Comments received on poems by poetboy123
Flames
Thewildfire said:
This poem struck a cord with me. I guess because of the sullen words, but nevertheless I loved it!
August 3rd, 2017 18:16
Thewildfire said:
This poem struck a cord with me. I guess because of the sullen words, but nevertheless I loved it!
August 3rd, 2017 18:16
Flames
FredPeyer said:
poetboy, nicely penned, a flame as metaphor of a dying love, broken promise, or friendship. I like it.
August 3rd, 2017 17:13
FredPeyer said:
poetboy, nicely penned, a flame as metaphor of a dying love, broken promise, or friendship. I like it.
August 3rd, 2017 17:13
Start Living
Poetic Dan said:
Amazing work, no one can do it but plenty can help guide you, to live or to remain a ghost.
I find it\'s best to drift into both or stay in the middle watching from above or below. Inspired me already!
July 30th, 2017 16:40
Poetic Dan said:
Amazing work, no one can do it but plenty can help guide you, to live or to remain a ghost.
I find it\'s best to drift into both or stay in the middle watching from above or below. Inspired me already!
July 30th, 2017 16:40
Sinking Skeletons
onepauly said:
though the sink to the sea,
they shall rise again.
July 19th, 2017 21:44
onepauly said:
though the sink to the sea,
they shall rise again.
July 19th, 2017 21:44
Twilight
Gary Edward Geraci said:
You\'re a warrior to keep this beast cornered for \"the millionth\" time - talk about spiritual warfare! One simply cannot underestimate how pleasing this is to our Lord. The kind of struggle you describe does not go unnoticed in the realm of the supernatural. I wish you continued strength my fellow soldier. I enjoyed the imagery and the meter.
July 17th, 2017 22:12
Gary Edward Geraci said:
You\'re a warrior to keep this beast cornered for \"the millionth\" time - talk about spiritual warfare! One simply cannot underestimate how pleasing this is to our Lord. The kind of struggle you describe does not go unnoticed in the realm of the supernatural. I wish you continued strength my fellow soldier. I enjoyed the imagery and the meter.
July 17th, 2017 22:12
Game of Life
burning-embers said:
Now you\'ve altered it and its a whole different ballgame. The original was much better. And just cos i made that literal observation, it doesn\'t have to mean your original was invalid my friend. My interpretation was in MY head not yours. I\'m trying to give you faith and confidence in your work here.
July 16th, 2017 19:18
burning-embers said:
Now you\'ve altered it and its a whole different ballgame. The original was much better. And just cos i made that literal observation, it doesn\'t have to mean your original was invalid my friend. My interpretation was in MY head not yours. I\'m trying to give you faith and confidence in your work here.
July 16th, 2017 19:18
Game of Life
burning-embers said:
Erm, correct me if i\'m wrong but those who HAVE lived are no longer in the game of life. The past tense of live equates to \'died\'.
July 16th, 2017 18:57
burning-embers said:
Erm, correct me if i\'m wrong but those who HAVE lived are no longer in the game of life. The past tense of live equates to \'died\'.
July 16th, 2017 18:57
Shake The World
Adri said:
So wise and beyond your years and with a sick talent too!!! Loved this poem of yours. Keep up the great work! You are amazing 😉
July 15th, 2017 11:13
Adri said:
So wise and beyond your years and with a sick talent too!!! Loved this poem of yours. Keep up the great work! You are amazing 😉
July 15th, 2017 11:13
We Are All Blind, For We Are Human
Poetic Dan said:
I hope you don\'t mind but like I said your great work of art is outstanding and made me think of these lines;
So we burn a little sage and write poetry
Wiser than the enemy will ever be
The minority
And authority
Are you here to protect or arrest me?
I can’t tolerate the hate, and I\'m losing sleep
Can’t breathe, cause they’re choking out a war in me
Immorality
The song is called love letters to god, by m.f.t.p.
thanks again
July 14th, 2017 20:54
Poetic Dan said:
I hope you don\'t mind but like I said your great work of art is outstanding and made me think of these lines;
So we burn a little sage and write poetry
Wiser than the enemy will ever be
The minority
And authority
Are you here to protect or arrest me?
