light always has the strength to dispel the dark.

September 18th, 2017 02:44

I Am Lightning
Poetic Dan said:

That it will all fade, as does my fear of this day when I read your words feeling like I\'m free from my cage.

September 18th, 2017 02:16

I Am Lightning
Santita said:

This powerful & amazing, PB!

September 18th, 2017 00:17

I Am Lightning
Candlewitch said:

wow! such a powerful write...it is absolutely inspired writing!!!

*hugs, Cat

September 17th, 2017 15:28

Resilience
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write, those chains are easily broken.

September 17th, 2017 00:36

Resilience
Candlewitch said:

yes! kick doubt out of your life and assume a positive attitude!!! I really like this poem!!!

*hugs, Cat

September 16th, 2017 14:41

Resilience
F.G. Franklin said:

I love the spirit of dedication and courage in this. It resounds like a battle cry. Excellent work.

September 16th, 2017 13:50

Resilience
Poetic Dan said:

My soul will walk tall
Singing our song
More united I feel
After reading your words

More than outstanding, words do not fit when passion is shared just like this.

September 16th, 2017 10:57

Cursed or Blessed
Santita said:

PB54, this is superb! \"smile as fake as our chances to succeeded\" I wrote of fake smiles too today, coincidentally lol. Great flow, as usual!

September 15th, 2017 16:33

Cursed or Blessed
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 15th, 2017 11:59

Cursed or Blessed
Candlewitch said:

hello,

awhile back I wrote and posted a very angry poem, titled \"Cursed Or Blessed\" this reminded me of it. perhaps I will repost it. I much enjoyed your presentation of your point of view. thank you for this.

*hugs, Cat

September 15th, 2017 09:53

Cursed or Blessed
Seek said:

In your poem, you capture so many realities and articulate them so well. Enjoyed reading this!

September 15th, 2017 08:15

World Changers
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and very true write, those last two lines are so meaningful.

September 15th, 2017 00:47

World Changers
OUTBACK said:

THE ONLY PROBLEM* WITH ( TOGETHER )* IS THAT SOCIALISM* = (COMMUNITY)*= (COMMUNISM)* IS A STRUCTURE* PUT IN PLACE BY WAY OF THOSE IN (AUTHORITY)* -WHOM SO OWN* & GUIDE* THE CONSENSUS* OF THAT* ( TOGETHER )* - IT IS THE \" INDIVIDUAL \" SPRITY* OF CREATIVITY* & INNOVATION* THAT IS THE ACTUAL* AMAZING & INATE* FORCE* of IMAGINATION* THAT MANIFESTS* GREAT DESTINIES OF INFINITE BEING ! ( YOU* - ARE - THAT* POWER )* !

September 14th, 2017 07:08

World Changers
Mugsdaddy said:

Nice flow, great write.
Mugsdaddy

September 14th, 2017 06:50

Inescapable
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant reflection of my frustration inside today. Reading your words helped calm today\'s page in my life.

September 12th, 2017 12:33

Inescapable
Candlewitch said:

wow! I loved the entirety of this emotive piece...GREAT work!!!

*hugs, Cat

September 12th, 2017 11:23

Inescapable
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write but if you look up you can see the light above the waves, reach for it.

September 12th, 2017 08:11

Inescapable
Β π‘…πŸ‘π’·π’Ύπ“ƒ 𝑅𝑒𝒷𝒾𝓇𝓉𝒽 said:

Strong words we need strength to sustain anything

September 12th, 2017 07:30

Inescapable
OUTBACK said:

WE ALL LOVE* & YET WILL FOREVER SO REMAIN IN A DENIAL OF THE PERSONAL EXPERIENTIAL* THEATRICAL DRAMS WE PUT OURSELVES THROUGH ! CASE IN POINT* = THAT* WHICH IS* - BIRTH-LESS & DEATHLESS ? WELL - HOW ABOUT GOING THROUGH THE DRAMATICS* OF THE IMPENDING* FEAR* OF CEASING* TO - EXIST ? THE STRUGGLE TO BEAT* DEATH ? (FREEDOM IS)* = UPON NO* STRUGGLE TO ATTAIN IT ! LOL* - IRONIC* - YET REALIZABLE* !

September 12th, 2017 07:02

Good In Evil
Santita said:

Excellent word choices, a write with such depth! Another great piece, PB!

September 11th, 2017 17:26

Good In Evil
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, that was powerful! but that last line kills me, as deep inside I know you are right. We are the only ones in this planet to keep thinking up better ways to blow each other apart, this part of the brain \"apathy\" is still struggling within us!

September 11th, 2017 12:02

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