Comments received on poems by poetboy123
Thornless Roses and Flaming Ice
LukeCoomer said:
Wow! I can\'t believe your only 14 and wrote this! I believe your on your way if these are the winds that blow through your mind! Excellent write...
October 29th, 2017 18:47
LukeCoomer said:
Wow! I can\'t believe your only 14 and wrote this! I believe your on your way if these are the winds that blow through your mind! Excellent write...
October 29th, 2017 18:47
Now Watch Him Roar
FredPeyer said:
And \'roar\' you do with this poem, poetboy! Very well written, well rhymed too. Ah, and yes, no matter how many times we fall, we do have to get up and get going again!
October 25th, 2017 11:18
FredPeyer said:
And \'roar\' you do with this poem, poetboy! Very well written, well rhymed too. Ah, and yes, no matter how many times we fall, we do have to get up and get going again!
October 25th, 2017 11:18
Showtime
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those freed words will go on to eternity.
October 20th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those freed words will go on to eternity.
October 20th, 2017 08:03
Unquenchable Thirst
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good, very strong write. Keep on going along your path, the future is there.
October 20th, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good, very strong write. Keep on going along your path, the future is there.
October 20th, 2017 00:58
Unquenchable Thirst
Accidental Poet said:
Very powerful write pb. I like it a lot.
October 19th, 2017 18:08
Accidental Poet said:
Very powerful write pb. I like it a lot.
October 19th, 2017 18:08
Time Stands Still
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write and could be so true. We were all worried that this may have happened back in the 1960s but it never did then and I pray that it does not happen now.
October 17th, 2017 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write and could be so true. We were all worried that this may have happened back in the 1960s but it never did then and I pray that it does not happen now.
October 17th, 2017 00:45
Time Stands Still
Accidental Poet said:
So real I felt like I\'d been teleported into a not so distant future. A scary state of world we face pb. If world leaders could read this, I wonder how they\'d react. Great writing. ; )
October 16th, 2017 20:01
Accidental Poet said:
So real I felt like I\'d been teleported into a not so distant future. A scary state of world we face pb. If world leaders could read this, I wonder how they\'d react. Great writing. ; )
October 16th, 2017 20:01
Carpe Diem
DeviLove said:
The imagery in this is beautiful! And the message is also beautiful :)
October 15th, 2017 18:29
DeviLove said:
The imagery in this is beautiful! And the message is also beautiful :)
October 15th, 2017 18:29
Lightning Won\'t Strike
FredPeyer said:
And rise up we must! Good writing, poetboy!
October 13th, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
And rise up we must! Good writing, poetboy!
October 13th, 2017 12:14
Lightning Won\'t Strike
WL Schuett said:
Good poem , liked the message with some very poetic lines .... 😎
October 13th, 2017 06:46
WL Schuett said:
Good poem , liked the message with some very poetic lines .... 😎
October 13th, 2017 06:46
Dear Destiny
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write and so positive. All should be like this, no matter how many setbacks or falls we have in our lives we must always get up, shake ourselves down and keep moving forward.
October 9th, 2017 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write and so positive. All should be like this, no matter how many setbacks or falls we have in our lives we must always get up, shake ourselves down and keep moving forward.
October 9th, 2017 00:42
Facade
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful as always!
They definitely remain, I\'ve been washing mine and making my change. I\'m sure with words and the vision like yours there\'s going to be a flood clearing them all so it can be seen, what time has let be forgotten but never left.
October 8th, 2017 17:58
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful as always!
They definitely remain, I\'ve been washing mine and making my change. I\'m sure with words and the vision like yours there\'s going to be a flood clearing them all so it can be seen, what time has let be forgotten but never left.
October 8th, 2017 17:58
Dear Destiny
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding, I think every atom in me had to take a breath of appreciation at the end. It flowed so well in my mind, I was onstage reading my lines, as a proud warrior I stood as the feeling got is most definitely the one that\'s deep within you my friend.... Can\'t wait to read this again!!