I can’t tolerate the hate, and I\'m losing sleep
Can’t breathe, cause they’re choking out a war in me
Immorality
The song is called love letters to god, by m.f.t.p.
thanks again
July 14th, 2017 20:54
We Are All Blind, For We Are Human
Adri said:
So very true and sad! Your poem was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it! 🦋
July 14th, 2017 19:59
Adri said:
So very true and sad! Your poem was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it! 🦋
July 14th, 2017 19:59
We Are All Blind, For We Are Human
FredPeyer said:
PB, very good writing about a very difficult theme. You did Mr. Longfellow proud! The world is ruled by fear and greed, and war is the ultimate expression of that. This sounds very simplistic, and I may be wrong, but I do believe that there would not be any wars anymore if we could rid the world of fear and greed.
July 14th, 2017 15:47
FredPeyer said:
PB, very good writing about a very difficult theme. You did Mr. Longfellow proud! The world is ruled by fear and greed, and war is the ultimate expression of that. This sounds very simplistic, and I may be wrong, but I do believe that there would not be any wars anymore if we could rid the world of fear and greed.
July 14th, 2017 15:47
We Are All Blind, For We Are Human
burning-embers said:
A fine expression of western civilizations disgust of war. Oh that it were oh so simple. Oh that war were not one huge profit making opportunity for the arms salesman. Very provocative write!
July 14th, 2017 15:23
burning-embers said:
A fine expression of western civilizations disgust of war. Oh that it were oh so simple. Oh that war were not one huge profit making opportunity for the arms salesman. Very provocative write!
July 14th, 2017 15:23
The Cost
Nicholas Browning said:
We always pay the cost. This poem has a massive amount of potential. It\'s well done. Bravo.
July 12th, 2017 12:13
Nicholas Browning said:
We always pay the cost. This poem has a massive amount of potential. It\'s well done. Bravo.
July 12th, 2017 12:13
Chase
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you so much for this.
A true pen warrior you are
Be who you are and say what you feel, those that mind don\'t matter, those that matter don\'t mind. Another favourite of mine ;)
July 4th, 2017 16:24
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you so much for this.
A true pen warrior you are
Be who you are and say what you feel, those that mind don\'t matter, those that matter don\'t mind. Another favourite of mine ;)
July 4th, 2017 16:24
Shake The World
emotional girl said:
You have very powerful writing, keep up the good work
June 30th, 2017 17:47
emotional girl said:
You have very powerful writing, keep up the good work
June 30th, 2017 17:47
To See Light
Augustus said:
Inspirational for those who feel down and out, that from some where even after being burned to a crisp we can come back even stronger. I read your bio. At 14 I could not write a decent sentence. Kudos young man.
June 29th, 2017 16:25
Augustus said:
Inspirational for those who feel down and out, that from some where even after being burned to a crisp we can come back even stronger. I read your bio. At 14 I could not write a decent sentence. Kudos young man.
June 29th, 2017 16:25
To See Light
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice rhyme and rhythm PB! I discerned two types of light in your poem. One in the form of a smothering and destructive fire and the other in beckoning light that leads. There is no confusion in which one is chosen.
June 28th, 2017 21:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice rhyme and rhythm PB! I discerned two types of light in your poem. One in the form of a smothering and destructive fire and the other in beckoning light that leads. There is no confusion in which one is chosen.
June 28th, 2017 21:24
To See Light
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely said. We all are straining to reach the light!
June 28th, 2017 20:15
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely said. We all are straining to reach the light!
June 28th, 2017 20:15
Why War and Poverty Will Exist Forever
Xxxplicit said:
I dig it heavily. Good write my dude very strong and influential.
June 28th, 2017 13:01
Xxxplicit said:
I dig it heavily. Good write my dude very strong and influential.
June 28th, 2017 13:01
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