Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Unquenchable Thirst
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good, very strong write. Keep on going along your path, the future is there.

October 20th, 2017 00:58

Unquenchable Thirst
Accidental Poet said:

Very powerful write pb. I like it a lot.

October 19th, 2017 18:08

Unquenchable Thirst
Santita said:

Awesome, PB! An inspirational strong write.

October 19th, 2017 15:13

Human Responsibility
OUTBACK said:

SPEAK OUT ? POLITICIAN$* & MERCENARIE$* - UNDERSTAND* ONLY [ ONE THING ]* - DEFINITIVE* ( ACTIONS ) TAKEN* AGANST THEM !

October 17th, 2017 07:07

Human Responsibility
OUTBACK said:

YES ! START WITH THE BANK* CRIMINAL$ - WALL STREET* -THEN THE Fn POLITICIANS* - LAWYER$* ONTO THE LOCAL* PARASITICAL* CULT$* of THE SO CALLED LOCAL \" OFFICIAL- ANYONES* ! SELF RESPONSIBILITY* = THE (END)* of ANY* ( AUTHORITATIVE )* B$* GOVERNMENT$* ! ONCE & FOR ALL ! ( ACCOUNTABILITY )* of ALL THOSE* IN THE POSITIONS of POWER & AUTHORITY* ! ( ALL ) !!!

October 17th, 2017 07:02

Time Stands Still
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong write and could be so true. We were all worried that this may have happened back in the 1960s but it never did then and I pray that it does not happen now.

October 17th, 2017 00:45

Time Stands Still
Accidental Poet said:

So real I felt like I\'d been teleported into a not so distant future. A scary state of world we face pb. If world leaders could read this, I wonder how they\'d react. Great writing. ; )

October 16th, 2017 20:01

Time Stands Still
Santita said:

Another powerful write, PB! Such sage writing from one so young, loved this piece!

October 16th, 2017 18:45

Carpe Diem
DeviLove said:

The imagery in this is beautiful! And the message is also beautiful :)

October 15th, 2017 18:29

Carpe Diem
Santita said:

Powerful piece, PB! This is like an anthem for preservering through hard times! Awesome!

October 15th, 2017 15:08

Carpe Diem
Dear--JaneDoe said:

Awesome

October 15th, 2017 14:12

Lightning Won\'t Strike
Hopey_xx said:

Great work!

October 13th, 2017 15:25

Lightning Won\'t Strike
FredPeyer said:

And rise up we must! Good writing, poetboy!

October 13th, 2017 12:14

Lightning Won\'t Strike
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

October 13th, 2017 08:07

Lightning Won\'t Strike
WL Schuett said:

Good poem , liked the message with some very poetic lines .... 😎

October 13th, 2017 06:46

Free Write
Hopey_xx said:

Amazing work, I love it...

October 11th, 2017 13:49

Free Write
Santita said:

I see that you changed it up with this write, PB! I like this free verse, it is a good flowing read. Your heart is so full of passion, PB, may it always flow through your pen!

October 9th, 2017 21:57

Dear Destiny
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write and so positive. All should be like this, no matter how many setbacks or falls we have in our lives we must always get up, shake ourselves down and keep moving forward.

October 9th, 2017 00:42

Dear Destiny
Santita said:

This is amazing, PB! Your words are inspiring, young one! I\'m always impressed by your writing. Excellent piece!

October 9th, 2017 00:11

Facade
Poetic Dan said:

Powerful as always!
They definitely remain, I\'ve been washing mine and making my change. I\'m sure with words and the vision like yours there\'s going to be a flood clearing them all so it can be seen, what time has let be forgotten but never left.

October 8th, 2017 17:58

Dear Destiny
Poetic Dan said:

Outstanding, I think every atom in me had to take a breath of appreciation at the end. It flowed so well in my mind, I was onstage reading my lines, as a proud warrior I stood as the feeling got is most definitely the one that\'s deep within you my friend.... Can\'t wait to read this again!!

October 8th, 2017 17:47

Twists And Turns
eyeamsoule said:

What I get from reading this, is; you seem to have a lot on your mind, but don\'t really know the exact words to use to express what is on your mind or how you are feeling at the moment. If I am right, then I can relate. Having so much on your mind, but not being able to use the right words to express yourself in ways that other people will understand can seem frustrating. You feel alone at times.

October 6th, 2017 12:47

Twists And Turns
lasergraph said:

I can identify with these struggles all too well. I have been on the same search and yet the well was too dry to be of any use.

October 6th, 2017 09:40

To Surmount
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, keep going up the light is there for you.

October 5th, 2017 00:57

To Surmount
Santita said:

Amazing! You are a fighter, PB! I am always impressed by your well written pieces, my friend!

October 4th, 2017 17:45

Facade
Santita said:

Another sage write, PB! So well written, & I was surprised by the length, you usually write longer; its nice to switch it up! Great job, wise soul!

October 3rd, 2017 21:41

Facade
DeviLove said:

This is sad but beautifully written!

October 3rd, 2017 21:15

Facade
chinaaliciarivera said:

Love the rhyme. I kind-of wish this was longer. It is interesting. ❤💗💕

October 3rd, 2017 21:06

Wild and Crazy World
Santita said:

PB, your wise pen always takes my breath away! Great write!

September 28th, 2017 12:12

Wild and Crazy World
Poetic Dan said:

Never last if we are not in the rat race
Turning that page is definitely all we have that is waiting for us to paint, write dance and sing filling up all we can until we move on again!

Great writing as always! Sparking my thoughts to no end ;)

September 28th, 2017 11:14

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