October 8th, 2017 17:47
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding, I think every atom in me had to take a breath of appreciation at the end. It flowed so well in my mind, I was onstage reading my lines, as a proud warrior I stood as the feeling got is most definitely the one that\'s deep within you my friend.... Can\'t wait to read this again!!
October 8th, 2017 17:47
Twists And Turns
eyeamsoule said:
What I get from reading this, is; you seem to have a lot on your mind, but don\'t really know the exact words to use to express what is on your mind or how you are feeling at the moment. If I am right, then I can relate. Having so much on your mind, but not being able to use the right words to express yourself in ways that other people will understand can seem frustrating. You feel alone at times.
October 6th, 2017 12:47
eyeamsoule said:
What I get from reading this, is; you seem to have a lot on your mind, but don\'t really know the exact words to use to express what is on your mind or how you are feeling at the moment. If I am right, then I can relate. Having so much on your mind, but not being able to use the right words to express yourself in ways that other people will understand can seem frustrating. You feel alone at times.
October 6th, 2017 12:47
Twists And Turns
lasergraph said:
I can identify with these struggles all too well. I have been on the same search and yet the well was too dry to be of any use.
October 6th, 2017 09:40
lasergraph said:
I can identify with these struggles all too well. I have been on the same search and yet the well was too dry to be of any use.
October 6th, 2017 09:40
To Surmount
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, keep going up the light is there for you.
October 5th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, keep going up the light is there for you.
October 5th, 2017 00:57
Facade
chinaaliciarivera said:
Love the rhyme. I kind-of wish this was longer. It is interesting. ❤💗💕
October 3rd, 2017 21:06
chinaaliciarivera said:
Love the rhyme. I kind-of wish this was longer. It is interesting. ❤💗💕
October 3rd, 2017 21:06
Wild and Crazy World
Poetic Dan said:
Never last if we are not in the rat race
Turning that page is definitely all we have that is waiting for us to paint, write dance and sing filling up all we can until we move on again!
Great writing as always! Sparking my thoughts to no end ;)
September 28th, 2017 11:14
Poetic Dan said:
Never last if we are not in the rat race
Turning that page is definitely all we have that is waiting for us to paint, write dance and sing filling up all we can until we move on again!
Great writing as always! Sparking my thoughts to no end ;)
September 28th, 2017 11:14
Wild and Crazy World
Goldfinch60 said:
All you or any of us can do is move on fearlessly in humility.
September 28th, 2017 08:22
Goldfinch60 said:
All you or any of us can do is move on fearlessly in humility.
September 28th, 2017 08:22
Just Because
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, face those challenges with faith and they will become part of experience.
September 28th, 2017 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, face those challenges with faith and they will become part of experience.
September 28th, 2017 00:35
Broken Pond
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your walk with life never falter.
September 27th, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your walk with life never falter.
September 27th, 2017 00:58
Broken Pond
Christina8 said:
This is really heartfelt! Very descriptive too. A wonderful read. Oh, love the rhymes!
September 26th, 2017 20:57
Christina8 said:
This is really heartfelt! Very descriptive too. A wonderful read. Oh, love the rhymes!
September 26th, 2017 20:57
Battle For The Crown
Hopey_xx said:
Great write Poetboy! I especially love the stanza one from last. I agree with Santita and Gf😊And yes, keep those words pouring!
September 20th, 2017 15:22
Hopey_xx said:
Great write Poetboy! I especially love the stanza one from last. I agree with Santita and Gf😊And yes, keep those words pouring!
September 20th, 2017 15:22
Battle For The Crown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, fly high towards your dreams,
September 20th, 2017 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, fly high towards your dreams,
September 20th, 2017 07:56
Sound
Poetic Dan said:
I hear it, it comes when I play, or listen to the brave. Your words are more than art, it is the light deep within us, ready to rip through and change the world.
As you see I really enjoyed you piece
September 18th, 2017 08:24
Poetic Dan said:
I hear it, it comes when I play, or listen to the brave. Your words are more than art, it is the light deep within us, ready to rip through and change the world.
As you see I really enjoyed you piece
September 18th, 2017 08:24
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