Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
WriteBeLight said:

You have poetic talent poetboy!

September 6th, 2017 12:00

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Santita said:

These are two amazing writes, PB. I can\'t decide which one I like more.

The World Burns As We Speak - your title says it all there, \" a game for them, for us no prizes\" we are seen as pawns in this game, with only a few willing to see the truth!

Angels - beautifully written, my friend. The last stanza was great!

Sage writing, as usual!

September 6th, 2017 11:05

The World Burns As We Speak (and one more)
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 6th, 2017 10:20

Distorted
WriteBeLight said:

This is very well done and full of images :)

September 6th, 2017 08:20

Distorted
Candlewitch said:

absolutely distorted! good work, poetboy!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy

September 5th, 2017 12:07

True Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write. Love, the strongest of all emotions.

September 5th, 2017 00:54

True Love
Seek said:

Wonderful reflections on true love. And for me --- just as you state ---- if it is fleeting, it cannot be true love. The last stanza says it all. Excellent rhyming too.

September 4th, 2017 20:01

True Love
myself and me said:

A nice writing about true love.

September 4th, 2017 15:08

True Love
bwilliams said:

I\'ve just joined a couple of days ago, but I\'ve read a few poems. So far, this is my favorite.

September 4th, 2017 15:08

True Love
Santita said:

Such a lovely - and honest piece on love PB! Leaving anytime you\'ve had your fill- very true. \"A pair of glasses on a dark, foggy day\" I really like that line! Love can bring us peace and clarity. The last stanza was perfection. Another favorite! Also, please see my post \"he is\" - you are part of the inspiration. Thank you.

September 4th, 2017 11:56

True Love
Diane said:

Such a positive message. good write Poetboy :-)

September 4th, 2017 11:32

Truth Behind Climate Change
BlueDays said:

Have you seen the doco Cowspiracy?

September 3rd, 2017 16:11

Truth Behind Climate Change
dusk arising said:

I thought it was common knowledge now that cows farting was the cause of global warming. I pose a question though...... are there more cows now because of those huge burger chains? If we all went veggie would it be human farts causing global warming. Here in UK we have a polite word for a fart - it\'s called a trump. Need i say more? Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.

September 3rd, 2017 15:07

Truth Behind Climate Change
myself and me said:

We human is root of the trouble. Thank you for bring up the truth.

September 3rd, 2017 15:06

Earthquake
Santita said:

This is powerful, PB! This \"Still the flames burn through the rain, never fading to an ember\" is a great line! I hope that inner flame burns eternally!

September 2nd, 2017 13:26

Before I Die
Goldfinch60 said:

That new tomorrow is out there and will be with us but not in this lifetime.
Good write.

September 2nd, 2017 00:54

Before I Die
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for your own truths and the power in these words. You\'ve just inspired a new poem I\'ve thought about for a while, best be off to right them down ;)

September 1st, 2017 11:55

Before I Die
Heather T said:

My fave verses:

\"Before I die, I pray to witness the kindled flame

A kind of fire which burns through the rain\"

September 1st, 2017 10:42

Flames
Santita said:

Another gem of a piece, PB. I need to read more of these, they are really great!

September 1st, 2017 10:06

Before I Die
Santita said:

Yes! I am with you! This is a brilliant write! You never disappoint, my friend.

September 1st, 2017 09:55

Art of Murder
Santita said:

PB54, you have done it again! You are marvelous with the pen! I like the message of leaving the past and starting a new!

August 31st, 2017 12:19

Art of Murder
Candlewitch said:

hello poetboy,

I loved these lines:
This is it, no more hesitation, no never again
Sealing his fate so the wolf of my heart leaves his den
All inhibitions eliminated as I began to stab myself
Burning away my broken past, now dust on a shelf
Fading past, left behind me, as I began to stand
End written, new beginning started, with no evils to reprimand

sometimes it is necessary to kill the past in order to have a future! excellent write!

*hugs, Cat

August 31st, 2017 10:16

Don\'t Recycle
Candlewitch said:

a well written and informative write!!! thank you for this!

*hugs, Cat

August 30th, 2017 10:48

Don\'t Recycle
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 30th, 2017 10:23

Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

a good positive write, that light is always there for us to see.

August 30th, 2017 01:00

Lost
Santita said:

Hi PB54,
This is another fine piece from you.
\"Nightmares in my sleep, nowhere to hide\" It feels like a battle with our demons, and we can never escape them and \"Drowning in a moonlit bath\" Great imagery too. Just a great piece, PB.


August 29th, 2017 11:41

Moonlight
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 28th, 2017 10:49

Moonlight
Candlewitch said:

hello,

this can be about many things, including a battle or revolution. great language usage and imagery. nice to meet you!

*hugs, Cat

August 28th, 2017 10:15

Brighter Future
Goldfinch60 said:

A brighter future would be a wondrous thing but the politicians and those in power do not want that for us mere underlings.

August 28th, 2017 01:45

Desolate
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, poetboy. A dark and unwelcome future!

August 25th, 2017 21:52



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