Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Victory
Poetic Dan said:

If you would not mind I\'d like you to know the reason you just destroyed me and I will read this again and again until I can rise again. Yesterday my 13 year old boy was refused access to me, against his wishes.

Thank you so much, I\'ll clear my tears from my phone knowing the are others walking my path.

November 11th, 2017 10:17

Victory
Accidental Poet said:

Perseverance is never wasted pb. Great write.

November 11th, 2017 09:56

Not Giving In
Goldfinch60 said:

Good strong write, keep going ahead your destiny awaits you.

November 3rd, 2017 02:04

Not Giving In
Anna Marg said:

I will not give in! Brilliant!

November 2nd, 2017 07:17

Not Giving In
Santita said:

Awesome write about determination, PB. \"Soul blazing with fury\" love that line!

November 2nd, 2017 06:42

Thornless Roses and Flaming Ice
LukeCoomer said:

Wow! I can\'t believe your only 14 and wrote this! I believe your on your way if these are the winds that blow through your mind! Excellent write...

October 29th, 2017 18:47

Now Watch Him Roar
FredPeyer said:

And \'roar\' you do with this poem, poetboy! Very well written, well rhymed too. Ah, and yes, no matter how many times we fall, we do have to get up and get going again!

October 25th, 2017 11:18

Alone In a Starless Night
Santita said:

Excellent & powerfully written, PB! Sage & beautiful, such a great way with the pen you have!

October 24th, 2017 13:01

Alone In a Starless Night
WL Schuett said:

Amen ... beautiful !

October 24th, 2017 07:46

Showtime
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, those freed words will go on to eternity.

October 20th, 2017 08:03

Unquenchable Thirst
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good, very strong write. Keep on going along your path, the future is there.

October 20th, 2017 00:58

Unquenchable Thirst
Accidental Poet said:

Very powerful write pb. I like it a lot.

October 19th, 2017 18:08

Unquenchable Thirst
Santita said:

Awesome, PB! An inspirational strong write.

October 19th, 2017 15:13

Time Stands Still
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong write and could be so true. We were all worried that this may have happened back in the 1960s but it never did then and I pray that it does not happen now.

October 17th, 2017 00:45

Time Stands Still
Accidental Poet said:

So real I felt like I\'d been teleported into a not so distant future. A scary state of world we face pb. If world leaders could read this, I wonder how they\'d react. Great writing. ; )

October 16th, 2017 20:01

Time Stands Still
Santita said:

Another powerful write, PB! Such sage writing from one so young, loved this piece!

October 16th, 2017 18:45

Carpe Diem
DeviLove said:

The imagery in this is beautiful! And the message is also beautiful :)

October 15th, 2017 18:29

Carpe Diem
Santita said:

Powerful piece, PB! This is like an anthem for preservering through hard times! Awesome!

October 15th, 2017 15:08

Carpe Diem
Dear--JaneDoe said:

Awesome

October 15th, 2017 14:12

Lightning Won\'t Strike
Hopey_xx said:

Great work!

October 13th, 2017 15:25

Lightning Won\'t Strike
FredPeyer said:

And rise up we must! Good writing, poetboy!

October 13th, 2017 12:14

Lightning Won\'t Strike
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

October 13th, 2017 08:07

Lightning Won\'t Strike
WL Schuett said:

Good poem , liked the message with some very poetic lines .... 😎

October 13th, 2017 06:46

Free Write
Hopey_xx said:

Amazing work, I love it...

October 11th, 2017 13:49

Free Write
Santita said:

I see that you changed it up with this write, PB! I like this free verse, it is a good flowing read. Your heart is so full of passion, PB, may it always flow through your pen!

October 9th, 2017 21:57

Dear Destiny
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write and so positive. All should be like this, no matter how many setbacks or falls we have in our lives we must always get up, shake ourselves down and keep moving forward.

October 9th, 2017 00:42

Dear Destiny
Santita said:

This is amazing, PB! Your words are inspiring, young one! I\'m always impressed by your writing. Excellent piece!

October 9th, 2017 00:11

Facade
Poetic Dan said:

Powerful as always!
They definitely remain, I\'ve been washing mine and making my change. I\'m sure with words and the vision like yours there\'s going to be a flood clearing them all so it can be seen, what time has let be forgotten but never left.

October 8th, 2017 17:58

Dear Destiny
Poetic Dan said:

Outstanding, I think every atom in me had to take a breath of appreciation at the end. It flowed so well in my mind, I was onstage reading my lines, as a proud warrior I stood as the feeling got is most definitely the one that\'s deep within you my friend.... Can\'t wait to read this again!!

October 8th, 2017 17:47

Twists And Turns
eyeamsoule said:

What I get from reading this, is; you seem to have a lot on your mind, but don\'t really know the exact words to use to express what is on your mind or how you are feeling at the moment. If I am right, then I can relate. Having so much on your mind, but not being able to use the right words to express yourself in ways that other people will understand can seem frustrating. You feel alone at times.

October 6th, 2017 12:47

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